Hi cajonbongo, just to let you know I'm studying this. Went to the original -- magnificent, indeed. I think the last stanza is nearly finished. That "people will be able" will have to be fixed. I'd say "daybreak" rather than "daylight"... I'll have more to say but first have to figure it out a bit more. Good job though. You need some accompanying musicians doing tremolo sounds on Greek instruments and all to add a little "ambiente". back with you later, M.H.
Nice!
nsumx 2 years ago
Hi cajonbongo, just to let you know I'm studying this. Went to the original -- magnificent, indeed. I think the last stanza is nearly finished. That "people will be able" will have to be fixed. I'd say "daybreak" rather than "daylight"... I'll have more to say but first have to figure it out a bit more. Good job though. You need some accompanying musicians doing tremolo sounds on Greek instruments and all to add a little "ambiente". back with you later, M.H.
arpadelluna 2 years ago
Very good!
jasabet 3 years ago