The Opposition- Short Action Film

[Fearitself365]

needs some freaking lighting

[HDFEST]

Awesome! Great job!

[squiddey4]

ouch... that was bad, don't worry my first films were shit too... in fact, they still are! take a look, comment and tell me what you think :P

[SickWisdomProduction]

I loved this! AWESOME!

[greatLittleAnzio]

song at the end?



[1TruePhoenixFire]

@greatLittleAnzio its from the bourn series usually at the end before the credits

[aithendodge]

Good work dude. This stuff can be harder than it looks.

[beansrule]

How old were you when you made this?

[Freddirector]

This was pretty good. If anyone is criticizing you or panning you, than it is because they never made a film or can even make a good one.

[Brian620]

color grading isnt bad, needs a shit ton of work tho if your persuing a career

[PainTrane01]

It was okay, I could see potential in it. Your video was widescreen, so why didn't you make it fit the player?

PEOPLE ON YOUTUBE NEED TO PROPERLY FORMAT THEIR VIDEOS TO FIT THE WIDESCREEN PLAYER. DANG.

[JusBlaze3255]

that was cool

[MangaMonkey565]

i really liked the lighting, it makes it feel more professional. great job bro.

[wowcaldinex]

ya thats what i noticed too lol im wondering if he used a filter

[dudeyfish999]

2.18 was Fucking incredible soo realistic noot like any of the other crap films you see on here. good stuff.

[CheeseyFilms]

This was alright but it would have been a lot better if the credits weren't half of your vid and if the audio on the dialogue was better as opposed to subtitles

[jcdaman199]

sweet movie guys. maybe tone down ur color filter or shoot with better lighting though cus it was a bit dark.

[xtw777]

what song is this

[mattwhiteboi330]

Awsome. I like it, check out my video Hard Target (2) its short and sweet. Ther eis more to come but I think you will like it!

[MOPARfulSRT4]

That film was hot. You should do one with a fighting scene.

[danonabouncycastle]

music is from bourne?

[BWPproductions]

yyep

[ChezterG]

ok first i thought the color grading was exellent, i wouldn't have changed a thing, it sets a GREAT mood! and the music helps alot. this reminds me of the bourne series! I'm sure if this was on a DVD or TV or something besides youtube it wouldn't look so dark

[WithTheDmeister]

i really love the camerawork and angles and the color gives it a nice touch it reminds me of prisonbreak 5 stars and fav!

[ShamefulProductions]

The camerawork and editing are decent, but I think you tried to hard to stylize it. You should also invest in a microphone.

I made a group for people who make gunfights. If you're interested in joining it, you can find it through the Groups link at the top of my channel.

[DarkNaughtProduction]

I really liked this.

- The Camera movements where very nice and fluid, "Bourne-esque"

- The color was good just needed some fixing in editing

- Soundtrack is great, sets the mood.

- 2 minutes of credits ! oh my...

Overall this is good (B+)

[TSHADproductions]

The only thing i thought was funny is that the credits almost took up half the movie, but other than that it was good. You were smart enough to use the smoke (props) for the bullet hitting the girl other than the bright red blood which can just ruin these short films. Good job!

[Freddirector]

Yeah ignore the haters, make more films.

[fogfrogblog]

I don't know what with all these hater comments, like they have something on their channel that they made themselves.

[BWPproductions]

thank youfogfrogblog and worksandwonderz

[WorksandWonderz]

Dude im sry about all this hatemail crap. I think everything about the film is pretty awsome. GOOD JOB!

[tintinstooge8]

well, i am not the only one saying that it sucks ass, and i dont have much else to do right now at this time. so yeah thanks for your opinion on my movies, i could give a shit about your opinion.

[BWPproductions]

im not even gonna argue with you dude, go trash other peoples videos. im deleting all the crap you left me :) i love you too

[Freddirector]

not bad. You nailed the suspense, but it was too dark and a little confusing at first. Not bad.

[Anthonyo1]

hey the color grading is actually cool, but, no one cocks a gun before they put it in their pants or bag.

[tintinstooge8]

jesus, dont do anymore please

[earthisgod]

You may call this color grading? I call it total destruction of color. If you want to add a cold look that is fine but everything else like skin for example needs to remain it's natural color. Instead you made everything look blue. A total opposite to any Bourne film look...

[Redkangavoosa]

Fuckin 9 yr olds

[triggerman6]

wow....that was terrible....piece of shit film....try again.

[BWPproductions]

ok thanks!

[Aaronpowellfilms]

That was good, really nice coloring. Just make the credits shorter next time; keep up the great work!

[BWPproductions]

yeah it kinda sucked...haha but thats what i get for using my cousins crappy camera, an hour to film, and no script, we just made it up as we went, haha

[Aaronpowellfilms]

It didn't suck at all, a lot better then what you usually see around here, keep it up!

[penguinmaster9110]

yea brett ur kinda stupid 4 that comment on 2 reasons, 1 u used ur camerea, 2nd ur camera is the same as jenna's!!! duece

[BWPproductions]

yeah i that was stupid, i was just saying my camera sucks compared to the one i am getting soon

[jeanjack247]

damn brett! ur so badass haha i love you!

[FunnyChicken11]

you need to brighten up the black levels a little bit

[Emoslayerdotdotdot]

Wow, I'm impressed!

[IMakeBondFilmsJake]

Really really great!!

[jackal9188]

Too much color grading, you should add in some ambient sound effects to add more to the scene. Like dogs barking, or police sirens. Other than that, good vid, reminds me when i use to make movies like these as a kid.

[TRXracing07]

Way toooooooo much color grading could be better with a brighter color grading. Oh well your a begginer so who cares.lol!

[BWPproductions]

lol i know, im such a noob, i should go suck it!

[TRXracing07]

thats right go suck one

[trevortristan]

you blow tarter sauce it sucks

[BWPproductions]

hahahaha ur frriends with joel your trevor

[trevortristan]

uh well what can you say.... i seriosly whanted to chuck the computer out the so you suck

[penguinmaster9110]

cool video 5 stars

[penguinmaster9110]

well said... well said

[thetimereaper]

Guns don't kill people, Lame Videos do!

People don't smoke when you shoot them.

[BWPproductions]

thanks i appreciate it!! you made my day!!

[noobtubefilm]

Amazing. For 13 years old. Well done guys

[penguinmaster9110]

thnks man

[BWPproductions]

haha thanks

[penguinmaster9110]

hows cops brettso the clown?

[jackal9188]

13 years old? thats pretty damn good, I remember I made shit with an old 8mm camcorder at that age. Little too dark, but I'm sure you're learning as you go along.

[mega99916]

Too heavy color correction guys, and the fact that you mix it with way too strong blue and green just makes one dizzy.

A bit lighter color correction (one color only, green or blue, not both) and better sound (dub it if you have to) is what's needed for this movie to be good :)

And if you're really 22 as your profile says then this movie should be rather embarrassing to you.

Gonna rate this Good, but only cause I've seen worse... Much worse ;) I see potential :P

[BWPproductions]

well we are 13, not 22 : ), yeah seemed a bit too dark and my microphone on my camera can't pick up anything, thanks though

[mega99916]

13? Sounds a bit better :P Freeze the image at 00:06 and imagine it with just a little lighter color correction. If I would have been shown that image I would have guessed it came from a bad edition of The Matrix- I mean, the lightning just got perfect (accidents happen ^^).

I would love to see this one with a bit lighter Color correction and a bit better sound ;) Cheers.

[TRXracing07]

Watch after the credits!!!

[penguinmaster9110]

cool video except wat happend to sending me the copy?

[BWPproductions]

i have to cut it into two files its too large be patient my friend...

[penguinmaster9110]

good news good news, i will put it on also.

did the gernade s

[penguinmaster9110]

did the gernade scene not work out?

[BWPproductions]

no it looked horrible so i just cut it out, lol

[TRXracing07]

Tight video!!