beautiful lyrics :D
you should sing louder though :D
jyjy!
janasiy 3 years ago
nice one mann!!!
kosol224 3 years ago
way to go dude
mathead123 3 years ago
kongster here:D nt bad ah
melvinfuzz 3 years ago
Hello! Leslie D here, the lyrics are beautiful; very meaningful..about the singing, I thought it was alright..mmmmm..maybe try singing with more expression in your voice next time..anyhows, keep it up and continue writing
pandabearzom 3 years ago
sia la.. i like the lyice sia.. (=
labten26 3 years ago
hahah soh! thanks for the guitar ah.
Thanks cheryl , cannot hear meh? loud enough what, its not mmmm hahah
Gothic91 3 years ago
soh here..that my guitar eh.. (=
i like it
not bad for your first original song
just sing a little louder next time (:
Cherylynn94 3 years ago
beautiful lyrics :D
you should sing louder though :D
jyjy!
janasiy 3 years ago
nice one mann!!!
kosol224 3 years ago
way to go dude
mathead123 3 years ago
kongster here:D nt bad ah
melvinfuzz 3 years ago
Hello! Leslie D here, the lyrics are beautiful; very meaningful..about the singing, I thought it was alright..mmmmm..maybe try singing with more expression in your voice next time..anyhows, keep it up and continue writing
pandabearzom 3 years ago
sia la.. i like the lyice sia.. (=
labten26 3 years ago
hahah soh! thanks for the guitar ah.
Thanks cheryl , cannot hear meh? loud enough what, its not mmmm hahah
Gothic91 3 years ago
soh here..that my guitar eh.. (=
labten26 3 years ago
i like it
not bad for your first original song
just sing a little louder next time (:
Cherylynn94 3 years ago