I swear, parts of this story are just so random and make no sense at all. Worst fanfic ever written and yet it's so unbelievably stupid that I have to laugh at certain parts.
if this were to be made into a full-length movie, it would be the best comedy of the year. sure, they would have to tone down SOME things in order to ensure that the audience won't die of stupidity, but i bet you My Immortal: The Movie would be a hit!
Draco and Willow died in previous chapters; Why are they still alive? So confused...lol. She likes to use "angrily" a lot. Worst writing in the history of writing. The Sims re-enactment is quite hilarious :)
Poor Crabbe and Goyle; they're just not goffic enough to get their own awesome nicknames.
"Except for you, Brittany." Wow, Trevaly's so mean. XD I love how Brittany exists only to be harassed, but I guess she deserves it for being such a poser prep.
It's kinda funny that Tara hates Snape and Lupin but likes Lucius and Sirius. I don't think I've ever come across an HP fan like that. But then, Tara's really not a normal fan.
She means hi, everybody come in XD
Yemmuh4444 1 month ago
0 dislikes, as it should be.
fearthefurby 2 months ago
hahaha eveyone are preps hahahahaha... Dobby ran away -___-
BellaSilvery 3 months ago
I feel bad for britney.:(
greatworld412 3 months ago
Snape has got kinky underwear...
Gaarassandcake 4 months ago
"and suddenly..i fell asleep." that line gets me every time xD
theuhohcheerio 4 months ago
just pissed myself laughing at dum bledoor
Ithinktomuch27 5 months ago
PORNTO :O
MissDaintyK 6 months ago
Shit, he has an invincibility cloak? Way to one up Harry Potter man...
Reidja7 7 months ago
@Reidja7
Actually quoted from the actual text it's
"Invincibility coke"
O.o
annie10103 7 months ago
No Voldermort! Don't kill the llama! Anyone but the llama!
Leprechaunproduction 7 months ago 2
LMAO, how do you run out of a room in a "suicidal" way? xD
Niobesnuppa 7 months ago 2
lol i love how dumbledore's lipstick makes him look like he's smiling and senile all the time XD
ARandomDaydreamer 7 months ago
"But then I heard someone shooting angrily" Uh, excuse me, but I don't see a gun anywhere. Is it invisible?
KoraBloom 9 months ago
I swear, parts of this story are just so random and make no sense at all. Worst fanfic ever written and yet it's so unbelievably stupid that I have to laugh at certain parts.
KoraBloom 9 months ago
You cut out all scenes where she describes her clothes and shit! Those parts were IMPORTANT!!! X,D
MerZuly 9 months ago 11
@MerZuly Well, I didn't want to have to change her outfit every two seconds.
SamPotter041009 9 months ago 12
I lmao
OverStuffedTaco 10 months ago
"We started frenching passively, suddenly, I fell asleep." LMAO :D
MsExplosiveSocks 11 months ago 7
@MsExplosiveSocks Yeah, but not only did she fall asleep, she fell asleep standing up.
KoraBloom 9 months ago
"You are too old and your Alzheimer's is dangerous."
LarimerFilms 11 months ago 6
wait... mr norris? and filch is the cat???? im pretty sure that's not right.....
SuperFitzyBoi 1 year ago 5
@SuperFitzyBoi No, it's not right.
KoraBloom 9 months ago
Pornto!
Hitsugayafan12 1 year ago
"and then dot dot dot dot dot dot." lmfao. xD
nicparmesan 1 year ago 3
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Kaitlynn2534 1 year ago
all of a sudden... a terrible man with red eyes and no nose flew in on his broomstick. lol the randomness of voldemort
mickey2019 1 year ago 6
I love that when Voldemort is talking to Ebony there's a llama in his speech bubble... pretty much sums up the story.
shmooglefloogle 1 year ago 10
"Kill him, or I shall kill him anyway!"
... Seriously?
amandamaya123 1 year ago 5
Oh dear God, that face that Dumbledum is making while he's blaring at Doris Rumbridge is something else.
Ashkihyena 1 year ago
It's I will kill "thee" not I will kill "thou"
Yeah, I know. Murder, Arson, Jaywalking but it was bugging me.
WordCasters 1 year ago
if this were to be made into a full-length movie, it would be the best comedy of the year. sure, they would have to tone down SOME things in order to ensure that the audience won't die of stupidity, but i bet you My Immortal: The Movie would be a hit!
kutegurl67 1 year ago 3
Draco and Willow died in previous chapters; Why are they still alive? So confused...lol. She likes to use "angrily" a lot. Worst writing in the history of writing. The Sims re-enactment is quite hilarious :)
Jogonpants 2 years ago 8
And LOL, "the bark lord". xD (Sorry, I always leave too many comments at the same time. -.-')
Niobesnuppa 2 years ago 4
LOL, Mr. Norris and Filth. xD
Niobesnuppa 2 years ago
"You have to tell me why you're being so erective"
"I want to shit next to her!" "No I do!"
Tara Gilesbie = genius. xD
CaptainMatey 2 years ago 33
@CaptainMatey I meant to thumbs up your comment, but I accidentallly thumbed it down. Sorry ^__^;
Shipsahoy21 1 year ago
@Shipsahoy21
Haha, it's okay man. Don't worry about it. ;D
CaptainMatey 1 year ago
Poor Crabbe and Goyle; they're just not goffic enough to get their own awesome nicknames.
"Except for you, Brittany." Wow, Trevaly's so mean. XD I love how Brittany exists only to be harassed, but I guess she deserves it for being such a poser prep.
It's kinda funny that Tara hates Snape and Lupin but likes Lucius and Sirius. I don't think I've ever come across an HP fan like that. But then, Tara's really not a normal fan.
LulzItsUryuu 2 years ago 3
@LulzItsUryuu
LOL, of course she's not a normal fan; she wrote this amazing piece of trash! xD
Niobesnuppa 2 years ago 2
Deviation
BritneyFanFeva 2 years ago
4:13 - Oh god, the Sims AI is making it EVEN more gross. x.x
rossmallo 2 years ago
'snap and lupin were having sex and dobby was watching, normally i would have been turned on'
xD
toiletseatbreaker 2 years ago 45
"we started frenching passively" that's hilarious.
Killerlo0p 2 years ago 5
We started frenching passively. Suddenly, I fell asleep.
TerrorBlack 2 years ago 11