thanks for reviewing and btw ur poem is good. i liked the first half of the poem. not sure that the last half continued the flow properly but it was still very pretty. keep writing <3
i thought the poem was really good, amazing, like a summary of the book, the song was by vannessa carlton, correct? i loved it and then the line said-- ive seen twilight, and i was like! omg! i get it.
wow
dingdongies04 3 years ago
You are an amazing writer!
you should be famous lol
i love this soo much! :D
roachrena 3 years ago
thank u so much. that's actually my dream so when u said that it put a big smile on my face. <3
fanpire4life 3 years ago
my poem is soooo weak compared to that:
As I looked into those topaz eyes,
their eyes a faded golden,
the whole world seemed to melt away,
and all I wanted was to hold him.
His skin so white, it shimmered,
felt like a thousand ice cubes,
he gently held me in his arms,
and whispered, "I love you."
-Kellen D.
belkel900 3 years ago
thanks for reviewing and btw ur poem is good. i liked the first half of the poem. not sure that the last half continued the flow properly but it was still very pretty. keep writing <3
fanpire4life 3 years ago
AMAZING! I love it!
TwilightRulez87 3 years ago
Great poem!!!
twilight4trinity 3 years ago
i love your poem xD you should
do moree !
memorieslast07 3 years ago
amazing and a song called Twilight? wtf in a good way. ^^
MistyCullen 3 years ago
i thought the poem was really good, amazing, like a summary of the book, the song was by vannessa carlton, correct? i loved it and then the line said-- ive seen twilight, and i was like! omg! i get it.
great video.
keep up the exellent work
MaryHarmonium 3 years ago
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What is the song called?
535pati535 3 years ago
I have read so many poems about twilight but yours was by far the best! And I really loved the video! GOOD JOB! :)
535pati535 3 years ago
thanx. and the song is called Twilight by Vanessa Carlton. :P fitting rite?
fanpire4life 3 years ago