I am a very harsh critic of people covering joanna newsom's material, though. There are some things that could be improved. Particularly, I like the singing.
I don't particularly like what you guys did at the end of the chorus, that kind of upbeat da-da- dada-da da da dadada. That could be taken out. And I like the drums, it's just that the driving gets a little repetitive, I don't know how that can be fixed. Maybe quiet it up on some parts or change it up somehow. Good job
I think this cover would be improved by using the 'VIth root third' chord in the verses as joanna does... it would overcome the monotonous rhythm of the verses. If you don't know I / II / III etc chords the VI chord is basically Am if your playing in C, Bm if your playing in D etc. The 'root note third' is just playing C as the bass note in the Am chord.
Just a suggestion to consider or disregard completely.
wowowow, amazing cover, really, just brilliant, at first i was skeptical, but you really pulled it off. i would have never thought this song could have been that rockin. i always thought the song was beautiful but... wow. great job.
WONDERFUL
really. you have to make more covers! animal collective, pavement..
caiopezz 2 years ago
hmm. I kinda like it.
I am a very harsh critic of people covering joanna newsom's material, though. There are some things that could be improved. Particularly, I like the singing.
I don't particularly like what you guys did at the end of the chorus, that kind of upbeat da-da- dada-da da da dadada. That could be taken out. And I like the drums, it's just that the driving gets a little repetitive, I don't know how that can be fixed. Maybe quiet it up on some parts or change it up somehow. Good job
psyden54 2 years ago
I think this cover would be improved by using the 'VIth root third' chord in the verses as joanna does... it would overcome the monotonous rhythm of the verses. If you don't know I / II / III etc chords the VI chord is basically Am if your playing in C, Bm if your playing in D etc. The 'root note third' is just playing C as the bass note in the Am chord.
Just a suggestion to consider or disregard completely.
ryanachronism 2 years ago
Oh i didn't realised you used it in the second verse... i think it's that intro that threw me. Anyway, nice job over all.
ryanachronism 2 years ago
I like it!
archer1949 2 years ago 4
This is a terrible injustice to Joanna Newsom.
This is just horrible
pzzplz 2 years ago
i agree
rich13k 2 years ago
I really can't believe over 2,ooo people have listened to this....
Jsunrlse 2 years ago
This is actually awesome. nice work!
unfreaky 3 years ago 4
actually, now that ive visited to your myspace, and listened to your recorded music.
not very good, but brilliant.
is there a better quality of this anywhere?
depolarized 3 years ago 4
very, very good.
depolarized 3 years ago 5
holy shit this fucking rocks!!!
explosiveshrooms 3 years ago 5
wowowow, amazing cover, really, just brilliant, at first i was skeptical, but you really pulled it off. i would have never thought this song could have been that rockin. i always thought the song was beautiful but... wow. great job.
giantrobotbil 3 years ago 2
i think ben gibbard & dane cook are in this band... :p
benjaminhendrix 3 years ago
this is seriously such a good cover!
erasemyname16 3 years ago 4
great drummer, great cover!
tojupiterandback 3 years ago 3
whoa. love love love it.
strangemelodies 3 years ago
very interesting cover... like j.n. so I kinda have to like that one.
sdhnkr 3 years ago
I like it.
lsav10 3 years ago
great groove!
JRdrummer20 3 years ago