Stand Up Comedy Emerson Inside Joke April 2009

[PEAZ2]

The jokes were great but you were kind of nervous though and jumbled up your words a little but that shit was funny dude.

[russruss1234]

This is really good.

[franshesco87]

yes not the best crowd

[duggygirl77]

Haha you did a really good job! I loved the whole thing. I'd deffinatly come to see you sometime! Keep it up :D

[FrankNinja]

Thank you so very much for your kind words and support, glad you enjoyed it.

[shineraju]

Hat's off to you for your daring leap of faith and talent. It's a great start. I still can't tell a joke to my friends. But I love watching stand-up comedies on YouTube and thanks for uploading your material.

[FrankNinja]

And thank you for your kind words and comments, I've actually been performing for a couple of years now but it's still something hard to do on stage. I'll hopefully be uploading more videos in the future.

[2009IsMine]

Your timing was a bit fast and not to be hurtful but 3/4 of the way through it I'd yet to hear anything that was actually funny, mostly it just sounded like a story and a fairly predictable one...try throwing in some unpredictable elements, some unexpected and unrealistic circumstances in the middle of your otherwise normal story and that would've made it funny. Also...your transitions need polishing-they're too wordy and also not funny enough. I applaud your effort though!

[FrankNinja]

Thank you for the critique, as with any amateur act, it'll require alot of fine tuning and I intend to fix it up for the better.

[yogagirl22]

you did a good job!!!

[FrankNinja]

Thank you for the kind comment.

[SeanMc]

You've done well. Not the best crowd though.

[FrankNinja]

Thank you. It was a small crowd, but it was nice just to perform.

[yellowcardcrazed38]

get some more confidence, u seem to be stuttering a little, just a little

[FrankNinja]

I was using some new material so I was a bit nervous, but I'll definitely try and keep my composure in the future. Thank you for your comment.