People Who Need To DIE!

[YooTubeSucksMegaCock]

that video was pointless

[12GaugeSteel]

(in reference to the actual video on freespeechvids) This guy is NOT. FUNNY. It's not even that he's mostly regurgitating commonplace minor grievances, because that can be forgivable. It's that he's just not funny about it. And if someone's going to use a generically offensive gimmick like Satan to bitch about stupid commonplace shit, they better tickle my goddamn funny bone.

[HellishBrutality]

Not my fault you don't get my humor.

[12GaugeSteel]

Well actually, After revisiting your video, I gotta say it's a more genuine attempt then i thought. Around maybe...50% is pretty original, and it has a very carlin-esque vibe to it...but really that kinda just makes it worse. The buildup is, at times, decent, but where it consistently falls on its face EVERY TIME is the delivery. You come across as a loud and trying too hard to come up with creative vulgarities/violent depictions 4 shock value rather than legit humor.

[HellishBrutality]

Well, thanks for giving it another shot. The violent depictions/shock value gags usually don't happen; ep. 9 is a break from the usual routine.

Maybe you've watched the other episode, I dunno. Nontheless, thanks for keeping an open mind, anyway.

[12GaugeSteel]

Fuckin character limit i didn't think you'd get back so quickly...ne way yea I'm not sure if i have or not, but I'll check more shit out later. Good luck.

[HellishBrutality]

Thanks. And yeah, I'm just gonna assume that last remark was just a roast. No, it can't give you AIDS. It also can't leave you with a $500 abortion bill. :P

[12GaugeSteel]

Maybe instead try cutting the shit that isn't new or inventive, and making your punchlines shorter with more of a bite. Cut back on the meandering details of blood and gore. Not that blood and gore aren't awesome and funny, but the way you present it it quickly loses momentum and eventually tapers off. Just giving feedback. So yea, work on that. Or disregard this altogether go fuck yourself with shotgun. Hey, at least rock salt can't give you AIDS.

[manchildanimation]

He gave you constructive criticism. Take it for what it is and try to learn from it.

[HellishBrutality]

Yes, I realize that.

[axxerr]

why dont you upload it on youtube? upload it on youtube or I will give you one star, because this is not a video and its shitty.

why should I visit this fuckin link with tons of pop ups and commercial.

[C0DZ0R]

They can't upload it here, that's the reason for the fucking site

[Reaper16a]

what a youtube noob

[DegDough]

five stars for swedish vodka

[kdurston1]

see? see! even atheists agree the King James Version of the Bible is the only real one

lol

[DonutEatingLlama]

That guy is pretty messed up... all I wanna see is Terroja

[xypowerpop]

fuck this! * watches sailor moon related videos*

[NyrockXZX]

Ditto.

[xypowerpop]

i hope your comment was dripping with sarcasm like mine :P

-gullible-

[NyrockXZX]

My sarcasm is drier than a desert

[Tom1525]

@NyrockXZX lmao thats the comment of the year.

[kahisawheel]

awesome

[GaramRee]

You need an arrow to point toward the bottom now.

[whiteboy70176]

lol

Reminds me of George Carlin's list of people who ought to be killed.

[HellishBrutality]

Thanks! :) It is a tribute to both his list of people who ought to be killed (Complains and Grievances) and his list of people he could do without (What am I doing in New Jersey?).

I'm an obsessed Carlin fan.

[whiteboy70176]

*high five*

George Carlin is my hero!

[thursdaykidx]

HAHAHAHA your funny man nice vid

[HellishBrutality]

Thanks, dude!

[sandshrewsatch]

i like how sailor moon is a related video

[HellishBrutality]

I like it more how "People Who Need The Lord" is a related video.

[sandshrewsatch]

@HellishBrutality even more how "cops need to be watched" is also a related video

[Terje1337]

og youare good parpon!

[Parapon3ra]

First again. Damn!