that is amazing!!!! You said to give advise/crit All im going to say i don't know if it's rigt or not becuase i'm not a dancer haha! But i think it needs to be softer? It seemed quite like the movements were really sharp? xxxx
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You are such a talented dancer and could go realllllly far. I dont really have anything bad to say other than.. try not to look at yourself in the mirror when your dancing. I know it can be tempting but when you forget that theres a mirror or a person filming you, you will really feel the dance and the music. Just get into it girl :)
Yeah really dance from your heart. And at the very beginning when you are sitting try pointing your toes and taking your heels off the floor! Oh! And your really really pretty :)
i felt like u were reaching for something al the time.. stop reaching..... that's all i saw... reach reach reach.... what r u lookin for? but it was with your body
Beautiful! You are so talented! And my only criticism would be that this song (my all time favorite actually) feels more smooth and there was a bit too much of a start/stop feel in this choreography.
I think that you are a good dancer, and this choregraphy was really creative and fun to watch but i don't think that you picked the right song. I personnaly would have dance in a more smooth and graceful way.
it's lovely but you just need to let your body flow into the moves the lets tight you are the more light it will look and feel. your center in your turn was lovely, i hope you are still dancing you will go a long way.
BEAUTIFUL! devolupey (ik i spelled that wrong =D lol) but oh my goodness you are amazing!!!! so simple and so short yet you know how to make a statement i wanted to keep watching more and i was soooooooooooo sad when the video ended =( keep dancing! i want to watch more
Its good....but the fact that your turns are getting help with the foot things bugs me. At my studio its bare feet for modern, and we learn to throw triples and more without.
But other than that, it was good. I really like it. Expecially the beginning!
very nice extensions very nice try to use them in more a fluid motion not so much as a trick for example out of a fuetae sequence you would look beautiful good job though
wow ur reely good how old r u y should try out for so you think u can dance i think u would do great and it would get u great publicity. PLZ TRY IT I THINK U WOULD DO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have so much potential. you could be the next star dancer but you just need to dance with more passion. the best advice someone ever gave me was;
Forget about the steps, forget about worrying if you mess up. Erase everything from your mind and just listen to the music. Listen and let your heart just take you away.
@ncodonte9666 I have been taking ballet for 9 years it will be 10 this june and I know exactly what you mean. With out passion dance would not last. When anyone ask me why I dance I reply why breath.
i used to dance at ABT so take my words wisely. you have a perfect figure. you have an idealistic dancer figure. your extensions are great. and i agree with the other comments. that we didnt feel you AT all. you need to have more passion in your dancing.
dance like ur telling someone a story. act it out.
so what if ur flexible. there could be a dancer that is fat, not flexible at all, has the worst potential ever but if she goes on stage she could make you not take your eyes out of her.
i really like it, i just dont think the harsh angles you make with your arms (and legs) toward the beginning really flatter your body, you're thin and this make your arms look quite awkward. Plus, it doesn't complement the music as towards to beginning, it's softer than when it gets going.
Technically, you are amazing. Your movements are so controlled, and done perfectly. But I can't feel the emotion, all I see is the movement. All you need to do now is to add your heart to it.
its so cool u can be so "in" to urself (not conceited definition) in a gym. i mean so content and comfortable and open enough to express yourself fully through dance and body movement. in a place like that, i dig i dig:]
@gymnasticsgirl1297 When you dance modesty really isn't thought about that much, plus it is easier to tell if your hip is up or your posture isn't good enough if you have your stomach showing
@gymnasticsgirl1297 So, you can share your opinion, but no one else can share theirs about yours?
Thanks to having a decent vocabulary, I am aware of the definition for the word "prude." It has nothing to do with "someone who hasn't kissed anyone." It means being overly modest, prim and proper, etc. Did you bother looking it up before you instructed me to?
I never said you can't share your opinion I just said no one asked, no one asked for my opinion either though. Just being honest. I'm irresolute you actually knew that.
I don't think this should go on so your reply is the last reply. I don't like going on about something for so long
You're awesome. That was really cool choreo/improv. I would recommend trying some variation in movement, as in more tempo variation in concurrence with the music. You have beautiful lines. :)
Everyone is harpin on her for not showing emotion. Well HELLO it's a youtube video, not a national performance. Put her on stage and I bet you $100 that she'll shine.
this is really beautiful, and your technique is amazing, but it dont see you.. i wish i had your legs and your extensions, because they really are quite beautiful. the choreography is good, but something was missing. you really are a beautiful dancer and you will go very far im sure.. just working on emotion and expression thru your face and movement :)
It's amazing what your body can do when you attach your talent to the soul of the music. Your freestyle choreography is absolutely beautiful. No pointers from me. :)
Girl you go tit down but ya kno some love in it aint bad either. The work is great but the fluidness and the passion that strings the movements is important too
You have amazing flexibility and a good dancer. Now you have to put your heart into it and feel the music. Don't just do the steps, add feeling to them. I thought it was great.
You did a great job! I think you just need to think about your technique and TURN OUT YOUR FEET!!!! Also you lost your expression through out the routine. Even when your on the ground and your on your back, the audience can still see your face. But other than thpse very nice job and good luck in your future dance career!
don't listen to those people down there...I'm not in dance yet, i will be, but i think you are such a great dancer and nothing is supposed to be perfect, you were JUST MESSING AROUND! I thought it was great.... Good job :)
great work, and good for you to put yourself out there like this! keep going, stop when you need to, reflect on the positives AND the negatives (my best advice). I don't know where your technique is at currently, however, this dance, this choreography displays your endless potential. And keep smiling :)
Although I know that you were just showing something that you can up with in your room I have to say that it was wonderful. The only criticism I have to share with you is that your facial expressions, especially in contemporary adds so much more to the dance and thats what you're missing. You can also tell that you're a young dancer and there is so much more growth left for you. But overall you are great!
Okay, I think you have excellent extension, and amazing form!
but, i think you should not be on the floor for as long, i'm not a floor person, you're an AMAZING dancer, but tune into the music more, follow the song, rythms and beats, feel like you're the music.
i think you need to work on facial expressions...it adds so much to a performance when you just put a little movement on your face too, like you actually are feeling what the song is talking about ...hallelujah is meant to be sad, look a little pained and desperate. other than that. you're a great dancer
you are a very good dancer and i am training myself but as for criticism: you need to work on stage presence i have seen this many times when the technique is incredible and so is the choreography but the stage presence is is weeker and it kinda ruins it, also work on your flexibility and strength in your leg when you are lifting it to your head like you were just before 1:17 one last thing = balance! other than a few things even though you were just messing around you are truly amazing!
Nice movements!! Keep up the good work... you´ll get places! I´´ve just got a contract in a company and am starting to make some choreographies as well :-)
I too made a piece to the Jeff Buckley version of this song. I think this is one of the most heart felt beginnings of a piece I've ever seen. But, every good actor knows, you never break your character. You can always keep improvising. You'll see my work up in a week or two under Curio Dance. I think you dance well but are young. You need to spill your guts out then mop them off the floor and put them back in your tummy. dario.
wow this is really good. i love the choreography, i would just say to work on your facial expressions a bit more, i dont know if it was just the camera but it didnt look like you were really into it. hope i helped :)
Once again I think you are an amazing young dancer and those who have said it before me, you should audition if you weren't already planning to do so. If you are looking to continue with this piece, one suggestion. With your coupe turn sequence, choose a beginning and an end. It will look a lot cleaner if you can slow or stop your turn before you hit your next position, rather then "falling" into it. Great job for messing arround! ;-)
i know you were massing around. but if you could time it so that when she begins singing the last Hallelujah, you would begin your developé too and finnish both at the same perfect time? 1:12. then stay a second longer just to mess with our expectations. it is a smack in your face movement over all. and you can do it fantastically...
when you do the arabesque I wouldn't check the mirror ;)
that was really good and your very talented . your technique isnt where it could be but your stage pesence and the emotion you pull through into your dancing overrides any technique you are missing. you should have a career in dance. Audition season is like now and you should definitley go out for some modern companies or mabye a ballet company that is strongly influenced by contemporary dance. you are definatley good enough to make it in some top notch companies. Good luck.
this is amazing. i got chills the second you started moving! one of the best things about this is even though you are jest messing around and making choreography, you put your whole heart into every movement you do. keep up the good work!
You are a extremly good dancer and should defenatly look for audition oppitunitys and go for it but what i have also noticed is that you like your jerky dance moves and strong postions i would like to see you do a more lyrical and softer performace because you do inspire so manny different people me included.
really good!! the one thing I really noticed (and it could just be that I hate when people don't do this) was that you're feet were really well pointed, not just like half pointed life some people. haha
beautiful in everyway..excellant technique and control, i no you said you were just playing with things but the dance has no meaning... why is there, why did u create it ? it had no story , like you were just throwing movements together to ake a routine ... i do contemporary but i would love to be able to have your ballet skills be proud ... i would be hahaha!
veryy nice..it was deffiantly a pretty dance..your feet are always pointed and your fully aware of your body! the confidence you put into your dancing is awesome! keep it up..i would love to see you dance to like kate voegle's version since its alittle more upbeat!
You are Great. Others say. And u know this to. But the problem is that by dancing you LOVE YOURSELF, you LOVE YOUR Greatness, you feel first how COOL you are, but not a DANCE & MUSIC. I see just what you are showing.
Technicaly you are ready to CREATE A UNIQE SPACE in your dance. Now it is time to turn off your Mind and turn in your Heard. It is time to become a Creator not just a dancer.
I like the ballet-moves you make in your dances...but the rest is somewhat unelegant to me. It's not smooth and doesn't seem to go with the music..it doesn't move me. It's like some random moves put together and a random song on the background..perhaps I don't know much about this style or so, but as a viewer I am not moved..
it was really good it almost seemed like you shouldve had a more variety in your moves but of course keeping the same style like if you watch sytycd the choreographers never usually use the same move twice its really good though youre a really amazing dancer :)
people who are saying its not good, tbh id like to see you go and try and do it it dont look, as easy as it is we dont it in our btec and its soo hard and that was amazing:D xxx
I think your really talented, and I agree with Victomyster about your developpe..
and I think You should use a different song to that routine, because of your accents and attacks on the beats, it doesn't really match, but it's a good routine. ;)
i love it and u shud be a choreographer.....i wanna be one to......but i need to learn to dance and im almost there i dance at all that dance studio....ima start at jazz [ialready dancin]then go on to contemporary.....watching this inspires me!!!thanks!
I'm not much of a contemporary dancer. Matter of fact I hate contemporary dancing, BUT... that was pretty good. All you need is some more pizzaz. Good luck with your dancing...industry? (Lol)
your a very strong dancer with great extension but the choreography was just a little boring and my tip is just between steps don't lose the stage presence, I feel like we lose you a little between different jumps and moves. Great job though! :) (i am a dancer too) :)
you have AMAZING technique. It's absolutely beautiful and I wish I could dance half this good. I hate to criticize because I don't know how there could be any criticism, but I don't feel a lot of emotion in the dance..
that is amazing!!!! You said to give advise/crit All im going to say i don't know if it's rigt or not becuase i'm not a dancer haha! But i think it needs to be softer? It seemed quite like the movements were really sharp? xxxx
NikkiScarletzLott 2 weeks ago
OMG. 1 word.....
AMAZING!!!!!!!
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You are more than amazing. Keep up the good work. You really inspire to keep pursing dance.
Livin4Chris 3 months ago
that was amazing nice
trouptime 3 months ago
they are called foot paws they are made by a major dance company capezio they are very easy to dance in
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Heeeeey I like your dancing very much!!! ;) can you tell me what do you have on your feet?
blahablana111 3 months ago
1:25, nice smile! :D hehe
esthertan8 5 months ago
You are such a talented dancer and could go realllllly far. I dont really have anything bad to say other than.. try not to look at yourself in the mirror when your dancing. I know it can be tempting but when you forget that theres a mirror or a person filming you, you will really feel the dance and the music. Just get into it girl :)
alorajones1994 7 months ago
Dance with PASSION and FIRE... you have great technique and facility... But the moves seemed a little empty
MichaelJames91 7 months ago
your really good!
xneverxshoutxashleyx 7 months ago
You wanna lend me your body! Im jelly!
Racheleah2015 7 months ago
1:13, what is that called
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iDanceKyle 7 months ago
@iDanceKyle It is called a tilt.
The2345890 7 months ago
beautiful technique. Feet and legs - gorgeous. Beautiful lines. Well done. Hope you're still dancing cos I see this is dated 2008.
LBEEE11 8 months ago
Yeah really dance from your heart. And at the very beginning when you are sitting try pointing your toes and taking your heels off the floor! Oh! And your really really pretty :)
NathanNisrchl614 8 months ago
I feel that it should have been softer and gentler to fit to the song, good work though.
Wolfmaedchen 8 months ago
You have really good extensions!!! :D
Shayna0hhyess 8 months ago
i felt like u were reaching for something al the time.. stop reaching..... that's all i saw... reach reach reach.... what r u lookin for? but it was with your body
nerdherd789 8 months ago
i felt like u were reaching for something al the time.. stop reaching..... that's all i saw... reach reach reach.... what r u lookin for?
nerdherd789 8 months ago
you're a good dancer but the song is already slow, so choreographing something slow to a slow song is not a good combination in my opinion
bitchily8 8 months ago
Beautiful! You are so talented! And my only criticism would be that this song (my all time favorite actually) feels more smooth and there was a bit too much of a start/stop feel in this choreography.
farmfarmdorrie 9 months ago
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farmfarmdorrie 9 months ago
I don't really like the chorey but you're an amazing dancer!
danceLulian 9 months ago
I think that you are a good dancer, and this choregraphy was really creative and fun to watch but i don't think that you picked the right song. I personnaly would have dance in a more smooth and graceful way.
ChiUNIVERS 9 months ago
it's lovely but you just need to let your body flow into the moves the lets tight you are the more light it will look and feel. your center in your turn was lovely, i hope you are still dancing you will go a long way.
wigglesno1fan 9 months ago
nice execution - but i dont like the choreo. also think less technique nd more passion, it sounds stupid but it will look better in the long run :)
itsmollymariee 10 months ago
BEAUTIFUL! devolupey (ik i spelled that wrong =D lol) but oh my goodness you are amazing!!!! so simple and so short yet you know how to make a statement i wanted to keep watching more and i was soooooooooooo sad when the video ended =( keep dancing! i want to watch more
mickeydancems 10 months ago
really good! just work on your preps before turns. the arms are a little wild.
MultiMissbeautiful 10 months ago
to much control u want to let it flow out of you it was very good but u need more passion
SammyBrowwn 10 months ago
I love it, your really good, but I might try to go a bit slower and not like force it out, really good though , keep dancing <3
maddiemitchell1 10 months ago
i would have to say try and feel the beat.
BlondiieBabe77 11 months ago
Its good....but the fact that your turns are getting help with the foot things bugs me. At my studio its bare feet for modern, and we learn to throw triples and more without.
But other than that, it was good. I really like it. Expecially the beginning!
TressaMessa 11 months ago
nice now dance that same choreography as if there isn't an audience, then you will captivate the essence!!!! and the moment!!!!!! Nice choreo
drobinson1012 11 months ago
You point your toes soo beautifully...
loved the dance aswell :D x
shaybangle94 1 year ago
Thats amazingg xx
OGdeva 1 year ago
love this! i loved how your toes are pointed at all times too. i teach and i cannot stand when my girls' toes are not pointed. very well done girly.
DoOdLeBuG72xo 1 year ago
wow can i just say you are an inspiration. i actually cannot stop watching your videos. its people like you who make me love dance. Thank You
sweetcarolinexo 1 year ago 2
i really do think that your technique is good considering the fact that you doing a modern or contemporary piece
i really like the movement in this dance
shaniece12341 1 year ago
I really like that move with the flexed foot at 1:13 !!!
Xxrachel827xX 1 year ago
very nice extensions very nice try to use them in more a fluid motion not so much as a trick for example out of a fuetae sequence you would look beautiful good job though
kft7990 1 year ago
wow ur reely good how old r u y should try out for so you think u can dance i think u would do great and it would get u great publicity. PLZ TRY IT I THINK U WOULD DO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
stixgirl19 1 year ago
sorry youtube didnt let me write more.
you have so much potential. you could be the next star dancer but you just need to dance with more passion. the best advice someone ever gave me was;
Forget about the steps, forget about worrying if you mess up. Erase everything from your mind and just listen to the music. Listen and let your heart just take you away.
Thank you very much :)
ncodonte9666 1 year ago 51
@ncodonte9666 I have been taking ballet for 9 years it will be 10 this june and I know exactly what you mean. With out passion dance would not last. When anyone ask me why I dance I reply why breath.
balletandtap1 1 year ago
@ncodonte9666 Thanks so much for that :) I have to do improv on Wednesday for a comp. and that's really helped :)
Skyluvsya 6 months ago
i used to dance at ABT so take my words wisely. you have a perfect figure. you have an idealistic dancer figure. your extensions are great. and i agree with the other comments. that we didnt feel you AT all. you need to have more passion in your dancing.
dance like ur telling someone a story. act it out.
so what if ur flexible. there could be a dancer that is fat, not flexible at all, has the worst potential ever but if she goes on stage she could make you not take your eyes out of her.
ncodonte9666 1 year ago 4
@ncodonte9666 i completelly agree with this comment its mostlly heart heart is the best think a dancer can have
kft7990 1 year ago
Amazing extention at the end.. good dancer.... not so much choreographer
kristalove2557 1 year ago
Amazing extention at the end.. good dancer.... not so much chorographer
kristalove2557 1 year ago
i didnt fell u at all ... u have potential but listen to the music ...
FyreBalletDancer 1 year ago
i really liked that :) your very good
misstrawbrryshrtcake 1 year ago
i really like it, i just dont think the harsh angles you make with your arms (and legs) toward the beginning really flatter your body, you're thin and this make your arms look quite awkward. Plus, it doesn't complement the music as towards to beginning, it's softer than when it gets going.
fabalina1703 1 year ago
What is dance ? Technic + Feeling + Imagination
She knows technic and now...
cgranelli 1 year ago
Technically, you are amazing. Your movements are so controlled, and done perfectly. But I can't feel the emotion, all I see is the movement. All you need to do now is to add your heart to it.
TwiHardGirl 1 year ago
1:12 = win
philsmartcool 1 year ago
its so cool u can be so "in" to urself (not conceited definition) in a gym. i mean so content and comfortable and open enough to express yourself fully through dance and body movement. in a place like that, i dig i dig:]
8jsimone 1 year ago
NOOOOOO...u wernt messing around...u rehearsed it n performed it for youtube...ACCEPT!!!
pravindhyani 1 year ago
where did the other half of your shirt go? you do realize the ENTIRE world can see this
gymnasticsgirl1297 1 year ago
@gymnasticsgirl1297 It's just her stomach jeez.
VOLcOmgurl365 1 year ago
@gymnasticsgirl1297 When you dance modesty really isn't thought about that much, plus it is easier to tell if your hip is up or your posture isn't good enough if you have your stomach showing
Masquerade671 1 year ago
@gymnasticsgirl1297 Where did your sense of prudishness come from? You do realize the ENTIRE world can read this...
belladharma 1 year ago 2
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gymnasticsgirl1297 1 year ago
@gymnasticsgirl1297 So, you can share your opinion, but no one else can share theirs about yours?
Thanks to having a decent vocabulary, I am aware of the definition for the word "prude." It has nothing to do with "someone who hasn't kissed anyone." It means being overly modest, prim and proper, etc. Did you bother looking it up before you instructed me to?
belladharma 1 year ago 3
@belladharma
I never said you can't share your opinion I just said no one asked, no one asked for my opinion either though. Just being honest. I'm irresolute you actually knew that.
I don't think this should go on so your reply is the last reply. I don't like going on about something for so long
gymnasticsgirl1297 1 year ago
@gymnasticsgirl1297 serously? everyone wears things lik tht and shes probably hot and sweaty
xoluvdance 6 months ago
My daughter is a dancer and I wish she had your discipline. She swears she loves to dance but it's a fight to get her to practice. :\
westtexastomato 1 year ago
I like the person butt-busting in the background... HAHAHA
alysonpaigedesigns 1 year ago 102
@alysonpaigedesigns omg i know right i noticed that too! :P
blondeashes17 7 months ago
i liked it!!
AbbieBreslinfan4eva 1 year ago
hey reply to this what r u doing now r u in anything a dance group anything major if not u should be!!!!
jmbronston123 1 year ago
Considering this was put up 2 years ago, I'd be interested to see what it turned into. : )
christinelandis 1 year ago
gorgeous technique and the choreography was beautiful... keep working :)
triplethreat4life 1 year ago
You're awesome. That was really cool choreo/improv. I would recommend trying some variation in movement, as in more tempo variation in concurrence with the music. You have beautiful lines. :)
zachk1290 1 year ago
Everyone is harpin on her for not showing emotion. Well HELLO it's a youtube video, not a national performance. Put her on stage and I bet you $100 that she'll shine.
jessicaBARBIEDOLL 1 year ago
this is really beautiful, and your technique is amazing, but it dont see you.. i wish i had your legs and your extensions, because they really are quite beautiful. the choreography is good, but something was missing. you really are a beautiful dancer and you will go very far im sure.. just working on emotion and expression thru your face and movement :)
esierp1695 1 year ago
It's amazing what your body can do when you attach your talent to the soul of the music. Your freestyle choreography is absolutely beautiful. No pointers from me. :)
ngrits 1 year ago
Girl you go tit down but ya kno some love in it aint bad either. The work is great but the fluidness and the passion that strings the movements is important too
GuardNinja250 1 year ago
wow....i can just watch this over and over again! its amazing...it really is!
I really wanna be able to dance like you!
How old are you? and when did you start dancing?also what types of classes do you take?
1hiphopdance 1 year ago
You have amazing flexibility and a good dancer. Now you have to put your heart into it and feel the music. Don't just do the steps, add feeling to them. I thought it was great.
thealy51 1 year ago
You did a great job! I think you just need to think about your technique and TURN OUT YOUR FEET!!!! Also you lost your expression through out the routine. Even when your on the ground and your on your back, the audience can still see your face. But other than thpse very nice job and good luck in your future dance career!
nicadube 1 year ago
don't listen to those people down there...I'm not in dance yet, i will be, but i think you are such a great dancer and nothing is supposed to be perfect, you were JUST MESSING AROUND! I thought it was great.... Good job :)
alysonpaigedesigns 1 year ago
I really dont get why the tied up shirt is necessary
allsmiles3215 1 year ago
u need to dance with more emotions and be with the music
TrAm1MaI 1 year ago
great work, and good for you to put yourself out there like this! keep going, stop when you need to, reflect on the positives AND the negatives (my best advice). I don't know where your technique is at currently, however, this dance, this choreography displays your endless potential. And keep smiling :)
danzahappy 1 year ago
I love this dance! <3
danzahappy 1 year ago
i like! i wish you went further into the song!
KookieDough93 1 year ago
love this song
Killashock 1 year ago
Pretty good!!!!!!
gymnasticsgirl1297 1 year ago
well done :) are you wearing capezios?
solitudefromwithin 1 year ago
Although I know that you were just showing something that you can up with in your room I have to say that it was wonderful. The only criticism I have to share with you is that your facial expressions, especially in contemporary adds so much more to the dance and thats what you're missing. You can also tell that you're a young dancer and there is so much more growth left for you. But overall you are great!
dAnCeLiFe149 1 year ago
My criticism.
Okay, I think you have excellent extension, and amazing form!
but, i think you should not be on the floor for as long, i'm not a floor person, you're an AMAZING dancer, but tune into the music more, follow the song, rythms and beats, feel like you're the music.
popprincess308 1 year ago
really good i think you need to let your body flow more on some of the moves. but otherwise future is looking good for you :)
D4NC3ST4R96 1 year ago
you really need to get more into your dance.
you'd be 10x's better if you did that.
Ashii420 1 year ago
Amazing pointed feet :-)
cutiekat000 1 year ago
i think you need to work on facial expressions...it adds so much to a performance when you just put a little movement on your face too, like you actually are feeling what the song is talking about ...hallelujah is meant to be sad, look a little pained and desperate. other than that. you're a great dancer
allliifromcali 1 year ago
This is sooo amazing! Your such a good dancer!
dreamingdancer888 1 year ago
you are a very good dancer and i am training myself but as for criticism: you need to work on stage presence i have seen this many times when the technique is incredible and so is the choreography but the stage presence is is weeker and it kinda ruins it, also work on your flexibility and strength in your leg when you are lifting it to your head like you were just before 1:17 one last thing = balance! other than a few things even though you were just messing around you are truly amazing!
kandy114cp 1 year ago
i love contemporary dance! great job!
MusicAddiction00 1 year ago
aaww that was pretty. :] i love your dance. :] it had so much emotion in it. :]
BabyBalla95 1 year ago
wow that was soooo good !!
MsOreomonster1 1 year ago
i like this
janebeaumontx 1 year ago
you should put somw russians and have a show face.
texan78666 1 year ago
OMGOOSH ! you are amazing (: I wiish i could daance liike you <3 Im new in daance and just got accepted into a dance teaam (: But you are greeat !!
kikethechamp 1 year ago
really good!
Kellanner 1 year ago
try to be really sharp on your floor work.
stuff like floor work is hard to read on a big stage unless its made big.
good job though :)
MsTaylorPaige 1 year ago
very pretty
LilMizChelley 1 year ago
you have a very nice extension.
AMBUCYjooce 1 year ago
you are missing some technique with a few small things, but you can probably find the issues yourself
JewelsofDiamonds 1 year ago
i thought this was amazing im a dancer myself and some of these moves literally left me shocked
beki445 1 year ago
i loved the dance BUT YOUR TECHNIQUE maybe dance for like hip hop!!!! lol good though 5 starss:)
loVeFlower12342 1 year ago
well i thought it was tops (:
makomoose33 1 year ago
Nice movements!! Keep up the good work... you´ll get places! I´´ve just got a contract in a company and am starting to make some choreographies as well :-)
Good luck!!
DayWithoutYou 1 year ago
lol you can hear her feet when she spins/pivots
Sorry I don't know the "dancer" language lol. I just call them spins
Lilcutegrl93 1 year ago
@Lilcutegrl93 yeah, you're not supposed to.. haha
Pengiun4President 1 year ago
Hey old are you Emily?
ImZacYall 1 year ago
I too made a piece to the Jeff Buckley version of this song. I think this is one of the most heart felt beginnings of a piece I've ever seen. But, every good actor knows, you never break your character. You can always keep improvising. You'll see my work up in a week or two under Curio Dance. I think you dance well but are young. You need to spill your guts out then mop them off the floor and put them back in your tummy. dario.
CurioDance 1 year ago
der song passt nicht zum tanz
DingensKirschens 1 year ago
You're a great dancer but i think your choreography was a little too fast pace for this song love your dancing though :D
GracieandCristybubyu 1 year ago
UH~MAZING tilt. I love you, crazylady. Spectacular. xoStephy :P
sexygal17 1 year ago
u didnt really do anything ??? . . .
dance247ddp 1 year ago
Good but the camera man should have less shaky hands, it would make the quality better :)
hejulle 1 year ago
Very good choreographer and your a very good dancer! You have got a brigt future(:
studio360chicas 1 year ago
yeah i agree! but ur a verry good dancer! keep up the great work!
Alyxisdeliciouso 1 year ago
mmmmm choreography wasn't too impressive :/ it was actually a little awkward.
airicuh920 1 year ago
wow this is really good. i love the choreography, i would just say to work on your facial expressions a bit more, i dont know if it was just the camera but it didnt look like you were really into it. hope i helped :)
JaiKoh94 1 year ago
Once again I think you are an amazing young dancer and those who have said it before me, you should audition if you weren't already planning to do so. If you are looking to continue with this piece, one suggestion. With your coupe turn sequence, choose a beginning and an end. It will look a lot cleaner if you can slow or stop your turn before you hit your next position, rather then "falling" into it. Great job for messing arround! ;-)
MuseORDestroyer 1 year ago
wow your such a mad dancer hallelujia is one of my favourite songs to dance to (:
keep it up your amazing
sammybabes04 1 year ago
i know you were massing around. but if you could time it so that when she begins singing the last Hallelujah, you would begin your developé too and finnish both at the same perfect time? 1:12. then stay a second longer just to mess with our expectations. it is a smack in your face movement over all. and you can do it fantastically...
when you do the arabesque I wouldn't check the mirror ;)
other then that, I'm impressed.
jimcorneliu 2 years ago
this is good! but really crank that turn out on your preps before turns:)
lively331 2 years ago
words have no meaning
1:12 says it all
gcastion 2 years ago
BEAUTIFUL
ur technique is on point huN
tiiAkn0wNasGiigii 2 years ago
I loved this! :D Great style, great technique, great choreo... Great!
matthijswalhout 2 years ago
that was really good and your very talented . your technique isnt where it could be but your stage pesence and the emotion you pull through into your dancing overrides any technique you are missing. you should have a career in dance. Audition season is like now and you should definitley go out for some modern companies or mabye a ballet company that is strongly influenced by contemporary dance. you are definatley good enough to make it in some top notch companies. Good luck.
bunhead091 2 years ago 21
this is amazing. i got chills the second you started moving! one of the best things about this is even though you are jest messing around and making choreography, you put your whole heart into every movement you do. keep up the good work!
mimsxyo 2 years ago
Ta jet świetna !
wspol65czesny 2 years ago
You are a extremly good dancer and should defenatly look for audition oppitunitys and go for it but what i have also noticed is that you like your jerky dance moves and strong postions i would like to see you do a more lyrical and softer performace because you do inspire so manny different people me included.
Jadeyloobaa 2 years ago
You have great lines!
carlyheartsdance 2 years ago
really good!! the one thing I really noticed (and it could just be that I hate when people don't do this) was that you're feet were really well pointed, not just like half pointed life some people. haha
junebaby791 2 years ago
beautiful in everyway..excellant technique and control, i no you said you were just playing with things but the dance has no meaning... why is there, why did u create it ? it had no story , like you were just throwing movements together to ake a routine ... i do contemporary but i would love to be able to have your ballet skills be proud ... i would be hahaha!
binkuful 2 years ago
veryy nice..it was deffiantly a pretty dance..your feet are always pointed and your fully aware of your body! the confidence you put into your dancing is awesome! keep it up..i would love to see you dance to like kate voegle's version since its alittle more upbeat!
xXDarkBlueDarkBlueXx 2 years ago
Ok. Some criticism.
You are Great. Others say. And u know this to. But the problem is that by dancing you LOVE YOURSELF, you LOVE YOUR Greatness, you feel first how COOL you are, but not a DANCE & MUSIC. I see just what you are showing.
Technicaly you are ready to CREATE A UNIQE SPACE in your dance. Now it is time to turn off your Mind and turn in your Heard. It is time to become a Creator not just a dancer.
P.S. Not sure my english was enough clear/right.
Good luck.
MrDanteGreen 2 years ago 66
@MrDanteGreen
no, no se te entiende =S dilo en Espanol y te lo traduzco :)
owhottie 1 year ago
@MrDanteGreen
I agree with you
mademoiselleAngry 1 year ago
@MrDanteGreen uhm no, SHES FEELING her routine. i see the passion . your crazy to even pick something to criticize.
insanitysiiii 1 year ago
i thought it was a bit robotic in some bits but otherwise it was amazing! It looked like a piece you had been working on for a month! :)
Rachieebabes101 2 years ago
i love it. all of it. you truly captured all of the different levels of the song both lyrically and musically. you have gorgeous technique!
broadwaybabe2587 2 years ago
NICE 6 O'CLOCK!!!!!! Amazing I love it
lemonsnlimes333 2 years ago
I like the ballet-moves you make in your dances...but the rest is somewhat unelegant to me. It's not smooth and doesn't seem to go with the music..it doesn't move me. It's like some random moves put together and a random song on the background..perhaps I don't know much about this style or so, but as a viewer I am not moved..
Quart49 2 years ago
@Quart49
well, that's contemporary dance, that's what it is
odddzy 2 years ago
You're very talented.
Where do you attend, like any dance academies?
CleanBlackSocks 2 years ago
it seems like you loveeee fast dancing.. try and sth more slow..
more sentimental..
CureMaria 2 years ago
love how you control your body movements.. show strong strength of control and how you contracted as you travel though the space.. pretty well done
kalalarocksanime 2 years ago
it was really good it almost seemed like you shouldve had a more variety in your moves but of course keeping the same style like if you watch sytycd the choreographers never usually use the same move twice its really good though youre a really amazing dancer :)
chinaeitak 2 years ago
great!
Jesss13xo 2 years ago
You call that messing around? That looked like it was choreographed for the longest time!
glenndelossantos15 2 years ago
wow that was amazin ..... :D have you got any tipa on how to do a good pirrouete ?
lozzafail 2 years ago
people who are saying its not good, tbh id like to see you go and try and do it it dont look, as easy as it is we dont it in our btec and its soo hard and that was amazing:D xxx
tashcasexxx 2 years ago
I think your really talented, and I agree with Victomyster about your developpe..
and I think You should use a different song to that routine, because of your accents and attacks on the beats, it doesn't really match, but it's a good routine. ;)
other than that nice job..
SnicklePottyPants 2 years ago
i love it and u shud be a choreographer.....i wanna be one to......but i need to learn to dance and im almost there i dance at all that dance studio....ima start at jazz [ialready dancin]then go on to contemporary.....watching this inspires me!!!thanks!
dyedye31 2 years ago
i thought it was amazing!!!!! i loved the first part when your on the floor. it was mid blowin...all ofit was!
keep making up your own dances...you should a be a choreoghaper
saki4kosuka 2 years ago
so good! but the beginning pose seemed a bit cliche...
srosie10 2 years ago
ive seen this dance b4
MissToffeeTerror 2 years ago
you are amazing!!! Im trying to learn hot to dance right now. unfortuneitly i cant affored lessons. but you inspire me.
jpsmooth85 2 years ago
I'm not much of a contemporary dancer. Matter of fact I hate contemporary dancing, BUT... that was pretty good. All you need is some more pizzaz. Good luck with your dancing...industry? (Lol)
mArLeEmAnGo 2 years ago
your a very strong dancer with great extension but the choreography was just a little boring and my tip is just between steps don't lose the stage presence, I feel like we lose you a little between different jumps and moves. Great job though! :) (i am a dancer too) :)
petalpoof 2 years ago
you have AMAZING technique. It's absolutely beautiful and I wish I could dance half this good. I hate to criticize because I don't know how there could be any criticism, but I don't feel a lot of emotion in the dance..
cccnala 2 years ago
I can dance this good - and I am over sixty!Stop talking a load of rubbish.
This woman is taking you all for a ride!
giveahoot1 2 years ago
let's see a video then
hamsternut2001 2 years ago
On second thoughts, I have seen her do some moves which although would not be impossible for me, might take a week or two to loosen up for.
If I get a video camera and get limbered up you will be the first to see it.
Watch this space!
Nice dancing.
giveahoot1 2 years ago
omg!
i am so frikeen jealous!
i wish i could learn to do all of that!
COME TEACH ME :P
kristeenlovesshane 2 years ago
Never give this up. You're beautiful.
CarlyCullen94 2 years ago
Love it!
just a quick question: Are you wearing 'foot undies'? and if you are: Do they work? because my danceteacher said they don't
IAmContemporary 2 years ago
yeah she is, and they definately work, they help you spin and slide
TwilightMuseLover 2 years ago