Awwwww! I really liked this; I think I shall sub :D
My only constructive criticsm point would be..not to use teen so much? Maybe that's just a personal issue, but yeah :) This was reallyyyy good though, post the next part?
@sunsetwing Hey, thanks so much! yeah, that makes sense. i just re-read it and i did use that word a lot lol. next part is up! the one after that will be up tomorrow
Awwwww! I really liked this; I think I shall sub :D
My only constructive criticsm point would be..not to use teen so much? Maybe that's just a personal issue, but yeah :) This was reallyyyy good though, post the next part?
sunsetwing 1 year ago
@sunsetwing Hey, thanks so much! yeah, that makes sense. i just re-read it and i did use that word a lot lol. next part is up! the one after that will be up tomorrow
njerryjonas14 1 year ago