Angelica - Nick Gisburne

[leorcc]

My hat of to you, excellent.

[Gisburne2000]

@leorcc You'll need that hat. It may rain. Unless it's a crown, in which case you may reign. Or not.

[Gisburne2000]

@2bsirius I recall not what meaning you see when you say you see the meaning you saw. Of what meaning do you speak when you speak of what I mean?

[2bsirius]

@Gisburne2000

Oops...

The comment I posted here was a mistake. Meant to add it to another video...So removed it...

I loved this though...

[rozeboosje]

But Angelica got away lightly, I say

as she died in the blink of an eye

when she could have been dying for more than a day

while a spider was sucking her dry ...

[Gisburne2000]

@rozeboosje I'm not recording it again! The main theme of all my poems is that someone ALWAYS dies, so I'm happy to welcome Angelica into that happy band of fatalities!

[rozeboosje]

@Gisburne2000 Ha! I loved it, that's for sure. And yes, I do think you improved on the original, which was pretty good already.

[Gisburne2000]

@rozeboosje It also just occured to me that you can't spell 'mother' with the word 'moth'. But I don't think I could have made that particular pun work!

[rozeboosje]

@Gisburne2000 I think you're right there ...

[Gisburne2000]

@hollytoo As I write more of them, it's starting to dawn on me that this may be something to look into, but I've always had a problem coming up with quantity as well as quality. Finding the ideas is the hard part - the poems, once begun, often tend to write themselves! Having said that, I'm in the middle of an 'epic', which is part of the reason I'm uploading older recordings, as I work. 'Angelica' distracted me a little because I had to record the whole thing again :o)

[jesse3040]

I really like it, nice job

[Gisburne2000]

@jesse3040 Thanks! More soon...ish!

[Gisburne2000]

Revised, extended and much more FINAL than the original!