@rozeboosje I'm not recording it again! The main theme of all my poems is that someone ALWAYS dies, so I'm happy to welcome Angelica into that happy band of fatalities!
@rozeboosje It also just occured to me that you can't spell 'mother' with the word 'moth'. But I don't think I could have made that particular pun work!
@hollytoo As I write more of them, it's starting to dawn on me that this may be something to look into, but I've always had a problem coming up with quantity as well as quality. Finding the ideas is the hard part - the poems, once begun, often tend to write themselves! Having said that, I'm in the middle of an 'epic', which is part of the reason I'm uploading older recordings, as I work. 'Angelica' distracted me a little because I had to record the whole thing again :o)
My hat of to you, excellent.
leorcc 1 year ago
@leorcc You'll need that hat. It may rain. Unless it's a crown, in which case you may reign. Or not.
Gisburne2000 1 year ago
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2bsirius 1 year ago
@2bsirius I recall not what meaning you see when you say you see the meaning you saw. Of what meaning do you speak when you speak of what I mean?
Gisburne2000 1 year ago
@Gisburne2000
Oops...
The comment I posted here was a mistake. Meant to add it to another video...So removed it...
I loved this though...
2bsirius 1 year ago
But Angelica got away lightly, I say
as she died in the blink of an eye
when she could have been dying for more than a day
while a spider was sucking her dry ...
rozeboosje 1 year ago
@rozeboosje I'm not recording it again! The main theme of all my poems is that someone ALWAYS dies, so I'm happy to welcome Angelica into that happy band of fatalities!
Gisburne2000 1 year ago
@Gisburne2000 Ha! I loved it, that's for sure. And yes, I do think you improved on the original, which was pretty good already.
rozeboosje 1 year ago
@rozeboosje It also just occured to me that you can't spell 'mother' with the word 'moth'. But I don't think I could have made that particular pun work!
Gisburne2000 1 year ago
@Gisburne2000 I think you're right there ...
rozeboosje 1 year ago
@hollytoo As I write more of them, it's starting to dawn on me that this may be something to look into, but I've always had a problem coming up with quantity as well as quality. Finding the ideas is the hard part - the poems, once begun, often tend to write themselves! Having said that, I'm in the middle of an 'epic', which is part of the reason I'm uploading older recordings, as I work. 'Angelica' distracted me a little because I had to record the whole thing again :o)
Gisburne2000 1 year ago
I really like it, nice job
jesse3040 1 year ago
@jesse3040 Thanks! More soon...ish!
Gisburne2000 1 year ago
Revised, extended and much more FINAL than the original!
Gisburne2000 1 year ago