The film fails to convey its moral issue well. The theme - 'The outer does not necessarily reflect the inner'' needs a protagonist we like This 'bum,is not presented in a way that we care Subject walks and acts like a organ grinders monkey, He finds the notebook, uses it, then looks surprised he is out of paper. Then tosses it littering. He is not a sympathetic character. Visual metaphor of HIM, his art, & contrasting it's beauty to his condition is missing. The themes point is not made well.
Most the comments here are not reflecting the moral issue of the story.The message of the film seems to conveys a dim reality about how we see people and
how we judge based upon a person's circumstances and don't see the creative
you're absolutely right. so many people see the exterior and don't look deep enough to see what truly matters, or what each and every person has to offer. Thank you for the comment :)
friendly for money but it wasn't like that at all. It really changed my perspectives. I'd love to know what he's doing now. His artwork was incredible.
I loved this film. It's beautiful and as you can imagine it bought back alot of memories ... I could relate to it in a way.
Wow! This reminds me SO much of my time spent in Vancouver. Last year when I was there I was sitting by Granville Public Market having a coffee and a homeless guy was sitting on the pavement opposite me. He was drawing some stuff and it was so unique and I just had to say something to him. So I did and we got talking and he was so intelligent and so talented. He told me alot about Vancouver also and he even asked if I wanted a tour around. Now I know most people would probs think he was being...
I had absolutely no trouble whatsoever experiencing the meaning behind and within this film. I think you are genius, and would love to see what you could do with a large budget! I find your films thought provolking and meaningful. Another excellent job! 5 Star and Favorite!
If I misunderstood something and there was no dog painting - it was only in his imagination, then the separate list lying in album is too obvious. And again, no explanation. You seem to have a lot of potential, but you're not that genius to leave questions unanswered and not to disturb viewers with it. I hope that it is all just for now, it's only a start, but it should be more pleasant to watch.
The moment when he finishes his painting and opening the album to start a new one is confusing - why does he get so anxious all of a sudden? There is no sign of answer on his face - he should have acted like "why do I need to do that? No one needs my art. F**k that" and only THEN throw the album away.
And Dan, please stop always playing a good guy in your movies. Try something new, please?
The movie is good. It still lacks something though.
no the paintings are real...but as you could clearly see he was drawing alot...and he ran lol out of pages...so his passion for drawing was ceased and he couldn't draw anymore.
and as for playing a nice guy, who says my character is a nice guy? in both of my films, there's no evidence to say iw as a nice guy...I just ahven't needed to be a totally abd guy, that's all.
ah. there was no sheets left. I get that now, excuse me. :)
evidence? in the first film you drive someone whom you don't know home. in the sesond one you find the pictures and obviously is a first person to notice that guy's talent. that is called a "good guy" character.
Can you paint yourself blue like your walls? oh yeah nice psa
daturkeyvaginamelonz 1 year ago
The film fails to convey its moral issue well. The theme - 'The outer does not necessarily reflect the inner'' needs a protagonist we like This 'bum,is not presented in a way that we care Subject walks and acts like a organ grinders monkey, He finds the notebook, uses it, then looks surprised he is out of paper. Then tosses it littering. He is not a sympathetic character. Visual metaphor of HIM, his art, & contrasting it's beauty to his condition is missing. The themes point is not made well.
JoeyJoelBand 2 years ago
Most the comments here are not reflecting the moral issue of the story.The message of the film seems to conveys a dim reality about how we see people and
how we judge based upon a person's circumstances and don't see the creative
beauty that lies inside.
Matrixdirect78 2 years ago
you're absolutely right. so many people see the exterior and don't look deep enough to see what truly matters, or what each and every person has to offer. Thank you for the comment :)
stotan88 2 years ago
You're welcome"Stotan88"...That was a very thoughtful presentation and you're very talented. I hope you produce more of these videos in the future.
Matrixdirect78 2 years ago
oh my god this was so touching you are very talented and insightful.
MartyredxMaiden 2 years ago
wow thank you for the kind words :) i really appreciate that!
stotan88 2 years ago
friendly for money but it wasn't like that at all. It really changed my perspectives. I'd love to know what he's doing now. His artwork was incredible.
I loved this film. It's beautiful and as you can imagine it bought back alot of memories ... I could relate to it in a way.
Very well done =)
CityscapeReviews 3 years ago
thanks helen!! that is a really touching story wow :O i'm really glad you enjoyed it!!
stotan88 3 years ago
Wow! This reminds me SO much of my time spent in Vancouver. Last year when I was there I was sitting by Granville Public Market having a coffee and a homeless guy was sitting on the pavement opposite me. He was drawing some stuff and it was so unique and I just had to say something to him. So I did and we got talking and he was so intelligent and so talented. He told me alot about Vancouver also and he even asked if I wanted a tour around. Now I know most people would probs think he was being...
CityscapeReviews 3 years ago
beautiful...tragic...really makes you think.
inspires me to look for beauty in those unexpected places!
SaphireRainshadow 3 years ago
please read below
lecter1231 3 years ago
thank you :)
stotan88 3 years ago
powerful
solidgold451 3 years ago
wow... just wow.
LurkingFable 4 years ago
Wow, your video is really touching and thought-provoking!
danamelinda22 4 years ago
wow this video still gives me chills, amazing work dan
nickedwards23 4 years ago
great film! loved it!
fatcowsforlife 4 years ago
its a really beautiful film. first one of yours i've seen.
subbing + 5 stars :)
justwatchin07 4 years ago
Wow. That was very amazing.
draco5236 4 years ago
good vid mate
StrokeMyPie 4 years ago
hah! you rock dan! thanks for mentioning me in your vid :) A.F.F. Trio!!
Darius888 4 years ago
I liked that alot ... Good job you should put more up.
The end was a good after effect.
-xo Pebblz
secretsofpebbles 4 years ago
An amazing film Stotan, I like you're take on life. You've got a great gift. I look forward to your videos.
FierceWhiteBoi 4 years ago
I had absolutely no trouble whatsoever experiencing the meaning behind and within this film. I think you are genius, and would love to see what you could do with a large budget! I find your films thought provolking and meaningful. Another excellent job! 5 Star and Favorite!
yescandles 4 years ago
Great job as always
mvangaal 4 years ago
If I misunderstood something and there was no dog painting - it was only in his imagination, then the separate list lying in album is too obvious. And again, no explanation. You seem to have a lot of potential, but you're not that genius to leave questions unanswered and not to disturb viewers with it. I hope that it is all just for now, it's only a start, but it should be more pleasant to watch.
watercolour17 4 years ago
The moment when he finishes his painting and opening the album to start a new one is confusing - why does he get so anxious all of a sudden? There is no sign of answer on his face - he should have acted like "why do I need to do that? No one needs my art. F**k that" and only THEN throw the album away.
And Dan, please stop always playing a good guy in your movies. Try something new, please?
The movie is good. It still lacks something though.
watercolour17 4 years ago
no the paintings are real...but as you could clearly see he was drawing alot...and he ran lol out of pages...so his passion for drawing was ceased and he couldn't draw anymore.
and as for playing a nice guy, who says my character is a nice guy? in both of my films, there's no evidence to say iw as a nice guy...I just ahven't needed to be a totally abd guy, that's all.
stotan88 4 years ago
ah. there was no sheets left. I get that now, excuse me. :)
evidence? in the first film you drive someone whom you don't know home. in the sesond one you find the pictures and obviously is a first person to notice that guy's talent. that is called a "good guy" character.
watercolour17 4 years ago
nice video. i like it.
ekstarr 4 years ago
Very good.
fever103 4 years ago
yay!! I love this one it's deep man :)
faxxy42 4 years ago
well no one ever let his true talent shine, which was art, and by the time they discovered how talented he was, it was too late.
stotan88 4 years ago