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  • TRIXIE DISLIKED?????

  • 1 persons mouse slipped

  • I just realized you mispelled Twilight. XD

  • I keep listening to this over and over again since there's no loop.

  • You can barely see the dislike bar. :)

  • this and no dislikes till 1 week ago

  • Twilight sparkly vampire. The related vid was unaviodable.

  • Is this... Is this an actual orchestra?!

    Awesome.

  • brilliant...

  • I love how this has no dislikes.

  • @trogdor1oh1 You didn't have to point that out.

  • @EternalEnvied oops :(

  • "Ahhhh, such awesome relaxation"

    *Glares at suggestions - Twilight Theme Song*

    "RRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWW­WWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRGHKSPDG­" >:c

  • @JustAnotherGuy350 I'm gonna go to that video and troll it with ponies. =D

  • Wow.

    You really revamped that little ditty.

  • don't mean to be pushy but this is to awesome to be only this short and abruptly ended! Longer pleas!

  • Past Sins is a fucking retarded fan fiction. Mary Sues... ugh... just keep them away from me. Nyx is an absolute beeyeetch.

  • @rffffification not sure if troll.

    or....

    nevermind , im pretty sure its humanly imposible to be that stupid

  • @ieetmelon What if he's a malfunctioning robot!?!?!? DUN DUN DUN!

  • @sdaerfofsteam2 O: MFW robot 

  • @ieetmelon ...While I have to agree, what does this have to do with Past Sins?

  • @TheExoticism I have no idiea.

    I havent finished it yet ,

    still , both this and past sins = awsome

  • @ieetmelon Past Sins was Mediocre at best. But! That's just my opinion. ^^

  • @TheExoticism :P well , I dont read a lot of fanfics , care to recommend some good ones?

  • @ieetmelon My Little Dashie was a really sweet fanfic. I liked it. I also like The Rainbow Factory.. A bit gorey, but it's been one of the only fanfics to stir me up emotionally.

    In my opinion, the author of Past Sins spent some much time adding detail to the scene that the story started to get a bit lost. I also don't really like the premise of the story, so I'm pretty biased.

  • @TheExoticism past sins is boring.I read my little dashie and cried.It was awesome.And I am going to read the rainbow factory right away!

  • @ieetmelon I know its been a while since you asked, but since I only just found your comment; The Conversion Bureau: Last Man Standing by Windchaser. Its cut out to be a film in my opinion, hit me harder than MLD.

  • @rffffification suck some balls bitch

  • @ArioDragon @rffffification No no no no no! Love and tolerance! And that applies to BOTH of you!

  • @Archimonde259 ok, but he must take his dirty words back

  • @ArioDragon He has the right to his own opinion! However, he shouldn't shove it in everyone's face like that. That's why I said this goes for both of you =D

  • @Archimonde259 well then... im terribly,terribly sorry XD

  • This is beautiful.

    However, the only problem I have with this is the title.

    You call it "extended", and increase it by another tantalising 30 seconds or so. While awesome, it ends far too soon and leaves me begging for more. :(

    Besides which, this is truly awesome. Just wish it could be longer...

  • Love this music it really relaxes your nerves. Also like the idea of twillight being the hidden princess of the space between night an day

  • oh.. my... god... Your rendition of this song... So beautiful....

  • anyone know who made this before it was extended?

  • @LegendaryWolfX It was in the episode with trixie

  • *Finishes listening to nice music*

    *Scrolls down to see praise for the good songmaker*

    *Gets argument about fanfics*

    -.-

  • That was awesome. Honestly, I could not possibly imagine a more fitting melody than what you've come up with. It fits her character perfectly.

  • @DavidLarsenM1 ...Have you really never read anything genuinely good?

  • @Genereaver Come on, I know its not a perfect story, but why do some hate it so much?

  • @EAMR262 Well for starters, it's not just 'not perfect', it's crap, yet there are people who love it. The fact that they're reading that steaming pile of shit instead of something good (Lord of the Rings, for instance) is reason enough for me to hate it.

    And honestly, can you really think any story that uses 'freaking huge' as a description in what's supposed to be a grim scene is good? There's just too much to hate for me to fit it into a comment; go ask /co/, they'll set you straight.

  • @Genereaver You cant compare a fanfiction with a book, people read the first ones to see a "what if" scenario and have a little fun with it, while the last ones are an art form (I for one love all Agatha Christie works) . So basically you hate the fanfictions themselves, and not that particular one, so your opinion is very subjective.

    About /co/, I've seen some of those threats, and they are pure hate without any backup, pure trolling basically.

  • @EAMR262 Personally, I don't hate fanfictions. And I'm not trying to get people riled up with this post, but Past Sins just isn't good at all. Yet there are a lot of people who are absolutely fanatic about it. Brings to mind the Twilight books, which wouldn't seem nearly so awful if they weren't so popular. It's just annoying when things that aren't very good are deified and put on a pedestal.

    However, can we please stop muddying the comments of this lovely song with all this silliness?

  • @SenatorMyth Come on, this is youtube, in the five years that I've been here, I've read some pretty messed up comment in the most unlikely videos, so why don't have a little fun with this related discussion?

    Anyway, in you own words, why do you think its bad?

  • @EAMR262 Too long to cover in a youtube comment, really. Certain errors of usage and poor style (using "offer" as a replacement for "said" all the time for instance). Using characters as devices to move the plot forward. Characters acting unrealistically (not just "out of character" but "inconsistent with the way a person would think or act"). And more. All boils down to poor execution. Nyx is an intriguing idea; people like the idea of Nyx, including myself. I just wish it were executed better.

  • @EAMR262 Fanfiction is the written word for the sake of bringing enjoyment to others or exploring scenarios in a distributed medium. I see no reason not to hold it to the exact same standards I hold any book. If it is written badly, I'll say so, and as for 'without any backup', there's tons of backup. One image in particular is a collage of posts demonstrating beyond any doubt exactly why it's badly written and a bad story overall.

    You can enjoy bad things, but don't pretend they're amazing.

  • @Genereaver I never said it was amazing, I said I knew it wasn't perfect, and about those collages, well, I have never seen those, just pure trolling.

    You are entitled on your own opinions, so am I, but still, I want to read it from yopur own words: why do you think is that bad?

  • @EAMR262 Direct examples used as proof is 'pure trolling'? So a troll is anybody who disagrees with you? Anyway, for my own reasons: Bad, inconsistent characterization, 3rd-grade-level descriptions, idiotic premise that only works if Twilight goes braindead or otherwise ceases to be the character we know, and one of the crappiest original characters I've ever read.

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  • SPOILER ALERT THERES A OC PONY NAMED SPELLNEXUS (jus ruined the first paragraph of the first chapter for ya)

  • Minor Twilight Sonata

    You don't want to know what the Major one sounds like.....

  • If you would show this music to someone (non-brony) they would never guess that it would come from a cartoon, let alone My little pony. The music in this cartoon is amazing!

    Considering that half of this song is original content, it's some pretty neat stuff.

  • That was magical...

  • I love how this has an almost Harry Potter-esque sound to it, which is appropriate for Twilight.

  • Why does this remind me of Medieval?

  • I'm pressing Chapter 14 and NOTHINGS HAPPENING!!!!!!! D:

  • Pat Sins is my favorite Celestia/Luna Fanfic since Paradise by SlyWitPony.

  • God i want moar past sins

  • nyyyx. <3

  • Twillight?

  • @RedDeath06 the awsome pony

    not the gay movie/book

  • @ieetmelon I know who twilight is, but it is spelled with one "L"

  • @RedDeath06 "Twilight's" where is the second L here?

  • @ieetmelon In the actual video.

  • @RedDeath06 :-(

  • @DavidLarsenM1 TOLD YOU!!! XD

  • 203 likes, 0 dislikes. Twilight using her freaky awesome magic I see ;)

  • @DavidLarsenM1 *brohoof* for reading it. And yes, it is. :D

  • This is by far the most creative fanfic I've ver read.

  • @DavidLarsenM1 You should!

  • If you thought this was good from a listen of your computer speakers, try laying in your bed, playing this at almost full blast with headphones in complete darkness.

    It's an amazing musical experience. You hear every little detail.

  • Zero dislikes. I call that an accomplishment.

  • THIS IS SO BOSS

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  • Nyx is and always will be a cute little filly... She's just looks a bit grown up at the moment... But Twilight will get through to her eventually.... Right? RIGHT?

  • @Semolika She's still a blank flank. Had any thoughts what her "true" talent is yet?

    I have my guess :)

  • @Semolika I hope so, or I swear I'm going to die. Nyx can't turn evil for good. She just can't! :'O

  • @DavidLarsenM1 DO IT!!!

  • you know your doing great music when it is being hijacked by fanfic readers lol :D

  • Well, reading past sins to this with the falling asleep thing, and finding myself almost conking out to it, reading at 6 AM. Confound these ponies, they get me so deep in their stories!!!

  • If this fanfic has a bad ending, I'm gonna punch someone in the face.

  • @Animat8r you rage you loose

  • @Animat8r

    It doesn't! Lucky you!

  • *sniffle sniffle* Nyx..... please be okay.....

  • @DavidLarsenM1 yes it's excellent!!!

  • @DavidLarsenM1 Yes you should. It's quite exceptional.

  • MOMMY!

    

  • Dammit Nyx! Come back!

    

  • come out you witch

    you will not be able to draw me into the night peacefully¡¡¡¡¡

    i will protect this castle and celestia until my ginal breath

    You will only reach her over my lifeless corpse

  • WE"RE UNDER ATTACK!!!

  • I was brought here by Past Sins

  • I love past sins, It brought me here but this is also very epic

  • Past Sins

  • Who came here because of the fic Past Sins?

    Nyx is awesome!!!!!

  • @Revanche174 YES YES YES YES YES YES... Long live Nyx.

  • @Revanche174 me :)

  • @Revanche174 I find it bad that there are people that HATE that fic and Nyx...

    Those people make me sick... literally...

  • @jokiu4 People have opinions. Get the hell over it.

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  • If this ONE song is any indication of how amazing this game will be...my god, time can't pass fast enough.

  • I would love an extended version of this.

  • I wish there was a longer version of this, and I wish there was a theme for each pony of the mane six.

  • @MrAmerica1995 I think it would be like this:

    Fluttershy - So Many Wonders

    Rarity - Art of the Dress

    Rainbow Dash - Sonic Rainboom

    Pinkie Pie - Giggle at the Ghostie

    Applejack - Appleloosa (Unless that's gonna be a town, which would be totally awesome)

  • @kutegurl67 Appleloosa is a town, have you seen the episode "Over a Barrel?" That's where it takes place.

  • @MrAmerica1995 No, I know it's a town. That's why I thought it would be cool if it were in the game. Maybe Applejack's Theme and Appleloosa's theme could share some basic motif.

  • This is incredible :O

    <3

  • And to think all this started from a show about ponies.

    So beautiful. ;_;

  • Wow.... i am blown away by this!

  • Its making love to my ears man...

  • While I've gotta say that this is amazing, I fell that the ending is far too... sudden. It literally, just cuts of there at the end. Aside from that, incredibly good and i hope you make more stuff like this when season 2 rolls around.

  • whaooooooooo!!!

  • Reminds me of when you use Mario's flute in Super Mario Bros. 3. I'm going to be taken by a tornado to Ponyville in 10 seconds flat.

  • Please make an extended version!

  • I think it's generally agreed that we want an extended version. See? That's how much we love this!

  • I think this was beautifully done . . tho it to me it ends too abruptly. Thank you, i fell in love with the bg when i first heard it in boast busters . . . now i finally have a beautiful rendition of it to listen to.

  • ಠ_ಠ.

  • ಠ_ಠ

  • May I remix this? This is fantastic!

  • This is lovely, I hope you do more poni music :>

  • HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG.

  • This is hauntingly beautiful. Like something you would expect Danny Elfman to compose for a Tim Burton movie.

  • @Hellborndelux It's a bit too... I don't know, peaceful? Sort of? For a Tim Burton movie. But I think I know what you mean. I'll add my voice to people who want a double-extended version!

  • From 0:36, it kinda sounds like some variations of piano from an old comp game called Bugdom, still lovin it!

  • Really fits well into Twilight's character as the pupil of Princess Celestia herself! The unicorn with powerful magic, a touch of innocence, and the willingness to learn more about both magic and friendship.

  • @youman1996 Plus she's irresistibly adorkable. :p

  • @youman1996 Why did you say " both magic and friendship"?

    She only needs to learn one because FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC!!!!

  • I personaly believe Twilight is more than just an average unicorn.

    Seeing howmuch power other unicorns have in comparision makes her realls stand out of the mass by far.

    Also, everyone has to bow down infront of princes celestia, but only twilight is allowed to actualy come close to her and embrace her. I think lauren is planning more to twilight. I do believe twilight sparkle is actualy princess twilight, the third sister. The one who's power come from the space inbetween light and shadow.

  • @NeroTheDarklord wow...I really wish that happened.I hope you're right!

  • @Meriamfunlandagain I think celestia spoke a spell uppon her to hide her wings so she looks like a normal unicorn and was given to the sparkle family. I think its part of her plan to get her risen by other ponies so she becomes social and wont end up as a spoiled little brad with a lust for power. That may be the reason she insists on twilight having many friends and getting along with them well.

  • @NeroTheDarklord wow...That just make you 30% more likely to be right.FINGERS CROSSED!

  • Good composition.  Poor spelling.

  • nicce tune 

  • Sounds kinda Harry Potter-ish

  • Wow, amazing, gave me chills, excellent job.

  • If you want a recommendation for the end of the song I think you should finish off the chord with a long (about 3 beat) note after a shorter (about 2 beat) pause. As it is now it ends in dissonance and leaves a feeling of unresolved tension. Sorry if any of this is nonsense I don't know much about music theory.

  • Like, favorited, subscribed. Both this and your Pinkie Pie Piano Cover are stellar, great work!

  • AAAAAAAAAWWWWWW YEAAAHHH

  • Dude, this is like...

    duuuuuuude :3 <3

  • @DaKilla1234567890 Duuuuuuuuuuuuude

    I'm like...

    OMG

  • @DaKilla1234567890 You are such a poet.

  • goosebumps, man. I loved this music when I first heard it. This is awesome!

  • Outstanding!.. *O*

    I'm speechless..

    we have so many talented brony(s)

  • I could so imagine this song being played by link in Ocarina of Time

  • @skragbane64 funny you said that, around 0:33 made me remember the song of storm for some reason... still some really awesome music right there!

  • love it. subscribed.

  • One thing I would have done, I would have ended the song on a sustained really high B.

    Or, if you want to go the nightmare fuel edition, you could end on G, have it sustain, and play a F# G diad, then play the B on top of that, and have it fade.

  • Wow, that's great! I can't wait for more. Only wish your stuff was longer. D=

  • @k9saurus thats what she said...

  • dude, awesome man im loving it XD

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