can see what you were doing with this. i feel you could have capitalised on the obstacles a bit more and created more of a conflict there rather than just show a girl running for 4 mins. Dodgy end images at the end but nice shot composition throughout.
doing some constructive criticism as requested by alex!!
editing does not reflect the style of your film at all.When the girl's running,you are trying to make it quick and emphisise the rush & time running out,but, each shot is really long.I think maybe shorter cuts & quicker shots would have built up the tension and been more effective.Also is it in real time,are the minutes represented on the screen,actual real minutes?
I liked the way in which the silence builds up impulsion for a mellow introduction into music. The use of Pendulum really accentuates the feel of the running and rushing with an erratic and sharp beat reflecting the visual and vocal energy of the scene. Nice job.
can see what you were doing with this. i feel you could have capitalised on the obstacles a bit more and created more of a conflict there rather than just show a girl running for 4 mins. Dodgy end images at the end but nice shot composition throughout.
jakeycboyo 5 years ago
There are some good pans in the film, however i would of liked to get to know the character a bit rather than just watch her run.
thisisbake 5 years ago
doing some constructive criticism as requested by alex!!
editing does not reflect the style of your film at all.When the girl's running,you are trying to make it quick and emphisise the rush & time running out,but, each shot is really long.I think maybe shorter cuts & quicker shots would have built up the tension and been more effective.Also is it in real time,are the minutes represented on the screen,actual real minutes?
ClaireRyder1987 5 years ago
Dull video with little creativity.
Could see what you were trying to do but at the end of the day it's just some bird running!
3Spoons 5 years ago
I liked the way in which the silence builds up impulsion for a mellow introduction into music. The use of Pendulum really accentuates the feel of the running and rushing with an erratic and sharp beat reflecting the visual and vocal energy of the scene. Nice job.
lizteral 5 years ago
catchy soundz keep up the good work, superstar (someday)
ortholithos 5 years ago