I once lived with a guy who looked not unlike you, whose nickname was "Bear" - 'cos he potentially had the rage of a bear, but was also a big teddy bear.
When he split up with his girlfriend he grabbed me in a huge bearhug and began crying on my shoulder. "It's OK Ben," I squawked out, struggling for breath, "everything'll be cool!"
I think there's something in that for all of us.....
There is a lot of them though. I have enough for 40+ more vids, and that is only in a month......UHGGG. Something happened in my mind. Something....new. Maybe good, maybe bad, will be interesting.
Yours was so nearly there though, better than any i had read online. They were all sickly and fawning which i know he would not appreciate, he's awake and aware.
Anywayz....
I tried to write one myself for him. lol. It's really hard to do you make it look too easy bro.
The black and white thing really adds to the sombre mood. Wow. Very effective. Well ... enough about hellishness. Do you have any poetry about heaven, paradise, utopia?
the bars that seclude and separate will only break when we dare to stand and face all of ourselves as one.
yep, we are the only 'ones' that can make a change within ourselves. What a place we've certainly created, no where to run or hide. All here, and we can't deny.
Just makes ya wanna have kids... Doesn't it....?
horuslovechild2 1 year ago
Amazing...
ktpurpleflower 2 years ago
I think... I don't understand most of the poetry. It's all mathematics... Same message, but with rythm and nice to listen to...
vfeesz 3 years ago
Brilliant. So damn applicable it is sickening. Cheers. ;-)
mconn2112 3 years ago
the world is not perfect, no doubts. so, what?
mikkitiny 3 years ago
wow.
that is SO right on.
dnHooligan 3 years ago 3
I wish it wasn't.
Good to hear from you, and thanks for the comment.
jailarson 3 years ago
i hear ya, but its better to see than to be blindsided.
dnHooligan 3 years ago 4
You have amazing presence and facial expression besides the powerful verse.
humanswin 3 years ago 2
I am honored by your kind comments. In reality I am a big teddy bear. A big, disgruntled teddy bear.....
;)
jailarson 3 years ago
I once lived with a guy who looked not unlike you, whose nickname was "Bear" - 'cos he potentially had the rage of a bear, but was also a big teddy bear.
When he split up with his girlfriend he grabbed me in a huge bearhug and began crying on my shoulder. "It's OK Ben," I squawked out, struggling for breath, "everything'll be cool!"
I think there's something in that for all of us.....
;)
Changeling9au 3 years ago
Great stuff man. Soon, we will be free.
Amuris86 3 years ago 2
I really do hope so. But its up to us to make it happen.
jailarson 3 years ago
Truth. I choose to respect your words.
jailarson 3 years ago
cool poem!
SpamAnn 3 years ago
Thanks Ann. 'Threads' are being pulled on a daily basis ;)
jailarson 3 years ago
There is a lot of them though. I have enough for 40+ more vids, and that is only in a month......UHGGG. Something happened in my mind. Something....new. Maybe good, maybe bad, will be interesting.
jailarson 3 years ago
Great poem,well done!!!!!!!Peace and unconditional love...
dieneshugi 3 years ago
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the spectacle as I empty my brain on to youtube. ;P. I gotta pull some notes out of 'here' otherwise I won't sleep.
jailarson 3 years ago
I have just wasted an hour online looking for a fitting poem for a friend having a baby. Not one appealed. Yours was ace..
You have such a talent, the presentation just finshes it off to perfection.
So impressed.
neptuneey 3 years ago
I am glad you liked it. However, I would question whether or not it is appropriate to actually read after a baby is born. lol
jailarson 3 years ago
Yours was so nearly there though, better than any i had read online. They were all sickly and fawning which i know he would not appreciate, he's awake and aware.
Anywayz....
I tried to write one myself for him. lol. It's really hard to do you make it look too easy bro.
neptuneey 3 years ago
Its hard to become more of what you already are.
jailarson 3 years ago
Very good...I wouldn't say depressing though..Such truth seems to blanket me with a warm, fuzzy neutrality. I would like to hear more.
ChantsInHell 3 years ago 2
I have plenty. I assure you. A giant bucket of cynicism and sarcasm. Its a stew almost.
jailarson 3 years ago
Thank you. ;)
jailarson 3 years ago
A more approptiate comment could not be stated.
jailarson 3 years ago
The black and white thing really adds to the sombre mood. Wow. Very effective. Well ... enough about hellishness. Do you have any poetry about heaven, paradise, utopia?
hellboyzII 3 years ago 2
Hmm....yer. But they all involve BEX. lol.
jailarson 3 years ago
If I didnt talk to you for 8 hours a night, i might leave a longer comment.
jailarson 3 years ago
Thats a very good reflection of what we all have been going through, cheers :)
nightstep 3 years ago
Thanks brother.
jailarson 3 years ago
hellllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!! lol awesome.I cant tell you how happy I am that your doing this.Peace! he speaks truths. he speaks.:P
rblwoaclu 3 years ago
Yeah. It I find it rather.....therapeutic. One of the bottles has been uncorked, as it were.
jailarson 3 years ago
why do you think i do so many???lol :P
rblwoaclu 3 years ago
heavy
PlanetoftheAtheists 3 years ago
Don't worry, thats the most depressing one. I just had to get it out of the way.
jailarson 3 years ago
the bars that seclude and separate will only break when we dare to stand and face all of ourselves as one.
yep, we are the only 'ones' that can make a change within ourselves. What a place we've certainly created, no where to run or hide. All here, and we can't deny.
THanks for sharing J
MarlenLife 3 years ago
Oh, I have plenty more, and I am figuring out how to use windows movie maker now. This one is probably the most dark of the ones I've written.
jailarson 3 years ago