Betrayal - Film Festival Entry Action Drama Short

[Sorasurfer5]

That was sooooooo good :)

The acting needs a bit of improvement but its still pretty good

[KayliBeach1]

Your work makes me proud to know you guys XD

[TKDJeffrey]

Really awesome work Eric! You and your brother are both getting better quickly. My only thing is I would have liked a little less shakycam :)

[directorinmovies]

@TKDJeffrey Thanks Jeff you are way ahead of me :D

[seanw23]

@directorinmovies one thing. right after he admitted that he killed her, you need a dramatic pause for a couple of seconds or whatever before the guy asks "why"

[directorinmovies]

@seanw23 haha yes I'm sure i figured that out by now. thanks for your input :)

[FightMaik]

Fucking Great :-) Like it !

[dardrex777]

Cinematography looks gorgeous dude.

The dialogue scene had a weird rushed paced... I think you could have been way more angry in dialogue... especially since your face wasn't mad. I'd maybe re-shoot the dialogue man.

Fight is good... but some of the camera shots got a little too shaky and keep in mind it'll look worse on a bigger moniter.

I think what's missing is the story needs a little more character development... more explanation as to why the guy had to kill... why he was so bitter

[yoimdabest]

@dardrex777 I Think his Videos are Actually Better that Yours...I mean dont get me wrong i love ur videos im a subsciber and a big fan..but this guy got some pro work in this video lol. it just need help on the story and the actors sound a lil too fake but outher than that its all good. and didnt u guys make a video together