My favorite part, I must say. You're really good at this. There's like, actual emotion paired with the words. Tons of poetry today is just lines that people think sound cool. Nice work :)
Why, thank you very much! I am glad that there are still people around that appreciate poetry :D I love getting these kind of comments. Feel free to read my other poetry on my site, I usually don't write anything unless there is some strong emotion that incites me to.
did i ever tell you that this is my favorite thing
suchducks 1 year ago
@suchducks blaze that little thing means a whole lot.
-Julian
ItTakesII 1 year ago
This is such a great poem! Great visual imagery and really great depth and meaning. Overall a job well done ^_^
fmaenhpfan4life 2 years ago
Thank you for the kind words :)
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
"But their words slip through
In between my fingers." This is such a visual phrase. I loved it.
zageguy 2 years ago
Thank you :]
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
JULIAN HOLY CRAP THIS IS AMAZING. <3
-Sara
CleverestWitch2188 2 years ago
SARA HOLY CRAP YOU'RE AMAZING. <3
But, yeah, thanks :D
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
"Let me be me and I swear I'll get by."
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My favorite part, I must say. You're really good at this. There's like, actual emotion paired with the words. Tons of poetry today is just lines that people think sound cool. Nice work :)
xmarykatemalenax 2 years ago 2
Why, thank you very much! I am glad that there are still people around that appreciate poetry :D I love getting these kind of comments. Feel free to read my other poetry on my site, I usually don't write anything unless there is some strong emotion that incites me to.
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
julianissoemolike
PaulSaysThings 2 years ago
I am not, I was just in that mood last night.
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
yea, just messin with ya.
PaulSaysThings 2 years ago
I know ^_^
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
Oooh, I like it. I read this poem on your page, but it means so much more spoken aloud. :)
DFTBSabertooth 2 years ago
Thank you, Sabia :) It does, doesn't it?
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
I LIKEZ TEH WORDZ AND UR FACEZ.
(My review totally kicked Arka's review's butt)
No, really, very nice.
holeysaintgeorge 2 years ago
Haha can't argue with that, it was a bit more insightful than Arka's.
Love you, Teryn :)
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
Mhmm :)
I love you too, Julian :)
holeysaintgeorge 2 years ago
Were you reading my mind, or something? lol. This was awesome. Pretty my thoughts put into much better words. =]
JoEmily744 2 years ago
:] That is why I love poetry, it's a great way to try and express your feelings verbally as best you can.
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
good stuff. How long have you been writing?
Justtubed 2 years ago
Thank you. I always wrote little crappy poems, but I've been actually writing more poetry as of a few months ago :)
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
Awesome job, Julian!
crimsong19 2 years ago
aww
i liked that!
smilenose 2 years ago
it's a really poetic-looking video for the poem :D (I'm good with words, I know)
Painfoot 2 years ago
Sweet, thank you, Arka. Best review I've ever gotten! xD
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
love it!!!! also, love your face! and the tree by your bed.
gdespain 2 years ago
hehe, Thanks Geri <3
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
nice poem. it totally pwns anything i could ever come up with
DFTBA
gingerninja8 2 years ago
BTW OMG 1st FTW
gingerninja8 2 years ago
Thank you! I appreciate it :) Glad you liked it.
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago