Hmm... Appears to be a little hit-and-miss on the humour department, and I'll admit that it's a little, how do I put it, absurd to watch. I have to pause it to compose myself and continue. It's not a bad thing, it's just a small observation from me that it's a little out there.
But in the end, it's funny. Not something I'd watch with anyone else within a hundred yards of me, but I'd watch it. Keep going. Produce indi like Fritz the Cat... Actually, screw a series, make a movie.
It's lacking something dude, not alot of it tho'! May be that it at times feels alittle..stiff?
You know, if i were you i'd look around and check out some stuff that has both manimals,twisted humor and a pretty wide fanbase, Fritz the cat, Meet the feebles. Stuff like that.
Hell, if nothing you might atleast try to catch the attention of some decent flash artists to get things in motion, people never mind working abit if you get them interested. Good luck dude
why the fuck does Jody keep referring to herself in the third person? Why does the black guy sound white? Why did this show get so far in the competition??!
Singularly the worst shit I've ever seen. Another pretentious ass from FA peddling to the dogfucker demographic, thinking their shit is golden. You can't polish a turd, ass hat. I hope to christ they kill this and let far more worthy competitors in the contest win. Its not funny, its not drawn well, and there's no sense of suspended disbelief. Go back to drawing dog cocks on FA, at least people will pay you for them there.
Singularly the worst shit I've ever seen. Another pretentious ass from FA peddling to the dogfucker demographic, thinking their shit is golden. You can't polish a turd, ass hat. I hope to christ they kill this and let far more worthy competitors in the contest win. Its not funny, its not drawn well, and there's no sense of suspended disbelief. Go back to drawing dog cocks on FA, at least people will pay you for them there.
Singularly the worst shit I've ever seen. Another pretentious ass from FA peddling to the dogfucker demographic, thinking their shit is golden. You can't polish a turd, ass hat. I hope to christ they kill this and let far more worthy competitors in the contest win. Its not funny, its not drawn well, and there's no sense of suspended disbelief. Go back to drawing dog cocks on FA, at least people will pay you for them there.
Well, it must feel bad to read alot of unappreciative comments but they're right.
Father of the pride could pull off some good dirty jokes in style. This leaves a sour taste though, like you're pandering to perversion. A general audience isn't going to like that.
Apart from that, slow joke delivery.
No story to speak off. Nothing engages me.
and the furries... what? You need to have a point with the animal characters man. Satire over kid shows, fable, Disney... (anything but furry)
To the guys complaining about the animation; it's an animatic. Bsically a moving storyboard.
Now, for the honest opinion:
Doesn't seem to be anything special, that's without the furry element. With that, you bring a creepy near-bestiality edge to it and I doubt any exec will touch this. I mean, how would you even pitch this to the suits?
The writing could stand to be improved. I'm trying to imagine this as a finalized show, with solid animation and voice acting, and it's building itself up to be very forgettable.
Still, I hope you get this thing on air. It's definitely one of the more ambitious projects I've seen from a "member of the fandom"
@sharki3232 because it got posted on 4chan. There have been three threads in the last hour, and everyone is universally declaring this show to be shit.
even the furries are saying it's shit, that doesn't bode well considering they would be your primary audience
4chan is full of furries. You know the only people who are demented enough to actually like this trash. The fact that even they hate it should be an indicator of how bad this truly is.
@DarkTrogdor20X7 Sorry, I wasn't making fun of you. I was making fun of 4Chan and the fact that they shit on everything. I found one of the threads but it has already derailed into a Rain Dog troll-a-thon.
Yo dude this is terrible, like shockingly awful. Completely devoid of comedy, and poorly drawn. Also the whole furry thing will kill any hopes of you getting this on the air. Learn to write, learn to draw, make your personal interests either subtle or nonexistent in your work
Hm. I think it might fly. Lord knows I've seen stranger things on adult oriented animated shows.
But I guess it worked for "Gary the Rat." The only thing that killed that was Spike put it on against the almighty Adult Swim and they barely promoted it. Other than that it started out as an internet web show and was produced by and starring Kelsey Grammer, and it was actually funny and well recieved by the critics.
I just don't see how you are going to sell this to a TV network. The sex appeal is just a too over the top. Hell this is probably too much even by Adult swim's standards.
I don't know about this. Not very funny, I'm afraid, there seems to be too much focus on sex appeal and too little on humor, and this is coming from one of them furfags. I realize this is aimed at adults, but I don't know of any TV networks would be comfortable with it, since most normal people would classify this as bestiality and very creepy.
But a show like this is an interesting idea, and I can't know what the networks are thinking. I wish you luck on this one.
Isn't Bambi a guy's name? Well Sharkie, I hope this show gets on the air. If it does, drop me a line, I'll watch it if it's being aired where I'm at, otherwise, I'll just get it on DVD as soon as its out.
Well Sharkie, I was referring to the fact that Bambi, in the original Disney movie, was in fact male (there was also another male character called Bambi in the same movie, it was the son of the skunk, flower). I've also seen in the credits to some other Disney movie/show/whatever called Bambi, too. It's a highly uncommon name, that's for sure, but I guess you were going for shock value.
Funny thing. In Bambi 2, the thing about Bambi being a girl's is actually commented on. If only Disney showed more scenes of the original Bambi after his mother gets shot...
By the way, the only reason I watched the sequel was because Andreas Deja was an animation consultant on it. While it doesn't hold a candle to the first Bambi, it doesn't tarnish the legacy of it either.
Oh, okay. I hope it's explained in the series. Anyway, I really like Bambi, the air-headed group of the show. But how would she do compared to a mare?
Fuck youtube's related video algorithms for bringing me here.
symon500 1 month ago
Not so bad since it reminds me of Fritz the Cat and doesn't come off as furry as say, DeviantArt fans or Sonic fans.
MisterHeroman 1 month ago
GOD DAMMIT YOU FUCKING FURRIES ARE MAKING ME NOT WANT TO LIVE
alidan233 1 month ago
Idon'twanttoliveonthisplanetanymore.jpg
GoldenGroudon101 1 month ago
no
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illsubanyone 1 month ago
nopenopenope
Vaxidontal 1 month ago
vomit inducing
CptNameless 1 month ago
is that vixen seriously speaking in third person? Jesus Christ that's annoying.
FornicateWithRaptors 1 month ago
i hat u go di
SkotDaSkyLord 1 month ago
I'm buying a chair with wheels just so I can turn around 360° and roll the fuck away from my monitor.
mcskittles71 1 month ago
FUCK NO NO NON ON OLN KN IONO NO NOJKDNFGVOKDFMNLOJADSNFINMFCd
ScumbagPhot 1 month ago
There's no way you can deny that this is furry at this point. Seriously. Either that or this is 100% about weird mutant bestiality.
redmage87 1 month ago
i'm sad :(
aa428507 1 month ago
I didn't know Second Life had a cartoon
CleaveTheDragon 1 month ago
Hmm... Appears to be a little hit-and-miss on the humour department, and I'll admit that it's a little, how do I put it, absurd to watch. I have to pause it to compose myself and continue. It's not a bad thing, it's just a small observation from me that it's a little out there.
But in the end, it's funny. Not something I'd watch with anyone else within a hundred yards of me, but I'd watch it. Keep going. Produce indi like Fritz the Cat... Actually, screw a series, make a movie.
MackDogLive 2 months ago
The thing is, about sexual humor you can either focus on the sexual or the humor. I thought this was funny and sexy and hope it gets picked up.
BrazenBull001 3 months ago
1) It's a cultural thing that all canines do in the show.
2) Because the guy who did his voice is white, he's also the guy who did the animation.
3) It's has a good pilot script and it was tailor made for the contest I submitted it to, the Fox Diversity Developmental Writers Initiative.
sharki3232 3 months ago
@sharki3232
It's lacking something dude, not alot of it tho'! May be that it at times feels alittle..stiff?
You know, if i were you i'd look around and check out some stuff that has both manimals,twisted humor and a pretty wide fanbase, Fritz the cat, Meet the feebles. Stuff like that.
Hell, if nothing you might atleast try to catch the attention of some decent flash artists to get things in motion, people never mind working abit if you get them interested. Good luck dude
WolfenDay 2 months ago
why the fuck does Jody keep referring to herself in the third person? Why does the black guy sound white? Why did this show get so far in the competition??!
Redonx 3 months ago
>you must be at least 45 to watch this
NotOrdinaryInGames 3 months ago
go fuck yourself, /co/.
cornnugget 3 months ago
@cornnugget >/co/ wants /co/ to fuck itself
Masturbation, anyone?
NotOrdinaryInGames 3 months ago
Sure is self insert in here.
tockification 3 months ago
I hope this project isnt canceled.
Hewylewis 4 months ago
KEEP MAKEING THIS!
DemonFireWolf2008 5 months ago in playlist fur
^^ Now this is good! Hope to see more of this up soon!
MonsterIsland 8 months ago
RECALCULATING!!! TURN RIGHT NOW!!!!
ajolley785727 10 months ago
@ajolley785727 Wait, what?
sharki3232 10 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Singularly the worst shit I've ever seen. Another pretentious ass from FA peddling to the dogfucker demographic, thinking their shit is golden. You can't polish a turd, ass hat. I hope to christ they kill this and let far more worthy competitors in the contest win. Its not funny, its not drawn well, and there's no sense of suspended disbelief. Go back to drawing dog cocks on FA, at least people will pay you for them there.
michaelraccoon 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Singularly the worst shit I've ever seen. Another pretentious ass from FA peddling to the dogfucker demographic, thinking their shit is golden. You can't polish a turd, ass hat. I hope to christ they kill this and let far more worthy competitors in the contest win. Its not funny, its not drawn well, and there's no sense of suspended disbelief. Go back to drawing dog cocks on FA, at least people will pay you for them there.
michaelraccoon 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Singularly the worst shit I've ever seen. Another pretentious ass from FA peddling to the dogfucker demographic, thinking their shit is golden. You can't polish a turd, ass hat. I hope to christ they kill this and let far more worthy competitors in the contest win. Its not funny, its not drawn well, and there's no sense of suspended disbelief. Go back to drawing dog cocks on FA, at least people will pay you for them there.
michaelraccoon 1 year ago
THIS JUST IN! ZOO U IS A FINALIST FOR THE FOX DIVERSITY WRITERS INITIATIVE AND A SEMI FINALIST IN THE NEXT TV WRITING AND PITCHING COMPETITION!
sharki3232 1 year ago
@sharki3232 WAHOO!!! Congrats!!
Hewylewis 1 year ago
This is the most awesome thing ever. Lesbian kissing is awlways needed on TV.
GabrieLaVedier 1 year ago
Now this would be an interesting cartoon if it was FULLY animated
furryfan87243 1 year ago
Jody the vixen she is hot
ajolley785727 1 year ago
@ajolley785727
She would agree with you.
sharki3232 1 year ago
Well, it must feel bad to read alot of unappreciative comments but they're right.
Father of the pride could pull off some good dirty jokes in style. This leaves a sour taste though, like you're pandering to perversion. A general audience isn't going to like that.
Apart from that, slow joke delivery.
No story to speak off. Nothing engages me.
and the furries... what? You need to have a point with the animal characters man. Satire over kid shows, fable, Disney... (anything but furry)
herrfrunck 1 year ago
@herrfrunck its a cartoon for furries, featuring lesbian kissing.
its low hanging fruit, this is worse than family guy stuff.
InfiniteRhombus 1 year ago
Cool, good luck
menosgod 1 year ago
To the guys complaining about the animation; it's an animatic. Bsically a moving storyboard.
Now, for the honest opinion:
Doesn't seem to be anything special, that's without the furry element. With that, you bring a creepy near-bestiality edge to it and I doubt any exec will touch this. I mean, how would you even pitch this to the suits?
jimjamjoeyjoejoe 1 year ago
I can't believe 4Chan is this slow, I posted this months ago.
sharki3232 1 year ago
The writing could stand to be improved. I'm trying to imagine this as a finalized show, with solid animation and voice acting, and it's building itself up to be very forgettable.
Still, I hope you get this thing on air. It's definitely one of the more ambitious projects I've seen from a "member of the fandom"
Joshbeck321 1 year ago
What the fuck is going on?
IPunchaUInTheFace 1 year ago
You really hope to get this disgusting furry garbage on TV? What a fucking idiot.
thrillhouse92701 1 year ago
Why the sudden surge in viewing? I checked the insight panel. but it's not offering any clues.
sharki3232 1 year ago
4chan
stfuken 1 year ago
@stfuken Thank you.
sharki3232 1 year ago
@sharki3232 because it got posted on 4chan. There have been three threads in the last hour, and everyone is universally declaring this show to be shit.
even the furries are saying it's shit, that doesn't bode well considering they would be your primary audience
DarkTrogdor20X7 1 year ago
@DarkTrogdor20X7 OH NO! 4CHAN HATES IT! MY DREAM IS DEAD!
sharki3232 1 year ago
4chan is full of furries. You know the only people who are demented enough to actually like this trash. The fact that even they hate it should be an indicator of how bad this truly is.
thrillhouse92701 1 year ago
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DarkTrogdor20X7 1 year ago
@DarkTrogdor20X7 Sorry, I wasn't making fun of you. I was making fun of 4Chan and the fact that they shit on everything. I found one of the threads but it has already derailed into a Rain Dog troll-a-thon.
sharki3232 1 year ago
That was bad.
Burne222 1 year ago
WHAT THE FUCK NO
rosaringo 1 year ago
Yo dude this is terrible, like shockingly awful. Completely devoid of comedy, and poorly drawn. Also the whole furry thing will kill any hopes of you getting this on the air. Learn to write, learn to draw, make your personal interests either subtle or nonexistent in your work
LesserRed 1 year ago
what the fuck is this !?!?!??!
the0michman 1 year ago
Dear lord, this is horrible.
HelpIveBeenShot 1 year ago
I like the sane guy with the laptop.
Blurns 1 year ago 3
FUCKING NO
D:
RustyisaCowboy 1 year ago 9
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RustyisaCowboy 1 year ago
What in the fuck did I watch.
eggels 1 year ago 16
No.
TEAMFORTRESS2SUX 1 year ago
YOUTUBE COMMENTS!
Femfikon 1 year ago
No to erase that from my memory.
jimjamjoeyjoejoe 1 year ago
Hm. I think it might fly. Lord knows I've seen stranger things on adult oriented animated shows.
But I guess it worked for "Gary the Rat." The only thing that killed that was Spike put it on against the almighty Adult Swim and they barely promoted it. Other than that it started out as an internet web show and was produced by and starring Kelsey Grammer, and it was actually funny and well recieved by the critics.
radioblueheart 1 year ago
I just don't see how you are going to sell this to a TV network. The sex appeal is just a too over the top. Hell this is probably too much even by Adult swim's standards.
Runforestrun 2 years ago
@Runforestrun @Runforestrun You're right as far as broadcast network goes. The show would have to be toned down to air on Fox or NBC.
But cable networks get away with a lot as far as sexual content goes. Check out "Archer" or just about anything that airs on FX or Spike.
Adult Swim is a different beast entirely. Even though "Zoo U" is aimed at the same demographic, it is probably too conventional for Adult Swim.
sharki3232 2 years ago
JohnRaines wants to know why Jody refers to herself in third-person.
JohnRaines 2 years ago
@JohnRaines: It's a cultural thing canine species do in the show. They don't like to use the word "I". They fell it robs them of their identity.
It was also a way of giving Jody a unique voice in the show.
sharki3232 2 years ago
Maybe that would be something for Channel 4 in the UK.
In Germany unfortunately no station would show it. Here shows typically have their sound-track replaced by a far less humourous version.
wrtlpfmpf 2 years ago
I don't know about this. Not very funny, I'm afraid, there seems to be too much focus on sex appeal and too little on humor, and this is coming from one of them furfags. I realize this is aimed at adults, but I don't know of any TV networks would be comfortable with it, since most normal people would classify this as bestiality and very creepy.
But a show like this is an interesting idea, and I can't know what the networks are thinking. I wish you luck on this one.
TianlongProductions 2 years ago
MORE MORE ;-)
KaristaSwiss 2 years ago
Heh, now that's funny. Great job on this one! :)
AlarusOne 2 years ago
COOL!!!!!
KokoroDM 2 years ago
This was posted the day after my Birthday?! I should have picked it up sooner! Well, off to post this on my journal!
As for Bambi, nice job on the ditz-character. AND it's cute how Jody keeps saying her name instead of "I".
kidcrash2000 2 years ago
Isn't Bambi a guy's name? Well Sharkie, I hope this show gets on the air. If it does, drop me a line, I'll watch it if it's being aired where I'm at, otherwise, I'll just get it on DVD as soon as its out.
Hotshotter3000 2 years ago
@Hotshotter3000
Jody can be a man's name, but I've never meet a guy called Bambi.
sharki3232 2 years ago
That would be really freaky...and frightening. I wonder if there are any horses in this series.
Hewylewis 2 years ago
Well Sharkie, I was referring to the fact that Bambi, in the original Disney movie, was in fact male (there was also another male character called Bambi in the same movie, it was the son of the skunk, flower). I've also seen in the credits to some other Disney movie/show/whatever called Bambi, too. It's a highly uncommon name, that's for sure, but I guess you were going for shock value.
Hotshotter3000 2 years ago
Funny thing. In Bambi 2, the thing about Bambi being a girl's is actually commented on. If only Disney showed more scenes of the original Bambi after his mother gets shot...
By the way, the only reason I watched the sequel was because Andreas Deja was an animation consultant on it. While it doesn't hold a candle to the first Bambi, it doesn't tarnish the legacy of it either.
EHH246 2 years ago
Not too bad so far. Wonder when it will get picked up. There is always Adult Swim. They like crazy ideas.
marvin8723 2 years ago
I can't wait to see more. I hope some TV entity realizes the potential of this and gives it a go.
GabrieLaVedier 2 years ago
Hmm...Why does Jodie refer to herself in the third person?
Hewylewis 2 years ago
@Hewylewis
It's a cultural thing that canine species do in shows world.
sharki3232 2 years ago
Oh, okay. I hope it's explained in the series. Anyway, I really like Bambi, the air-headed group of the show. But how would she do compared to a mare?
Hewylewis 2 years ago
keep it up man!! ii would like too see more
nightmareluffy1 2 years ago
HOORAY!!! I knew you wouldn't give up on this series!!
Hewylewis 2 years ago