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[xupn02d5h]

i just wish she was further away from the camera so i could see the chords =]

[ngliza]

i like your voice!!

keep on singing!!

peace!!!

[HomemadeIndie]

Love it you got a new suscriber, please check out my first attempt on youtube and leave a comment i would apreciate that.

[Leondale]

very nice.

deep lyrics.

bugger the people saying negative things

I don't watch tv.

so you are my entertainment.

No.

I would not change the channel.

I'm off to see what else you have.

(found you on the Original Music database)

[PeaCeBoYs]

At least she has the nerve to go for what he loves...

[dwooley]

Thats an awesome original.Don't you dare get someone else to sing for you.

[Hatz94]

You people must be tone deaf but ok I also have the some guitar so right on!!!! lol nice lyrics but get somebody else to sing for u and stop looking up at the camera like that and get braces!

[gwhancock]

at least shes trying !, I just took a look at your chnl. and i wasnt surprised to see you dont have ANY videos putting it out there for us to critic !

and why not look into the camera ? is she supposed to stare at her feet ? ....

[Hatz94]

well i do have something it's just not on my channel asshole it's running away by hoobastank with two of my cousins i didn't really sing cuz i didn't know the words and it was at a family reunion and i haven't had a video camera that works smartass

[gwhancock]

lol,

wow, the 2 nicest things ive been called all week all wrapped up in one .... haha, no worries !

so .... for not knowing you have something thats not on our chnl .... im suppose to feel more stupid ??

thanks for the response though, made my day !

[fakeandbeautiful]

i like! did you write this song too? its really good

[EmoRoocker]

i dont understand how you can sing and play at the same time =[ HOW?!?!?!?!? =[

[gwhancock]

practice dude .... practice ... once you detach your hands from your voice it gets easier with every song you learn or write ... or thats my take on it anyways ....

[Sp00kSh0wBby]

You're guitar sounds super OFFFFFFF.

[DeeperThanSurface]

Nice guitar. (I have the exact same one)

I think your lyrics are great, absolutely makes you think about the song.

[joeshowallme]

i like it. But Rest With Me is still my favorite.

[ruotze]

Very nice,....(WOW)!

[spylor]

Pretty cool!

[dutchbonnet]

Re KanzlerM's remarks I had assumed most of your songs were lesbian lovesongs. Not that it matters. Love is love and a song is a song. This is a great one. I think it's become my favourite since I listened to the words properly. My other favourite is Rest With Me. Both superb.

[logana13]

Re: everyone (heh); i subscribe to the hippy theory of sexuality being a spectrum (straight-------gay), with me somewhere in the middle. I seem to wind up writing about women more cause i just find them more inspiring, i guess - more drama, lol!

[carlguage]

Wow!!!

[ruotze]

...that's what i say!

[Neotrific]

BEAUTIFUL MUSIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[joster917]

really beautiful! and inspiring.. love the lyrics! your awesome!

[logana13]

woo, 'inspiring' well i couldn't ask for more than that! thankyou :)

[acousticj]

Great Polly.

[logana13]

thanks a lot man, i see you've got strat, rokgod + Brad in yr faves too, glad you've found our lil slice of youtube, 's cool to be in such distinguished company :)

[MichelZBlues]

One of my favorites

[logana13]

thanks a lot man :)

[ParadiseEarth1]

Deep stuff, just wondering. By "my", are you referring to yourself Boss?

[logana13]

boss - lol! but yeah, i guess you could say it's autobiographical :)

[ParadiseEarth1]

Autobiographically and only in our minds. I know it's going to be one memorable YouTube experience; I'll probably will still get a good LOL many years from now... Barstool! LOL!

[KanzlerM]

Yeah, a woman writing love songs to "girls" is out of the ordinary.

I wondered at first if you had written it for a male vocalist to sing, or written it to yourself from your boyfriend or something like that.

[Kedoke]

Beautiful! You've captured something pretty elemental here. Bravo.

[logana13]

wow! it's gotta be the ultimate dream of anyone who writes to capture somthing, or at least it is for me, so really thankyou for saying so!

[markwordsworth]

Well I think you are an great songwriter and peformer. I like the way you pick new locations, new clothes, and new songs it makes watching you more entertaining. Send me a cd so I can say I watched her before she was famous.

[logana13]

lol, fraid i don't have a CD, just what's up here, 's just for fun - thanks though! and yeah, it makes it more fun varying it a lil, istothehalfabee is my idol for that, he's so inventive!

[wilfridwong]

I think I love this song of yours the most ... love the darkness of it.

Just some thought to share ... love the chorus, love the bridge ... love the beginning of the chorus. Just feel that the 2nd part of the chorus should soar instead. My humble thought.

[logana13]

wow, thanks a lot for such a considered comment, and the feedback! Really appreciate the input :) think i might need to borrow someone elses vocal chords to soar much more, lol, but mby i just need to get a bit more confident or something. it still feels weird thinking of myself as a songwriter, lol - Thanks a lot again. sorry, i ramble :p

[doesanyoneownthisid]

i watched 30seconds of it....i think i deserve a pat on the back for that alone...what do the words mean? whats the meaning of this song?

make sense

[Truant62]

this is good too !

[ishart]

I'm hoping to get a little free time over the weekend to record a few more. Take care. ;)

[ishart]

Great tune Polly! Well played.

[logana13]

thanks a lot ishart :) you got anything else in the pipeline?

[onecircle1]

Don't get me wrong, but you look at the camera too much. It makes you look like a sex slave or something. Sounds OK.

[logana13]

lol! sex slave! i normally try and make myself look into the camera, thinking that'll give more connection with the listener or something, but it's good to have the advice that i might b overdoing it

[BradCampbell63]

Hi..I enjoy the originals. If your not hitch hiking this summer(lol), you should get the mates to be roadies and take the time to play around the clubs this summer..

[logana13]

thanks for the encouragement :) i'd never have dreamed of it before, but everyone's been so cool on here i rly wanna check out some open mic nights this summer - if i pass my driving test, i'm totally gonna grab some ppl for a costal road trip of writing/playing/camping in random places in the UK :)

[OneNotePony]

Very nice! Please keep posting!

[logana13]

you're a fine one to talk, mr two-months-ago-onenotepony, lol! am working on a song atm, thanks for the interest! though i prob won't have time to write for a lil after that with exams and all... roll on summer! :D

[NaloMeli]

Thanks for sharing, I can relate to your song. Keep up the Great Work! :O) -Bee

[logana13]

woo! always awesome to think someone can relate, thankyou :)

[yohakusunshine]

Whats ur secret?? ur so good at your style of music wiritng and performance :))

[logana13]

d'oh, my reply to this apparantly didn't take :s to try again... wow, thanks for saying so! i have no idea how i write, lol, i just muck about with chords + lyrics till i get something that sounds right to me + says something i wanna say *shrug* but you don't need any advice! all i'd say to you would be to sing a lil louder, hehe :)

[hartmanpeter]

Jeepers!

[logana13]

erm... good jeepers or bad jeepers? lol.. or just plain jeepers?

[modernoracle]

Yep, this still ROCKS! Just checking.

[logana13]

LOL! thanks again man, you rule :)

[earthflowersoul]

I keep coming back to hear this amazing song. You've really captured something amazing here, Logana. The beat is catchy, the lyrics are raw and poetic, and I can feel the emotion in your voice. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us!

[logana13]

wow! thanks even more for the comment! really incredible to think it's made such an impresion! thanks again!

[dapf5]

very hypnotic indeed,cool performence once again

Go on!!!

[logana13]

cheers dapf5 :D

[HapriAndTheFateMaker]

Great song and wonderful lyrics. I love the emotion you seem to put into your performance, you're really into the song. 5 stars and congratulations!

[logana13]

thanks a lot, man :) I think I said to someone lse, i think it helps to record shortly after finishing wrting the song, when the actual feeling that inspired it'ss till around *shrug*

[aleishar]

Logana, your eyes are mesmerizing. :D Cool! Great song. :D

[logana13]

LMAO! yeah, i'm actually an evil hypnotist, it's all part of my cunning plan for world domniation :p

glad you liked it :)

[aleishar]

Oh well, that's what I thought.  Continue...

[spamjelly]

Wonderful...as always!!! Great way to start my day!! Did you use the Darek Damion Systmatic Songwriting System?...lol No realy very good!!!

[logana13]

rofl, thanks a lot spamjelly :) i did run the chords through my special Digital Darek Damion Systmatic Songwriting System, but then it played a song about spanners and frogs to me, so i figured i should try + work it out myself, lol

[spamjelly]

Good thinking... Darek's system is not for everyone... But you have proven over and over that you are way more talented then Darek and have no need for his system... in fact, he could learn alot from you!! But I would love to hear you cover that spanners and frog song...lol

[ismetaga]

hey i am a lazy bass player but your songs make me play along with you. maybe one day I can add those bass lines to your videos.. which means more and more info on video editing programs.. anyway your work is worth these. I'll try

[logana13]

wow, that's so cool, that you jam along, i can just picture it, heh :) and thanks EVER so much for the offer, but i'm gonna leave all my vids as just me + my guitar, just makes life a lot simpler that way :)

[chewwinggum]

very good song again! So deep! You really are talented! What are you still doing on youtube! You should be on air!

[logana13]

rofl, hardly! This is a great distraction for the holidays, but i have a degree to concentrate on! thanks a lot though, chewy :D

[paul21turbo]

that was really nice, beautiful

[logana13]

cheers paul, happy you liked it :)

[KennyWrites]

This one has a lot going on. It's more complex than the others. I think it's a good addition to your collection!

[logana13]

thanks a lot Kenny, glad you approve :)

[IRTheBorg]

Awesome! Betsy aptly described it - PERFECT! And an MVP video for sure! ~Larry

[logana13]

aw, yr both WAY too generous, man! Thanks once again for all your help, Larry, half my subs + thus half my confidence + probably half my songs are down to you, hehe

[IRTheBorg]

:-)

[rokgod]

your great logana,I like the way you work the camera girl, I myself and most of us here on youtube,can't help but stare at the moniter,through out our vids, again great,I would love for you sing to one of my songs

[logana13]

heh, i don't use a webcam, which helps :) it's a digital camcorder with a lil viewfinder - i find it kinda easy to avoid looking @ that, heh, i don't wanna know what i look like, just wanna think about the song, lol. And wow, SO flatternig to think you'd like me to cover one of yours! hard to think of one i could get away with though, you've got some pretty guitar driven stuff + my skills are limited @ best

[curt344]

This melody is so infectious. It continues to loop in my head happily as I wait out this text comment "time out" (which, if you're reading this, has obviously ended).

Another winner, Polly. And the emotion here is nice and raw. Love it!

[logana13]

curt - ha! i got stuck in someone's head! i feel like i've completed my mission on earth, lol. Thanks a lot for waiting for youtube to let you comment, and being so nice in it :)

[bentonio07]

Logana, your intense performances always impress me. Really beautiful!

[logana13]

thanks so much bentonio :) i guess it's cause i always record on the day or day after i finish the song so the feeling's all still kinda there @ the time *shrug*

[patman2112]

Beautiful.

[logana13]

thanks a lot guys :) looking foreward to your next one, whenever that may be :)

[loiresquall]

Fantastical =) My favourite yet, in fact.

[logana13]

(i bribed him with bacon to say that)

[betz28]

wondeful...awesome....you are perfect!!

[logana13]

lmao - hardly! But thankyou SO much for saying so! spekaing of wonderful, awesome + perfect, i think yr vocal chords have been resting a lil too long, missy, hehe :p

[Ottawarocket]

Polly I must admit this song took me aback. It's written with such emotion and honesty. It's a beautiful song and I really admire you for having the courage to post it. Don't ever stop writing your songs my friend, They are a spot of light in a dark world.

Rocket

[logana13]

Thankyou SO much, Rocket! like i said, if it weren't for other youtubers i probably wouldn't have even written this, let alone posted it, there are some awesome ppl on here, with way more courage than me in the honesty of what they post. this whole community's a spot of light, and you're certainly no exception, thanks again!

[secretstrummer]

This is fantastic. A grower. I think my favourite song of yours - and this is my third view! You can't be far off a CD's worth now.

[logana13]

Wow, considering how nice you've been about the others, that's REALLY nice of you to say! thanks :) CD be damned, you can all make it into a playlist if you really want, lol!

[tuskaiae]

Sounds great, Your an awesome songwriter...very cool :-)

[logana13]

thanks a lot tuskaiae - if only i had your voice to sing them with! :)

[Sleifen]

lovely tune...exelent perfomance!

[logana13]

cheers Sleifen :) I practically have a panic attack when i see a cam, lol, glad to know it turns out OK once i'm into the music :)

[lyricguy1984]

Love this song

[logana13]

thanks a lot lyricguy, know you love yr music, so that's very cool :)

[modernoracle]

Back to say Wooooooo Hooooooo! Love it Polly! You got deep on this one. To the bone, man. Lots of emotion. Intense! Going to the favs!

[logana13]

well also woohoo that you'd think so much of it, thanks so much, man, you've been utterly awesome ever since i got here :)

[xmrbojanglesx]

You go girl, great song.

[logana13]

thanks a lot mrbojangles :)

[erzicm]

Great!

[logana13]

hvala erzicm :)

[TheSpooneyOne]

Whoa whoa hold the phone I think we got another star on the rise here.

[logana13]

Lol, i'm not sure about that Spooney, but thanks a lot anyway dude! :)

[heidi1970]

Amazing compilation.

[logana13]

thanks a lot heidi - you're definately not allowed to pull yours now i've dared to put this up, lol :) b cool if you'd post more, in fact.. do you ever write songs?

[strat2caster]

i love the feel of this tune!

[logana13]

thanks a lot, s2c :D

[Bocist]

Awesome like always :)

[logana13]

cheers Bocist :)

[modernoracle]

Dare ON! That was amazing Polly. Very much dig it. I'm so used to seeing you smiling and happy in your songs you blindsided me with this turn of emotion and It is truely fantastic. You litterally affected me. Being real is the only way to write great music and you achieved it here. No fear! Rock on! Love IT! 5/5

[logana13]

Thanks so much Greg, your comments always mean a lot, but this one was especially awesome - even my friend got a lil confused by this one, kinda 'woah, you have feelings, dude, who knew?' lol! Seriously yay and thanks though, glad i took the plunge now! :)