Dead Worms: The Failed Version

[ichaos86]

The other version is better in my opinion. You're so much more deep in it.

[theshadowed1]

.....yup....watching this video with the final cut in mind is kind of like hearing nails on a chalk board...good on you for going with the other one

[PerfectionObsessive]

In my garden the rain smell likes tea leaves, which is different from the rain on the street corner. It's really based on the environment.

[jferrara78]

Agreed... the new version is far superior to this. Both have value, but the new version is approaching timeless art!

Thanks!

[LeafInTheStream]

Now THIS is educational!

[exDeathex]

This is awesome, if scoutie111 hadn't mentioned the context and meaning, I probably wouldn't have clicked. Knowing this now, makes this video super humour and really damn good.

*cough* screw you MrCropper and company *cough*

[DeeEmarr]

It's just not the same.

[d4dan]

Noir version's better

[ianhoppe]

yea, the bright jumpy atmosphere of this style is perfect for your other videos, the story doesnt fit.

but then again, had you never dont the other video i would have still enjoyed the story.

[hursty810]

I prefered the other version, I think your timing is better with the cig. But your stories are still amazing.

[scoutie111]

Great example of how context IS meaning, Az.

[frigginyates]

Both have some good aspects to them

[aqcheryl]

You know what, I like this version better myself - the other version is very good but it just... this one holds the attention better.

[desirlemonde]

I haven't been on youtube in so long. I missed your videos.

[InfectedDaemon]

And yes, the Noir version is much better.

[InfectedDaemon]

Truthfully Az, I have read a few essays from you. You should do straight fiction and forget about crappy philosophy. Make a collection and make a book, I'd buy it (and thats saying a lot).

[GirlyVoice]

I don't get the dead worms connection to the rest of the story

[acies37]

Yes, yes, yes! Dead on man! Great job! Keep up the great work!

[Brandt761]

I don't think I have any idea what dead worms smell like, though I've seen plenty of them drown in my day. Cigarette smoke I do know and I hate it...

[RowanFortuneWood]

I liked the detail about the accent. Besides that the other version is better performed. Are you planning on writing a collection of short fiction like this? If youre not it is definitely worth considering.

[luvthecanadian]

I definitely like the other one.

Some stories need to be told, well, like stories. And not edited in a quick paced youtube style.

[musicisthegateway]

I like the noir version.