nice ideas and edit, but avoid the cliche of locations, for example the use of a graveyard, sure its a haunting place to be, but people already know that, try the soundtrack that you have created and use it over like a really slowed down and effect ridden footage of something which people usually wouldn't portray as a scary location. just a suggestion and no offence intended :)
Interesting idea, and the editing is creative and uses sound to good effect! But I think you should probably look into schizophrenia; it's not split personality disorder and calling people with multiple personalities schizophrenic could cause offence, its a common misconception..weirdly enough I kinda get your whole storyline here, and as a film i like it :)
This is interesting. I like it up until the freeze frames about halfway through...Those threw off the whole film. This is very innovative though. You should be proud of it
I understand evrything, exacly because it I didn't like... This movie moves in one simple directions (and don't matter if it's in reward motion), don't leave for imagination work, so it's not a screenplay experimental, it is just in camera acting... it's bad.
nice ideas and edit, but avoid the cliche of locations, for example the use of a graveyard, sure its a haunting place to be, but people already know that, try the soundtrack that you have created and use it over like a really slowed down and effect ridden footage of something which people usually wouldn't portray as a scary location. just a suggestion and no offence intended :)
s316849 9 months ago
Interesting idea, and the editing is creative and uses sound to good effect! But I think you should probably look into schizophrenia; it's not split personality disorder and calling people with multiple personalities schizophrenic could cause offence, its a common misconception..weirdly enough I kinda get your whole storyline here, and as a film i like it :)
YesAlexRulez 1 year ago
This is interesting. I like it up until the freeze frames about halfway through...Those threw off the whole film. This is very innovative though. You should be proud of it
BoLatham 3 years ago
I understand evrything, exacly because it I didn't like... This movie moves in one simple directions (and don't matter if it's in reward motion), don't leave for imagination work, so it's not a screenplay experimental, it is just in camera acting... it's bad.
rafaeltom7 4 years ago
@rafaeltom7 What? NO!
Lots of thought and creativity behinds this, in my opinion. whats great about it is that it can be understood in many ways i think.
I'll give it a try soon :)
yoinkz 1 year ago
i understand it....your insane
megadeth98 4 years ago
sorry, i don't like it, it's too much weird crap.
paradoxbox1 5 years ago