lovedd it
jupiture8 2 years ago
every body getting freaky when is part 30
tumuchi 2 years ago
hey plz put up next part it's getting really good
* i luv winnie the pooh*
moneycarebear1 2 years ago
man you just had to stop but this story is sick like dont ever and i mean EVER stop it lord have mercy
DirtySouthGurl982 2 years ago
LOVED IT!! 5 stars
PoOhB3aR1 2 years ago
thanx so much for ostin 29..even tho im late...i went 2 28 and was like omqq i kant find it..lol
but Chap 30..plz
bebogirl43 2 years ago
good
pinkandpurplek1 2 years ago
i wanna kno what marlena is gonna say,ugh!5*
tty434 2 years ago
Danq pat & jaz always kissinq lmaoo
loved uht huns & i hopee lena aint preqqy
CARNELLZxoxoLADY 2 years ago
is patrick anthony ?!....i didnt get that part?!
love it 5*
tellem123dkt 2 years ago
No pat isnt Anthony...as i recall(think)anthony is someone that pat plays b-ball with and diana wanted him pat 2 introduce her 2 him...anthony....
heeey my names jasmine
and my brothers name is anthony
i picture this as me and pat cuz it says my name lol
skittlezz4 2 years ago
im glad Patrick and Jazz are fine now and worked things out...i wonder what Marlena was gone tell Dustin though..loved it 5*
Ulukau808 2 years ago
thanx 4 postin i loved it 5 starz :)
ezigbonne 2 years ago
5 stars girl!!!!
datfptchick 2 years ago
i am happy bout jazz an pat it might b a new couple startin kelly an meleny aw i wonder wat marlena was goin 2 say
TheChichinboo 2 years ago
it got so far dont rember what chaptr i was on but i found the story agiin
FeRiC3OCiOuSsWaGg 2 years ago
Loved it:]
5*
neabooB5 2 years ago
luv it 5*:D
cherrypoppingirls 2 years ago
great job :)
shatinalaresha 2 years ago
i love it :D
CillaGirl94 2 years ago
this was a good chapter.
i'm so glad they worked things out.
uh-oh..... i wonder what she gotta tell Dustin.
puertoricanprincezz 2 years ago
i liked the story :] i wonder whats gonna happen with dustin?!
misswilson14 2 years ago
luved it 5 stars 4 sure
taetaelovescarnell 2 years ago
luved it!!
jasmine and patrick are such a cute couple
laurenstarr09 2 years ago
that was good!
patrick n jasmine are soooo cute!
keep it up
jenice13 2 years ago
luved it 5*
CuteChubalitha 2 years ago
luv it keep it going!!
b51wifey13245 2 years ago
luv it 5*
keairra2009 2 years ago
gr3at story
destinijoyabff 2 years ago
luved it
MzSkittlesz94 2 years ago
luv it girl!!
lovedd it
jupiture8 2 years ago
every body getting freaky when is part 30
tumuchi 2 years ago
hey plz put up next part it's getting really good
* i luv winnie the pooh*
moneycarebear1 2 years ago
man you just had to stop but this story is sick like dont ever and i mean EVER stop it lord have mercy
DirtySouthGurl982 2 years ago
LOVED IT!! 5 stars
PoOhB3aR1 2 years ago
thanx so much for ostin 29..even tho im late...i went 2 28 and was like omqq i kant find it..lol
but Chap 30..plz
bebogirl43 2 years ago
good
pinkandpurplek1 2 years ago
i wanna kno what marlena is gonna say,ugh!5*
tty434 2 years ago
Danq pat & jaz always kissinq lmaoo
loved uht huns & i hopee lena aint preqqy
CARNELLZxoxoLADY 2 years ago
is patrick anthony ?!....i didnt get that part?!
love it 5*
tellem123dkt 2 years ago
No pat isnt Anthony...as i recall(think)anthony is someone that pat plays b-ball with and diana wanted him pat 2 introduce her 2 him...anthony....
bebogirl43 2 years ago
heeey my names jasmine
and my brothers name is anthony
i picture this as me and pat cuz it says my name lol
skittlezz4 2 years ago
im glad Patrick and Jazz are fine now and worked things out...i wonder what Marlena was gone tell Dustin though..loved it 5*
Ulukau808 2 years ago
thanx 4 postin i loved it 5 starz :)
ezigbonne 2 years ago
5 stars girl!!!!
datfptchick 2 years ago
i am happy bout jazz an pat it might b a new couple startin kelly an meleny aw i wonder wat marlena was goin 2 say
TheChichinboo 2 years ago
it got so far dont rember what chaptr i was on but i found the story agiin
FeRiC3OCiOuSsWaGg 2 years ago
Loved it:]
5*
neabooB5 2 years ago
luv it 5*:D
cherrypoppingirls 2 years ago
great job :)
shatinalaresha 2 years ago
i love it :D
CillaGirl94 2 years ago
this was a good chapter.
i'm so glad they worked things out.
uh-oh..... i wonder what she gotta tell Dustin.
puertoricanprincezz 2 years ago
i liked the story :] i wonder whats gonna happen with dustin?!
misswilson14 2 years ago
luved it 5 stars 4 sure
taetaelovescarnell 2 years ago
luved it!!
jasmine and patrick are such a cute couple
laurenstarr09 2 years ago
that was good!
patrick n jasmine are soooo cute!
keep it up
jenice13 2 years ago
luved it 5*
CuteChubalitha 2 years ago
luv it keep it going!!
b51wifey13245 2 years ago
luv it 5*
keairra2009 2 years ago
gr3at story
destinijoyabff 2 years ago
luved it
MzSkittlesz94 2 years ago
luv it girl!!
tty434 2 years ago