look up the pronunciation of "ere", also (i donno if you're serious about theatre or not, but if you are: ) this is a monologue from a comedic play. even though the monologue it's self is more serious than the rest of the play, generally speaking, if you brought this into an audition where you had to prepare a dramatic monologue many directors wouldn't take this as one. some would, but not all, so best to play it safe. (:
It's fine but you need a lot of work. The music in the background is a pointless distraction, and if you're going to do something funky - like put arrows on your face - go all the way, don't half ass it. There's no arch in the piece, each line sounds the same, your tongue is lazy, and you don't understand what's going on in the play. Maybe you should stick to something easier than Shakespeare.
puck is actually a character in a midsummer nights dream by shakespeare. this is the best shakespearian piece of shit you can read through highschool. at awood at least
@senbonzakura26 we read this when i was in 8th grade, I feel so ahead we also read To Kill A Mockingbird, and The Narrative Life Of Fredrick Douglass, lol I feel smart.
@beyondthebluu i would fail so hard if read this in 8th grade and resent english even more than i would have as of right now. As for to kill a mocking bird, it was trashed from my highschool as the teachers felt bored of doing it so many times.
good but a fue things:
look up the pronunciation of "ere", also (i donno if you're serious about theatre or not, but if you are: ) this is a monologue from a comedic play. even though the monologue it's self is more serious than the rest of the play, generally speaking, if you brought this into an audition where you had to prepare a dramatic monologue many directors wouldn't take this as one. some would, but not all, so best to play it safe. (:
chauncabella 6 months ago
I love a midsummers night dream i know all of pucks lines by memory!! well you did great but theres always room for inprovment!!
besmartdontupsetme 8 months ago
I got bored and thought of this monologue so I'm trying to memorize it now.. but it's kinda hard. oh well your video is grate =D
000naruto 2 years ago
It's fine but you need a lot of work. The music in the background is a pointless distraction, and if you're going to do something funky - like put arrows on your face - go all the way, don't half ass it. There's no arch in the piece, each line sounds the same, your tongue is lazy, and you don't understand what's going on in the play. Maybe you should stick to something easier than Shakespeare.
theatreintheround 2 years ago
yeah i probably should, but it was an assignment for school ^^
so i decided to upload it here too!
koppiDechu 2 years ago
awesome
im in middle school and theres an assignment
in drama is to do a monologue
and i choose to do this one i wish i can do as it as good as u
HOMEGURLZ555 2 years ago
what is a puck?
johnybrovo2008 2 years ago
puck is actually a character in a midsummer nights dream by shakespeare. this is the best shakespearian piece of shit you can read through highschool. at awood at least
senbonzakura26 2 years ago
@senbonzakura26 we read this when i was in 8th grade, I feel so ahead we also read To Kill A Mockingbird, and The Narrative Life Of Fredrick Douglass, lol I feel smart.
beyondthebluu 1 year ago
@beyondthebluu i would fail so hard if read this in 8th grade and resent english even more than i would have as of right now. As for to kill a mocking bird, it was trashed from my highschool as the teachers felt bored of doing it so many times.
senbonzakura26 1 year ago
puck the fairie dragon
3Ln1kko 2 years ago
LOL you would.
i pwn with puck :)
koppiDechu 2 years ago
lmao no way. bnet or garena? add me as a friend! : D
3Ln1kko 2 years ago
both! :D
bnet my buddy list is full :( but my ign is 7forallmankind ;)
koppiDechu 1 year ago
why dont u try american idol o.o
s3KsH1aS1aN 2 years ago
go to hollywood now!!!!!!!U R AWSOME
sailorsakura123 2 years ago
you're voice is so cute !! ^^
Shiineyss 2 years ago 2
ooh hello kitty in the back XD !
sofiegreenpalmer 3 years ago
I'd cast you as Puck
Decent understanding of iambic pentameter
Kinda eccemtric thing going on with the arrows
Chuck in a bit of mischeif or malice and UR on to something
Skreechicorp 3 years ago
Why thank you :3
koppiDechu 3 years ago
np
I'd kill to C U do more shakespeare
UR a pretty gd actress
Skreechicorp 3 years ago
Oh wow!
That was really good!
I did the part with....umm, Lysander (sp?) and the "Lie Further Off..." bit.
Gosh it was funny!
And yet i only got a 75% on my Exam!!
EVERYONE ELSE GOT A MERIT/CREDIT/DISTINCTION.
Waaah!
Great job on yours though! =^.^=
Skye940 3 years ago
x) i had to do this in year eight.
lol good job. :)
v. cute
hanjju 3 years ago
i likee the arowws(:
i want themD:<
SungminsWife 3 years ago
Ouu I likey the arrows :D
XxChilliexX 3 years ago
nice!!!! i like this one!!^^
this vedio is so well done!!! good job jenny!!!
kennylin3208 3 years ago