I thought it was very good for your first song written. I would have loved to have heard a contrast of melody during the chorus section though. I think it would really set the song off. You have a very nice voice. Check out some of my songs if you get a chance.
Not a country buff, so I don't know wagon wheel. Sounds good though. You could list the lyrics though in the info, its nice to follow along while listening.
I loved it, I'd sing along to it in the car
kkrazy17 11 months ago
I thought it was very good for your first song written. I would have loved to have heard a contrast of melody during the chorus section though. I think it would really set the song off. You have a very nice voice. Check out some of my songs if you get a chance.
PriestOfMelody 1 year ago
@PriestOfMelody YES I AGREE.... the chorus needs to be a little more... out there..... BUT i love the lyrics :) great job :)
321rayofsunshine123 1 year ago
Not a country buff, so I don't know wagon wheel. Sounds good though. You could list the lyrics though in the info, its nice to follow along while listening.
kamadakianpower 1 year ago
Wouldn't worry about it sounding like wagon wheel. You could make that case about tons of songs. Great job!
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humdinger77 1 year ago
thanks for checking it out!
TheAcole1027 1 year ago
Great song! You have a beautiful voice :) Thumbs up from me.
bremwhite 1 year ago