"Doors" by aCJohnson

[DeathDakid926]

Man: Wanna come in and play checkers

Mii: B-but i dnt know how to play

[luke1rose]

ah thats fuckin class,the end gets you!

[tubspower]

he didnt know how to fucking open a door -_- gutted

[SkylarMarie2012]

I call bullshit on this. Dogs can't use the computer.

[darkrow435]

Wow, that was mind-blowing. Just, wow.

[AleXXenocide]

Wow great twist did not see that coming

[lalathatrapstar]

AMAZING!!!!!

[Gagaloopony]

HOLY SHIT WHAT A TWIST!

[HarleyGFX]

Wow he was a (spoiler) ? That's sad as fuck how he had to go through that.

[OneWhoTrotsLikeAFox]

damn, these are great stories. what a shocker.

[daniel121997]

really? WOW but, REALLY??? omg... u were (spoiler) all along?!!? ._. really?

[crackerjahk]

I feel this was read much better than any of your outher stories, i shall keep going.

[SpidermanEminem]

PLOT TWIST UNFUCKING BELIVEABLE

[TheWeirdPlant]

It took me longer than it should of, but...

That hurt. That really hurt.

[Jamaxstudios]

ptttttttttttttttttttttt



[Tanker937]

What a twist!

[Kirasupporter1]

The ending was amazing! Pet my head, Good boy.

[lMorTeX]

That's like the most fucking sad thing i ever heard...that pasta really caught me off guard, @MrCreepyPasta you should've tell'd me, u should T_T

thx for that bro, keep the good work.

[Raxis19]

That is one of the best stories I've ever heard!

[TheSugarcatFannypack]

Awesome twist, amazing story. Once again, thank you.

[snyperXVIII]

iWanna play checkers now...

[doodoodudex]

Amazing surprise... Now I understand why the dad didn't love him and I don't hate him anymore... poor family.

[Lolacoca1]

whats the song in the background? :)

[southparkdudz]

what a twist

[geckorus10]

Even creepier is that Jeff the Killer is the related video. Could this be one of the victims he claimed?

[HeavyMetalHindu]

I had wondered at the time why he would be napping all day without being sick on a school day, but now I understand why.

[RandomGenericComment]

My favorite one. I like how this story isn't as creepy as it is sad. Good twist at the end.

[thylings]

That was so f*cking awesome. And sad.

[NimhShambler]

There's a hole...a hole...a hole in the bottom of the sea!

[somestrangefilms]

He was a !!!! WHAT???? :O amazing turn in the story man :)

[trollface9111]

omg i am such an idiot, i thought this actually happened to you i posted my comment like 5:00 in

[trollface9111]

sorry to say this but your dad is a dick but your mom is okay thoe + im sorry for your loss:(

[shadowfax02]

@trollface9111 LOL

[trollface9111]

that picture is so creepy:(

[Jokerer5]

There's someone in the house i barked..

[HittingChickens]

"I look down at my paws" At first I was like wtf but then I laughed.

[MaimingMusic]

The ending was gorgeous.

[DustinTheGoth]

And then I was dog.

[ostritchman101]

Hoooly Craaaaaap DIDN'T EXPECT THAT XD

[VanessaOsbourne]

Whoever wrote this was a mastermind of storytelling. 'Nuff said.

[Jonboyduke]

He is a dog!! Oh shit!!

[screenON14]

@Jonboyduke Well thanks asshole, now I know.

[Jonboyduke]

Shit...

[newgroundscrazy]

Omfg, you chose Love Story for the background music <3 Perfect. Choice.

[crystalpeters1]

I LOVE your voice

[beatbeatBOOMbeat]

For most of the video I was like, meh. Then the last two sentences, boom.

@MrCreepyPasta—good job on this one. Quality work.

[JessicaJawbreakerLuv]

AGGH THIS ONES AMAZING. I adore your voice. x) Nice job!

[Orthropox14]

NOSFERATU IN THE PICTURE

[DimWitCollie]

This was incredible!

I really did not expect the ending, you read it beautifully.

[oldannyboy37]

I'd have left out the yellow teeth comment. Most scientist say dogs are color blind lol.

[TarutaruBuddah]

@oldannyboy37 But can see shades of blue brown and brownish/yellow if my memory severs me right. Look it up it's pretty interesting to read about. C:

[NICKREAPER316]

Am I the only one that's reminded of Courage the Cowardly Dog?

[Perzsnake]

......holy shit...

[supermatt1985]

very good

[Rober5176]

Im crying.......... That's so fucking sad

[OldSerpentOfSin]

@Rober5176 I am laughing.. Because I have gone mad.

[poorwooble]

Poor puppy 3:

[Sociopathics]

... I kind of want to cry now.

[TheThunderDragoon]

That's the worst dog ever! He did nothing to stop the man.

[TheAmethystScorpion]

Sounds like the huge cult leader from resident evil 4

[MrMegaMorshu]

wana come in and play checkers?

[AnimemangaTeen]

I loved this story when I read it, but you make it even better!

[Feffog]

i was expecting "i looked down onto the floor, everybody walk the dinosaur"

[AQWorldspyrisfactor]

This made me want my dogs....

[MsBeatlesfan2]

@AQWorldspyrisfactor lol u would !!! xD

[CapeRights]

I cried...

[shademaster6]

What's the name of the Music Box Music in the Background?

[termin107]

it's actually quite a sad story once you hit the end :(

[meanmycrazyfrnds4evr]

What a twist

[Beerback]

Ok, that was just plain creepy. My doorbell rang halfway through the vid.

[KingOfTehMoon]

This is absolutely the best one I have ever listened to well done and an amazing twist ending loved it absolutely loved it

[Gronarix]

This is why small dogs aren't good guard dogs...

[SkylitDriveFan123]

Did he not know he was a dog? If he did, he could have used his teeth to tear his throat out or something.

[NotBrennanWasHereNOT]

Awww. That actually made me really sad and I now take back first retort.

[NotBrennanWasHereNOT]

...........I was adopted.... o_o oh....

[kinseren]

this was this months creepy pasta of the month

[destructiondragon360]

How did a dog call her Janice? Was he just barking it and thought he was saying Janice?

[InvaderArishomoto]

Was not expecting that ending. In the words of m night shamalan

What a twist!

[DrayFan12]

Puppyyyyyy~!

[bitemeseeificare]

that was awesome

[mbluebird2]

Ohhhh hes a Dog XD my first time hearing this story,that was a good one.

[NovaIce]

One of my favorites! Thanks for the post!

[Eranya]

Aww, that was sad :(

[whilwheaton]

"there's someone in the house, i barked" icwatudidthere

[Narryaque]

yeah, this is why i don't look down at the comments before i listen to these; everyone likes to just say the twist >_<

[mbluebird2]

@Narryaque but some times i look in the comments to see if a video has a pop up XD, those times i would look in the comments before watching

[MrCreepyPasta]

@mbluebird2 If it's one of my videos, I'll never put a screamer into it. I refuse to resort to cheap theatrics such as screamers to get a scare. If you want something done right. You have to do it with your own two voice.

[Narryaque]

@mbluebird2 lol i know what you mean there! i hate pop ups too! But MrCreepyPasta is trustworthy :)

[Narryaque]

awwwwwwww!!! D; oh, god... that's so sad....

[ivp124]

I see what you did there....

[MouldyCrayon]

What a twist!

[viking977]

i could do with less dramatic pausing and nervous stuttering if it's all the same, i prefer it when you just read it straight through.

[jom9319873]

so he's a dog???? man this is a cool story :D

[minecraftfreakian]

he's a dog...

[antichristeileen]

i loooooooooooooooooover real vamp stories ^,..,^

[familydylan1]

@MrCreepyPasta DID YOU EVER TRIP :D?

[guitarbeast25]

Have you done the no end house? I'd like to hear that one :)

[Carzeyday]

What a twist...not gonna what it is...But that was..a dang shocking twist.

[nightsandreala123]

OMG my friend told me this one befor, i remeberd it as soon as i heard you say if only i could open doors, aaah the good old days, befor my dreams wherent filled with creepy pasta

[Weenerdude2000]

Do you know of BlameTruth?

[inspectork499]

Awww... that last part made me sad... ;~;

[WildMomo24]

You have such a great voice. :]

[AxeAndTyphoid]

I feel like the twist was just kind of invented at the last minute...

[Jxrred]

@AxeAndTyphoid do you not get it? he was adopted.. most pets are adopted. and he even said, he wasn't afraid to pop any of his children. he popped me for making a bathroom mistake inside.

[jellywillreturn]

Huh, that picture doesn't look to scary. I guess I'll watch this anOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...

[verzeda]

Poor doggy :( if I was him i would have torn that sucker a new asshole...

[CrossChild]

Sweet lord!! Second time listening to this and I'm tearing up in the middle of it!! Damn this one's good!

[shibitheshadowhound]

i just realize this story was in the perceptive of a dog

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww­wwweeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssooo­ooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmeeeeee­eeeeee!!! :3

[monkeyzrul77]

@shibitheshadowhound that explained a lot of the stuff :P good thing i look at comments before watching vid

[ReikoSpazz]

Amazing as ever~! The soft subtleties always make everything perfect.

Okay, I know I'm probably just a band-waggoning loser but I have a huge request...

The prolog to John Dies at the End. The "Secret behind the universe" bit. Its sad, the book is good, but it would be GOLD if it was narrated by our good MrCreepyPasta.

[monsterman429]

It's almost like your wish is my command I asked for you to read this and you did thanks dude

[lyfeportrait]

I came because the thumbnail looked like Voldemort was in the window. I stayed for the story :3

[Masadanoodles]

Such a a 'great' ending, this is my new favourite Pasta! Thanks so much for reading this :)

[Grindshock]

I must say, for a dog, he has impeccable writing skills despite his lack of thumbs and inability to open doors.

[RoflManJar]

@Grindshock He probably typed all of it

[nexusgiga]

@Grindshock it was translated from doganess

[AZproductions117]

@Grindshock Dude, fucking spoilers >.>

[Grindshock]

@AZproductions117 Lesson learned: Never read comments before finishing a video ^_^ (Oh and sorry man :[ )

[AZproductions117]

@Grindshock No problem.

[XLindsayxLachrymoseX]

It looks like Satan and Voldemort had cowboy buttsex and produced that stud in the picture.

[AQWorldspyrisfactor]

@XLindsayxLachrymoseX He looks like voldy but he didn't manage to inherit his beautiful nose...oh wait

[Extr3m3furball]

3 minutes in I clicked the narrator wasnt human :P

[AeroDynamiix]

What happened to all the bad stories? Oh wait, I haven't heard 1 yet :)

[kinggabe314]

sooooo hes a dog?

[Kyralik]

@kinggabe314 Yes.

[kinggabe314]

@Kyralik that can type/talk?

[Kyralik]

@kinggabe314 Correct.

[CloneComander1138]

Im telling ya man "tales of the laughingstock" would be great to hear.

[asg00001]

just realized that the colors are changing

[nicmeister07]

perhaps you could put creepy rhyming couplets or something for captions. :)

[SkullyHippie]

I love that twist!

Never saw it coming.

[dudeman41000]

I winder CJohnson is short for Cave Johnson

[dudeman41000]

odd I'm adopted but I never new my mother she was in college when she was pregnant with me, but I never minded

[theaceofspades56]

Whoa!! That was a very nice ending! haha

[AlyTheFlirtyRockstar]

Ooooh. This one was longer than I remember reading it. I love this one.

[nekozombie0]

@MrCreepyPasta With no heat either...Then we'd have to eat the book and then go BACK to library where the lady would kill us in cold blood and dance on our graves....Kids these days...

[tHaToNeNeRdYcHiCk]

;n; the end oh my goodness

[PrincessJasmine201]

Dear Mr Creepypasta,

May you pa pa pa please put on captions!!

sincerly,

a fan from jersey! <3

[Awesomeguy11WTF]

This was a good creepypasta. I liked the twist at the end, but one thing is scientifically false. Dogs can't see color.

[nekozombie0]

@Awesomeguy11WTF Dog's can't look up...Big Al says so

[OnesionRa]

@nekozombie0 lol great film

[Casandraelf]

@Awesomeguy11WTF maybe he recognized it was blood by smell

by the way, do you think it was a big dog or a little dog who was narrating? i think it was a little dog since i think a big dog would have probably attacked

[Awesomeguy11WTF]

@Casandraelf True, but I was referring to the part where he talks about the mans teeth being yellow.

[Casandraelf]

@Awesomeguy11WTF actually, i think they can see in color, they just can't see yellows like we can

[thylings]

@Awesomeguy11WTF dogs have the equivalent of red/green colorblindness. they can see yellows and blues, just not reds and greens. so it is scientifically accurate that he could see yellow. ;)

[Casandraelf]

@thylings that makes sense. maybe the narrator(i don't want to spoil the twist) was able to figure out that the stains on the intruder's shirt were blood due to the scent

[calvythehedgehog]

indeed.. i would love to come in and play checkers good sir....

[italstallion82]

i like the way this story is bc u think its a about a lil boy thats adopted to a family but it keeps u in suspense till the end

i luv a gd creepy story and ur stories make a great midnight read

[zonilo1]

woof woof

[Azartusfar]

So what happened to all the good stories.

[MrCreepyPasta]

@Azartusfar Kids today.... so desensitized by movies... television ... Why back in my day we had to goto the library just to share the 1 book we had and READ our scary stories....

[MrCreepyPasta]

@MrCreepyPasta and to get there we had to walk 15 MILES!!!

[MrCreepyPasta]

@MrCreepyPasta IN THE SNOW!!

[MrCreepyPasta]

@MrCreepyPasta UP HILL!!!!

[MrCreepyPasta]

@MrCreepyPasta BOTH WAYS!!!!!!!!!!! ಠ_ಠ

[666lilnickY]

@MrCreepyPasta WITH BREAD BAGS ON OUR FEET!

[nekozombie0]

@666lilnickY Bread bags on feet...I would have killed someone for bread bags on feet we 'ad nothin' but shoes made of ice! And were damn 'appy to get 'em

[CloneComander1138]

@MrCreepyPasta BARE FOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

[nekozombie0]

@CloneComander1138 Barefoot well me ol' man chopped our feet of and we 'ad to eat em for Christmas dinner and we were damn 'appy to get em

[mariofana]

@MrCreepyPasta During the night, I assume

[BassGuitard]

@MrCreepyPasta while on fire?

[wolfman8125]

@MrCreepyPasta i really enjoyed this when i first read it really clever and well done and with you reading it, it was even better

[Hoogalindo]

@MrCreepyPasta <3

[bhgameman]

@MrCreepyPasta XD thanks for doing this story. Also thanks for actually COMUNICATING with fans. Most people that are popular dont. Keep up the great work

[thegamegorilla]

@MrCreepyPasta Up a hill both ways?!??!

[DoorDiehockey]

@MrCreepyPasta you sound like my mother

[Dethenger]

@MrCreepyPasta

I laughed really hard. Somehow, it being segmented made it all the better.

[Legocrabman]

@MrCreepyPasta  Pastaception

[Azartusfar]

The funny thing is I'm older than you.

[breathetosk8]

home alone probably shouldn't be listenin to this... lol

[HICKS3131]

@breathetosk8 Always home alone...really probably shouldnt be...