Thorn of the Rose (A Video Poem)

[369dc]

Whoa! how did i miss this video?!

[otherworldtrader1]

if this is a response to best songs ever than she wins downs down.

dam she's pretty.

dam she had beautiful boobs

dam iwish she hadn't lit a smopke; looks awful on her

dam she's gopt a nice ass

dam she's got a nice body

dam she's exy

[FireGoddess269]

Nice!

[diamondchip86]

hot

[tjhillgardner]

Like the poetry; like the images; like the music; but the poetry was not sympathetic to the flow of the music if you know what I mean. A for effort. Just a little constructive criticism all IMHO.

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much

rp

[MRmattconnell]

man i hate modern poetry, everyone thinks their so ... deep

[rpVerlaine]

we have to categorize the gene pool somehow

love

rp

p.s. the modern haiku does nor have a strict syllable count.

[mystikflight]

Nice mix you pen.

[paothan]

Teresa,

whwou

You ben so special

so beautyfull

....

kiss

to passion for your passion

inside

Pao

[rpVerlaine]

she is exactly like that

the best

rp

[Bhattman07]

Rimbaud weeps

[hdl13]

Nice.

[oiuoiu988]

wow, that is utterly weird.

[DBRielly]

I like yer beat-style poetry!

[piotrlysek]

pretty lady

[rpVerlaine]

and a good poem

[olirain]

Your rating : ''Why not ?''

[rpVerlaine]

yes

[jinn84hnnl]

lol, this is funny.

Good clip

[th0mez]

u look spanish actess lady i imagined a sultry accent too bad i wouldnt sleep with this poet he sound maniacal

[rpVerlaine]

rp is the sweetest guy i know

-theresa lee

[th0mez]

{then uve only tasted vineger compared to my sweet water by surprise this caught her to relize that his [vp]eyes were mirrors in disguise,wow u have nice thighs-me } if thats what u say bout everyone that writes u a poem then i hope u say the same bout me

[nahumthebest]

oh no!!!!!!!!! this girl is turning me into a pervert!!!!

5 stars

[joxar777]

I liked the poem. It would make a good rock ballad.

[GoatladyGertie]

that the girl from harpers globe?

[messybluesboy]

What a woman!

[jbjb9402]

Theresa Lee is such a magnificent, beautiful girl! She just looks so sensual and exotic. It would be hard for any man not to fall in love with her.

[rpVerlaine]

almost every man does

the best

rp

[cmwatchers]

fun to watch good enough.

[rpVerlaine]

theresa thanks you for the nice comments

the best

rp

[ThinkBachs]

You're beautiful with a great smile, thanks for sharing. Seeing this makes me wish I had moved to some big city just for the chance to meet someone like yourself...

[rpVerlaine]

i'll work on it

[nargisek]

nice u r bootifool but your voice is not nice at all

[nycrotaryrocket]

YOU LIVE IN nyc? Hit me up lol

[Galaor58]

Ratin' this video in a scale of one to "one hunner," I'd give it a "one hunner;" she is lovely, beautiful, sensual and sexy. I'd love to marry her.

[username1354982]

You're ruining art. Please stop.

[rpVerlaine]

ok but just 4 today

the best

rp

[feralchildren13]

this is cheesy and sappy and stupid.

and the girl is some cracked out hippie whose been trying all her life to make her big modeling debut in some JC Penny catalog, but instead posts lame videos of herself doing rediculous things to a hollow, meaningless clump of words that someone dare call poetry.

I

[rpVerlaine]

wrong on all counts but

there you are

-rp

[ruotze]

she da one,...yeah!

[rpVerlaine]

I've always thought so

the best

rp

[ruotze]

If God made anything better than a woman,..he kept it for himself!

[VOCIFERLOL]

beautyfull girl ♥♥♥♥♥

[rpVerlaine]

Yes she is

thanks

-rp

[ezseeker]

Great video! I would have liked to have seen the words. The presentation was great.

Easy

[blingb1tch]

I clicked on you by accident, but glad I did. Very nice.x

[cyberjyber]

5☆'s  :)

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much

rp

[stew702]

hot chick, but bad poem

[rpVerlaine]

sorry about that

but perhaps the other ones

may change your mind

the best

rp

[johnlebl]

Lovely young lady, as all your models are. I really loved the blues background and the slightly overdriven mic sound that you used went perfectly with it. Great poem.

[BlockChordsRed]

theresa reminds me of sone of robert crumb's

fantasy girls. (that's a compliment.)

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much for the kind words! Although i doubt theresa would indulge Crumb's fetish of giving him piggyback rides!

[hubberman1]

Thanks for responding-i'll look forward to it.

[rpVerlaine]

no problem and thanks for your interest

the best

rp

[hubberman1]

Can you please make another video-its been like a month since the last one.

[rpVerlaine]

A new video will be out in the next seven days if things go according to plan, thanks for asking.

the best

rp

[jayrperiod]

Wow im gonna ask a stupid question:

do you know her? and im guessing shes dead right nice poem though, if you spoke up, it would've been great

[rpVerlaine]

theresa is very much alive and we are very good friends but i made this video to use alot of

footage i shot of her last year. sorry about the sound but the lyrics are in my bulletins section and can be checked out there.

[jayrperiod]

i like this about you, you answer the comments made about your video, you should teach some of these video uploaders on here to do the same lol...i watched it again and added it to my fav.

all i gotta say is that either you have a migantic(massive+gigantic) crush on her or your just the casanova of the 21st century. Either way she's a gorgeous woman, she looks latin, is she? i love sexy latinas lol

[rpVerlaine]

I love both theresa and tella who star in the majority of my videos. Theresa is actually from jamaica and both her parents are white. I thank you for your support.

the best,

rp

p.s. I'm no casanova, lol i'm married!

[Billy44472]

She is very beautiful! I was going to ask her ethnic background, then I saw this question had been posted. You say both her parents are white; but....she looks so ethnic? White as in Lebanese descent, Italian, Greek? I LOVE ethnic beauties, and this is exactly why I'm probing. Everytime I see a ethnic beauty I always wonder about her background, can you appease my curiousity specifically?

[chemical118]

cool poem ,nice beautiful sexy hot girl!

[rpVerlaine]

I agree! THANKS FOR COMMENTING!

the best,

rp

[sleeeeep]

differant.

[rpVerlaine]

we try to be...

the best,

rp

[canajian]

HOLY MOLY!!

:-)

[rpVerlaine]

theresa lee is divine but holy...

the best,

rp

[Shamgelo]

She is wonderfull!!!

Good video eh, good work!

I invite to you watch my covers musical performance for me...!

[rpVerlaine]

theresa thanks you for the compliments

and i'll discover your covers

undercover

yours

rp

[ManMetWomen]

WOW! can i see more of you some time?

[rpVerlaine]

sure-look at the other videos!

[lamllemaussade]

I like the mood of the video... very sensual. But who is Therea Lee exactly? I've never heard of her...

[rpVerlaine]

Theresa Lee is a young actress who lives in ny and we work together whenever we can. This video is a tribute to her. She has also inspired several things i've written and her favorite drink is jamison whiskey.

[111noir2000]

i am interested in the clearly erotic/sensuality relationships in much of your work both photographically and poetic..mind you, i aint' hating it...but much of you work seems to follow the same theme....

also is that you on the bar of coyote ugly?

[rpVerlaine]

That is Theresa Lee on the top of coyote ugly

filmed last year before they banned all video there. Some of my work is more diverse from the topics on these videos but can't yet be explored

in the video format here. Maybe sometime in the future. We'll see.

[111noir2000]

I look forward to it...

[rpVerlaine]

Honors for this video (2)

#76 - Most Viewed (This Week) - Education - South Korea

#66 - Top Rated (This Week) - Education

[d00d00boy]

Fabulous :) Thanks so much for sharing!

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much!

[KennyWrites]

I rated it 5 stars!

Nice lyrics and pics!

[rpVerlaine]

great! thanks!

[ZillaII]

Good video great video ya I like it needs to be a little longer so I can finish

[rpVerlaine]

we will put out the extended directors cut soon! lol thanks!

[feralchildren13]

hahaha that's rich.

[rpVerlaine]

no...its cute!

[rpVerlaine]

eVERY NOW AND THEN YOU GET A TOTAL IDIOT WHOSE COMMENTS YOU LEAVE FOR AMUSEMENT ONLY.

SUCH IS THE CASE WITH THE COMMENT BELOW

-rp

[juanbb37]

I'm just f**king blown away. both images and poem are brilliant

[rpVerlaine]

kind of you to say

thanks

-rp

[persefonethegreat]

i like that!

[rpVerlaine]

Thanks so much!

[ilalfisto]

Got as far as 0:30.

Shit.

I'll try again.

[rpVerlaine]

you can make it I'm sure!

[ilalfisto]

Must watch this with my eyes closed.

Theresa is too damned sexy, and I keep hitting the pause button.

I'll try again...

[DsmB2007]

Sonic Rocks..Sonicflyingmachine sent me!

Great music..nice lyrics!

[rpVerlaine]

Sonic is my brother

his music

transcends...

[TACKICSON]

God what a fun looking women

[rpVerlaine]

fun is only one word i'd use...

[indesign14]

She looks hot.

[rpVerlaine]

hot does not begin to describe her

thanks

rp

[blahnousernames]

Very nice.

:)

[rpVerlaine]

thanks!

[encinitasmel]

Superb! Love the "feel" and flow of the words, music and vid... yeah it's great.

Mel.

[rpVerlaine]

Dear mel

it is for the discerning few

such as yourself

that i do it for

thanks

rp

[rpVerlaine]

Thank you so much

for the kind words

rp

[WebAnt]

I looked,listened,and liked. Very nice. Definitely a five. :-)

[rpVerlaine]

Thanks so much, thanks for taking the

time to watch and comment.

your friend

rp

[laneyjune62]

very nice!!!

Laney

[rpVerlaine]

I try and theresa makes it easy

thanks,

rp

[MissAshPYT]

I'm not sure what to say

[WebAnt]

Then it is best to say nothing,which is pretty much what you just did. Almost.:-P

[rpVerlaine]

I get that way sometimes too

thanks

rp

[TinyApe]

I enjoyed bro!...and thanks for the warning of the adult content....I almost looked...almost!...sounded great though!..lol...peace 5*

[rpVerlaine]

Bob dylan once autographed

a photo of himself

with this caption

"always keep one eye closed

when crossing the street."

yours

rp

[TeleShaman]

:snap: :snap: :snap: :snap: :snap:

[rpVerlaine]

lol

[rpVerlaine]

sounds dangerous!

-rp

[TeleShaman]

nah I was trying to simulate being in one of those smoke filled poetry cafés :D

in other words... I love it.

[jkvagabon]

love it! yeah very cool.

[rpVerlaine]

Thanks it took forever to do

so im glad you liked it

the best

-rp

[DrfeelgoodEH]

I just dig all your super videos

Eddie

[rpVerlaine]

Thanks

they are taking more and more time

so it is great to hear

positive things

the best

rp

[appeals2me]

Excellent! The poem, the photos, the music, the putting-it-all-together.

[villesangel69]

Really nice!

[Tadek59]

Amazing poem and amazing music!!!

Very nice video!!! Thanks Sonic and rpVerlaine! Very good job! 5*****

[fredthejunkman]

Theresa is hot...

[YVONNE241191]

Amazing!nice poem!!Thanks!

Great vid.!

[pili2255]

Very very nice!

[sfsmaus]

Sonic, great music, thanks. :-)

rp, another awesome composition. I also like the matching of video to audio in sections, especially when Theresa is laughing on the couch.

She is beautiful. She seems small and delicate, fragile and petite, but don't worry about the Rose for she is powerful for her stature and she can strike if you're not careful with the Thorn of the Rose.

5er.

[MariaDeLisboa]

Great Poem

Great photos

Great Musica my friend Sweet Machine

:-)

Kisses

And

Hugs

MariaLisboa

[Iminto60sstuff]

Some Great E Blues Just A Little Soft Hard To Hear!Cute Lady!Good Words

[mariecs1969]

awesome..thanks sonic! 5*****

[mindfulmusic78]

Awesome !

[yellyman]

That actress was hot. I loved her:)

[rpVerlaine]

so do i

thanks

rp

[bigeeezy]

poetry in motion 5 stars

[rpVerlaine]

very kind of you to say

thanks

rp

[doremi5002]

very nice, i like it, 5 stars, thanks sonic for sharing.

[tovasdad]

great poem

[rpVerlaine]

Thank you reid,

that means alot to me.

[luluisgoing]

cool Love it the song that is.

hahaha very good!

Your pal and friend Lulu

[rpVerlaine]

loved you in "To sir with love"

[luluisgoing]

hu? not me!

but thank you!

your pal Lulu

[sonicflyingmachine]

He's one of the great poets Lulu. A measure of his greatness is his obscurity. Rarely is it the great artists that are popular.

[sonicflyingmachine]

The great ones rarely win popularity contests.

[luluisgoing]

really i must be the other hahahha just joking!

yes i rally like his poem. very nice.

your pal and friend lulu

[MadBadVoodo]

Cool!

5/5

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much!

[maggieamaid]

romantic and sexy.

[rpVerlaine]

A hug for you my dear!

[sonicflyingmachine]

Excellent man!

[mettanc]

great sound sonic!!

[sonicflyingmachine]

Thanks man!

[rpVerlaine]

I agree!

[rpVerlaine]

Thank you my brother

too bad we can't have a drink

to celebrate!

[sonicflyingmachine]

That would be sweet. One day when we hit the right combination like Buk did many a time.