Honestly, I usually don't like your rapping, and I mean no offense. However, this song just kicks ass. You've proved to me that you can in fact rap and make good music.
@dash648 Haha well that's awesome to hear man. I do hope you can check out my Mixtape dropping Jan. 31st. I'd love to hear your opinion on all the songs.
But, I'm getting off track here. I find this a nice, simple, if a little bit on the very swear-y side song, definitely better than the mainstream retards. Do you happen to have a song where its just you rapping?
@Kurosaki897 I have one on my first mixtape. Track is called "Break" but I don't do it often. I like making tracks and music over just spitting a few bars.
You've gotten really good lately, i'm impressed. You're flow is simple, yet effective. The chorus is very well done. This is probably the darkest themed song you've done. This is in second place for your best song, with Dreams & Hope being in first place. Keep up the good work.
You also sound, with subject matter and beat, VERY SIMILAR to Bad Meets Evil's "Take From Me", ESPECIALLY your last verse, which is nearly the same as Em's.
@Kurosaki897 I'm working on Multi's the more I made the mixtape. Especially on the last three tracks I did. Hopefully can see that when you give a listen.
As for beats, well they won't all be winners. I thought it was simple but nice.
Beat wise, I don't think it sounds anything like Take from me. Nor my subject matter. Em's verse on Take From Me was him whining like a little baby bitch about people stealing his music. My subject matter is about my family/Friends/work.
@UltimateChance Whining like a little bitch? I don't think so. And forgive me for the beat thing, I had just listened to it and they seemed quite similar when quiet. And for your subject matter:
Your last lines:
This is my final goodbye
I may have failed but you can't say i didn't try
Em's last lines:
Farewell I bid you, but before I go my last gift to you
Ladies and gentlemen Slaughterhouse I give you!
A bit similar imo. And I'm not hating, btw. I'm actually honored that you replied to me.
@Kurosaki897 Yes. I like Em but when he bitches about people stealing his music, it gets annoying. He doesn't shut the fuck up about a thing that doesn't even effect him. Not to mention the whole BME was pretty horrible. I listen to two songs from there so subject matter wise I don't get anything from BME.
I'm talking about the world and giving up. He's talking about rap and giving up cause someone leaked his music.
Very different subject matters. But thanks for the input =D
@UltimateChance Holy shit. BME was CLASSIC Shady, all the way through, WAY better than his last three piles of dogshit. Eminem's made LOADS of songs with similar context. He's addressing the problem, and he's not whining. Take From Me was actually not really fitting into the whole BME thing. Hell the Sequel wasn't supposed to have subject matter. It was supposed to be pure, genius, powerful rap.
@Kurosaki897 That was not classic Shady. Least not the Shady I listened to in Middle School-High School. It was a old man trying to recapture the image that he lost years ago.
He's addressing a problem that doesn't effect him. He knows full well a few leak songs (Which half are better then BME) does not effect him at all. He's bitching. He has so much material to write and he talks stealing songs...lolz what?
Shady isn't the first to speak about life problems Just saying...
@UltimateChance I know about not being the first lol. How is he trying to recapture the image? You said you've only listened to TWO songs. Which ones? Lighters and Take From Me? Listen to Welcome 2 Hell. Shady is back. And better. He is certainly not worse.
@Kurosaki897 No, I only listen to two songs STILL from the album. I listen to "Above The Law" cause I love the chorus/beat. Royce sucks on it though. Em is decent but still has this fucking stupid habit of putting some of the worst punchlines EVER.
Reunion is the other. Why? It's the only song that sounds like the old Em. Decent flow, normal voice until he does his force shouting. But the chorus is great and royce is least decent on this. So those the only two I listen to.
@Kurosaki897 Reunion is Good, not great. Great is "White America" or "Kill You" or "Don't Give A Fuck" Reunion is good but nothing more. Above the Law is decent. Welcome 2 Hell has some of his worst lyrics of all time. "Get scared little pissants, and see if I don't come stomp your farm" really dude? That's "Amazing" lyrics? 0_0
Recovery is great subject matter. Talking 2 myself, going through changes, and spacebound are pathetic? Really? And Almost Famous >>> Whole BME evil.
@UltimateChance Actually, 90% of Recovery's metaphors were a hundred times worse. Welcome 2 Hell was explosive, great. You are the FIRST PERSON I know that's hated on it. Talking 2 Myself? That was the WORST SONG ON THE ALBUM. On Fire was great though. Almost Famous was great, but nothing compared to something like "The Kiss".
@Kurosaki897 Recovery's punchlines were shit too. But he also had subject matter to talk about. Talking 2 Myself was great. No shitty punchlines, just a story of a guy going through a dark time in his life. On fire was garbage, freestyle throwaway. Almost Famous was great for it's beat, chorus, and lyrics. The Kiss is Em at his worst.
Your the FIRST person I saw like BME> Everyone I know hates it. But remember I grew up with SSLP/MMLP/Show Eminem with my friends, so different em.
@UltimateChance Lemme put it this way. Recovery was the return of Eminem/Marshal Mathers. Hell: The Sequel was the return of Slim Shady. A Kiss was genius, catchy, and great, with Em actually taking shots at celebrities who are RELEVANT AND POPULAR, instead of taking shots ad dead people. On Fire was great, bullshit hook, like he said in the lyrics, which weren't bad. Talking 2 Myself is another sob story from Em, and he says he almost took shots at wayne and Kanye, which would have been great.
@Kurosaki897 But no he's far worse. Encore is at him worst. Relapse is amazing for the writing but the subject matter is horrible. Recovery was good, best in awhile from him. However everything in 2011 has sucked for him. His shitty punchlines, his voiced yelling, and his goddamn cut chop flow is all bad.
@UltimateChance Recovery was completely pathetic. His singing? Annoying. His subject matter? Completely repetitive. BME was a REAL rap album. Welcome 2 Hell? Best flow, best lyrics I've seen from him in a LONG TIME. Granted, it had bad production and bad chourses, but its a RAP EP.
The echo thing you do with your verses doesn't really work. It messes with your song. Your flow is quite simple, though your rhyming is great. Ever tried rhyming double syllables? Try it some time. Might be interesting. Also, if you can, try to get a better beat. WAYYYYY too simple.
Honestly, I usually don't like your rapping, and I mean no offense. However, this song just kicks ass. You've proved to me that you can in fact rap and make good music.
dash648 1 month ago
@dash648 Haha well that's awesome to hear man. I do hope you can check out my Mixtape dropping Jan. 31st. I'd love to hear your opinion on all the songs.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Awesome - very plan b!!
kill3rvill3 1 month ago
I honestly think this is your best song, I've had this on repeat for the last 30 minutes. Keep up the good work.
DareW0lf 1 month ago
@DareW0lf Thank you man, means a lot. I promise the Mixtape will be filled with great songs =D
UltimateChance 1 month ago
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Whoollyy Shit you are that good Whity You have great potential :))))
mr57708 1 month ago in playlist My Music
dam this pretty good
rxl209 1 month ago
Pretty good whitey.
Spiritusantus 1 month ago
@Spiritusantus Thanks!
UltimateChance 1 month ago
But, I'm getting off track here. I find this a nice, simple, if a little bit on the very swear-y side song, definitely better than the mainstream retards. Do you happen to have a song where its just you rapping?
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 Thanks. I'm little confused, just rapping?
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance No chorus, just plain, flat out rapping ._.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 I have one on my first mixtape. Track is called "Break" but I don't do it often. I like making tracks and music over just spitting a few bars.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
brilliant
gorogamerain 1 month ago in playlist My Music
@gorogamerain Thank you!
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Finally! A new song by Whity, made my day. =). Had a REALLY shit day today. Thanks WHITY! =)
Scottsmaster1 1 month ago
@Scottsmaster1 Haha thanks man glad helped =D
UltimateChance 1 month ago
getting much better whitey :) this is probably your best yet. Keep it up :)
SuperSurvivalHorror 1 month ago
@SuperSurvivalHorror Thank you!
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance no problem
SuperSurvivalHorror 1 month ago
You've gotten really good lately, i'm impressed. You're flow is simple, yet effective. The chorus is very well done. This is probably the darkest themed song you've done. This is in second place for your best song, with Dreams & Hope being in first place. Keep up the good work.
AFalconPunch 1 month ago
@AFalconPunch I'm trying a simple flow for now till I feel more comfortable going with a new one. Thank you though for the compliment!
Yeah this is a dark song. Sometimes gotta let those demons out. But honestly most of the Mixtape isn't dark, it's a nice mix.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
awesome flow and words, but very dark...
gaaramax1235 1 month ago
@gaaramax1235 Thank you. This is probably the darkest track on the mixtape.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Que merda de musica, o melhor é q ele n me entende!
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Like it bro.....but I liked the last one more.
craiglackenby 1 month ago
@craiglackenby That's cool! =D Got lots of different songs on this album.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
it is pretty good, not my favorite, but still good.
Wesker12349 1 month ago in playlist My Music
@Wesker12349 Thanks =D
UltimateChance 1 month ago
You also sound, with subject matter and beat, VERY SIMILAR to Bad Meets Evil's "Take From Me", ESPECIALLY your last verse, which is nearly the same as Em's.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago in playlist My Music
@Kurosaki897 I'm working on Multi's the more I made the mixtape. Especially on the last three tracks I did. Hopefully can see that when you give a listen.
As for beats, well they won't all be winners. I thought it was simple but nice.
Beat wise, I don't think it sounds anything like Take from me. Nor my subject matter. Em's verse on Take From Me was him whining like a little baby bitch about people stealing his music. My subject matter is about my family/Friends/work.
UltimateChance 1 month ago 5
@UltimateChance Whining like a little bitch? I don't think so. And forgive me for the beat thing, I had just listened to it and they seemed quite similar when quiet. And for your subject matter:
Your last lines:
This is my final goodbye
I may have failed but you can't say i didn't try
Em's last lines:
Farewell I bid you, but before I go my last gift to you
Ladies and gentlemen Slaughterhouse I give you!
A bit similar imo. And I'm not hating, btw. I'm actually honored that you replied to me.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 Yes. I like Em but when he bitches about people stealing his music, it gets annoying. He doesn't shut the fuck up about a thing that doesn't even effect him. Not to mention the whole BME was pretty horrible. I listen to two songs from there so subject matter wise I don't get anything from BME.
I'm talking about the world and giving up. He's talking about rap and giving up cause someone leaked his music.
Very different subject matters. But thanks for the input =D
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance Holy shit. BME was CLASSIC Shady, all the way through, WAY better than his last three piles of dogshit. Eminem's made LOADS of songs with similar context. He's addressing the problem, and he's not whining. Take From Me was actually not really fitting into the whole BME thing. Hell the Sequel wasn't supposed to have subject matter. It was supposed to be pure, genius, powerful rap.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 That was not classic Shady. Least not the Shady I listened to in Middle School-High School. It was a old man trying to recapture the image that he lost years ago.
He's addressing a problem that doesn't effect him. He knows full well a few leak songs (Which half are better then BME) does not effect him at all. He's bitching. He has so much material to write and he talks stealing songs...lolz what?
Shady isn't the first to speak about life problems Just saying...
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance I know about not being the first lol. How is he trying to recapture the image? You said you've only listened to TWO songs. Which ones? Lighters and Take From Me? Listen to Welcome 2 Hell. Shady is back. And better. He is certainly not worse.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 No, I only listen to two songs STILL from the album. I listen to "Above The Law" cause I love the chorus/beat. Royce sucks on it though. Em is decent but still has this fucking stupid habit of putting some of the worst punchlines EVER.
Reunion is the other. Why? It's the only song that sounds like the old Em. Decent flow, normal voice until he does his force shouting. But the chorus is great and royce is least decent on this. So those the only two I listen to.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance Reunion is GREAT. Above the Law is pretty good. The only two songs that sucked on it were Take From me and Lighters IMO.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 Reunion is Good, not great. Great is "White America" or "Kill You" or "Don't Give A Fuck" Reunion is good but nothing more. Above the Law is decent. Welcome 2 Hell has some of his worst lyrics of all time. "Get scared little pissants, and see if I don't come stomp your farm" really dude? That's "Amazing" lyrics? 0_0
Recovery is great subject matter. Talking 2 myself, going through changes, and spacebound are pathetic? Really? And Almost Famous >>> Whole BME evil.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance Actually, 90% of Recovery's metaphors were a hundred times worse. Welcome 2 Hell was explosive, great. You are the FIRST PERSON I know that's hated on it. Talking 2 Myself? That was the WORST SONG ON THE ALBUM. On Fire was great though. Almost Famous was great, but nothing compared to something like "The Kiss".
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 Recovery's punchlines were shit too. But he also had subject matter to talk about. Talking 2 Myself was great. No shitty punchlines, just a story of a guy going through a dark time in his life. On fire was garbage, freestyle throwaway. Almost Famous was great for it's beat, chorus, and lyrics. The Kiss is Em at his worst.
Your the FIRST person I saw like BME> Everyone I know hates it. But remember I grew up with SSLP/MMLP/Show Eminem with my friends, so different em.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance Lemme put it this way. Recovery was the return of Eminem/Marshal Mathers. Hell: The Sequel was the return of Slim Shady. A Kiss was genius, catchy, and great, with Em actually taking shots at celebrities who are RELEVANT AND POPULAR, instead of taking shots ad dead people. On Fire was great, bullshit hook, like he said in the lyrics, which weren't bad. Talking 2 Myself is another sob story from Em, and he says he almost took shots at wayne and Kanye, which would have been great.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
@Kurosaki897 But no he's far worse. Encore is at him worst. Relapse is amazing for the writing but the subject matter is horrible. Recovery was good, best in awhile from him. However everything in 2011 has sucked for him. His shitty punchlines, his voiced yelling, and his goddamn cut chop flow is all bad.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance Recovery was completely pathetic. His singing? Annoying. His subject matter? Completely repetitive. BME was a REAL rap album. Welcome 2 Hell? Best flow, best lyrics I've seen from him in a LONG TIME. Granted, it had bad production and bad chourses, but its a RAP EP.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago
The echo thing you do with your verses doesn't really work. It messes with your song. Your flow is quite simple, though your rhyming is great. Ever tried rhyming double syllables? Try it some time. Might be interesting. Also, if you can, try to get a better beat. WAYYYYY too simple.
Kurosaki897 1 month ago in playlist My Music
o.o.....
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