The graphics are laughable and offsetting, the voice acting is beyond belief (especially the part at 7:00 ... "This is a lieeee" and "I have the Proof!"), but the story is kind of okay i must say. The plot is really in place, creative short story. But really, WTF is with the sound effects (like the fire burning) and the voices...? XD
The graphics are laughable and offsetting, the voice acting is beyond belief (especially the part at 7:00 ... "This is a lieeee" and "I have the Proof!"), but the story is kind of okay i must say. The plot is really in place, creative short story. But really, WTF is up with the sound effects (like the fire burning) and the voices...? XD
rather than some fast martial arts circus acts so that a normal human being can barely relate to this crap. The most important is the story line, this is exactly how the NWO elite tactics of lies deceptions fear mongering divide and conquer so they can enslave humanity for their ends. Love your movie and the concept. Electronic Music Composer and Pianist Obeelektro.
I love this Short film. I think the Director has a lot o talent at story telling scripts and plot. Even thou the animations are primitive in the movement of characters there was still so much creative art work into the creation of the city and the world. What I also liked very much is the reality of the characters their capabilities of an average frail human being where their strength comes from courage conviction for the truth that is kept away for someones benefit,
so they killed the enemy 50 years ago and destroyed all their stuff but the mayor wants total control so he convinces his military to keep firing like there is someone there and no civilian would evan think about going pass the wall that pilot goes pass and finds no enemy but a paradise comes backs to tell and gets killed kinda confusing but it was a nice little short
Well done on your short story. I thought there could have been a touch more in the beginning to explain what was going on (and you have scope for a prequel), but otherwise keep at it! Thumbs up!
from one animator to another its damn good especially all the particle effects the only thing i have to criticize is the human animations but other than that its dang good
Wow! Massive piece of work, well done! So much to comment on (I am producing movies set in 2064ad so this is right up my street) - firstly an incredible "big set" feel. I was living in your world! Then so many advanced concepts (stuff I am yet to do) from the lighting to fire, smoke etc. Reflection off visor was used to good effect too. However it was the fly through urban landscapes and the running around industrial sets which inspired me the most. Subscribing to your channel now.
It would of been good to end it on a positive note, like there being more like the pilot, ready to rock and roll and try a different way of 'waking' up the populace.
He should of taken his side-arm with him as well!
@alastairward Oh, O.K. ii know its a little confusing, I'll explain, the plane wasn't suppose to go out of the city limits, that pilot found a way out and when he discovered the truth he decided come back to the city and tell everybody, so when the city soldiers see him coming back they know he know the truth and tell everybody is a spy plane from the enemy so that he gets shot down.,..
OK, it's easy, the story line is that the mayor took control of the city when it was besieged by the enemy but when this was destroyed years ago he never told anyone to keep control of the city and production leves high, as well as control over the population, that's why the pilot came back to the city after discovering the truth, to tell the people....
@kuppo1560 The enemy..... there was a siege but superior industrial production and artillery destroyed the enemy, however, seeing this the mayor witheld that information to keep production to a maximum.... as well as the economy at a high level.... got it?
A very well executed film, I can appreciate a solo effort as well. There are definitely some good cinematic moments that stick out from the rest of the film, which will be difficult for me not to outright plagarize for one of my next projects. The story was well thought out, and suitable for the length of the film, though could be well adapted to feature length. Kudos for not having it all just be the dream of some 8 year old kid at the end of the film, like so many other 'efforts' I've seen.
The reflection of the vessel on fire crossing the surface of the eye was superb!
Sound editing was well done aswell.
That's quite difficult.
Back in the day we used SoftImage 3.9 extreme and Power Animator to create these effects, XSI has replaced SoftImage, however today I'm sure they've debugged just about every aspect of the process.
Very well done.
Next you should start working on Compositing. Video, inside of Video, inside of enviroments. Difficult and interesting.
This is an enormous amount of work for one person to do. This is a monumental accomplishment! Your volume metric shading was well done, the lighting effects were beautiful, the camera work was well thought out. Great details the city reminds me of BladeRunner. There needs to be more work on the depth layering, and material surface layering. Inverse kinnematics on the bodies movements was sketchy (human dynamics are always extremely difficult to reproduce) It was well edited and well thought out
This is an enormous amount of work for one person to do. This is a monumental accomplishment! Your volume metric shading was well done, the lighting effects were beautiful, the camera work was well thought out. Great details the city reminds me of BladeRunner. There needs to be more work on the depth layering, and material surface layering. Inverse kinnematics on the bodies movements was sketchy (human dynamics are always extremely difficult to reproduce) It was well edited and well thought out
To....Kelly, Keith, Tim, and John...I voiced ..."Soldier 3" and "The Mayor"..and I just wanted to say ...it was a pleasure working on this project with such great voice talents. All of my friends love the project. Until next time..........Michael Glover
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your fire effects, glow effects and modelling could be better, but the story is awesome. going back to 3d though, you need to work on your eye and head animation. why would that guy only turn about halfway to being able to see the other guy, and why would his eyes go back to what he was looking at before slower than his head? normally it would be the other way around if they were different at all.
Muy bueno!!, muy bueno el sonido y los escenarios, el diseño de arte! Me hizo acordar muchísimo a Blade Runner. Lastima la animación, pero bueno, todo lo demás está impecable.
Es lo bueno de trabajar en equipo.. cada uno podría aportar lo suyo..
Bueno, para que seas especialista en sonido y tuvistes dos years haciendo ese corto, la verdad que es impresionante haberlo hecho solo. Y esta muy bien hecho, tambien un unico detalle es el riggin, estaba demasiado de tesos pero ya eso con mas practica lo sacaras completo. Tambien como estas cogiendo el curso de AnimationGym, mucho mejor, saldras un prefesional jeje. Bye!!
Very nice story. Reminded me of Logan's Run. Do humans deserve the beautiful green outside? I don't know much about animation, but it looked good to me.
very good job, quite long. The walking cycle is off. but your ships, explosions, and environments are very good. 7/10 just because of the walking cycle.
what song did you use at the very end of the movie...??
THENIGHTELFKALDOREI 1 month ago
ah...hahahahaha... err hahuha..
ageshero 3 months ago
Nice one! :))
straker2 3 months ago
this was awesome
Emu1gmx 4 months ago
North Korea.
drumjazzsccrchik 5 months ago
Dial a pizza commercial that went wrong.
Photonzos 5 months ago
The part at 1:30 reminded me of the fifth element.
yobobjm 6 months ago
I loved it. Please take a look to my shortfilm watch?v=Jqq2xwHpklI
Sc fi, real actors and 3d backgrounds in antarctica.
conclusioncine 8 months ago
I like how NOBODY screams when they shoot him....
F22Raptorking 9 months ago 2
Very nice!!! very very nice. If it's amateur work, then it's realy cool!
AndyvanKayne 9 months ago
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The graphics are laughable and offsetting, the voice acting is beyond belief (especially the part at 7:00 ... "This is a lieeee" and "I have the Proof!"), but the story is kind of okay i must say. The plot is really in place, creative short story. But really, WTF is with the sound effects (like the fire burning) and the voices...? XD
Jackjackjackh 9 months ago
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The graphics are laughable and offsetting, the voice acting is beyond belief (especially the part at 7:00 ... "This is a lieeee" and "I have the Proof!"), but the story is kind of okay i must say. The plot is really in place, creative short story. But really, WTF is up with the sound effects (like the fire burning) and the voices...? XD
Jackjackjackh 9 months ago
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Jackjackjackh 9 months ago
Wow... Interesting...
ninjabuntu 10 months ago
rather than some fast martial arts circus acts so that a normal human being can barely relate to this crap. The most important is the story line, this is exactly how the NWO elite tactics of lies deceptions fear mongering divide and conquer so they can enslave humanity for their ends. Love your movie and the concept. Electronic Music Composer and Pianist Obeelektro.
ObeeLektro 10 months ago
I love this Short film. I think the Director has a lot o talent at story telling scripts and plot. Even thou the animations are primitive in the movement of characters there was still so much creative art work into the creation of the city and the world. What I also liked very much is the reality of the characters their capabilities of an average frail human being where their strength comes from courage conviction for the truth that is kept away for someones benefit,
ObeeLektro 10 months ago
WHy do you need both Maya and 3Ds max?
007s00s 11 months ago
horrible voice acting.
233760 11 months ago
Interesting story!
Tarik360 11 months ago
so they killed the enemy 50 years ago and destroyed all their stuff but the mayor wants total control so he convinces his military to keep firing like there is someone there and no civilian would evan think about going pass the wall that pilot goes pass and finds no enemy but a paradise comes backs to tell and gets killed kinda confusing but it was a nice little short
afuturesoldier 11 months ago
what software did you use?
InnovatorFilms 1 year ago
2:05
gotta love the barbie run
MurderedByMidgets 1 year ago
deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! the mayor a bad ass woot woot!
morttonfire1 1 year ago
*sing* *Where is my mind .. where is my mind .. wheeeere is myyy mind?* *sing* :D ^^
Very nice shortfilm, very nice animations and scifi setting! :))) LIKE!
Hyroar 1 year ago
Awesome short film.
skyknight2k3 1 year ago
Need better vehicles in the future!!!
dontrustwhiteyever1 1 year ago
DUDE that's a fuckin awesome vid/movie story.
The vocals could have been better but where did you get the idea for that?
If this was longer like a real movie with a deep story line and etc, this would be the kind of thing I would go pay to see at the movie theaters.
I loved the whole "the war has been over thing"
Genius!
14sJakeB190 1 year ago
Hey!
Awesome Movie! I completely loved it!
nitisha13m 1 year ago
this is nazi propaganda
majidepress 1 year ago
I liked all the propoganda everywhere
SwordsmanMercenary 1 year ago
i can't help it get the impresion that the ending narration reminds me of o dialog from the book 1984 by Orwell.
Well done, very well done
MadMatic 1 year ago
Well done on your short story. I thought there could have been a touch more in the beginning to explain what was going on (and you have scope for a prequel), but otherwise keep at it! Thumbs up!
MachinePhilby 1 year ago
300/10 that made me cry.
that was a good short.
SafasoTV 1 year ago
click clak click clak
XPlaneAviator 1 year ago
human animation and audio effects (especially footsteps lol) were too bad, compared to the rest of the work.
tashows 1 year ago
It's a DYSTOPIA.
unserdeutschland 1 year ago
This was pretty good just one question: Why the hell did he leave his gun behind? Oh well, atleast they can keep fighting the enemy: Freedom.
zeroG131 1 year ago
from one animator to another its damn good especially all the particle effects the only thing i have to criticize is the human animations but other than that its dang good
Hexx333 1 year ago
good story. well done.
EVACProductions 1 year ago
Wow! Massive piece of work, well done! So much to comment on (I am producing movies set in 2064ad so this is right up my street) - firstly an incredible "big set" feel. I was living in your world! Then so many advanced concepts (stuff I am yet to do) from the lighting to fire, smoke etc. Reflection off visor was used to good effect too. However it was the fly through urban landscapes and the running around industrial sets which inspired me the most. Subscribing to your channel now.
SciFiFunk 1 year ago
totally briliant.
It would of been good to end it on a positive note, like there being more like the pilot, ready to rock and roll and try a different way of 'waking' up the populace.
He should of taken his side-arm with him as well!
WatchRyder 1 year ago
How do you make that kind of stuff?
MrVader100 1 year ago
Its a bit like the short "Cannon Fodder" from the "Memories" collection by Katsuhiro Otomo.
Question though, why send out a spy plane if nobody is supposed to see the outside world beyond the little zone of destruction?
alastairward 1 year ago 2
@alastairward Oh, O.K. ii know its a little confusing, I'll explain, the plane wasn't suppose to go out of the city limits, that pilot found a way out and when he discovered the truth he decided come back to the city and tell everybody, so when the city soldiers see him coming back they know he know the truth and tell everybody is a spy plane from the enemy so that he gets shot down.,..
darkbytes 1 year ago
@alastairward that was my favorite one
morganblair095 2 months ago
Bravo! But with this sad ending in part one, there must be a part two for a happy ending.
PinoyInventor 1 year ago
nice work, in the storyline i saw resemblance in G.Orvel "1984"
good choice
TheRenegaats 2 years ago
Absolutely superb. I really enjoyed this and inspired song choice. Kudos.
Lilygrapetree 2 years ago
great work, the environment is awesome
317537Produkshunz 2 years ago 2
Are those pilots at the beginning retarded? Don't shoot at something that might explode when its in the middle of an oil field!
thudbrent 2 years ago
voice acting was sooo awesome!!! :DDDDD
nah! I wanna learn 3d animation too! I have blender but... it is so hard with it! -.-"
AkuRokuforever 2 years ago 7
8 out of 10 and really good story
GreenClown5 2 years ago 2
? im sry i do not get the story line
Replay54321 2 years ago
OK, it's easy, the story line is that the mayor took control of the city when it was besieged by the enemy but when this was destroyed years ago he never told anyone to keep control of the city and production leves high, as well as control over the population, that's why the pilot came back to the city after discovering the truth, to tell the people....
darkbytes 2 years ago
@darkbytes
I love it! Great job. And I get... keep up the great work.
Hndrd 1 year ago
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@darkbytes
I love it! Great job. And I get... keep up the great work.
Hndrd 1 year ago
@darkbytes what was destroyed years ago?
kuppo1560 10 months ago
@kuppo1560 The enemy..... there was a siege but superior industrial production and artillery destroyed the enemy, however, seeing this the mayor witheld that information to keep production to a maximum.... as well as the economy at a high level.... got it?
darkbytes 6 months ago
from 1 to 10 I give this a 7
kertaspaper94 2 years ago
Wow wicked works guys.
What program did you use for the evil voice ?
charleyboy74 2 years ago 3
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Great design and graphics,but the voiceover was a bit weird...
TheEloeo 2 years ago
What do you mean man...the voice work was great in this....check the Mayor
Flyvoice1 2 years ago
looks pretty good but the peaple move strange
chris34178 2 years ago
thats a Cool Storry ilike it.
JuliusJonson 2 years ago 2
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Lilygrapetree 2 years ago
A very well executed film, I can appreciate a solo effort as well. There are definitely some good cinematic moments that stick out from the rest of the film, which will be difficult for me not to outright plagarize for one of my next projects. The story was well thought out, and suitable for the length of the film, though could be well adapted to feature length. Kudos for not having it all just be the dream of some 8 year old kid at the end of the film, like so many other 'efforts' I've seen.
dave4096 2 years ago 4
The reflection of the vessel on fire crossing the surface of the eye was superb!
Sound editing was well done aswell.
That's quite difficult.
Back in the day we used SoftImage 3.9 extreme and Power Animator to create these effects, XSI has replaced SoftImage, however today I'm sure they've debugged just about every aspect of the process.
Very well done.
Next you should start working on Compositing. Video, inside of Video, inside of enviroments. Difficult and interesting.
Great Job!
FriedChickenAndCrime 2 years ago 2
This is an enormous amount of work for one person to do. This is a monumental accomplishment! Your volume metric shading was well done, the lighting effects were beautiful, the camera work was well thought out. Great details the city reminds me of BladeRunner. There needs to be more work on the depth layering, and material surface layering. Inverse kinnematics on the bodies movements was sketchy (human dynamics are always extremely difficult to reproduce) It was well edited and well thought out
FriedChickenAndCrime 2 years ago
This is an enormous amount of work for one person to do. This is a monumental accomplishment! Your volume metric shading was well done, the lighting effects were beautiful, the camera work was well thought out. Great details the city reminds me of BladeRunner. There needs to be more work on the depth layering, and material surface layering. Inverse kinnematics on the bodies movements was sketchy (human dynamics are always extremely difficult to reproduce) It was well edited and well thought out
FriedChickenAndCrime 2 years ago 2
Outstanding work.....something to be proud off.
davlin2 2 years ago 9
the mayor looks like terry pratchet, LOL. great!
gaypotter 2 years ago 4
Ricardo, great job. I have shown it to all my friends and added it to my playlist. Good luck in your future projects.
kellymcdade 2 years ago 7
To....Kelly, Keith, Tim, and John...I voiced ..."Soldier 3" and "The Mayor"..and I just wanted to say ...it was a pleasure working on this project with such great voice talents. All of my friends love the project. Until next time..........Michael Glover
zoboot 2 years ago 27
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your fire effects, glow effects and modelling could be better, but the story is awesome. going back to 3d though, you need to work on your eye and head animation. why would that guy only turn about halfway to being able to see the other guy, and why would his eyes go back to what he was looking at before slower than his head? normally it would be the other way around if they were different at all.
jagex1295 2 years ago
That was insane, i cant believe that, BRAVO
oscarknott69 2 years ago 2
Wow! It sounds good! It looks good! And I already favorited it so I can watch it again and again! Cool 2 year work of art, DarkBytes!
HYPNoBRECKY 2 years ago 2
Muy bueno!!, muy bueno el sonido y los escenarios, el diseño de arte! Me hizo acordar muchísimo a Blade Runner. Lastima la animación, pero bueno, todo lo demás está impecable.
Es lo bueno de trabajar en equipo.. cada uno podría aportar lo suyo..
Eibriel 2 years ago 2
Bueno, para que seas especialista en sonido y tuvistes dos years haciendo ese corto, la verdad que es impresionante haberlo hecho solo. Y esta muy bien hecho, tambien un unico detalle es el riggin, estaba demasiado de tesos pero ya eso con mas practica lo sacaras completo. Tambien como estas cogiendo el curso de AnimationGym, mucho mejor, saldras un prefesional jeje. Bye!!
Hielorapido 2 years ago
Great video, awesome story.
saraixdidi 2 years ago 4
Very nice story. Reminded me of Logan's Run. Do humans deserve the beautiful green outside? I don't know much about animation, but it looked good to me.
txlucky1 2 years ago
nice
GypsyJimsPearls 2 years ago 2
very good job, quite long. The walking cycle is off. but your ships, explosions, and environments are very good. 7/10 just because of the walking cycle.
randyspotswood 2 years ago
Nice work Recardo..."Great voice talents"
zoboot 2 years ago 18