My Bands First Song/demo:The Last Phase - Sunshine

[ssstwi]

It's cool, but don't you like to put drums on it?? It would sond a little more powerful!! But the guitarist and the singer are very well

[KatieMcFucker12]

PUSSSSIIIEEES. Oh no my heart is broken, cry me a fucking river. Please write better lyrics, these are sooo gay you emo pussies.

Alright, I'm done trolling for today...

[RAWWWHful]

this is wonderful :D

[jerwar68]

/watch?v=5ZdK2CJ2oZI&feature=r­elated

[RockKillTwig]

good shit!!! love it, could you message the guitar tab over plz

[JVCoop701]

Overall pretty decent. Guitar seemed pretty solid all the way through and didn't here any problems with the rhythm. The only advice I would have for you is watch your vocals at the end of some of your verses. You can hear the tone become shaky. And just a personal preference don't let the harmony overtake the melody it should compliment. But overall, well done!

[brittamy4]

i love this <3

[jokerxXbrandonXX]

Marry me?

[NemoCloud]

The singing and guitar is OK but you really need to change the lyrics. The lyrics are just horrible. Good luck

[Sparticus1027]

dont listen to the nay sayers girl. Music is about passion not the nest of this or the best of that. enjoy what you got and keep moving forward!!

[demon123398]

i love it you are really good ha i had just turned 12 on your first big video on the ppl tht hate scene and emo kids its hard to believe its been tht long and tht your voice matches you (pretty)

[diamoneRa9]

omg amazing

[aleesha399]

Fucking hot hind your tits

[lilmisscomfuzzeld]

I LOOOOOOOOOVE IT.XXXX

[flyinbryan1619]

is that really you singing?

[killface5438]

nothing wrong with the song u just need to spend some time in post production (editing). layer two singing tracks, like @DartAmps said and tweak the guitar stuff abit and it wont sound amateur. :) no offence intended..

[riplilkevin1]

absolutely awh-mazing

[sabrinaSCENExD]

download link.?(:

[400OO4]

nice video you have a great voice

[Crewcabangerrrrr]

0:28

Hahahaha.

[MaximusDezimus]

Like the song...like the lyrics...for a demo its a great song allready :P

[DartAmps]

instead of copying the exact same track, sing it once, then sing it again, and put those together that way it doesnt sound so robotically perfect

[MultiAngelBug]

Wow..... I LOVE this... :)

[ChrisAmarillas03]

it really needs a drum track....would be a lot better....but even then its a pretty good demo

[foshomylo]

Double kudoss

[AsylumOfSolitude]

Wow this is amazing..please tell me you guys live in Texas?!

[gwiz210]

generic shit

[DarkDemon700]

Your ok you might just be better if autotuned maybe your ok

[KyleA558]

Whoaa I like it. A lot.

[MissStaceySurrender]

Jenn, is there a way i can download this version of Sunshine?

i like this version more than 2.0

^__^

I love yerr music<33

[julia5593]

adorei a música!

[SHUTUPgenesis]

Your good, i liked it :D

[DarkBazil]

you are hot, so i like your music.

[charliethehumanoidkd]

the pics makes me like the song more

[heyblahpoop]

I really like this, I just think the singing is a bit too strong for this particular song.

[foxkeh100]

love the voice really clear, sexy, soo beautiful :)



[MrBananadude112892]

can i have sex with your voice?

[josephpunkdrummer]

dont ever let anyone affect how you write !! this business is cruel and judgmental you will have 20 people that dislike your music to the one person that does especially if your playing anything other than Britney spears shit ..so keep your shit real and dont ever let anyone discourage you because they will try .and if you do in the end they will respect you for it.

[CasualDiscussion]

The singing is good, and the guitar playing is passable. But the lyrics are shallow and boring, and the whole song in itself is cliche is just boring.

[xHaiiJinxtx]

@CasualDiscussion Thanks for sharing

[the4445]

@xHaiiJinxtx everything he said was true, but he said it like an asshole.

Just try to add more depth to your lyrics, give it something that's unique to you. You'll know it when you find it.

[LJP707videos]

@CasualDiscussion Not to mention that she looks like a fucking third world idiot with those stupid lip piercings and stretched out lobs. When? Tell me when it because cool to make yourself look like you belong in an african tribe of dirt eaters????

[LJP707videos]

@LJP707videos ....Opps. I meant "became" cool to look like a third world poor person with nothing to do but force objects into your face for entertainment. That does not look cool. You look like a fucking idiot. It is disgusting. What the hell is your problem? Take that crap out! I can't even stand to look at you like that.

[KatieMcFucker12]

@CasualDiscussion YESSSSSS

[StephanieLuvsUTube]

I love this song. I wish I could write songs like this. It just flows and it has meaning, unlike today's "pop" music that talks about sex, drugs, and alcohol basically. I love it. Make more!

[xoxiheartyewxox]

Beginning reminds me of Sunday Morning (: I really love this, Jen. Keep making music. You are very, very talented.

[XXxxMusicFanxxXX]

whats ur myspace?

[heygal600]

this is awesome this is my favorite song don't listen to all them haters there just jealous you are my inspiration U rock hehe :)

[Haleyvonneable]

I'm totally singing this for my school talent show. I love this song :)

[youare84]

i like the song and i like your voice, but surely you would have listened to this before uploading it and rerecorded where ya went off key? just cuz its so good and ya know, come on! lol i have no point. i still think you're awesome. woop;.

[mustarsic]

Who is singing? They're good.

[MrDragonslayer916]

sounds pretty good :)

[CenDrao]

Pretty Good =D I'd prefer to other music but your channel your choice

I Hope that was correct (I am from Germany, so don't be too strict with me, please.)

[TheLyricalMaster27]

I thought it sounded really good. Great job :)

[voodoo7410]

GJ keep it up dont let the haters get you down =D When they post a vid of them putting themselves out there and have the courage to actually flaunt what talent they think they have then i feel they have a word to say until them they can all fuck off!

[KEVINTACKTV1]

i respect your music syle but this is gay listen to brutal hardcore METAL

[xHaiiJinxtx]

@KEVINTACKTV1 well… thats not respecting my music style by calling it gay, Jus saying. and Buddy, I do listen to "Brutal hardcore metal" and its nothing special, and all very much the same, as with hardcore concerts where a bunch of tools swing their legs and arms around like idiots trying to hit eachother…. jus not my thing. i listen to everything and Brutal hardcore metal is NOT one of my favorites. i like actual lyrical substance, not a bunch of pig squeals and deep growls. But Thanks.

[KEVINTACKTV1]

@xHaiiJinxtx alright im very sorry i was listening to metal while i saw this and well i was in a metal moment were i was like metal for life and so i acted stupid anyway dont be so quick do judge there are thousand of types of metal death metal deathcore speed metal melodic metal like the black dahlia murder any way im sorry i didnt mean it and i can tell you worked hard on it and by the way pig vocals arent metal metal is screams mostly and growls the pig shit is for breakdown scene music srry

[KEVINTACKTV1]

@xHaiiJinxtx check out my channel any you'll maybe find metal you like you have mistaken metal for breakdown music which is way different metal

[xxxusernameherexxx]

@xHaiiJinxtx HEY! you just don't understand metal

[XxHannaJosephinexX]

@xHaiiJinxtx yee man. lyrical substance ftw. fuck the tools

[XxRansom2011xX]

@xHaiiJinxtx i agree with you on that and i actually listen to it for that reason i have no clue :P

[HysteriaX31]

@xHaiiJinxtx I listen to post-hardcore and metalcore its just my favorite type of music but i do like your style if it was recorded in a studio with all them fancy shit youd be great i mean great ER =p keep up the good work ima subscribe =p

[haleyanddiana]

@xHaiiJinxtx like metal and i very much respect your style, not everyone at metal concerts hurt one another but some idiots decide its "cool". Very good start :) The guy talking about "brutal hardcore metal" And how he "respects" your music is probably just pretending to get popular, me? Im completly weird, i listen to metal, i draw anime, i love anime, and stuff, i also like ambient music and industrial :D I respect you though :) keep up the good work

[KEVINTACKTV1]

@KEVINTACKTV1 sorry im sick of people calling metal screaming noise im sorry anyway pig vocal suck there for scene breakdown stuff but metal is great because im bullied i have no friends accept metal and my fellow metal friends and metal has alway been there for me it not just noise and i wasnr refuring to all metal

[princesskay20]

@KEVINTACKTV1

Not everyone is into metal, screamo and hardcore music. Everyone has there own opinions about the type of music they listen to.. If you don't like a certain song, just simply don't listen to it.... Just because you don't like a certain kind of song or genre of music doesn't mean you have to make someone else feel bad for liking it.. Just thought i'd point that out to you... ; )

[8JobForAMexican8]

@KEVINTACKTV1 I THRUST YOU BECAUSE WE DO NOT CALL IT BRUTAL HARDCORE METAL. You are the type of people who ruin our image.

[KEVINTACKTV1]

@8JobForAMexican8 lol i wrote that a while ago bro i really dont remember it actually im not like poser anymore

[irock402]

You are amazing(:

[STICCY69]

This shit go tho it's been a while sence I heard some thing different im tired of the fuccin radio this is worth the replay over an over again I can't play this out.keep it up.

[xXBRETTICUSXx]

LUV IT! :)

[MallyRandom]

you have a great voice :)

[ashypantsx]

this is amazing(:

[MiGGoFin]

this is fucking gay song and a ass, even a monkey with an ass on its face could make better music, the singing is so full of gayness and everything and anyway ur fucking ugly =) get a job as a hooker or something

[jexarj]

@MiGGoFin lol  god there are all these good comments, then u came and messed it all up

[LuvSkate08]

@MiGGoFin WHOAH BUDDY! CHILL!

[xXBRETTICUSXx]

@MiGGoFin go suck a dick u piece of rotten crap

[livelovedieandrip]

@MiGGoFin and you are an ass for saying that...it was nice of you to offer to sing it though i always wanted to see a monkey with an ass on its face sing :).....that way all the singing would be full of shit like you :)

[xx1yuna1xx]

You've really picked yourself up. Your really inspiring and amazing. ^_^

Keep singing, keep smiling, keep being yourself jen. Your amazing girl!!

[JulietAutumn]

You're so amazing<3 I love you, Jenn<333

[zeroedoutkatie6]

Amazing singer and for future ref I knew you didnt kill yourself you seeem like the type who has such strong belifes and views that should be heard

[ASWfan13]

OMG! I love this song Idk why but yesturday I was listening to this song and all of a sudden my ex popped in my head and I started crying, but then I realized it was tears of joy and that I am able to love again after all the shit he put me thru. Song of my life, Alejandro, U dont matter to me anymore!!!!! Jenn and Abi this song inspired me so much! NEW #1 FAVORITE SONG! Its sooooooooooooooooo addicting! =D

[OhEmGino]

Jenn...This Song Made My Heart Just Sink Like I Can't Describe! Honestly! ^_^ I Could Listen To This All Day!

[AjaMoses]

COULD U PUT A KARAOKE VERSION ON HERE LIKE JUST THE GUITAR PLAYING CUZ I WANNA MAKE A VIDEO RESPONSE SO BAD LOL OR U COULD JUST GIVE ME THE CORDS (: XD <3

[HiHeyHelloJane]

Jenn, you make my life. <3

with your videos and your music.

I hope I can be as amazing as you sumdae.

I can't wait for your band to make it big cause then I can go to all your concerts

& meet you. <3

[AjaMoses]

A-A-A-A-A-AMAZINGG!!!!!! 

[uraznfriend1]

wow beautiful song ur so awesome wat kind of music do u like

[mikezachcake]

your beautiful and so is this song.

[JBfan010]

thanks for turning my feelings into words!

[camerogirl75]

i havn't heard a first song/demo sound so amazing!!! you have a AMAZING voice keep up the good work jenn! ;D

[DropDeadPatricia]

Dear Jenn,

I'm thinking back to the NBC New special and back to this. I can't believe how much it has changed. It's amazing of how someone can do that, I could never do that even if I want to.

I can't get enough of this song, this expresses so much feeling that I have went through.

I'm glad I have watched your videos and listened to what you said, especially the "Therapy" one. That got across that I should stop, and I have stopped... because of you. I love you Jen, You are my role model. <33

[XxRawrJellybeanxX]

I love this song.

And I have one tip. When you say you. Don't add a chew to that. It's random. But it's what I was taught and it'll sound even better. But you don't have to listin to me. Just think about it.

[marylovesyoohh]

"I saw the most beautiful eyes

it's like the sun lived inside them"

BEAUTIFUL! <3

[chevygirlak78]

Love it!

[websiteusername]

pretty good actually :]

[EVILSKITTLEZ21]

i absolutly love this song!! ^_^

[zcombs15]

eh lame song + the acoustic factor, blah

[allforyoumydaisyy]

Jenn, your so pretty and i love love love your voice (:

and youu! haha :D <3

[xmrsgeewayx]

this is cutee but when the second voice comes in at one point it kinda sounds a lil off

[Stefffffffuneeeee]

Your a really good singer<3

[OooStaciooO]

Omg I love this song :)

[nightmarez94]

nice song, you have amazing voice =)

[xoxoEmoDoll11997]

Wow. I love your singing voice. Now that vid is on my favs I love the song!

[jo45331]

97 to 3.

we win lol

[Jake38nine]

Amazing. Teach me how to write songs please. I want to write songs. Really this song is amazing & I need some advice on how to. Please make a vid or message me.

[zcombs15]

@Jake38nine um first you gotta feel it, then its called creativity, use ur emotion and put it to paper, mix some words up, not hard...

[codyjwilliams]

wow i realy like this songg its the best song iv ever herd

[chemicallyinbalance]

i like it :P good job!! amazing voice!

[metalrapperjazzyjay]

Wow your band is really good! You guys should like make an album and put it out there!

[PsychedelicSh1t]

please make more songs... i really love your voice. :)

[PsychedelicSh1t]

i really love this song....... grr. sooo much. :)

[oOLumpy16Oo]

Wow, this song is really good. It definitely brightened my day. It makes me realize I need to stop worrying about someone I lost and see who stuck by me till the end. You guys are amazing.

[phonedogfan]

holy shit you have a band your fucking good!!!!!!!

[hyperchick911]

I LOVE THIS SONG! Its amazing and SO adorible. :)

[aharlow98]

ur my hero!..i love you Jenn!!<3

[PsychedelicSh1t]

can i download this song? XD

[xHaiiJinxtx]

@PsychedelicSh1t  yup its on myspace for download, just go to my channel the link is there :P

[DudeItsDaisy]

You have no idea how muck i LOVE this song.

I haven't been able to stop humming it since I first listened to it.

I love your voice♥

[MrYoshi1994]

ummmmmmm ya and justin bierber is more famous than you? i think ill have to fix tht k :) i have my ways to get wut i want lol. but ya this vid and song and your a fuckin amazing <3 - Ryan

[tehbackmaskr]

vocals are a bit off.... technology could fix that....

gunna need to add a black guy playin bass guitar... and possibly a saxophone player... also a black guy.

yeah... so show some skin you might have a chance.

[Katherinecanfly]

That was really cute. I loved it. (:

[helpplease08]

wooww this is really good(:

[missadventurebuddies]

okay, now THIS, is awesomeeee. i love it! :D

[jessex1]

i actually liek this nicee

[barbarita9292]

U guys r awesome :]

[shakespeare4lyfe]

this is reallly gooood

[tanisensi]

Good Vibes keep em coming same wayy...

[tanisensi]

Good Vibes keep em coming same wayy....

[Gloriadamaris1]

i loveee it hah awesomee lyrics

[XRaCheLRaWrXA7X]

your really good

<3

i like your voicee

[XxStaceySurrenderxX]

i love this song like soo much Jen...thanks soo much ferr uploading it....i luv hearing it 1207312903712894612 times a day..tehee

ROCK ON JENN!!

[music4life848]

wow, this song is really cool. i liked it alot...... :-)

[arielbacharimon]

i liked it so much i actually converted it into an mp3

[arielbacharimon]

i love it so much

[Meta4ikle]

This is really good

[EmoGothGirl09]

The song came out very great!

[AnnaDubon1234]

LOVE IT!

[lovinyou8878]

Did you write the lyrics?,,

Wow you are a great singer!!::)

love itt!!!

[Freeekiii]

love it :)

[matejoto]

I FREAKING LOVE YOU  JENN!!!

[AsianxSiMei]

Beautiful lyrics and your voice! n_n

[lukeee117]

i want chords.. (saying in a nice way) can u give me them. if ya dont ill probably just find em out myself. chords will be appreciated though

[TMMfan23]

i would LOVE to learn how to play this song! its so beautiful and its just so freaking happy!! i think its cool that even though you had a horrible experience a couple years ago that youre able to be so public abouy you and your music your probably my hero! :)

[hiton25]

Bravo!

[chickkaaxD]

I think this may be my new favorite song. I listen to this all the time. More than any professional song.

[merenorris]

I just absolutely love your singing! :) You are so awesome!!

[carly96100]

this is honestly and completely amazing!

i lalalove this (:

which one of you is doing the main singing ?

[SweetAZNSuicide]

aw this is cute

Abi my wife!! <3333

[jamiethompson69]

i LOVE this, its amazingg.

[iEnvyLove]

Holy shit i didnt know that was you singing, i thought it was some band =O, fantastic! Love it.

[mudparc]

Wow amazing I honestly think you could make it main stream if u tried.

[10000miles2nowhere]

THis.......this is amazing......this is by far one of the best acoustic demos ive heard in a long time!

l dont know you, but i love you! haha

[FOBioFatal]

Awe Jenn, this is amazing.

ily.  :)

[Slipknot92666]

Jenn.

I love you <3

[xHaiiJinxtx]

you have no idea how good it makes me feel to see that. Your My sunshine.<3

[mozlar123]

@xHaiiJinxtx i love you this song is the greatest song ever i love your friend too peace jenn

[TaRaNsTaKeM]

wow that is really gudd =D

[matejoto]

yes yes american idol!

write some more song and you can go on a world tour...:P

[28vidioslater]

woah wen it said 1st song by my band i was expecting like fuzzy images and like croakly sound but holy salt and pepper its awesome u should try put 4 americas got talent

[dannyspades]

its awsome

[LillyLoserr23]

Hoyly shit Jenn! I love you guys' voices <33 Amazing, really. I shall subscribe =D

[EmoGothGirl09]

You shouldn't be on youtube! you should be on American Idol!

[MaryStewart]

nice song! :)

[FallenxAngel11]

wow, this is really good. :) i love it. :D

[elliebabes35]

AWESOME!!! :D

[itsmattan]

im from sweden and.. i love it :D

[RoosteerCogburn]

Woah my computer posted like 3 comments.... Ahhhhhhh I'm posting another one!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Sorry!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

[RoosteerCogburn]

Great song by the way!!! :) reminds me how friends are always by your side no matter what.... Or who ;)

[RoosteerCogburn]

Great song by the way!!! :) reminds me how friends are always by your side no matter what.... Or who ;)

[RoosteerCogburn]

Oh yeah.... This song is so cool!! Reminds me how friends are there no matter what...

[RoosteerCogburn]

@TheAssholeAwards just type into google search--/ "Youtube mp3 converter"... Find a suitable site,Then you just enter in the YouTube URL and it converts the video into an audio file (mp3 or mp4, I'm pretty sure you pick the format...). :)