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  • I'm gonna learn every word of this

  • RUDY YOUR SIMPLY AMAZING!

  • This poem was sent to me by a friend who asked if I wanted to see something beautiful. Sure enough, every word in this poem was more than beautiful. I shall smile for the rest of my day thanks to these words! Great job!

  • @OPEjustJhoe This is my fave. Part

  • This was pretty good first time that i have herd one of your poems i wrote something sort of like this but much short good job! "like"

  • and now that i have they're genuine i havent lost hope...you truly touched me =)

  • im 18 and a spoken word student and ive done tons of open mics and shows and i feel the same way this spoke to me on so many levels i cried smiled giggled was enticed intrigued encouraged felt hopeful to find someone to say this to me and jealous of the girl that you're speaking of all in one lml this was absolutely amazing and that word doesnt even do it justice thank you sooo much ive been waiting to hear these words from a male perspective all my life

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  • i think i watch all these like once a day lol

    it nvr get old.. ur amazing:)

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  • Wow, everytime I watch this I cry. Its amazing <3

  • Rudy, thanks for being a poet. You and other poets inspired me to get into the slamming world. I really hope i get to meet you in person and see you perform live..

  • I wanna be your ex-boyfriend's stuntman, I wanna do everything that he nvr had the courage to do...

  • It's weird how a person words can make your soul smile, and your heart do jumping jacks of joy

  • you're a fucking dawg

  • I Loved it!!! It was soooo good :)

  • i think i just fell in love. definitely had me tearing up to say the least.. <3 absolutely loveee his poems.

  • My man right here layin' it down!! Incredible, I hope to find my way to that place as a spoken word artist. Amazing!! it's the one's like you that are setting the standard that we look to!

  • Wow, and the tears are streaming down.

    

  • OMG I think I'm in love with you.. Your Dope!!

  • Wow...a poem never made me tear up before. This is beautiful in so many ways.

  • This is crazy good..

  • I Want You To Bite My Lip Until I Can No Longer Speak <3

  • Gosh darnit, I heard a friend recite this last night and i MELTED. This is, goodness, it is beyond words. LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEE

  • if you're not a love poet, there's no such thing.

  • I hope one day I can make someone feel this way. <3

  • Cool story bro.

  • my friend shared this link to my fb account just recently and i love her more because of it. this made me laugh and cry at the same time i had to watch it at least two more times to appreciate it without breaking out in tears.

    i really want this kinda love <3

  • i want this kind of love.

  • God this is amazing. His words caress my ears like butterflies fluttering along the milky way. Keep writing Rudy, one day I WILL meet you.

  • this man...is amazing.

  • lol...Did a nigga in the crowd really say eww after the 60 yrs. line?

  • Im a poet  dude and one day i wish to be as good as you your amazing man keep them coming :)

  • Damn... just... damn.

    This man is too good.

    I think I'm in love haha

    I can't even quote my favorite line because I loved the whole thing. =)

  • i found this feeling so thank you for verbalizing it before so i knew what to look for....

  • Wow Rudy! i am a huge fan of your poetry, i swear i replayed this video ten times! i do not even have words to describe how amazing this was. Every time i hear this i get eargasms lol i am speechless! :)

  • holy.. fucking.. shit #mindblown

  • lol this is the story of my life

  • I love the first part of the poem. I believe he combined a few of his pieces in this.

  • what defines a poem nowadays...

  • sounds really similar to shihan's poem

  • This man's poems are so inspiring and heartfelt. I find myself with goosebumps not even a minute into the poem and ending it with tears. The best poet I have heard from.

  • when i find this feeling , i'll know i found love . you are blessed .

  • I aspire to write like you

  • This poem is Legit! This is favorite version of this poem...

  • Your poem reminds me of Shihan's poem on Def Jam Poetry. Good Work :)

  • did you turn like three poems into one?

  • *snaps* *snaps* *snaps*

  • Loved it like always!! I miss our AOL chats :/

  • *swoon* he makes my heart smile : )

  • YESSSSSS. always amazing. Please perform more often. I live in southern california like you and would LOVE to go to one of your performances!!

  • The great thing about you Rudy, is that you add personality to your poems. One second you have us laughing, the other you have us snapping.

  • This was more than beautiful, I think I've watched it more than five times! These are the words I want my future husband to speak and the emotion I want him to feel! I have no words... Just beautiful!

  • sighs of love and admiration left and right.

    you are just SOOO FREAKISHLY AMAZING that I am a mess right now.

    kudos.

  • @mayjah7 aww thank u :)

  • @rudyfranciscothepoet you are SOOO welcome. you make me want to be a better person so that someone will write a poem like this about me. but since the words are leaving your lips, it feels like a lot of ressure to be the subject of this artwork. i really loved your edits. i was literally holding my breath because they were so good. now i am off to go and rip the poetry out of my journals because i give up after that. :P

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  • he was talkin bout me aww thanks boo lol jk i wish

  • I love this! it just made my day :)

  • This piece is absolutely beautiful. I've listening to this on repeat, and I still get chills every time. Amazing.

  • The addition was beautiful and perfectly fits.

  • Loving the addition.

  • He is a great poet indeed.

  • so did he get her number?

  • okay i need to see you perform . . . immediately !

  • the crowd was crampin his style haha

  • oh and he connected his love poem to Again

  • he added a new beginning to the poem

  • I LOVE IT RUDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!

  • so ur my favorite poet ever! i've good listen to you all day. omg! omg!

  • The best! this is beautiful! i love this so much! i have all your poems memorized... now to memorize this completed version of if i were a love poet! youre amazingly talented! i wish i had the power to write like you, just so i could sweep my girlfriend off her feet every single day i see her! mad love Rudy!

  • Where are the next 8 and a half minutes of this? lol is it okay for me to say that i love this poem? yeah, i think this is real love.

  • I love your stuff

    cheers from Brazil :))

  • Im left speechless. Giving this Young poet more inspiration

  • I love this, he is my favorite poet of all time. He inspired me to keep writing.

  • First btw mad love rudy<3 ur the only poet i can listen to, its the way u engage your audience and how you present yourself

  • @loluaremad you're not first btw and my favourite poet!

  • Your work is wonderful. I have your love poem medley handwritten in my Moleskine!(:

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