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From: demz987
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  • i have a feeling hes going to rape god i hope not

    loved it

  • amazing

    i hope joe stays good for a while but if he gets mean i hope he wont rape her.

    ur a really good writer

  • NEXT ONE NEXT ONE NEXT ONE!

    not good ?!

    do you want me to smack you?!!!??

    this was beautiful<3

  • Hehhe You make me laugh ^_^ <3

  • ahaha,good x'D

    NOW POST THE NEXT ONE NOW!

    understoodd,?

    i thought so x'D

  • It was so amazing! I swear, it was beyond amazing. I loved it! I can't wait for the next one!

  • I'M SUPPOSED TO BE STUDYING! and look what you have me doing! and it wasnt either I went out of my way to have no one see me not study GOSH! so anyways THAT WAS EFFING AWSOME! dude you have no idea. I think this is my favorite plot out of all you stories (I also really liked the one where joe was superhumane) but this soooooooo good. What exactly happened though. How come she just let him lead her away...was she in shock? ahh! someone is coming gotta go. AWESOME!

  • i loved it

    cant wait 4 the nxt 1

  • omg i really love this story. ok its official you are now my fav writer! and you maker jemily stories with is my fav couple

  • AMAZING!!!! cant wait for the next !!! seriosly its the best!!=]]

  • Not very good?

    psh! i think this one's AMAZING!

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