well... stop whining on excuses... dream are never easy, if your mic or keyboard is cheap go get a better 1, if your excuse is poor, go get some money!! i tried to just mention the technical part, but if its an unavoidable problem than i have to say this song really sound like 儿歌..... take comment bravely, like all musicians did
some tips for you, 1st change the lyrics, cuz the music sounds like a 儿歌 so make it a kid song... 2nd, look for a quiet place to record it, use a better mic, the lyrics are too straight forward too... which really bothers me..... when you play the piano, use more harmonic cuz it'll soften the ears and notes.... it'll feel like staccato if you dont....
pls take this as my point of view only... it'll help you compose the next song....
ya, keep on working hard, there is no excuse becos all friends are suporting you!!!
Yvainelwj 2 years ago
well... stop whining on excuses... dream are never easy, if your mic or keyboard is cheap go get a better 1, if your excuse is poor, go get some money!! i tried to just mention the technical part, but if its an unavoidable problem than i have to say this song really sound like 儿歌..... take comment bravely, like all musicians did
musicalphantom 3 years ago
some tips for you, 1st change the lyrics, cuz the music sounds like a 儿歌 so make it a kid song... 2nd, look for a quiet place to record it, use a better mic, the lyrics are too straight forward too... which really bothers me..... when you play the piano, use more harmonic cuz it'll soften the ears and notes.... it'll feel like staccato if you dont....
pls take this as my point of view only... it'll help you compose the next song....
musicalphantom 3 years ago
thanks for your advice...
but i just can use cheaper mic and at my house record only...and also using a cheaper keyboard for that piano sound...
because poor people just can make his dream come true like that result...^_^
by the way...i have never attend any class for this...^_^
so i will put more effort on my lyrics ^_^
stanley842000 3 years ago