The cgi does not make up for the vague storyline and poor execution of what you seem to be trying to convey in a couple of scenes, not to mention the audio isn't so clear.
so the soldiers destroy the planet so the ghost cant harness the energy when the ghost destroys the planet so if the soldiers destroy it he cant harness but if the ghost destroys it he can harness it ?
The end could have been changed if i directed this is what would have happened. The main charcther has a the bomb and sets it. He leaves the building to find something walks and sees the pelican landing, he tells the guy to leave. The guy takes his pistol and says: "general (or whatever) didn't say I could leave you." The main charcther refuses to get on ship the times is at 0:29.
The other guy says: "Sorry about this." and shoots the main guy, they get off.
Is there something deeper to this video? Sanders Unknown helmet, the mysterious life form is making sense but the humans don't get it. Do the viewers not get it? Haha?
Yep, MS is giving out a bunch of Xbox Kinects but not for much longer, you probably found out about it on their Facebook fanpage. Since your lazy, this goes to their reg website.
93。org/ca
Will be uploading a video of us messing around with it on Saturday
@awsomebannanapie espion? i think you mean epsilon, and thats more that just from red vs blue dude, its in the books, and im pretty sure theres actually a solar system called epsilon, and its also in greek alphabet i think
Isn't the first part of the movie kinda like the story from Phantasy Star Online: Episode 1. I may be completely off, but it seems like the general setting is the same and you named the ship the same thing as in PSO. All in all it was a great job!
There are machinamas made by kids better than this. This was rubbish. There was no combat or battles at all apart from the flashback scene at the start which was pointless putting in, it doesnt say what the hell happened to the crew, the laser beam at the start completly missed the ship which makes me wonder how on earth it broke in pieces, and it was just cheesy over all.
@OfficialFearClan It's a hell of alot better than the 500000 'HALOL LOL EP1C M0NT4G3' 's, so quit your bitching. He used a special effect, and it isn't easy animating all this. Hell, you try and make a better one then.
Very true AKAQJ but he did a bang up job with the editing. This is my first time seeing CGI so maybe someone else could do better. I would love to know where you get CGI software, it looks fun :)
the bomb probably only weighs 20, buddy. but it is a HAVOK tactical nuke, the closest thing to a nuclear grenade the UNSC has. but that coupled with a starship fusion engine going up could crack a planet. look at what happened to the original halo
This video was pretty cool, but I think it was a bit sketchy. If this was expanded upon and made into a full series or movie to tell what looks to be an in depth storyline, it would be much better.
alright....so i forced myself to finish it after the gravemind imposter thing had his orgasm...
...and then got to the part where a single, probably 50 pound bomb (that happened to be randomly yet conveniently lying in the sand near the place that needed destroyed) went off and destroyed an entire fucking planet... as if it were a death star instead of a firecracker...
Its kind of assumed that the planet blew up because of the "gravemind imposter thing" 's power amalgamating with the power of the bomb, the bomb only blew him up, but he unleashed his power and it blew up the planet, not that puny little bomb.
this was beyond lame. its as if the creator was so fixed upon adding cgi effects that he forgot to have a good plot, or interesting characters. and the voice acting is horrid. i had to turn it off when the ghost/ai (whatever the hell it was) mark V character opened his mouth.
I must say I was disappointed, the idea of a CGI? Machinima was a fantastic idea. I just wish the story was more thought out. Sure, it had great special effects, great fight scenes and great CGI. But the only reason you have that is to improve a story. But if the story isn't compelling...
Okay, it was great and I appreciate the effort but...
There were a lot of little things. 4:40, overdramatic, the ending was rushed, etc.
I got the feeling that you were just trying too hard. I have always been against the extensive use of CGI in a machinima. My reason: just make an animated short. Less copyright issues, more consistencies, etc.
Although I must say if you remade it with a fleshed out story and made some of these changes it would be an instant favorite for many YouTube users...
Ending was too fast. It was less dramatic and more "hurry it up we ran out of time." I suggest you finish your ending and then update this video with it.
ive just noticed a trend in the comments and to be honest there right the story was shitty the voice actors where crappy all i can say was good was the use of the cgi but its nothing without a decent plot
am i right to say that this has great potential but ultimatly was a big epic fail
wait..... so to stop a derelict space ship from destroying a planet, they use a bomb and destroy the planet anyway?
I think your plot elements, voice acting and script writing lacked alot.
Consider this constructive criticism. On your next attmpt, write a story that makes sence, makes a script that doesnt seem forced, and stop the voice actors from over acting. Overacting is one of the plagues of serious machinima.
@AKAOJ they destroyed the planet themselves to prevent that creepy pedo overlord guy from gaining the power of its desruction at his hands to take over the galaxy/universe
GO THOMAS! < I laughed my ass off when he said that. XD Overall the video was very disappointing. The story didn't make any sense, the sound quality was shitty and it was just hard to follow in general. The CGI was "ok" but it didn't compensate for the lack of story. I think if you removed all the CGI and replaced it for better story, I honestly would have probably enjoyed it a lot more. The artificial HUD, the elite fight scene and the ODSTs at the very beginning where the only cool things.
ummm, what can I say? Voice acting was bad, scripting was terrible, and the plot was impossible to follow. I don't understand why people feel the need to condense a story into just one youtube short. Anyways, I still can't decide which line was my favorite. Either "We believe something happened down there to cause this to happen" or "Whatever happened here happened because of something hidden here." Oh, and please get a Pop Guard for your microphone if you plan to do future projects.
@TheSharkeyyy No, just no. Sure the Camera angles and effects were pretty, but the script and characters were God awful. How can you argue that it wasn't completely cheesy? Watch the part where the son of the Captain of Starfell is explaining the mission (the guy in the Recon) and finishes the scene by saying some cheesy line about how he's finally going to find out what happened to his Dad in a completely unrealistic voice, who would honestly say that? Better writers and actors and its good
Ok what the hell was this about? how did the peaple on starfell die? why did it take 50 years for them to find it? and last question.....why the hell was this called starfell if the ship was barly apart of the story????? this should not be 15 mins. its not enought time!!! it should have bin a multi part or a series about the adventures of starfell.......4/5 for amazing effects....
If you would LISTEN to the video you would be able to answer ALL those questions. Just LISTEN. 5/5 firedragon04. Awesome, past my expectations. And just plain INSANITY!
I DID LISTEN all i got was that the ship was attacked i didnt hear why they died! and it didnt really say y the guy was taken over and even WHAT took him over!! i would love it if he made it a 2 part so he could explain it better!
I didn't like it. The trailer looked good but the real thing was boring. And the voices weren't exactly great either. Liked your idea but the final product was pulled off very badly.
I don't see how all you people can be saying that the voice acting sucked. Are we watching the same video? Because I thought the voice acting was perfect compared to other voice acting I have seen in other videos.
This was a great and entertaining video to watch. Thanks for making it.
I'm going to go with four stars. The effect integration and angles were excellent but I felt like everything after 10:00 was very rushed and dragged the excellent intro down. Here's hoping that there will be more in this style but a little more refined.
Wow, I thought it was great, everybody that says its horrible and the voice acting sucks, what do you think is good, Jon CJG! Come on, you have to admit when you see a good machinima, and this is a good machinima.
@StressW Edgeworks Entertainment. This was cheesy, horrible voice acting and the CGI wasn't even that amazing. It wasn't horrible, but it wasn't anything great either.
yes but they negate each other in a way that turns every miligram of mass into energy. A hundred percent efficiant explosion. To give you a comparrisen an atomic bomb is only about 20% efficiant in the mass to power ratio. Thats the most powe
Why does this not have more views?
Midnightswordsclan 1 month ago
Man, that stupid english voice acting is terrible!
lXAeR0SpAc3Xl 7 months ago
stop hating on machimima sher its not the same as red vs blue but still
700yapph 7 months ago
how did u do ur cgi?
greekpussy 8 months ago
Red Vs Blue CGI is better
moneymanaidanrobox 8 months ago
@moneymanaidanrobox
That's because Bungie actually GAVE Rooster Teeth the Halo 3 engine...
Salroah7 3 months ago
GO THOMAS! XD
rafelin6707 8 months ago
CGI done by a 16 year old
Story done by a 6 year old
:/
Lobotomick 9 months ago
@Lobotomick your comment writen by a 3 year old
JOHN25711 6 months ago
The UNSC builds a space ship out of rocks. That works!
ColoradoSlaughter 9 months ago
Space doesn't work that way...
guildmasteraq 9 months ago
turn on the captions and read what it says from 10:09 to 11:49 rofl
J3WfroN1NjA21 10 months ago
halo 4 should be like that 1st person style its heaps kool cuz thats how spartans view they just ddnt put it in the game
JJO117 1 year ago
@JJO117 What?
RAKK9595 1 year ago
The cgi does not make up for the vague storyline and poor execution of what you seem to be trying to convey in a couple of scenes, not to mention the audio isn't so clear.
SupremeCommander360 1 year ago
very cool but i have to say that their should be a sequal or prequal to this
night4466 1 year ago
One of those songs sounds like mine.
CSPGotoPrime 1 year ago
sweet
topsidemomfilms 1 year ago
OMG THIS IS YOUR 117TH UPLOAD ^_^
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grock9000f 1 year ago
if yal hate it so much dont watch you fucking retarts
grock9000f 1 year ago
@grock9000f you cannot even spell "Retards"?
ONLYUSEmeVAG 10 months ago
@ONLYUSEmeVAG seriousy?
replying to 4 month old comment
grock9000f 10 months ago
thumbs up if you got reach ad cause i did
SpeedyAvatar 1 year ago
im sory worst sound quality ever!
carpionw 1 year ago
so the soldiers destroy the planet so the ghost cant harness the energy when the ghost destroys the planet so if the soldiers destroy it he cant harness but if the ghost destroys it he can harness it ?
zJOIEz 1 year ago
HOMOSEXUAL,
needs more story
XxQmanxXP2B 1 year ago
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sicandmorfacbani 1 year ago
Wait am i the only one who understood the plotline even slightly?
MarioBros125253v1337 1 year ago
When a peli is up in space, the back closes
theSpartan187 1 year ago
awsum nidz moar views
iLikePiePlox 1 year ago
i liked the magical helmet change there
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patrickgoz2 1 year ago
that's the kind of machinima I want :D
DainCorporation 1 year ago
If he had thought of a better story line, it would have been great.
rhensley35 1 year ago
What is this I don't even.
slyfox453 1 year ago 3
what CGI program
SuperUnit15 1 year ago
tori kamal??
MrZombiekiller23 1 year ago
"That doesn't seem physically possible!"
Haha Red Vs. Blue...
IAmSatoshi 1 year ago
They aren't blowing up the planet to save the planet.
The planets gonna blow up, they just alter time an explosion to stop the planet from giving the being incredible power or something.
MacGyverinSpace 1 year ago
.... I could make a better one..
The end could have been changed if i directed this is what would have happened. The main charcther has a the bomb and sets it. He leaves the building to find something walks and sees the pelican landing, he tells the guy to leave. The guy takes his pistol and says: "general (or whatever) didn't say I could leave you." The main charcther refuses to get on ship the times is at 0:29.
The other guy says: "Sorry about this." and shoots the main guy, they get off.
Gentleplayerhalo 1 year ago
I liked the parts when it was first-person perspective.
GaeilgeMachinima 1 year ago
Is there something deeper to this video? Sanders Unknown helmet, the mysterious life form is making sense but the humans don't get it. Do the viewers not get it? Haha?
MacGyverinSpace 1 year ago
What kind of program did you use to make this?
cubix67 1 year ago
cool! :D
MaxGrindleTV 1 year ago
cgi amazing plot terrible
SuperHippyHater 1 year ago 14
this is shit.
PyromaniaXD 1 year ago
this type of shit is the reason i only subscribe to respawn
florence99x 1 year ago
captain sanders, general sanders... where's the colonel
deadman903 1 year ago
I love Halo fanfiction. It's even better with such terrific animation and voice acting.
Armacalypse 1 year ago
this isn't fucking aliens vs predator
IMDANUKE 1 year ago
perfect video i have no suggestions that could make this better this video is just badass
tymaxie2 1 year ago
Anyone else notice the :I face at 5:05?
MrFugums 1 year ago
i actually quite liked it... although the voice acting was fairly uninspiring
TheJhaggis 1 year ago
00:01 skip ad
Dougary2112 1 year ago
A bomb the size of a football can destroy an entire planet?
sneakylittlemonkey 1 year ago
this has been poorly writen
controllingthemedia 1 year ago
how did you get the odst's?
dudeface011 1 year ago
The visor thing is a pretty cool gimmick.
DiNProphecyXYZ 1 year ago
WHAT THE FUCK I HATE COMMERCIALS
sgtscottgalm 1 year ago
what program is use to make the alsome advisor effect
gunnerjaxx 1 year ago
@edwina697
Yep, MS is giving out a bunch of Xbox Kinects but not for much longer, you probably found out about it on their Facebook fanpage. Since your lazy, this goes to their reg website.
93。org/ca
Will be uploading a video of us messing around with it on Saturday
ElitePwner420 1 year ago
@awsomebannanapie espion? i think you mean epsilon, and thats more that just from red vs blue dude, its in the books, and im pretty sure theres actually a solar system called epsilon, and its also in greek alphabet i think
aperson30 1 year ago
General Sanders... wears an unknown helmet. lol
x82ndODSTx 1 year ago
there weren't supposed to be any SPARTANS yet in 2501.
GunlessSnake 1 year ago
@awsomebannanapie Actually its a word from the greek dictionary, like Beta, Alpha and all those. Rooster Teeth just used it to their advantage.
DarthBlader12 1 year ago
star trek
NoobSnoopy 1 year ago
LoL my last name is elliott 0_________o
acapulco8762 1 year ago
so 2 seconds = 1hour of action we never see?
mmmhmmmm.....
Theblargen 1 year ago
0:01 to skip ads. Thumbs up so everybody can feel the lack of advertisments!
theninjaofhell 1 year ago 34
Awesome :) i don't think you realise how good this is considering made by a kid in his bedroom. Keep it up FireDragon :)
wardex91 1 year ago
Wait, the pelican is supposed to be sealed while in space right?
Patamgdn 1 year ago
@Patamgdn it wasn't in halo 1
gomermarbob 1 year ago
Man, that FireDragon04 dork's voice is the worst without doubt
phonnix 1 year ago
Star fail!
ciarancarrick 1 year ago
The coolest thing I saw was that the ODST's actually had accurate visors
TheCaboose7777 1 year ago
i like the special effects but the plot was just like wtf. It didnt really have a flow too it.
Mattaboogum 1 year ago
Wouldn't have just been easier to leave the ship crash?
TheSpartanCannon 1 year ago
Sanders? i mean a SpaceBalls reference?
MrSolathan 1 year ago
EPIC. Absolutely epic.
PainTrane01 1 year ago
Isn't the first part of the movie kinda like the story from Phantasy Star Online: Episode 1. I may be completely off, but it seems like the general setting is the same and you named the ship the same thing as in PSO. All in all it was a great job!
KetalMetal 1 year ago
FUCKING BEAUTIFUL
shmendri 1 year ago
Try making episodes of space battles from the halo books please
TrainsimProductions 1 year ago
There are machinamas made by kids better than this. This was rubbish. There was no combat or battles at all apart from the flashback scene at the start which was pointless putting in, it doesnt say what the hell happened to the crew, the laser beam at the start completly missed the ship which makes me wonder how on earth it broke in pieces, and it was just cheesy over all.
OfficialFearClan 1 year ago
@OfficialFearClan It's a hell of alot better than the 500000 'HALOL LOL EP1C M0NT4G3' 's, so quit your bitching. He used a special effect, and it isn't easy animating all this. Hell, you try and make a better one then.
44Missingno 1 year ago
That bomb was like a nuke...but...like...a halo version
Soap915 1 year ago
It's Caboose in disguise!
JohnColumbusTV 1 year ago
Very true AKAQJ but he did a bang up job with the editing. This is my first time seeing CGI so maybe someone else could do better. I would love to know where you get CGI software, it looks fun :)
shotsniper009 1 year ago
how did they do the blue visor and the face thingy
standerhallstudios 1 year ago
not nearly as good as i expected
could of been done so well as a series but a 15 min short? no
olzharrow 2 years ago
the bomb probably only weighs 20, buddy. but it is a HAVOK tactical nuke, the closest thing to a nuclear grenade the UNSC has. but that coupled with a starship fusion engine going up could crack a planet. look at what happened to the original halo
FFJunkie09 2 years ago
That was... terrible... I usually like this guy's work, but this just wasn't good... at all...
OmegaHunter24 2 years ago
awsome animations but the plot sucked
Dsykora87 2 years ago
This video was pretty cool, but I think it was a bit sketchy. If this was expanded upon and made into a full series or movie to tell what looks to be an in depth storyline, it would be much better.
GladiusTheFilmGuy 2 years ago
awesome animation.
rottentomato11 2 years ago
alright....so i forced myself to finish it after the gravemind imposter thing had his orgasm...
...and then got to the part where a single, probably 50 pound bomb (that happened to be randomly yet conveniently lying in the sand near the place that needed destroyed) went off and destroyed an entire fucking planet... as if it were a death star instead of a firecracker...
garbage
c4liber 2 years ago
Its kind of assumed that the planet blew up because of the "gravemind imposter thing" 's power amalgamating with the power of the bomb, the bomb only blew him up, but he unleashed his power and it blew up the planet, not that puny little bomb.
FireDragon04 2 years ago
this was beyond lame. its as if the creator was so fixed upon adding cgi effects that he forgot to have a good plot, or interesting characters. and the voice acting is horrid. i had to turn it off when the ghost/ai (whatever the hell it was) mark V character opened his mouth.
c4liber 2 years ago
I must say I was disappointed, the idea of a CGI? Machinima was a fantastic idea. I just wish the story was more thought out. Sure, it had great special effects, great fight scenes and great CGI. But the only reason you have that is to improve a story. But if the story isn't compelling...
ThoseWeirdNerdKids 2 years ago
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amazing,excellent flick if youre bored just got it from gamesblow. com
yamintzgad45 2 years ago
Good CGI. Shit Machinima.
USDelta144 2 years ago
lancashire catain LOL XD
alice0304 2 years ago
a small bomb blow up a palnet?
RsYtHoRs 2 years ago
Awesome job there.
91nintendo 2 years ago
Star Fail
fordyboy54 2 years ago
thats all I ask.
Alpha1608 2 years ago
sequel!!!!!
Alpha1608 2 years ago
hahahahaha. the face!!!
jnguyen0749 2 years ago
I feel you rushed the story and didn't allow the characters to develop, it was almost as if it were a trailer.
Glufster 2 years ago
sounds like some jak and daxter crap put into a halo game
(b4 the forerunners there was the percursors)
kooler186 2 years ago
Okay, it was great and I appreciate the effort but...
There were a lot of little things. 4:40, overdramatic, the ending was rushed, etc.
I got the feeling that you were just trying too hard. I have always been against the extensive use of CGI in a machinima. My reason: just make an animated short. Less copyright issues, more consistencies, etc.
Although I must say if you remade it with a fleshed out story and made some of these changes it would be an instant favorite for many YouTube users...
SanctusDeAnteurbani 2 years ago
Ending was too fast. It was less dramatic and more "hurry it up we ran out of time." I suggest you finish your ending and then update this video with it.
LordDoom10 2 years ago
04:33 fail!!!
BerserkerDragon95 2 years ago
Great job gentlemen
TheHomeofTheFree 2 years ago
loved it
make more
E1Dumbo 2 years ago
really wish i didn't watch this.
GingabooG23 2 years ago
Rofl 4:40 epic faIl
MattRockin 2 years ago 15
? I thought the face was cool :<
Lman94 2 years ago
@MattRockin anybody know what the hell ROFL means .ive been seein it alot lately.
panthero77 2 years ago
ROFL
Rolling on floor laughing
stok5445 2 years ago
@MattRockin dude dude look at 8:00 its the halo combat evolved pelican
gomermarbob 1 year ago
to all u haters out there i thought they did a good job and put a lot of effort into it. agreed the was not great but lets see u do better!!
geo00444 2 years ago
i thought it was good but the bit at the beggining was hard to follow and the ending was crap
ryanhall946 2 years ago
ive just noticed a trend in the comments and to be honest there right the story was shitty the voice actors where crappy all i can say was good was the use of the cgi but its nothing without a decent plot
am i right to say that this has great potential but ultimatly was a big epic fail
fordyboy54 2 years ago
im sorry this could have been done way better than it was with the techniques they where using
fordyboy54 2 years ago
wait..... so to stop a derelict space ship from destroying a planet, they use a bomb and destroy the planet anyway?
I think your plot elements, voice acting and script writing lacked alot.
Consider this constructive criticism. On your next attmpt, write a story that makes sence, makes a script that doesnt seem forced, and stop the voice actors from over acting. Overacting is one of the plagues of serious machinima.
AKAOJ 2 years ago 18
@AKAOJ sense*
averageace 2 years ago
@AKAOJ they destroyed the planet themselves to prevent that creepy pedo overlord guy from gaining the power of its desruction at his hands to take over the galaxy/universe
CowboyGruntVideos 2 years ago
@AKAOJ on your next comment learn to spell.......
crazymidget96 1 year ago
@AKAOJ No offense, next time try to write a critique that doesn't have spelling errors...
HerrStutterNuts 1 year ago
@AKAOJ No offense, next time try to write a critique that doesn't have spelling errors...
HerrStutterNuts 1 year ago
will there be more like this?
FAKEDAY 2 years ago
GO THOMAS! < I laughed my ass off when he said that. XD Overall the video was very disappointing. The story didn't make any sense, the sound quality was shitty and it was just hard to follow in general. The CGI was "ok" but it didn't compensate for the lack of story. I think if you removed all the CGI and replaced it for better story, I honestly would have probably enjoyed it a lot more. The artificial HUD, the elite fight scene and the ODSTs at the very beginning where the only cool things.
KeybladeWeildingDrgn 2 years ago
not bad i like it
Subverttech4 2 years ago
ummm, what can I say? Voice acting was bad, scripting was terrible, and the plot was impossible to follow. I don't understand why people feel the need to condense a story into just one youtube short. Anyways, I still can't decide which line was my favorite. Either "We believe something happened down there to cause this to happen" or "Whatever happened here happened because of something hidden here." Oh, and please get a Pop Guard for your microphone if you plan to do future projects.
KITTYKANN0N 2 years ago 2
Huge let down :( The story sucked and the artificial HUD was really annoying.
Jekotia1 2 years ago
yeah I think no one will ever make something like the codex or red vs blue those two where awsome!
ICANanimations 2 years ago
Is this a series. Anyways If there's gonna be a next one there's always room for improvements.
blackknightkanos 2 years ago
it wasnt good. The voicing and the story just didnt make since. The Trailer is better than the episode.
MeAndrewG 2 years ago
reminiscent of most of Today's movies-amazing effects, bad story.
Chronicler177 2 years ago
story was... ight
BananaBean03 2 years ago
@TheSharkeyyy No, just no. Sure the Camera angles and effects were pretty, but the script and characters were God awful. How can you argue that it wasn't completely cheesy? Watch the part where the son of the Captain of Starfell is explaining the mission (the guy in the Recon) and finishes the scene by saying some cheesy line about how he's finally going to find out what happened to his Dad in a completely unrealistic voice, who would honestly say that? Better writers and actors and its good
Schmittler5000 2 years ago
Ok what the hell was this about? how did the peaple on starfell die? why did it take 50 years for them to find it? and last question.....why the hell was this called starfell if the ship was barly apart of the story????? this should not be 15 mins. its not enought time!!! it should have bin a multi part or a series about the adventures of starfell.......4/5 for amazing effects....
GAGFEST2000 2 years ago
If you would LISTEN to the video you would be able to answer ALL those questions. Just LISTEN. 5/5 firedragon04. Awesome, past my expectations. And just plain INSANITY!
SN1P3N1GHT 2 years ago
I DID LISTEN all i got was that the ship was attacked i didnt hear why they died! and it didnt really say y the guy was taken over and even WHAT took him over!! i would love it if he made it a 2 part so he could explain it better!
GAGFEST2000 2 years ago
part 2 needs some real story like my upcomming 30 minute movie ;)
ICANanimations 2 years ago
@GAGFEST2000 it took 50 years not to find them but to approve sending a team to them, There is a war after all
SeedLover101 2 years ago
shit story, most of which sounds like it was written by a 10 year old
FajitaMatt 2 years ago
Amazing CGI, terrible story
arbiond 2 years ago
I didn't like it. The trailer looked good but the real thing was boring. And the voices weren't exactly great either. Liked your idea but the final product was pulled off very badly.
Darth5igha 2 years ago
Fantastic effects!
But boring history... :(
ferrariredpassion 2 years ago
awesome effects :D
thats an amazing machinima 5/5
fer1551 2 years ago 2
the cgi works well with the halo3 stuff
grunth08 2 years ago 2
I swear, the beginning could be the tutorial for Halo Reach.
BlackHalo28 2 years ago
Awesome! (CGI'S original meaning is Computer Generated Image. Not Imagery)
jacknife91 2 years ago
worst thing ever
thiefshill 2 years ago
wtf with the ending
MARCUSxFENIX 2 years ago
Like the CGI effects, but 4/5 b/c the audio wasn't top notch and you kinda rushed it at the end.
GetPwndNub 2 years ago
like dead space the movie at the start
UNSCSAVAGE 2 years ago
hmm not bad, the voice acting was excessive in some parts and the cgi could use some polishing but its pretty good nontheless
hyuugabrother 2 years ago
Excuse me for asking but what does CGI mean in the CGI/Machinima Hybrid thing?
DemonAsian 2 years ago
@DemonAsian Computer Generated Imagery, which in this case is all of the animation added to the film the game did not have.
VIIproductions 2 years ago
computer generated graphics
DarkWarriorKiller557 2 years ago
not a bad machinima compared to the others that have recently come out
it looks like some1 actually took some time to make a decent machinima instead of the 2 min pieces of shit that have recently come out
P3tray 2 years ago
they could make this a game add-on.
SuperGreenGuy 2 years ago
prettt gud except voice and i like the perspectives..
cloudlop 2 years ago
Shutup yo negative foolz!
Seriously, it was pretty cool. Ill let anyone bitch if they
A. Make a giant slingshot before bungie
B. Make a better Machinima!!!!!!!
XD
M4strn00b 2 years ago
I don't see how all you people can be saying that the voice acting sucked. Are we watching the same video? Because I thought the voice acting was perfect compared to other voice acting I have seen in other videos.
This was a great and entertaining video to watch. Thanks for making it.
AlexAceReporter 2 years ago
I'm going to go with four stars. The effect integration and angles were excellent but I felt like everything after 10:00 was very rushed and dragged the excellent intro down. Here's hoping that there will be more in this style but a little more refined.
McDoProductions 2 years ago 2
Wow, I thought it was great, everybody that says its horrible and the voice acting sucks, what do you think is good, Jon CJG! Come on, you have to admit when you see a good machinima, and this is a good machinima.
StressW 2 years ago
@StressW Edgeworks Entertainment. This was cheesy, horrible voice acting and the CGI wasn't even that amazing. It wasn't horrible, but it wasn't anything great either.
ZetaMan117 2 years ago
make a better machinima then comment back! this is sweet
DarthBlader12 2 years ago
yes but they negate each other in a way that turns every miligram of mass into energy. A hundred percent efficiant explosion. To give you a comparrisen an atomic bomb is only about 20% efficiant in the mass to power ratio. Thats the most powe