Breathe Me - Lyrical Solo 09

[suziebabyy024]

SUCH a beautiful and emotional song... But I just felt no emotion in your dancing. You seemed so bored. Also, your movement should be as one.You just went from one dance step to another rather than melting it altogether.

[juicystar321]

you are a beautiful dancer, this song is very awkward and dificult. i am doing a solo to this song this year

[sparklepower999]

why the fuck is she wearing a turtle neck??

[Hollisterstripez]

Wait are your from Wisconsin?

[Axbell]

your legs look like they're not connected at the knee caps :L

[lizstayton]

@Axbell they're footless tights smart ass -_-

[kateandmakeup]

beautiful extension and pointed feet just no stage presents or emotional connection but beautiful job keepp it up <3

[tillybebeh09]

Great flex and stuff, but I think you need to work on your turn out!

[lubblyful]

Wheres the passion? Where's the emotion?

[94captianawesome]

your very good. just work on your emotion :)

[1theatrechick]

You obviously have a lot of talent, but it looks like a series of disconnected steps. Part of that is the choreography--lots of showiness with little chance to really work with the music. But part of it is just stiffness--I hope you've been able to work on emoting since this, because you clearly have a lot of potential! I think my favorite part is 1:05

[lyricaldance413]

nice technique!! now just work on throwing yourself into you dances!

good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[CristyLMF]

I just love it girl, you got it ;)

[krose9494]

good !

[XOXOlove145XOXO]

this is so beautiful great job!! :)

[mercythecall]

@contortionbaby1 I was just wondering, when you turn, are your arms supposed to be at your side and not in 1st position? This was absolutely amazing for your first year of competing! (:

[ktlynpos]

Technique was GREAT GREAT GREAT..just work on putting some soul, emotion, anything into the way you dance because it was kind of boring and straight forward. Not interesting to watch because it felt passionless.

[1961analucia]

Magnifico,a magia da dança é extraordinária . " Bravo"

[janae0607]

your extensions are beautiful! but like the person ahead of me said give me some emotions girl!!!! =)

[youarestupidxxx]

awesome weldone :)

[1lyf1direction]

i realise you have been told this meany of times but its not just your face that needs a tad work. your body needs to be looser not so harsh as your face does to. you are a dancer however you are missing the biggest part of danceing flexibility can only get you so far. the dance almost feels happy. good job i suggest you make a new dance to this song :)

[TheSpRiNkLeSmOnKeY]

Nice dance- only it's too 'pretty' and 'perfect' you need to put more feeling into your movements

[Powerballet98]

Dancing is NOT all abt flexibility, u r a gr8 dancer, my only problem was I didn't feel any soul n ur dancing.

[Madhy1965]

Mademoiselle, j'aime beaucoup votre choix de musique et celui que vous avez fait pour conclure votre prestation. Malgré quelques hésitations, votre évolution est agréable à regarder et rend hommage à l'artiste. Bravo.

[jlotze]

ur such a amazing dancer you could be so so so bigg someday just work on dancing from your soul dont just do the moves feel it.

[jazzyspazzrawr]

great job, I would work on your transitions and allowing your connection to the movement and music to shine through in your performance.

[MoiraElizabeth1997]

Your technique is flawless, but the choreography left me bored.

[smeralda1987]

inespressiva e ubriaca

[MrsJibJab]

Lyrical is definently your strong point! I watched your acro solo, and it wasnt as impressive as this one :) although, I think you should get some harder choreography next time. Push yourslef a little :) You have great potential and could pull off something a lot harder :)

[QTkiki99]

pretty

[buzz6989]

beautiful lines



[TheFamouzAngel]

out of all of that great choreography the only thing missin was "HEART" sweetie... just show us how much u really love doing what your so good at!! and then i'd be speechless!♥

[jmpanda19]

i absolutly love this song but i couldn't feel the emotion or sadness that came from the song as my dance teacher always says don't let the music speak louder than your moves sorry but i only noticed it becuase that's my dance teacher's favorite critque for me (: but good job!

[aleexxxbabyyy]

im sorry ive seen way better dances to this song :/

[tedvangarling]

You're movements aren't flowing into eachother, sometimes it just looks like: step, step, step, step,

and a very big tip is: that you have to keep moving, you never stand stil! even when you have a step where you stand still, just move something slowly so that every step is flowing through the dance choreography. Keep up the good work!

[twilightsupafan]

i think this is a good solo but i would have liked to see more facial expression but i think its very inspirational

[ninamcweezy]

if u wouldnt have told everyone where u "messed up" no one wouldve known...

[dancinfeevahh1695]

This isn't dancing, this is a dance. Dancing is all about emotion--not how high your leg can go.

[pinkus4ever]

@dancinfeevahh1695

true.

[lharri8]

you are a wonderful dancer. however you looked rushed and there wasnt a clear flow from one movement to the next. My only suggestion would be to SLOW down. the song is called Breathe Me... just breath and this solo will be great!

[DizzyDancingStar]

You can do some brilliant moves that interest your audience, but you need to work on your facial expression to communicate the emotion of the song and maximise your stage presence, well done though, you are a beautiful dancer.

[Tarad00dles]

(Part 2)

YOUR core as a Dancer is your strongest spot. Once you have that "fire" in your core shoot it out through your finger tips and toes, Send that Energy to the audience from your body. Facial expressions is one thing but shining energy through movement is a whole-nother ball game. TRY IT! I guarantee you will soar.

[Tarad00dles]

As a Dancers , yes we ALL have room of improvement, My ONLY correction is that when you dance ( Im sure you have grown as a dancer since this, but hopefully you learned/develop this skill) Make sure you are evenly dispersing the energy throughout your body.

[rycr92]

you have great flexibility! i would say work on your arms they seemed a little flimsy if thats a word..like just hanging out kind of sloppy not powerful enough but looks like you have a lot of potential!!:)

[livedreamdance87]

youre a beautiful dancer! your lines are amazing i dont know why everyone is being so negative and focusing on little mistakes when this dance still had a lot of potential and showed that you are obviously talented. dont let the haters get to you!

[HAPPYGRINCHINDEHOUSE]

She's an Okay dancer but to win a compitition with such a simple dance like what she did, she has to be presise and she has to get the right timing so the moves go with the music (which she didn't do), but you also have to feel the music. she did not do any of those things so i believe this was a good dance for a younger age group compitition :D pls do not hate on this but its the honest truth.

[skiippysrad]

This was a good dance, and beautiful song, but the choreography was too fast and there was no passion. work on that, and it could make wonders

[clairelikespie]

It was good! But I kinda felt like you were just going throught the motions. You said this song meant a lot to you, but I didn't see that passion through the dancing. But hey, you are far more flexible than me! Overall it was good (:

[anna93mm]

you're flexible, and your technique is really good ! Your leaps was amazing ! It's missing some passion here.. a little expresion, and emotion showing through your face and also through your moves would help :) also, in sometimes your hands were't following the move with the rest of the body!

good work :) keep it on!

[ShortieRoxxUrSoxx]

Good job!

[Stagefreak2004]

Choreo did hold up to the dancer.... With a little more strength and better choreography it would have been great....the dancer has great potential

[IvegotsomeapplLululu]

pretty face, hair and body, but dancing is not stable, control is too weak, lines are not good enough

[xoSharpMaz]

My goodness your flexible. I wish I could dance like that.

[ladyccutie4life]

youre leaps and extensions aree amaing. . . choreo was not the best but by this i can tell you have alot to offer.

[wickedpheonix1995]

You're a good dancer, I just don't think the choreography did you justice. You have a lot more potential then the choreography let you show.

Great dancing :D

[lovemeex0]

u did pretty good but u have to flow w. the music more and not be stiff

[Datingadvicelover]

I think you need to move into all your steps more smoothly i know this video is 2 years old just think about it while you do lyrical

[TheCharlottepaige]

@Contortionbaby1 This dance was amazing! Especially if this was your first year of competition! I've been in dance for 11 years and competition for four and i cant leap, turn, or kick like you! So what if you didnt do the song "justice" it was your first competition year and its hard to understand how to put emotions into the dance! Your doing great! Keep dancing, always!

[BCDNellie]

its not you. your great you see the potential in it and everything and yes your extensions are beautiful and you've got great leaps :) but the choreography is lacking the umph that you could bring. its like oh i'll through a turn there and a leap there and alot of runs.

[monstermash113]

which studio are you with? I compete at standing ovation all the time

[Contortionbaby1]

@monstermash113 i danced with Studio 2 Stage from FSJ. I now dance with Dance in Motion in Abbotsford.

[RoxyBabe012]

@Contortionbaby1 are yuou canadian

[XxMaybexMemoriesxX]

I wouldn't worry about extensions or lines. Your technique is beautiful. I would just work on some emotion. You barely drew me in.

[xandraeon]

beautiful. :) especially in the way you critique yourself. Humility is such a rare gem in dance.

[LiveLaughLove8489]

you're very graceful. Sometimes when people are so graceful like you they can't do super fun, high energy, powerful dances. But this is definitly your thing. It was phenomanal. Like with my ice skating, i'm very graceful, but i look not as strong in a fast paces fun song. I'm terrible at those. But you do a very nice job with those as well, and i expect you'll improve just fine and those will look just as effortless and wonderfully danced as this one.

[010brie]

Beautiful...I made a pointe dance off this song

[lucyellisisgod]

routine is too disjointed... you have beautiful jumps though :)

[Contortionbaby1]

this was my first year of competition and i've definately improved since then... i don't think anyone will ever understand how much this song ment to me and it's quite sad that i couldn't do this song justice through my dancing but i appreciate all the critisming... i agree with all of it.

thank you for watching

[MDSmileySmiley]

@Contortionbaby1 well your better than the dancer i just saw :]]

[CandyDandyProduction]

@Contortionbaby1 I thought you were really good haha

[itszedith]

too slow, to many pauses

[aliceinwonderlandxox]

i think your really good and you have real potential, but i agree with some other comments that your body is a little stiff at times. you need to loosen up your soulders and hips a bit i think. a few little details i noticed like your fingers dont awlays follow the lines of your arms but still relly good. timing needs work but you know that and its easily fixed :)

but overall i think your REALLY good! so much potential! keep dancing <3

[catgirl01]

there are a lot of stiff parts but your legs look amazing. and you get so much air in your leaps and jumps.

[yassnaturalmom]

you have amazing potential...just work more on your lines and extending more through your arms...placement makes all the difference and a relation and connection to the song will help also.......love to see young people with so much potential who only need a little bit of tweeking!

[raybanssxx]

this is amazing.

[TheDancerEm12]

Your lines are really good and so is your technique, work on having energy though and timing. (: good jobbb!

[danzr4life]

really good lines and technique..i would work on showing the emotions

[jazzyrock12]

That was really good!  : )

[xxlovexxxhatexx]

amazing i ♥ed it :)

its nice to see you dance where you have loads of room and can let yourself just flow

good job x x x x

[zaccorazio]

very well done