constructive criticism:1.instead of having the student's hand shaking, it should have pounded the desk or done something to show frustration or anxiousness.2. an older/cooler "translator" would have been great.3. the translator's steps should have been a little slower and more movie-esque (maybe if he walked straiter idk)
4. more action from the student between scenes5. elucidate what's going on when the translator has his hand on the student's shoulder. i thought the movie was good! these are things that could make the it better!
Bob excelent job on the movie. jolly good show. have you seen the one i made? its got a few good spots on it. i think your idea captures some very good places to where the story line should go. i think i've got a few good ones also. i think we need brad you and i to get together this weekend and fuse a masterpiece! great job again.
Haha I just watched this again. That was funny. Good times.
fitzy1234 3 years ago
constructive criticism:1.instead of having the student's hand shaking, it should have pounded the desk or done something to show frustration or anxiousness.2. an older/cooler "translator" would have been great.3. the translator's steps should have been a little slower and more movie-esque (maybe if he walked straiter idk)
coldfusion32 6 years ago
4. more action from the student between scenes5. elucidate what's going on when the translator has his hand on the student's shoulder. i thought the movie was good! these are things that could make the it better!
coldfusion32 6 years ago
Bob excelent job on the movie. jolly good show. have you seen the one i made? its got a few good spots on it. i think your idea captures some very good places to where the story line should go. i think i've got a few good ones also. i think we need brad you and i to get together this weekend and fuse a masterpiece! great job again.
fitzy1234 6 years ago