UZFTM: Part 4 (Part 2) (Writing 4: Cool Ideas for Scenes)

[fergusshowman89]

1950's style horror movie, with an aids infected zombie

[brianrake]

anything goes haha.

[TheGreatGallbo]

I think there should be a scene where a girl named Cardboardflowers gets a hickey from a zombie on the 'Tubes' and then she gets infected and loses the little bit of brains she already had.

:-D

[brianrake]

haha; it's funny cause it's true.

[Projected06]

Sorry Mr.Grover I've been busy recently and have not been able to comment freely. I'd just like to start by saying that I hope your condition improves(Don't know if it's just an act or not), and wish you the best of luck.

As for my idea for an origin, I think the outbreak should be more Evil/Demonic based then Chemical outbreak based. Some kind of evil cult behind the incidents, linked to the zombie outbreak.

[brianrake]

No need for apologies Mr. 06, I too am from the land of obligations. Thank you so much for the good health wishes; I assure you my tonsils did in fact explode to eliminate any skepticism.

As for your idea, I am in complete agreeance as this is definitely the lesser approach taken.

[incsuch311]

2. "Zombies in the 1980's at an arcade, playing classics such as Pac Man and Donkey Kong"

haha, better yet, Zombies playing the song "She's Not There" live in concert.... get it??

[TheGreatGallbo]

:-( I suppose you didn't see me get bitched out for "stealing" other people's ideas about a zombie outbreak at a concert...

sorry incush311, you have now joined my company

[brianrake]

I believe Mr. 311 was establishing a social commentary on your previous sins.

[brianrake]

Fantastic idea! We're definitely using this.

[fergusshowman89]

your sad, since you can't think of any ideas of your own, you asking others ha ha, you should know that that will never turn out and your waiting your time trying to make a movie, i should just say, good luck

[brianrake]

Mr. Showman, what a fantastic idea for a scene. A depressed filmmaker with no ideas of his/her own waiting to make a movie. THEN the zombies attack and launch a creative flood of inspiration! Maybe projected06's character, "Freddie Gains" character would be a good fit for this scene. My only criticism is maybe the "it never turns out" part.

Thank you so much for the "good luck" wish as well; you know how hard it is, the whole, "pre-production process."

Stay tuned for Part 5 on the 24th.

[TheGreatGallbo]

I would like to whole heartedly apologize to both Farfnugen and yartamis, as I did take the concert idea and just tried to add my own spin to it.

I would like everyone to recognize the other two ideas I had though (which were:)

1. A Zombie attack on Abraham Lincoln while he is giving the gettysburg address

2. Zombies in the 1980's at an arcade, playing classics such as Pac Man and Donkey Kong

thank you friends

[brianrake]

it takes a big man to admit such a big mistake.

thank you.

[TheGreatGallbo]

Ok, along with my hippies concert idea... there can be a different band instead! Called the "Greatful Undead". They can either be zombie musicians.. who play Dead-eqsque songs, or a human band that plays a greatful dead-esque song about Zombies. Killer? I think so!

[brianrake]

THIS IS FARFNUGEN'S IDEA, STOP IT!

[TheGreatGallbo]

Ok, I'm keeping w/ the time machine idea here, and Zombies have to effect important events in history:

-A zombie attack on Abe Lincoln while he isgiving the Gettysburg address

-A zombie attack on hippies at a concert (w/ a first person p.o.v. from a hippies on acid seeing the zombies) while none other than THE ZOMBIES are playing "Time of the Season" (or maybe my personal fav, "Care of Cell #44")

- Last but not least, I want to see Zombies playing classic arcade games in the 80's!!!

[brianrake]

lol, why did you just steal Yartamis and Farfnugen's idea and combine them with your own while pretending it was original?

[yartamis]

little tommy walks into a grocery store, gusts of wind blow around, then ZOMBIES start poping out of the food containers! tommy whips out his nerf gun ands starts shooting the zombies, all the zombies explode because tommy found their weakness, nerf darts...

[brianrake]

Like they say, if it's Nerf or Nothing, I'll take nothing.