An evil mind

[xyzipperX]

show me your face!!! i wanna see you singing.

Grate music

[cisum4efil89]

this is great man..hope to see this in a better quality !

[swfong1006]

Beautiful! Great Job. I like it a lot. Hope to see you again on Youtube very soon.

[FairwayBandNY]

Hey good stuff. This reminds me of a cross between the spill canvas and coheed and cambria.

[Brigedy]

nice finger picking and great voice!!!

[KimberlyVer]

good voice ;D the sound could be better ofcourse but I'm not one to say, my mic is crap xp very nice :)

[radziahradzi]

it's nice

[won9kc]

Can't hear really concentrate on ur nice voice. Background sound is distracting.

[restek36]

make a proper recording...

[Natbeena]

Wow, you sound awesome! But there's static sounds in the video, and it's hard to hear your voice. So, you should focus on upping the quality of your videos, but your singing is wonderful! Keep it up!

[Grimfaith87]

@Natbeena Thanks :) I was planning on re-doing it with a better quality. I can perfectly understand your point. Thanks again for your feed back!

[sephjro]

you have a nice voice but I think it needs more energy to make this song more attractive ^^

[spinkydoodle101]

theres way to much background noise. you can barly hear your singing.

[LoquenderoxD90]

cool music man..but I can't see much :/ but anyway the music is amazing

[John8Linda]

Pity there's so much 'noise' - but from what I hear its good

[jamminjeff13]

Nice!



[tonto84]

sweeeeeeeeet



[TheCowboy4411]

..nice job dude..you have real talent..

[attatsis]

Wonderful!

[rockliveson69]

Sweet... nice job dude!

[franciscohope]

Nice one!!! Great song! It reminds me in a way the first Dream Theater album.

I'd like to hear it with better audio!

KEEP ROCKING MATE!!!

[treblechoir99]

Thank you for this moment. Beautiful melody and arrangement.

[xorbah]

Good Job!

[xorbah]

Good Job!

[Valentina8708]

Great! 

[Rockguitarnow]

pretty good

[Taobah]

Very good...sounds a little like Led Zeppelin =) Keep on goin'...

[Charlytrippo]

When will it be on disc? =p

But yah, great work. If you want a dark atmosphere tho, you don`t necessarily need "darkness". lol. Try to make a background scenery if you`re going for that. Or a contrast colour effect. (black and white or otherwise monotone colour might pull it off too)

I could say improve sound quality... but I`m typing right now. (and it`s been mentioned enough already).

[diderot555]

I liked it!! You are talented =]

[oOSmegOo]

very nice

[AlbionDavid]

gf-extremely good guitar work on this song. you are playing 'outside the box' it seems, very original. well done.

[gillgillis]

Like the finger picking at the start and the kick into the strummin, lyrics are dark and original, nice. You should do a proper recording to let your voice stand out more and do it justice, it's melodic and would be nice to hear...........clear. Yeah man good work and original, which is always appreciated ;).

[pythia1958]

Song is great, unfortunately the sound is extremely bad

[AlainnaE]

Yeah im glad I listened to this. I like the background hiss for some reason, but it is really dark. I'm not a guitarist or anything so I dont have alot of advice but to keep doing what you're doing - especially writing your own material! Thats awesome.

[dudleycudley]

The song is a bit fuzzy, it could do with polishing up a bit. Plus you need some light on the subject. Otherwise song sounds OK.

[harri1124]

Great song, a lot of honest expression to it...

[rachelengel1]

This is wonderful! You have a great voice. :)

[csx4]

song is good, sound isn't helping though. clean it up and put a light on too. otherwise 2 thumbs up, keep writing.

[dylanizer1]

good song, dude

[tulleuchen]

My feedback is that you find a room or somehow otherwise remove room noise. Even though it has nothing to do with your music. It affects listening. Also get some lights on yourself! We want to see the performer! Other than that it sounds great and emotionaly sung / player.

[LonelyMoonRise]

I think it is a amazing performance of yours, even if the quality of the sound and video is not so good, I still can recognize a real talent :) Congratulations!

[Linedanger]

I like it! except the background hiss.

[PivotIsAwesome4]

Hey, you sent me this vid. Glad I clicked it. Trying to make music myself... Not nearly as good as this though...

[idiot139]

this is so .. FUCKING AWESOME , haha i know its weird but you really did make my day.

[guitarfreak884]

i like it brah. keep it up.

[SorchaNB]

i like it but you should record it again with a better sound sestum =] xxxx

keep playing and updating me xxxxxxxxxx

[theledal]

very good, would be better if you recorded with a microphone, the white noise is rather annoying. but the song is really good

[acoronab]

Great guitar, and even better voice

[SoraRoxasdude1]

WOW! That was great dude! Keep on doing it.

[MetalFanBruno]

That's a good sound, i liked it :)

[bladeoftree]

Great job! It sounded awesome, apart from the static... (but we all know that camera audio sucks, so that's not your fault).

Anyways great job! Thanks for the message!

[zuditaka]

That sounded good enough to be on the radio! ♫ ♪ ♯ ♮ ♭♬ ♩ ♪ ♩♬ ♬ ♩♪ ♩ ♫ ♫ ♪

[MrKingsRow]

Great job...I like it!! :)

[visualrendering]

Great song man! Did you write it? why are you singing in the dark?

[MaladaptiveCatalyst]

this would end up on the radio with more production and other musical accompaniment. keep playing & creating.

[squmak]

Nice song. You should record in a nicer quality.

[LanaCassandra]

I like it!

[derek67ca]

YAY a real song  /applause

[LPMC723]

This would be better if sound quality was better. please rerecord this!

[IndieKirby]

Nicely done!

[Grimfaith87]

@IndieKirby Thanks man, I checked out your channel and you have a very awesome voice.

[avzeolla]

This is excellent. Really, and i'm a tough critic. But, there's a brief period between verses when you do a solo with the guitar. I suggest you improve on that and make it a little more creative. It reminds me of Tool! Your voice sound is similar. Improve the quality of the sound / video though!!! You're doing yourself a disservice by using this crappy video quality!!! Change it ASAP!!!This is very good music !

[Grimfaith87]

@avzeolla Thanks a lot for the feedback, I will take it into great consideration. I really appreciate your feed back, it means a lot. :)

[Bartzepfloyd]

Very nice but it`s a Lo-fi quality of sound unfortunately ...

[chedwin99]

this is what i call music!!! its wicked and great talents bro

[kristen2B]

you've got a really cool voice

the words of the song and the melody really go along ^^

i just got to tell you that the story is a little bit unclear

other than that great job ...keep it up

[SYNTIFICMUSIC1]

Wow great music great talent

[Grimfaith87]

@SYNTIFICMUSIC1 Thanks a lot for your feed back, it means a lot :)