You put a lot of emotion into your songs... I just think in this particular song the guitar felt it a bit too much. Next go maybe turn down the guitar a bit? Just some friendly criticism :)
by the way, have u noticed today, that im doin fine. no more pain, break me away, no more reasons, no more lies, & my apoligizies, that your pissed at me...but u shuld be, but im happy!! LOVE IT! :)
It's awesome. Guitar goes great for it. Question, what did you make first the guitar part or the lyrics? And how long did this take to complete (write and finish the whole song)?
Normally I don't like the typical raspy male rock vocals that everyone else is so fond of, but you can pull it off. I would like to hear what your voice sounds like without the "yuh!" after every line :D
Regardless of my criticism, it's still an awesome song. Keep it up, man.
O-M-G, The lyrics to this song-- Sheww- Are Magnificent. The First Time I Listened to You was when you did the Cover to Breaking Benjamin-So cold. And To be honest, You did GREAT, but I love these words- They remind me of.. well- me. thank You Keep It Up!!
wow I love all your videos you have such a nice voice...I'm still trying to get the choriography of playing and sing at the same time its hard for me..
its not bad but not very original in my opinion. it sounds very 90's rock ballad style. kinda like nikel back or 3 doors down maybe. i don't know man. not my style i guess
:) I like this one also. Probably not my fav. But yeah... When you hear my new stuff that coming soon... I think you'll change your mind! ;) Subscribed yet?
Accusing someone else of plagiarism, why bother? Both songs are good, and not similar in my opinion. They have the same title, but different messages and different styles.
I didn't accuse anyone of plagiarism, that's rediculous... I merely commented on the similarities and the coincidence of it all. You obviously read too far into things.
Seriously, I'm not joking, send some stuff to a label or something, you need to get out there, someone's gotta hear you. You really could be a professional.
I'm buying an iTunes card so I can download your album!
RoxasDive 3 months ago
@suffer man he sounds like who ever he covers, just sayin....
spaceman0005 5 months ago
You sounds so much like ben:D! From Breaking benjamin
framar601 5 months ago
i was watching the screen the whole time xD
gp200ts1 6 months ago
Love this! Alot of people can relate im sure. Good break up song. Move on, say fuck em & you do what ya gotta do to be happy!
ChippyDippy3 7 months ago
You put a lot of emotion into your songs... I just think in this particular song the guitar felt it a bit too much. Next go maybe turn down the guitar a bit? Just some friendly criticism :)
hectaz 8 months ago
Dude....i soooo want ur CD. If u have 1.
KayleyHeartsBlink 11 months ago
by the way, have u noticed today, that im doin fine. no more pain, break me away, no more reasons, no more lies, & my apoligizies, that your pissed at me...but u shuld be, but im happy!! LOVE IT! :)
GirlsLoveInk 1 year ago
Love it & your voice!
GirlsLoveInk 1 year ago
Big Breaking Benjamin Fan so lovin tha voice! can you do a dark electric guitar breaking benjamin song. not cover. i mean in the style of.
KEEP IT UP!!!
wackeyeddie 1 year ago
AWESOME TO THE MAX!! :D
cat4577 1 year ago
Awesome :) <3
Kristincheen 1 year ago
<3 this song. Awesome voice this guy has. :)
cat4577 1 year ago
nice one, its a big industry to go into hope it all works out for you
HousesOfTheSoul 1 year ago
Didnt think a voice like that would come out of you, man! Awesome!
TrialzGTAS 1 year ago
awesome ur really good best ive heard in awhile
jenbandfreak23 1 year ago
sounds good.
Sounds like the same style creed sorta used.
Kurtbulloch 1 year ago
this song was made for me. i feel exactly what he is singing. ur voice captures all my attention lol. (Y) (Y) two thumbs up
nativerythm746 1 year ago
It's awesome. Guitar goes great for it. Question, what did you make first the guitar part or the lyrics? And how long did this take to complete (write and finish the whole song)?
Naunflcl 1 year ago
This is a really good song, you should record it!
infern01 1 year ago
Fuck yeah dude
vincentX709 1 year ago
Your Fricken Amazing !
Bloody96Vampire 1 year ago
mx518 !
Zox68 1 year ago
That mouse is amazing. I used it for like four years :o
Rocking a g5 now :]
mattsc81 1 year ago
amazing!
lpsoldier8 1 year ago
\m/ you rock \m/
ORIGINHELSOUL 2 years ago
Lol... You've still got windows XP on that laptop...
oobergecko 2 years ago
@oobergecko Still? Look at the date this video was uploaded, 2006
gtstudio87 1 year ago
Great!
Chantana15 2 years ago
Normally I don't like the typical raspy male rock vocals that everyone else is so fond of, but you can pull it off. I would like to hear what your voice sounds like without the "yuh!" after every line :D
Regardless of my criticism, it's still an awesome song. Keep it up, man.
xThePilfer 2 years ago
:) :)
wow your freakin amazing!
sexyTiger420 2 years ago
you are absolutely amazing.
:)
kaceymerrill 2 years ago
O-M-G, The lyrics to this song-- Sheww- Are Magnificent. The First Time I Listened to You was when you did the Cover to Breaking Benjamin-So cold. And To be honest, You did GREAT, but I love these words- They remind me of.. well- me. thank You Keep It Up!!
BrittanyH65 2 years ago 2
Dude soooo awesome!!! Great Job!
Dallas73zzz 2 years ago
Dude how are you not signed?
bassistftw 2 years ago
That wats excellent!, if you have time check out my original stuf on my page and see what you think!
burridad 2 years ago
I love all you're music you're very talented with your great voice..I'm a great fan of all your songs..Keep up the good work..
Popps562 2 years ago
great!!!
only one thing would make this better!
on your original songs you should put your lyrics
flashing on the bottom since its an original!
just a suggestion hun!
great! out of all your original songs this one is my favorite!
chaoticcrystal09 2 years ago
this just proves that all your covers are real!
i love your music so much?
you have an album :O
meh?
i want it?
meh? :O
d-_-b
LIBBI3MATEY 2 years ago
this guy kicks ass!!
static4thebrain 2 years ago
wow I love all your videos you have such a nice voice...I'm still trying to get the choriography of playing and sing at the same time its hard for me..
Popps562 2 years ago
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richguymcfat 2 years ago
asdjkl;
Iloveit..
Nuff said.
haha best song you doo.
;D
-Harley
auron23 3 years ago
It's gonna be on the acoustic album I'm working on right now! :)
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
its not bad but not very original in my opinion. it sounds very 90's rock ballad style. kinda like nikel back or 3 doors down maybe. i don't know man. not my style i guess
-peace
peterhamilrules 3 years ago
Thanks for watching.
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago 8
np and i hope that we`ll get more !!!!
okayy?we want to hear your voice
devide3 3 years ago
I think it´s your best song :)and your voice is amazing
devide3 3 years ago 2
:) I like this one also. Probably not my fav. But yeah... When you hear my new stuff that coming soon... I think you'll change your mind! ;) Subscribed yet?
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
Hi John, wow man what can I say, you have amazing vocals and guitar skills!
Spiritedaway182 3 years ago
Thanks! Have you subscribed yet?
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
lol you don't look like the type of person that would carry that voice, good job nevertheless
PainlessTragedy 3 years ago
Looks can be deceiving... ;)
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
Accusing someone else of plagiarism, why bother? Both songs are good, and not similar in my opinion. They have the same title, but different messages and different styles.
kyaisme 3 years ago
I didn't accuse anyone of plagiarism, that's rediculous... I merely commented on the similarities and the coincidence of it all. You obviously read too far into things.
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
nice, the vocals are great
naderzigby 3 years ago
Thank you very much!
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
Super Sweet song Bro! 5*s
daysinnauditor 3 years ago
Awesome song.
But your guitar is a bit too loud. Correct that and it's perfect :)
yellowstratplayer 3 years ago
Yeah.. I know... sorry. But thanks for the comment!
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
love this song!
VesyKormans 3 years ago
Glad to hear it. Have you subscribed yet?
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
Love the emotion...
Got chills.
bodhival 3 years ago
Thanks! Have you subscribed yet?
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
This happens to be one of my favorite songs and I can play it over and over again.
oasisrahl 3 years ago
awesome
Roneypoop 3 years ago
Hey...pretty cool Jon!!! I really like it//Yud
kwillis68 3 years ago
Good song... Good hooks. I dig!
JsnE24 3 years ago
I appreciate it. And thanks for the subscription!
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
pretty good 5 stars
alexcec07 3 years ago
Thank you very much for rating!
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
very good man!!!
RodeoClown79 3 years ago
Thank you!
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
wOw... that was super impressive! suprised you havent made a few CD's yet ;)
Tripplebak 3 years ago
This is a very late reply... I know... sorry. But thanks for the comment! New album coming soon! :)
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
Well done thanks for posting!
goodwave67 3 years ago
Thank you very much for commenting! Sorry so late getting back to you.
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
you sound really good. i like it alot.
you ARE better than alot of people i have heard
you need to be professional.
sw33tcarolinagirl 4 years ago
:) Thank you for your support. Sorry my reply is so late...
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
Dude you seriously have to post where alot more people can see because you have more potential than most people and some pros
Rushn333 4 years ago
Where would you suggest?
ScreamingRage01 4 years ago
Very, VERY well done!
vawahnt 5 years ago
Thank you VERY, VERY Much! Sorry the reply was so late....
ScreamingRage01 3 years ago
very nice job!
antique279 5 years ago
if I may ask, what were you looking for when you came across this video?
ScreamingRage01 5 years ago
Seriously, I'm not joking, send some stuff to a label or something, you need to get out there, someone's gotta hear you. You really could be a professional.
deminstius 5 years ago
i was looking for happy acoustic songs lol, this is a bit more of a downer but still man good job! x
luketaylor247 3 years ago
hey man i reallyu like your voice, you should do some incubus covers i bet that would sound good, good luck
DanK240 5 years ago
good voice m8
benmotherfucker 5 years ago
Thanks!
ScreamingRage01 5 years ago