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  • Damn! My heart has been touched!

  • I FEEL YOU SISTA!!

  • Truth! Hard delivery!

  • she should be a rapper

  • This is one of the most original poems. I liked it a lot...your delievery was sick! Keep writing! You have a fan in me!

  • This is AMAZING!!!!!!!! 

  • THIS IS SOOOOOOO DOPE!!!!! I LOVE THIS IS AWESOME. I make poetry as well. Check out my page. iexpressent... Darelle Dove

  • You are a amazing Poet. Your words are strong and logical. I hope you are writing down your words. Need powerful people to express the truth. Thank you for the outstanding and honest Poetry.

  • 2 thumps up from me, yo! Lovez it!

  • Why was this shit linked on a Shadow Gallery sound?

  • WOO!! Brilliant!!!

  • SMH. I LOVE THIS. AND PPL WHO DONT ..., REALLY DNT UNDERSTAND THE MEANIN OF POETRY !! SO STOP W/ THE NEGATIVITY !

  • "Donhonki" "First ever crown court banned uk rap-poet" (2009-2014) #SuperInjunction

  • I was with u till u were Canadian. lol jk

    This is powerful. Bravo!

  • from one poet to another my sista you straight spitting i love it i'm really vibing with you on this blessinngs

  • im gonna hate on you because you are so fucking amazing! i one wish i could write any poem this long and remember them!

  • I Love It these words are Inspiring to the soul Thank you...

  • Luv It! 

  • why is it okay for girls to dress like guys, but not okay for guys to dress like girls?

  • @chelsea2451 society puts double standards on both of the sexes, the one you just mentioned is exactly that one in a million, a million different double standards that's shoved onto both sexes... the only thing we can do is fight it, try our best to lessen it's ability to be the 'norm'

  • @chelsea2451 why is this what you can think of after a entire 5 minute ethnically thought out poem? a ball cap and tee shirt means she is dressed as a guy? its not the 50's if anyone says anything about how you or anyone else dresses they need to get a fucking job because there is more important shit!

  • @gymrat7847 relax

  • well done

  • Big Ups to you for doing you thang! Alot of Spoken Word Poets speak about bs that don't matter! Thank you for being different! Poets of the same flow go to glory!

    ~TAP~

  • she low key sounds like nikki minaj

  • When she started flowing, her accent disappeared o.o

  • you go grrrrl!  be who u r cuz there's not enuf of u in this world!

  • wow this sucks.

  • I hate how she did this kind of poetry, but its very interesting, and she speaks her message right off.

  • Your acccent is Beautiful!! And the poem was amazing

  • beautiful

  • Im loving it :) It was beautiful and I am with you

  • DOPE....

    

  • don't like her flow, but she's nice

  • Well done sista.....

  • amazin'

  • i luv u sista!

  • Raw talent and original. Im feeling it.

  • feelin it!

  • RAW!!! Iloved it!

  • Amazing!

    Spoken from the soul.

    PEACE Mad Poet. PEACE.

    ~*<3*~

  • madd repect bless

  • that was so good it gave me goose bumps man!!! loved the style loved the lyrics- PEACE

  • Different --but definitely talented-  I give a 10

    Peace trae

  • love it

  • that was fkn amazing...

  • boss

  • so amazing she is good she is speakin about truth but us blacks dont know what that is

  • for it is i, the one with pain embedded so deep within i can't cry out*

    i felt that one

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  • I'm liking this flow. every time i listen to it i wind up tappin my foot. i try to measure a poem by how i can visualise it on canvas. I've come up with at two very clear images of what she is saying that i would have no problem painting....

  • yo her flow is fuckin crazy she is fuckin sick

  • out in the streets they call it murderrr

    gwan kill it sista,, u aint talkin doodoo lool

    u ah merk de alphabet pon dis ya wun sista

  • That was HOTT!!

    Teach Sister!

  • stunning

  • Wow

  • This is amazing and beautiful.

    There are haters for everything that is beautiful.

    We need more people in the world without their blinders on, keep being the light that shines into their eyes.

  • that was deep, she went hard! i really hope i'll be a poet like that one day.

  • Wow. Speechless.

  • daaaayyyymmmm.....that's wassup...i loved it....this needs to be heard by er'body 4real...u def did yah thang..."maybe that's why were're all in last place we never elevate this race"....great job fellow poet....MUCH RESPECT

  • Prayed for ya, and your brothers and sisters, and love the your reping Canada!

  • poetry is he mother of all music. take away all instruments besides the vocal chords and poetry is what is left.

  • i like her lyrics, but i'm not a big fan of the inflections...

  • Muito loko, mano.

    Spoken word é muito foda.

    São Paulo - Cangaíba z/l Brazil

    Emerson Alcalde

  • I love. Rhis

  • this went hard...good vibe...let em hate!

  • im sorry but i had trouble understanding what was going on on some parts =/

  • Flawless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Flawless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Flawless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • say dats hot im feelin it~hope u go far wit it fam

  • FUCK CANADA !!!

  • breath taking!

  • Amaaaaaaaazing!!

  • why am i thinking of Nicki manaj?

  • This Was So Coldddddddd! I Freakin' Love This!

  • Ok wow.

  • I love it!!

  • Snaps Poet-- your rhythm is so flyyy........."the bad live for there past- ouch"...."not just potential.....snaps snaps....my eyes open sista ;)

  • wonderful work continue on your journey to succes

  • dis waz great...nuff said!

  • Mann this poem speaks the truth...it tells it all...Im lovin' it..

  • that is badass.

  • Poetry is art....and art is confusing. I love this poem... very true.

  • Damn right girl!

  • That was very deep, nuff Respect it good to see that I am not the only youth in Toronto that see's whats happening..It time For I Change..I am a upcoming Rapper and i would love to work with you because I rap about same thing too..peace out..

    Black People Stand Up.

    Time For A Change!!

  • @Shanobaby why just black people? you are a racist too, go against the system with all people who stand up but the problem of so many people who thing alternative and against that there mind isnt free you think selective too, like the peolple which blanket you.

  • That was very deep, nuff Respect it good to see that I am not the only youth in Toronto that see's whats happening..It time For I Change..I am a upcoming Rapper and i would love to work with you because I rap about same thing too..peace out..

    Black People Stand Up.

    Time For A Change!!

  • sickkkkk, you killed it.. Toronto represent.

  • those who are posting negative comments dont know a thing about poetry because this chick's raw, perhaps a bit different and at times I may not totally like how she used the rhythm or her wording, but bottom line she's doin her thing and she's doin it well. and also, poetry is about respectin human capability to express themselves and true poets respect everyone's words, even if they don't like em. Read a book and learn somethin rather than shootin her(someone who's tryin harder than you) down

  • @poppinkino great comment, on hte part where you speak about the rhythm I (as a poet myself) believe as a poet she's doing that to expand the view on how "hip hop" or "poetry" coincide and actually ARE the same thing. sure all rappers aren't/can't be poets and vice versa but hip hop roots from the soul and poetry as you already know and likewise poets understand one another, msot rappers try to bring each other down and that comes from a hip hop fanatic ya dig.

  • @poppinkino amen!!!!!!!!!! its all about what they said not have they say it!!!!!!!! the words

  • i luv it its nice 2 see fellow female artist like me frm toronto. all the people who left negative comments on here dont understand the canadian style keep it up me fellow black sis TDOT!!!!!!!!!!

  • i watch this video at least once a week, i love it

  • 4Real why do you uys hate! That goes hard. Ya have to learn nt to hate!!! She went in. She Forcin it!!

  • @DYANK33414 yea at least she has the guts to do that at least she has a life and she does sumthing wt it

  • How many of us are we going to let them kill with one gun?

    Society is killing us and our children with the same old tricks....we have to fight for our children....teach them the old tricks and prepare them for the new ones....

  • That was the worst 4 minute segment of poetry I have ever heard, ALl I can Say is quit before you completely make a complete mockery of yourself because you are terrible. And I'm not just saying that as a joke I have no Idea why I didn't stop after 30 seconds, probably because I read some good comments so I was hoping and praying that you would be good, but you ended up disgracing Canada

  • Amazing work. I'm well known online but just making a youttube/vlog presence. I'd be honored if you'd check "instigator". You're opinion would mean so much. Critique too?

  • toronto !

  • mad good

  • So good boo!

  • This is beyond anything I ever thought possible. I just... don't know how to describe its power.

  • yeah i hear you

    you just did describe it

  • dat was gd!

  • I rap more than i do poetry but that just made me think twice.

  • @jbndtb just remember when u rap real shit it IS poetry homie.

  • The ONE and ONLY MAD POET!!!!! Keep Smashing the Competition!!! OOOppppsss I forgot! There is NONE!!! Do what u do BABYGIRL!!!!!

    TEFFTV

  • I first, I thought I'd hate this because I didn't like the sound at first...but now, when listening to the whole thing, I realize how beautiful and honest it is. Great job.

  • I gotta link up and break some bread and build w/ that sista.

  • hotep! this is the black messiah the poet.

  • MADD YO DONE KNOW

  • Very nice

  • Thats a bit self centred. Saying she cant use the name cause you do too.

  • wow...right on..from one poet to the next...much love

  • ripping it keep going hard i love it

  • That was pretty good

  • love the accent

  • yes yes hot yes! check out mellow moon

  • she sound like a jamacian from georgia!!! she is sooo country but yet such a strong accent

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  • she need to get to bottom on how to solve the problem look for Sheikh Abdallah Faisal a Jamaican Muslim scholar.

  • Wow, so tight. God bless.

  • Eyes wide open----keep on openin um

  • YEA!

  • Amen you got another with two hands up and opened eyes lets put Canada back on the map and legalize it!!

  • shes too raw !

  • This was fire and LOVED the message

  • Mad Poet, right on!!!

  • thats tight

  • Forget 25!! I heared that. Fucc 25 I'ma make it past too Witt being dead or in Jail

  • She sounds like a robot

  • SHUT UP!

  • she go . . . that was tight

  • dope

  • Respect!!!

  • Beautiful!!! A real artist!

  • Do you smell something??

    I do... i think it's you...

    Cuz your The DooDoo!

    Girl you have some powerful ways of speaking...

    You could move a whole nation...

    I hope that you do!

    I'll be pulling for you!

  • speak it speak

    true true

    you are amazing at what you do

  • Go on 'head, my Sista. That was FIYA!!!! Keep doin' what you do! Peace!

  • amazing!

  • big up

  • that is poetry...im lost for words

  • that was fuckin art.

  • tdot should be proud of you!! cuz i sure am

  • incredible. absolutely amazing.

    God bless you girl.

    amazing.

  • Wow...

    Held my breath all the way through that

    Amazing. Deep.

  • wow this is amazing, my bff just told me to watch this and you should sign up for the spoken word contest that they have every year i have faith you could make it very far

  • that is tooo dope! wow. my jaw just dropped

  • WOW, that was so DOPE!

    AMAZING.

  • GO 'HEAD GIRLL!

  • You have a beautiful voice

  • wow !... more !.. more ! ENCORE !

  • You aint wasting your time this was well done. Keep going. You got me on the edge of my seat.

  • that was hot

  • I love your voice, beautiful!

  • This was amazing and powerful. Beautiful.

  • .... wow

  • <3333

  • daaaaaaaamn.. i got shivers from this..

    amazing peice.. i was reaaaly feelin this

  • Oh my, I got goosebumps all over my arms... a strong message; Open your eyes, people.. UNITY is what we need... easier said than done, just look how cold our world has become..

  • "talkin doo doo" :-)yeah I was amused, thanks

  • lol you've never even heard of me

    I can murder thee verbally

  • I'm not Canadian but Damn...you have something.

  • Check out "Talanta Awards Preview" if you love poetry. I loved shooting it, you will love watching it.

  • Loved the rhythm...the flow was sick and the message was fya.

  • Amazing.

  • very powerful,,thank you

  • This was awesome. Keep it up.

  • my eyes iz open baby!!!..yeah i feel u on that, hope shit does change for the better in all cities across this tiny little world..

  • Dang youre killin it

    im tryin to learn how to do that freestyle thing

    much love and respect to you

    poetry is a collection of truth and you speak it so well

    *Cait

  • FROM ONE TORONTO POET TO ANOTHER ..  thats was FIREEEE sistren..

    ima put some of my work on here soon as well. Hail up Jamaica and hail up Scarborough

    blessed love

  • awsome form....I bow to you!!!! LOL 5 stars!

  • PS....my hand is up

  • "if you think im brave its just my soul talking" AWSOME.