The Stain

[eggbertsmith]

No payoff at the end???

[MaybeWeAintUs]

Slightly Woody Allen-esque in nature.  Especially the music.

[litterboxcatz]

i think this is kinda cute :3

[pathduck]

That wasn't just wine stains... this is why wall to wall carpets are a big no-no for aspiring serial killers :)

[UnitedDiscord]

@pathduck I don't even wanna know...

[Beeleebee329]

Aw man! and she was cute too!!

[rotatingwah]

★★★★★

[crazymonkey77]

Sorry, but I gotta ask. How do you type that?

[rotatingwah]

star star star star star star

I'm kidding

just copy and paste: ★★★★★ to something for easy reference and use it when you want to.

that's all I did.....you can too...

5 ★'s is nice too.

Do yourself a favor and look through my playlists for something good and worth your time.

See ya.

[MaybeWeAintUs]

This short never ceases to amuse me!

[grxace]

that dude needs a chill pill.

[watergalore]

very good job

[vincymon]

hm..I'm not that bad but sometimes I come pretty close lol.

[anthonylbrooks]

poor guy

[staciejung]

Okay, was that stain in front of the door fresh blood?

[shadox9]

I took it to be jelly, especially with the sound effect it made as he pulled the rug up.

[RedNSR]

Wow..... !!!!!

[sunshinejaybay]

funny.

[Fantikerz]

That guy needs more rugs.

[KocoCure]

The music makes the video. I especially love how the record player gets stuck on the same track at the end....very effective. Love the sound effects the guy makes throughout his struggle. Very clever!!

[Jings0b]

I don't care about anything other then the fact that the girl was..not was...IS HOT!

[VendettaMan]

Watch my film. It's based on the short story, "Where are you going, where have you been?" by Joyce Carol Oates. It's the first video response. Thanks much.

[kymmy05]

Love how the story flows... Very clever how you have set the scene up to get more catistrophic as it goes on. I applaud the editing, comic timing, and story telling..

[KenwoodKlown]

Very nice, I enjoyed this, pretty comical! I agree with olivercarle, originality is great and hard to come by here on YouTube. Great job!

[olivercarle]

everything he does is so illogical. just like all the other comic greats. well done. very funny. dont listen to skonieczna, hes fulla crap. its as original as it is funny

[skonieczna]

Funny, good speed and good handling of the recording. However the idea of hiding/denouncing stains is quite exploited. I've seen similar scene in many comedies (although I cannot recall the names now).

[fclavijo]

this is good stuf!

keep it up

[Arneneithel]

great! i laughed first at the stain by the socket, then again racously at the rug over the wall with the masking tape. the actor was brilliant. thanks!

[dannyiscool12]

god that was really amazing, your shots are insane, the zooming while tracking thing is awesome. and use of sound. and fucking everything...

[plumpspork]

peeking througha semi-open door with a mesh top

(i wonder what that means)

I ENJOYED IT!

[sebastete]

Hombre, te escribo desde Chile para decirte que tu video es francamente genial. Seguire buscando mas producciones tuyas! felicitaciones

[colleenlynnecox]

This is so wonderful and imaginative! The children's drawing covered by the rug is choice.

[yawza]

crossing the axis, the secret to good visualizing, pretty incredible, i loved it, favouriting now.

[chechasound]

very funny

[FassinTaak]

That was really fun, had that feeling of mischevious genious at work. Keep it up!

[EITHSNE1]

loved your great blend of light and dark.very good bordering on very fine--if you had a budget and a soundstage you could do wonders. film sense is near perfect....bravo.

[cuarentena]

esta muy chulo

[ButterfliesInMyEyes]

wow that was really interesting!Scared the girl clear away,though.poor guy :]

[NClackum]

Very original. I think we've all had at least one day like that in our lives.

[2432615184]

What a great example of using action and setting to describe a character rather than dialog. Cool!

[queenanyi]

wat A MESS!

[smoothwalker74]

that was entertaining, make more

[blueRUG2584]

Dude that was very well done. MORE

[dandydwarves]

thanks, you check out the rest of our channel, as well as SCADshorts. we do those too. and there is more on the way..

[AnAlterArtFilm]

well done, that was really entertaining. Those who enjoyed this might appreciate a film I made entirely on my own, including camera setup and acting. Filmed it in one night on my own. Just type in 'andrew merlino' in the youtube search and go to the first video called "Safe House". and I'd love to hear what people think of it, so spare 5 minutes and watch it. Thanks!!

[CurlyHeadedGurl]

lol niiice!! nice film work and everything :)

[fifilik123]

Very smart! :-)

[sockrocker117]

surprisingly good cinematography for such a small time flick. same for sound.

[MissTheGirl]

That was extremely good! :)

[infinityx33]

I love the music sticking at the end... nice comparison to him making the same mistake over and over. well done.

[crotchman41288]

hahahahaha i loved it

[Rjina211]

It's scary how the song keeps repeating and skipping. It really adds to the mood of disappointment.

[purplerosebud16]

Wow! Geat job! I felt so bad for that guy!

[alekzvox]

excelente trabajo saludos desde mexico

[andreavaladez]

So funny, I loved it!

[ThePricanBouncer]

That Was Awesome man...

[trancemafia]

nice =)

[StarFur]

DUDE NICE JOB

[M1i2K3E4]

wow the girl is hot.

[RussStep]

I like the snowball effect that occurs. Very professional looking, humourous, and entertaining. Great job!

[salcin8]

Great!!

but... What is a snowball effect?

[rookandpawn]

this reminds me of the dissolution of dominic boot a play by Tom Stoppard

[iluvgalipoka10]

wait... why did the girl run?

[superLemonster]

Really great pictures, love it. Sound is also cool.

[CALMDOWNYAHEADCASE]

PURE NITEMARE SENARIO,,,,made me laugh

[jupzz]

its genius!!

[bironic]

Nice work.

[javierFx]

i like it

 nice shots nice story

cool

[73915]

ROFL idk how the hell you did this, but it was great

[iamnivlek]

lol awesome

[prodigyclark]

this stressed me out. awesome.

[tyfoco]

excellent

[teenlebean]

really felt for the poor gut! Excellent!

[JJBearPaw]

I like it

[liberatedmedia]

hahahah that was hilarious

[GreatDane201]

Awsome loved all of the camera movements! did you have a micro dolly on hand?

[dandydwarves]

it's a homemade dolly. plywood and skateboard wheels mounted on angle iron. with pvc tracks. it's pretty easy/cheap to make your own

[thrillaice]

that was really cool man

[ASmbr]

Realy cool !

[ASmbr]

Ha ha ! Really cool ! I liked it very mutch !

[pandolfoo]

ingenioso

[smd783]

the dumbass didn't deserve her! :)

But 5 stars!