Sunflower Intro

[VincentVerheyenFilms]

To avoid confusion: i meant the ending shots should be better. They all have to be together and look happy. You need visually stronger images at the end. Great montage!

[VincentVerheyenFilms]

I think you've done a good job, nice introductions of the people. I do think you should end with stronger images then you have now, where they all are together and happy. Especially the last last last shot should be erased or replaced, also i think you should make the last shot slow and long. Maybe have some visually nicer shots for the chinese boy. Great job!