Jurassic Park: Prime Survival - Scene 16

[ToxicDooM96]

Are you guys going to updated your animation because the animation looks better in your trailer.

[iforgot87871]

HOW THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT? What programs?

[BANZITOMMY]

Wow looks very nice, can't wait to see the full film.

[al20051]

i know youre not professionals, but this is so bad its embarassing!

[lxVanDyk]

@al20051 I agree 110% .. like just wait for Jurassic Park IV dudes. -_-

[crazyasylumclown]

@lxVanDyk

How long are you willing to wait for a fourth film? Hm? At least some people are willing to do something about it instead of sitting on their thumbs.

[crazyasylumclown]

@al20051

Opinions like yours are truly worth reading! :)

[cavalier2305]

te raptor look amazing!!

[TheSammy31]

awsome raptoranimation

[rikmills]

Looks absolutely superb dude! You're making the rest of us look bad. ;o)

[JTMHollywood]

Oh, I think this was the film I was asked to help make.

[Yellowmymello]

Comig Soon? Thats more than a year ago. This has been abandoned hasnt it.

[jackdelamare]

No, maybe if you watch the update videos you'll see what the progress of the movie is.

[MrGirltaker]

coming soon

[Dinoslay]

I infact do still feel that the animation could have more movement to it. The upper bodies appear kinda static which means it might contradict with the rest of the animations made by our other artists. I by no means see this as bad animation, it looks very decent for a fan movie. We are striving for realistic transition so it might still change. That's for Jack to decide as I'm only a script-writer and executive producer.

[Waveride]

I understand what your saying Bloody but that doesn't mean things like that should be neglected. Specially for a Jurassic Park fan film as ambitious as this. I know Jack has put a lot of time in this film, so it should really be as good as it could possibly be. Some folks here are just trying to be helpful in their criticism, not everyone's comment is in a bashing tone.

[MIDNIGHTCLUB2FAN]

well good job, but the raptors should close theire mouth and u guys are always smiling <---- bad thing, HEY LOOK AT ME IM RUNNING FROM RAPTORS! YAY! :D

[BloodyDanielFilms]

dude...its a fan movie...what can we request by a fan film...damn

[Waveride]

You should really change your clothing for all you guys. Wear something that has very neutral colors such as beige/brown or khaki because it sticks out from the scene when you guys wear your normal everyday clothing. Doesn't go with the jungle/survival vibe and it certainly takes away from any sense that you have been there a long time trying to survive.

[Dinoslay]

It could be explained that they haven't actually been there very long, meaby a day or two. Three teenagers probably wouldn't last more than a week in such a heavily infested island. But they could use a tear or two in their clothing but that's something for Jack to decide as hes the director. I only wrote the script though I have assisted him with the dinosaur presence.

[Leto85]

Camera-position is good, dinosaurs are great. If I may give you a little tip: work some more on the light. Maybe you can edit that in a program?

How did you posible make that raptors!

I saw your account and you are 16?

Well, i'm very impressed. Very.

[Dinoslay]

I meant the tree next to the lake, not that other one cause the latter is excellent.

[Dinoslay]

I guess Jack's new animator could redo some parts of the shots where the dinosaurs look stiffer than is necessary using the same model used here. It's not too difficult if he still has the clean shot. The part with the Raptor next to the tree looks very good nevertheless.

[jackdelamare]

Well I do actually like our idea of the "new" Raptor, but I'll discuss all this with him when the main animation is complete :)

[1993TMNT]

morrons

[jackdelamare]

Learn how to spell, moron.

[nikkicj95]

@jackdelamare hahahaha owned

[newtimesmedia]

can't wait. but no offence, but i've done a little(and i do mean a little) animating and i kno that keep things looking life like u need 2 keep them moving even if it's barely notice able. in my opinion, and again no offence but i would redo the raptors because they just don't move enough, the tails r 2 stiff and the arms don't move and the mouth is left open. but the other raptor on i think it was 2nd interview looked rly awesome and very life-like.

[Avzzor]

the acting is pretty bad, effects is awesome, camerawrok isent the best, the music is fantastic !!

[jackdelamare]

Thanks for your comments. When we were on set it was a pretty tough job, we were under pressure to get it done and that evidently shows. I would love to improve the camera work but I'm more focussed on getting the film complete now. I'm not re-filming anything!

You'll see, as the film progressed the filming/action just improved a lot. :)

[jackdelamare]

acting* not action

[newtimesmedia]

pretty cool, can't wait to see the real thing. you might want to keep the raptors mouths shut as they walk tho. other than that, great job.

[mccarthy211]

All editing is superb, CGI wise I mean. But all camerawork, acting and everything that you filmed yourselves sucks nutsack. I was excited from seeing your well done titles and opening creds, but once the video actually started, wow. T'is shit. Sorry.

[Dinoslay]

The same way ILM did minus the budget, ofcourse.

[smka13]

Can I ask, how did u make the dinosaurs?

[Battibanter]

wow...this is excellent for a fan film. good work

[benvnc1]

The score sounds pretty good to. the acting is not bad either

[JoeyDeBird]

cool. i want to see this movie

[Greenblur08]

Looks exceptional, especially for a fan-film.

[JPRanger08]

This looks like its going to be great! Thanks for makin it and hope you relese the film soon!  5/5

[axelvs94]

Awesome!

[Paulie2727]

Nice Job !

[GMFinneyProductions]

This is pretty cool. I like the idea of teenagers being the lead roles, and i know you're not exactly professionals but the acting needs a little boost. But the animation looks great, the only thing i would touch up on in post would be the look of the video, maybe mess around with the colour grading and make it look cool. Great job though, i look forward to it. Sorry for the long post :D

[DieselD199]

Awesome! Just one suggestion would be to make the raptor's tails sway when they move, they're too ridged.

[crazyasylumclown]

very nice jack. very, very nice

[SanguisArcangel]

This looks fucking great Jack!!!! Nice!!

[HipHopBandicoot]

the raptor movements are very generic, But Still about 30000000% better than i could do it, Great Work, Cant Wait For The End Result

[Revzs]

Awesome work dude :-).