This poem was sent to me by a friend who asked if I wanted to see something beautiful. Sure enough, every word in this poem was more than beautiful. I shall smile for the rest of my day thanks to these words! Great job!
im 18 and a spoken word student and ive done tons of open mics and shows and i feel the same way this spoke to me on so many levels i cried smiled giggled was enticed intrigued encouraged felt hopeful to find someone to say this to me and jealous of the girl that you're speaking of all in one lml this was absolutely amazing and that word doesnt even do it justice thank you sooo much ive been waiting to hear these words from a male perspective all my life
Rudy, thanks for being a poet. You and other poets inspired me to get into the slamming world. I really hope i get to meet you in person and see you perform live..
My man right here layin' it down!! Incredible, I hope to find my way to that place as a spoken word artist. Amazing!! it's the one's like you that are setting the standard that we look to!
my friend shared this link to my fb account just recently and i love her more because of it. this made me laugh and cry at the same time i had to watch it at least two more times to appreciate it without breaking out in tears.
Wow Rudy! i am a huge fan of your poetry, i swear i replayed this video ten times! i do not even have words to describe how amazing this was. Every time i hear this i get eargasms lol i am speechless! :)
This man's poems are so inspiring and heartfelt. I find myself with goosebumps not even a minute into the poem and ending it with tears. The best poet I have heard from.
This was more than beautiful, I think I've watched it more than five times! These are the words I want my future husband to speak and the emotion I want him to feel! I have no words... Just beautiful!
@rudyfranciscothepoet you are SOOO welcome. you make me want to be a better person so that someone will write a poem like this about me. but since the words are leaving your lips, it feels like a lot of ressure to be the subject of this artwork. i really loved your edits. i was literally holding my breath because they were so good. now i am off to go and rip the poetry out of my journals because i give up after that. :P
The best! this is beautiful! i love this so much! i have all your poems memorized... now to memorize this completed version of if i were a love poet! youre amazingly talented! i wish i had the power to write like you, just so i could sweep my girlfriend off her feet every single day i see her! mad love Rudy!
I'm gonna learn every word of this
dariusofkc 1 day ago
RUDY YOUR SIMPLY AMAZING!
stetuki 1 day ago
This poem was sent to me by a friend who asked if I wanted to see something beautiful. Sure enough, every word in this poem was more than beautiful. I shall smile for the rest of my day thanks to these words! Great job!
tgorritz13 3 days ago
@OPEjustJhoe This is my fave. Part
nightout1908 1 week ago
This was pretty good first time that i have herd one of your poems i wrote something sort of like this but much short good job! "like"
nightout1908 1 week ago
and now that i have they're genuine i havent lost hope...you truly touched me =)
Darknluvalligina 3 weeks ago
im 18 and a spoken word student and ive done tons of open mics and shows and i feel the same way this spoke to me on so many levels i cried smiled giggled was enticed intrigued encouraged felt hopeful to find someone to say this to me and jealous of the girl that you're speaking of all in one lml this was absolutely amazing and that word doesnt even do it justice thank you sooo much ive been waiting to hear these words from a male perspective all my life
Darknluvalligina 3 weeks ago
1 person misread the dislike bar as "Dis I like"
SuperObsessive 3 weeks ago
i think i watch all these like once a day lol
it nvr get old.. ur amazing:)
AmandaBeBeautiful 1 month ago
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Retro40sGirl 1 month ago
Wow, everytime I watch this I cry. Its amazing <3
BrittLL121 1 month ago
Rudy, thanks for being a poet. You and other poets inspired me to get into the slamming world. I really hope i get to meet you in person and see you perform live..
Twix167 1 month ago
I wanna be your ex-boyfriend's stuntman, I wanna do everything that he nvr had the courage to do...
OPEjustJhoe 1 month ago
It's weird how a person words can make your soul smile, and your heart do jumping jacks of joy
staciaevans2011 1 month ago
you're a fucking dawg
jayjacobsen 2 months ago
I Loved it!!! It was soooo good :)
xobear93 2 months ago
i think i just fell in love. definitely had me tearing up to say the least.. <3 absolutely loveee his poems.
emilayybx3 3 months ago
My man right here layin' it down!! Incredible, I hope to find my way to that place as a spoken word artist. Amazing!! it's the one's like you that are setting the standard that we look to!
LilDragon247 3 months ago
Wow, and the tears are streaming down.
beadeful 3 months ago
OMG I think I'm in love with you.. Your Dope!!
MikaVerrett 4 months ago
Wow...a poem never made me tear up before. This is beautiful in so many ways.
Gothistian 4 months ago
This is crazy good..
TheWhyChange 4 months ago
I Want You To Bite My Lip Until I Can No Longer Speak <3
BarbiieDulce14 5 months ago
Gosh darnit, I heard a friend recite this last night and i MELTED. This is, goodness, it is beyond words. LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEE
AlphaEssentials 5 months ago
if you're not a love poet, there's no such thing.
simpleexannie 5 months ago
I hope one day I can make someone feel this way. <3
sexylove92102 6 months ago
Cool story bro.
shaneymane15 6 months ago
my friend shared this link to my fb account just recently and i love her more because of it. this made me laugh and cry at the same time i had to watch it at least two more times to appreciate it without breaking out in tears.
i really want this kinda love <3
athenatuble 6 months ago
i want this kind of love.
Musicaldrugie 6 months ago
God this is amazing. His words caress my ears like butterflies fluttering along the milky way. Keep writing Rudy, one day I WILL meet you.
emilyshackk 6 months ago
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I AM A FUCKING MESS RIGHT NOW BROTHER. THIS IS BREATHTAKINGLY AMAZING. DR says wasup!
MichaelEliasPurcell 6 months ago
this man...is amazing.
FakkRainbows 6 months ago
lol...Did a nigga in the crowd really say eww after the 60 yrs. line?
BrittaniNechelle 7 months ago
Im a poet dude and one day i wish to be as good as you your amazing man keep them coming :)
JustCallMeLuis20 7 months ago
Damn... just... damn.
This man is too good.
I think I'm in love haha
I can't even quote my favorite line because I loved the whole thing. =)
xbeachbabe04x 7 months ago
i found this feeling so thank you for verbalizing it before so i knew what to look for....
PurePoetess 8 months ago
Wow Rudy! i am a huge fan of your poetry, i swear i replayed this video ten times! i do not even have words to describe how amazing this was. Every time i hear this i get eargasms lol i am speechless! :)
sjlopez496 8 months ago
holy.. fucking.. shit #mindblown
dontcallmeyunnerz 9 months ago
lol this is the story of my life
SydniMaxine 9 months ago
I love the first part of the poem. I believe he combined a few of his pieces in this.
slipnslideee 9 months ago
what defines a poem nowadays...
lilxalien 9 months ago
sounds really similar to shihan's poem
killercow91 9 months ago
This man's poems are so inspiring and heartfelt. I find myself with goosebumps not even a minute into the poem and ending it with tears. The best poet I have heard from.
aychrissyx 9 months ago
when i find this feeling , i'll know i found love . you are blessed .
bchantej 9 months ago
I aspire to write like you
IzayanaNavas 9 months ago
This poem is Legit! This is favorite version of this poem...
raymondandremy 10 months ago
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EstherCadsap 10 months ago
Your poem reminds me of Shihan's poem on Def Jam Poetry. Good Work :)
EstherCadsap 10 months ago
did you turn like three poems into one?
AuNaturaleFrench 10 months ago
*snaps* *snaps* *snaps*
chrism2424 10 months ago
Loved it like always!! I miss our AOL chats :/
the1latina4u 10 months ago
*swoon* he makes my heart smile : )
missamazing17 10 months ago
YESSSSSS. always amazing. Please perform more often. I live in southern california like you and would LOVE to go to one of your performances!!
XXXdc5 10 months ago
The great thing about you Rudy, is that you add personality to your poems. One second you have us laughing, the other you have us snapping.
TheFern91 10 months ago
This was more than beautiful, I think I've watched it more than five times! These are the words I want my future husband to speak and the emotion I want him to feel! I have no words... Just beautiful!
cRoFtcHiK 10 months ago
sighs of love and admiration left and right.
you are just SOOO FREAKISHLY AMAZING that I am a mess right now.
kudos.
mayjah7 10 months ago 17
@mayjah7 aww thank u :)
rudyfranciscothepoet 10 months ago 5
@rudyfranciscothepoet you are SOOO welcome. you make me want to be a better person so that someone will write a poem like this about me. but since the words are leaving your lips, it feels like a lot of ressure to be the subject of this artwork. i really loved your edits. i was literally holding my breath because they were so good. now i am off to go and rip the poetry out of my journals because i give up after that. :P
mayjah7 10 months ago
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MichaelEliasPurcell 6 months ago
he was talkin bout me aww thanks boo lol jk i wish
mzcokebottle9823 10 months ago 8
@mzcokebottle9823 lol!
rudyfranciscothepoet 10 months ago
I love this! it just made my day :)
DreaDenise143 10 months ago
This piece is absolutely beautiful. I've listening to this on repeat, and I still get chills every time. Amazing.
Riahokeyy 10 months ago
The addition was beautiful and perfectly fits.
TheFern91 10 months ago 3
Loving the addition.
HeyitsMeGuy 10 months ago
He is a great poet indeed.
pinkporche04 10 months ago
so did he get her number?
SlayerXJay 10 months ago
okay i need to see you perform . . . immediately !
imsobomb101 10 months ago
the crowd was crampin his style haha
emilyfishie 10 months ago 27
oh and he connected his love poem to Again
emilyfishie 10 months ago
he added a new beginning to the poem
emilyfishie 10 months ago 4
I LOVE IT RUDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ellis8806 10 months ago
so ur my favorite poet ever! i've good listen to you all day. omg! omg!
eloracsregor123 10 months ago
The best! this is beautiful! i love this so much! i have all your poems memorized... now to memorize this completed version of if i were a love poet! youre amazingly talented! i wish i had the power to write like you, just so i could sweep my girlfriend off her feet every single day i see her! mad love Rudy!
garbageman51 10 months ago
Where are the next 8 and a half minutes of this? lol is it okay for me to say that i love this poem? yeah, i think this is real love.
SweetxSmilez15 10 months ago
I love your stuff
cheers from Brazil :))
shihihi 10 months ago
Im left speechless. Giving this Young poet more inspiration
BeTheChangeWeNeed 10 months ago 3
I love this, he is my favorite poet of all time. He inspired me to keep writing.
JaeNichole 10 months ago 24
First btw mad love rudy<3 ur the only poet i can listen to, its the way u engage your audience and how you present yourself
loluaremad 10 months ago
@loluaremad you're not first btw and my favourite poet!
erickberroya 10 months ago
Your work is wonderful. I have your love poem medley handwritten in my Moleskine!(:
hannaaahx 10 months ago
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