@ieetmelon My Little Dashie was a really sweet fanfic. I liked it. I also like The Rainbow Factory.. A bit gorey, but it's been one of the only fanfics to stir me up emotionally.
In my opinion, the author of Past Sins spent some much time adding detail to the scene that the story started to get a bit lost. I also don't really like the premise of the story, so I'm pretty biased.
@ieetmelon I know its been a while since you asked, but since I only just found your comment; The Conversion Bureau: Last Man Standing by Windchaser. Its cut out to be a film in my opinion, hit me harder than MLD.
@ArioDragon He has the right to his own opinion! However, he shouldn't shove it in everyone's face like that. That's why I said this goes for both of you =D
However, the only problem I have with this is the title.
You call it "extended", and increase it by another tantalising 30 seconds or so. While awesome, it ends far too soon and leaves me begging for more. :(
Besides which, this is truly awesome. Just wish it could be longer...
@EAMR262 Well for starters, it's not just 'not perfect', it's crap, yet there are people who love it. The fact that they're reading that steaming pile of shit instead of something good (Lord of the Rings, for instance) is reason enough for me to hate it.
And honestly, can you really think any story that uses 'freaking huge' as a description in what's supposed to be a grim scene is good? There's just too much to hate for me to fit it into a comment; go ask /co/, they'll set you straight.
@Genereaver You cant compare a fanfiction with a book, people read the first ones to see a "what if" scenario and have a little fun with it, while the last ones are an art form (I for one love all Agatha Christie works) . So basically you hate the fanfictions themselves, and not that particular one, so your opinion is very subjective.
About /co/, I've seen some of those threats, and they are pure hate without any backup, pure trolling basically.
@EAMR262 Personally, I don't hate fanfictions. And I'm not trying to get people riled up with this post, but Past Sins just isn't good at all. Yet there are a lot of people who are absolutely fanatic about it. Brings to mind the Twilight books, which wouldn't seem nearly so awful if they weren't so popular. It's just annoying when things that aren't very good are deified and put on a pedestal.
However, can we please stop muddying the comments of this lovely song with all this silliness?
@SenatorMyth Come on, this is youtube, in the five years that I've been here, I've read some pretty messed up comment in the most unlikely videos, so why don't have a little fun with this related discussion?
Anyway, in you own words, why do you think its bad?
@EAMR262 Too long to cover in a youtube comment, really. Certain errors of usage and poor style (using "offer" as a replacement for "said" all the time for instance). Using characters as devices to move the plot forward. Characters acting unrealistically (not just "out of character" but "inconsistent with the way a person would think or act"). And more. All boils down to poor execution. Nyx is an intriguing idea; people like the idea of Nyx, including myself. I just wish it were executed better.
@EAMR262 Fanfiction is the written word for the sake of bringing enjoyment to others or exploring scenarios in a distributed medium. I see no reason not to hold it to the exact same standards I hold any book. If it is written badly, I'll say so, and as for 'without any backup', there's tons of backup. One image in particular is a collage of posts demonstrating beyond any doubt exactly why it's badly written and a bad story overall.
You can enjoy bad things, but don't pretend they're amazing.
@EAMR262 Direct examples used as proof is 'pure trolling'? So a troll is anybody who disagrees with you? Anyway, for my own reasons: Bad, inconsistent characterization, 3rd-grade-level descriptions, idiotic premise that only works if Twilight goes braindead or otherwise ceases to be the character we know, and one of the crappiest original characters I've ever read.
If you would show this music to someone (non-brony) they would never guess that it would come from a cartoon, let alone My little pony. The music in this cartoon is amazing!
Considering that half of this song is original content, it's some pretty neat stuff.
If you thought this was good from a listen of your computer speakers, try laying in your bed, playing this at almost full blast with headphones in complete darkness.
It's an amazing musical experience. You hear every little detail.
Nyx is and always will be a cute little filly... She's just looks a bit grown up at the moment... But Twilight will get through to her eventually.... Right? RIGHT?
Well, reading past sins to this with the falling asleep thing, and finding myself almost conking out to it, reading at 6 AM. Confound these ponies, they get me so deep in their stories!!!
@MrAmerica1995 No, I know it's a town. That's why I thought it would be cool if it were in the game. Maybe Applejack's Theme and Appleloosa's theme could share some basic motif.
While I've gotta say that this is amazing, I fell that the ending is far too... sudden. It literally, just cuts of there at the end. Aside from that, incredibly good and i hope you make more stuff like this when season 2 rolls around.
I think this was beautifully done . . tho it to me it ends too abruptly. Thank you, i fell in love with the bg when i first heard it in boast busters . . . now i finally have a beautiful rendition of it to listen to.
@Hellborndelux It's a bit too... I don't know, peaceful? Sort of? For a Tim Burton movie. But I think I know what you mean. I'll add my voice to people who want a double-extended version!
Really fits well into Twilight's character as the pupil of Princess Celestia herself! The unicorn with powerful magic, a touch of innocence, and the willingness to learn more about both magic and friendship.
I personaly believe Twilight is more than just an average unicorn.
Seeing howmuch power other unicorns have in comparision makes her realls stand out of the mass by far.
Also, everyone has to bow down infront of princes celestia, but only twilight is allowed to actualy come close to her and embrace her. I think lauren is planning more to twilight. I do believe twilight sparkle is actualy princess twilight, the third sister. The one who's power come from the space inbetween light and shadow.
@Meriamfunlandagain I think celestia spoke a spell uppon her to hide her wings so she looks like a normal unicorn and was given to the sparkle family. I think its part of her plan to get her risen by other ponies so she becomes social and wont end up as a spoiled little brad with a lust for power. That may be the reason she insists on twilight having many friends and getting along with them well.
If you want a recommendation for the end of the song I think you should finish off the chord with a long (about 3 beat) note after a shorter (about 2 beat) pause. As it is now it ends in dissonance and leaves a feeling of unresolved tension. Sorry if any of this is nonsense I don't know much about music theory.
One thing I would have done, I would have ended the song on a sustained really high B.
Or, if you want to go the nightmare fuel edition, you could end on G, have it sustain, and play a F# G diad, then play the B on top of that, and have it fade.
TRIXIE DISLIKED?????
crazymike65 1 month ago 7
1 persons mouse slipped
umbreonluver5 2 months ago 4
I just realized you mispelled Twilight. XD
MsIkarishipper 2 months ago
I keep listening to this over and over again since there's no loop.
MsIkarishipper 2 months ago
You can barely see the dislike bar. :)
MsIkarishipper 2 months ago
this and no dislikes till 1 week ago
tonyhu12321 2 months ago
Twilight sparkly vampire. The related vid was unaviodable.
AlTheJuggernaut 3 months ago
Is this... Is this an actual orchestra?!
Awesome.
porygonlover322 3 months ago
brilliant...
MusicallyRetardedKid 3 months ago
I love how this has no dislikes.
trogdor1oh1 3 months ago 26
@trogdor1oh1 You didn't have to point that out.
EternalEnvied 1 month ago
@EternalEnvied oops :(
trogdor1oh1 1 month ago
"Ahhhh, such awesome relaxation"
*Glares at suggestions - Twilight Theme Song*
"RRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRGHKSPDG" >:c
JustAnotherGuy350 4 months ago 14
@JustAnotherGuy350 I'm gonna go to that video and troll it with ponies. =D
Archimonde259 2 months ago
Wow.
You really revamped that little ditty.
DakNJaxter 4 months ago
don't mean to be pushy but this is to awesome to be only this short and abruptly ended! Longer pleas!
cloneddragon 5 months ago
Past Sins is a fucking retarded fan fiction. Mary Sues... ugh... just keep them away from me. Nyx is an absolute beeyeetch.
rffffification 5 months ago
@rffffification not sure if troll.
or....
nevermind , im pretty sure its humanly imposible to be that stupid
ieetmelon 5 months ago in playlist ieetmelon's Favorited Videos
@ieetmelon What if he's a malfunctioning robot!?!?!? DUN DUN DUN!
sdaerfofsteam2 5 months ago
@sdaerfofsteam2 O: MFW robot
ieetmelon 5 months ago
@ieetmelon ...While I have to agree, what does this have to do with Past Sins?
TheExoticism 4 months ago
@TheExoticism I have no idiea.
I havent finished it yet ,
still , both this and past sins = awsome
ieetmelon 4 months ago
@ieetmelon Past Sins was Mediocre at best. But! That's just my opinion. ^^
TheExoticism 4 months ago
@TheExoticism :P well , I dont read a lot of fanfics , care to recommend some good ones?
ieetmelon 4 months ago
@ieetmelon My Little Dashie was a really sweet fanfic. I liked it. I also like The Rainbow Factory.. A bit gorey, but it's been one of the only fanfics to stir me up emotionally.
In my opinion, the author of Past Sins spent some much time adding detail to the scene that the story started to get a bit lost. I also don't really like the premise of the story, so I'm pretty biased.
TheExoticism 4 months ago
@TheExoticism past sins is boring.I read my little dashie and cried.It was awesome.And I am going to read the rainbow factory right away!
Meriamfunlandagain 3 months ago
@ieetmelon I know its been a while since you asked, but since I only just found your comment; The Conversion Bureau: Last Man Standing by Windchaser. Its cut out to be a film in my opinion, hit me harder than MLD.
JustAnotherGuy350 3 weeks ago
@rffffification suck some balls bitch
ArioDragon 4 months ago
@ArioDragon @rffffification No no no no no! Love and tolerance! And that applies to BOTH of you!
Archimonde259 4 months ago
@Archimonde259 ok, but he must take his dirty words back
ArioDragon 4 months ago
@ArioDragon He has the right to his own opinion! However, he shouldn't shove it in everyone's face like that. That's why I said this goes for both of you =D
Archimonde259 4 months ago
@Archimonde259 well then... im terribly,terribly sorry XD
ArioDragon 4 months ago
This is beautiful.
However, the only problem I have with this is the title.
You call it "extended", and increase it by another tantalising 30 seconds or so. While awesome, it ends far too soon and leaves me begging for more. :(
Besides which, this is truly awesome. Just wish it could be longer...
Kirbytroid 5 months ago
Love this music it really relaxes your nerves. Also like the idea of twillight being the hidden princess of the space between night an day
frederiksd 5 months ago
oh.. my... god... Your rendition of this song... So beautiful....
Dolphers 5 months ago in playlist More videos from DavidLarsenM1
anyone know who made this before it was extended?
LegendaryWolfX 5 months ago
@LegendaryWolfX It was in the episode with trixie
ieetmelon 5 months ago in playlist ieetmelon's Favorited Videos
*Finishes listening to nice music*
*Scrolls down to see praise for the good songmaker*
*Gets argument about fanfics*
-.-
HaloFanRedvsBLue12 5 months ago 45
That was awesome. Honestly, I could not possibly imagine a more fitting melody than what you've come up with. It fits her character perfectly.
churrocam 6 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 ...Have you really never read anything genuinely good?
Genereaver 6 months ago 3
@Genereaver Come on, I know its not a perfect story, but why do some hate it so much?
EAMR262 6 months ago
@EAMR262 Well for starters, it's not just 'not perfect', it's crap, yet there are people who love it. The fact that they're reading that steaming pile of shit instead of something good (Lord of the Rings, for instance) is reason enough for me to hate it.
And honestly, can you really think any story that uses 'freaking huge' as a description in what's supposed to be a grim scene is good? There's just too much to hate for me to fit it into a comment; go ask /co/, they'll set you straight.
Genereaver 6 months ago
@Genereaver You cant compare a fanfiction with a book, people read the first ones to see a "what if" scenario and have a little fun with it, while the last ones are an art form (I for one love all Agatha Christie works) . So basically you hate the fanfictions themselves, and not that particular one, so your opinion is very subjective.
About /co/, I've seen some of those threats, and they are pure hate without any backup, pure trolling basically.
EAMR262 6 months ago
@EAMR262 Personally, I don't hate fanfictions. And I'm not trying to get people riled up with this post, but Past Sins just isn't good at all. Yet there are a lot of people who are absolutely fanatic about it. Brings to mind the Twilight books, which wouldn't seem nearly so awful if they weren't so popular. It's just annoying when things that aren't very good are deified and put on a pedestal.
However, can we please stop muddying the comments of this lovely song with all this silliness?
SenatorMyth 6 months ago
@SenatorMyth Come on, this is youtube, in the five years that I've been here, I've read some pretty messed up comment in the most unlikely videos, so why don't have a little fun with this related discussion?
Anyway, in you own words, why do you think its bad?
EAMR262 6 months ago
@EAMR262 Too long to cover in a youtube comment, really. Certain errors of usage and poor style (using "offer" as a replacement for "said" all the time for instance). Using characters as devices to move the plot forward. Characters acting unrealistically (not just "out of character" but "inconsistent with the way a person would think or act"). And more. All boils down to poor execution. Nyx is an intriguing idea; people like the idea of Nyx, including myself. I just wish it were executed better.
SenatorMyth 6 months ago
@EAMR262 Fanfiction is the written word for the sake of bringing enjoyment to others or exploring scenarios in a distributed medium. I see no reason not to hold it to the exact same standards I hold any book. If it is written badly, I'll say so, and as for 'without any backup', there's tons of backup. One image in particular is a collage of posts demonstrating beyond any doubt exactly why it's badly written and a bad story overall.
You can enjoy bad things, but don't pretend they're amazing.
Genereaver 6 months ago
@Genereaver I never said it was amazing, I said I knew it wasn't perfect, and about those collages, well, I have never seen those, just pure trolling.
You are entitled on your own opinions, so am I, but still, I want to read it from yopur own words: why do you think is that bad?
EAMR262 6 months ago
@EAMR262 Direct examples used as proof is 'pure trolling'? So a troll is anybody who disagrees with you? Anyway, for my own reasons: Bad, inconsistent characterization, 3rd-grade-level descriptions, idiotic premise that only works if Twilight goes braindead or otherwise ceases to be the character we know, and one of the crappiest original characters I've ever read.
Genereaver 6 months ago
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EAMR262 6 months ago
SPOILER ALERT THERES A OC PONY NAMED SPELLNEXUS (jus ruined the first paragraph of the first chapter for ya)
zearsocom 6 months ago
Minor Twilight Sonata
You don't want to know what the Major one sounds like.....
Martrayas 6 months ago
If you would show this music to someone (non-brony) they would never guess that it would come from a cartoon, let alone My little pony. The music in this cartoon is amazing!
Considering that half of this song is original content, it's some pretty neat stuff.
MrMaerta 6 months ago
That was magical...
xJsW116x 6 months ago
I love how this has an almost Harry Potter-esque sound to it, which is appropriate for Twilight.
yuriejb 6 months ago
Why does this remind me of Medieval?
Rivibaes 6 months ago
I'm pressing Chapter 14 and NOTHINGS HAPPENING!!!!!!! D:
Shadesdeath 6 months ago
Pat Sins is my favorite Celestia/Luna Fanfic since Paradise by SlyWitPony.
FerretAbridged111 6 months ago
God i want moar past sins
2011LOSTCOLONY 6 months ago
nyyyx. <3
9volt65 6 months ago
Twillight?
RedDeath06 6 months ago
@RedDeath06 the awsome pony
not the gay movie/book
ieetmelon 6 months ago
@ieetmelon I know who twilight is, but it is spelled with one "L"
RedDeath06 6 months ago
@RedDeath06 "Twilight's" where is the second L here?
ieetmelon 6 months ago
@ieetmelon In the actual video.
RedDeath06 6 months ago
@RedDeath06 :-(
DavidLarsenM1 6 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 TOLD YOU!!! XD
Revanche174 6 months ago in playlist MLP Random
203 likes, 0 dislikes. Twilight using her freaky awesome magic I see ;)
onesevenfiveone 6 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 *brohoof* for reading it. And yes, it is. :D
ActionScripter9109 7 months ago
This is by far the most creative fanfic I've ver read.
RomanLettore 7 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 You should!
AnimeKitty202 7 months ago
If you thought this was good from a listen of your computer speakers, try laying in your bed, playing this at almost full blast with headphones in complete darkness.
It's an amazing musical experience. You hear every little detail.
WhiskeredStalker 7 months ago
Zero dislikes. I call that an accomplishment.
AaronFeitelberg 7 months ago
THIS IS SO BOSS
AaronFeitelberg 7 months ago
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ieetmelon 7 months ago
Nyx is and always will be a cute little filly... She's just looks a bit grown up at the moment... But Twilight will get through to her eventually.... Right? RIGHT?
Semolika 7 months ago
@Semolika She's still a blank flank. Had any thoughts what her "true" talent is yet?
I have my guess :)
Senjan 7 months ago
@Semolika I hope so, or I swear I'm going to die. Nyx can't turn evil for good. She just can't! :'O
ActionScripter9109 7 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 DO IT!!!
Revanche174 7 months ago
you know your doing great music when it is being hijacked by fanfic readers lol :D
MyRkAcc 7 months ago
Well, reading past sins to this with the falling asleep thing, and finding myself almost conking out to it, reading at 6 AM. Confound these ponies, they get me so deep in their stories!!!
z0mbehp0nies 7 months ago
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@DavidLarsenM1 you wont regret it :)
Tvidify 7 months ago
If this fanfic has a bad ending, I'm gonna punch someone in the face.
Animat8r 7 months ago 19
@Animat8r you rage you loose
Hendrikspan101 7 months ago
@Animat8r
It doesn't! Lucky you!
Dasher260 4 months ago
*sniffle sniffle* Nyx..... please be okay.....
KorutoKumori 7 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 yes it's excellent!!!
altairvsdante 7 months ago
@DavidLarsenM1 Yes you should. It's quite exceptional.
Jakeshark 7 months ago
MOMMY!
Charconian 7 months ago
Dammit Nyx! Come back!
RikuReplicate 7 months ago
come out you witch
you will not be able to draw me into the night peacefully¡¡¡¡¡
i will protect this castle and celestia until my ginal breath
You will only reach her over my lifeless corpse
mom9000i 7 months ago 6
WE"RE UNDER ATTACK!!!
Rain16401 7 months ago
I was brought here by Past Sins
fireemblemaddict128 7 months ago 4
I love past sins, It brought me here but this is also very epic
2011LOSTCOLONY 7 months ago
Past Sins
TillsterRulz 7 months ago 4
Who came here because of the fic Past Sins?
Nyx is awesome!!!!!
Revanche174 7 months ago 29
@Revanche174 YES YES YES YES YES YES... Long live Nyx.
ActionScripter9109 7 months ago 3
@Revanche174 me :)
carloz957 7 months ago
@Revanche174 I find it bad that there are people that HATE that fic and Nyx...
Those people make me sick... literally...
jokiu4 5 months ago
@jokiu4 People have opinions. Get the hell over it.
TheExoticism 4 months ago
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WhiskeredStalker 7 months ago
If this ONE song is any indication of how amazing this game will be...my god, time can't pass fast enough.
gear9242 7 months ago
I would love an extended version of this.
videogamer810 7 months ago
I wish there was a longer version of this, and I wish there was a theme for each pony of the mane six.
MrAmerica1995 7 months ago
@MrAmerica1995 I think it would be like this:
Fluttershy - So Many Wonders
Rarity - Art of the Dress
Rainbow Dash - Sonic Rainboom
Pinkie Pie - Giggle at the Ghostie
Applejack - Appleloosa (Unless that's gonna be a town, which would be totally awesome)
kutegurl67 7 months ago
@kutegurl67 Appleloosa is a town, have you seen the episode "Over a Barrel?" That's where it takes place.
MrAmerica1995 7 months ago
@MrAmerica1995 No, I know it's a town. That's why I thought it would be cool if it were in the game. Maybe Applejack's Theme and Appleloosa's theme could share some basic motif.
kutegurl67 7 months ago
This is incredible :O
<3
Ghooostie 7 months ago
And to think all this started from a show about ponies.
So beautiful. ;_;
MrFrinkelbumper 7 months ago
Wow.... i am blown away by this!
kelvingodde 7 months ago
Its making love to my ears man...
devguy195 7 months ago
While I've gotta say that this is amazing, I fell that the ending is far too... sudden. It literally, just cuts of there at the end. Aside from that, incredibly good and i hope you make more stuff like this when season 2 rolls around.
Loosazool 8 months ago
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dಠ_ಠb........d-_-b
Daviace213 8 months ago
whaooooooooo!!!
nuahsx 8 months ago
Reminds me of when you use Mario's flute in Super Mario Bros. 3. I'm going to be taken by a tornado to Ponyville in 10 seconds flat.
TheFuzzyZebra 8 months ago
Please make an extended version!
biglulus 8 months ago
I think it's generally agreed that we want an extended version. See? That's how much we love this!
vippernarf 8 months ago
I think this was beautifully done . . tho it to me it ends too abruptly. Thank you, i fell in love with the bg when i first heard it in boast busters . . . now i finally have a beautiful rendition of it to listen to.
barrelracer318 8 months ago
ಠ_ಠ.
BrainDS2 8 months ago
ಠ_ಠ
BrainDS2 8 months ago
May I remix this? This is fantastic!
makkon06 8 months ago
This is lovely, I hope you do more poni music :>
NRGFORCE 8 months ago
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG.
someEsoldier 8 months ago
This is hauntingly beautiful. Like something you would expect Danny Elfman to compose for a Tim Burton movie.
Hellborndelux 9 months ago 2
@Hellborndelux It's a bit too... I don't know, peaceful? Sort of? For a Tim Burton movie. But I think I know what you mean. I'll add my voice to people who want a double-extended version!
Kunori 8 months ago
From 0:36, it kinda sounds like some variations of piano from an old comp game called Bugdom, still lovin it!
lehvakacid34 9 months ago
Really fits well into Twilight's character as the pupil of Princess Celestia herself! The unicorn with powerful magic, a touch of innocence, and the willingness to learn more about both magic and friendship.
youman1996 9 months ago 62
@youman1996 Plus she's irresistibly adorkable. :p
WhiteLycanXII 7 months ago
@youman1996 Why did you say " both magic and friendship"?
She only needs to learn one because FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC!!!!
Rawnohful 7 months ago
I personaly believe Twilight is more than just an average unicorn.
Seeing howmuch power other unicorns have in comparision makes her realls stand out of the mass by far.
Also, everyone has to bow down infront of princes celestia, but only twilight is allowed to actualy come close to her and embrace her. I think lauren is planning more to twilight. I do believe twilight sparkle is actualy princess twilight, the third sister. The one who's power come from the space inbetween light and shadow.
NeroTheDarklord 5 months ago
@NeroTheDarklord wow...I really wish that happened.I hope you're right!
Meriamfunlandagain 5 months ago
@Meriamfunlandagain I think celestia spoke a spell uppon her to hide her wings so she looks like a normal unicorn and was given to the sparkle family. I think its part of her plan to get her risen by other ponies so she becomes social and wont end up as a spoiled little brad with a lust for power. That may be the reason she insists on twilight having many friends and getting along with them well.
NeroTheDarklord 5 months ago
@NeroTheDarklord wow...That just make you 30% more likely to be right.FINGERS CROSSED!
Meriamfunlandagain 5 months ago
Good composition. Poor spelling.
FreedInsanity 9 months ago
nicce tune
FurryFire5151 9 months ago
Sounds kinda Harry Potter-ish
d3monslayr 9 months ago in playlist Pony Playlist
Wow, amazing, gave me chills, excellent job.
alyon59 10 months ago
If you want a recommendation for the end of the song I think you should finish off the chord with a long (about 3 beat) note after a shorter (about 2 beat) pause. As it is now it ends in dissonance and leaves a feeling of unresolved tension. Sorry if any of this is nonsense I don't know much about music theory.
Kishmond 10 months ago
Like, favorited, subscribed. Both this and your Pinkie Pie Piano Cover are stellar, great work!
RDreamseer 10 months ago
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWW YEAAAHHH
sexyapplejack102 10 months ago
Dude, this is like...
duuuuuuude :3 <3
DaKilla1234567890 10 months ago 42
@DaKilla1234567890 Duuuuuuuuuuuuude
I'm like...
OMG
MilindaX 8 months ago
@DaKilla1234567890 You are such a poet.
disradiance 7 months ago
goosebumps, man. I loved this music when I first heard it. This is awesome!
infinitydash 10 months ago
Outstanding!.. *O*
I'm speechless..
we have so many talented brony(s)
Freezient 10 months ago
I could so imagine this song being played by link in Ocarina of Time
skragbane64 10 months ago
@skragbane64 funny you said that, around 0:33 made me remember the song of storm for some reason... still some really awesome music right there!
jeanguylouisbourg 10 months ago
love it. subscribed.
mfalada 10 months ago
One thing I would have done, I would have ended the song on a sustained really high B.
Or, if you want to go the nightmare fuel edition, you could end on G, have it sustain, and play a F# G diad, then play the B on top of that, and have it fade.
krakhaid 10 months ago
Wow, that's great! I can't wait for more. Only wish your stuff was longer. D=
k9saurus 10 months ago
@k9saurus thats what she said...
Aldaris8 10 months ago
dude, awesome man im loving it XD
MrSpiffyBear 10 months ago