nice use of song, to introduce your video, although the timing coujld be slightly improved. seemed like the intro part alos had alot of text, maybe use pictures, or cool transitions. Pictures are nice, and really reveal the harsh side of child labor. Good facts and statistics. Nice to hear that there is a viable solution is being sought after. The link seemed like it could have stayed throughout the last part, as it seemed to just fly past. Nice video bro
Great video. You used the voice clip in the beginning very well, and the pictures were powerful. You also used the video to motivate people to help out which is impressive. The song is also powerful, it brings up good emotions and gives a feeling of helping.
Good song choice. Good use of transitions and texts. The pictures are effective. The texts could be a little shorter. It was very informative, seeked change, but stayed positive in the end that we can acheive that. A little optimism in life is always good.
Pros: Great usage of transitions and effects. Pictures were good. although it was about haiti, the song was still a good choice. You also did a good job at choosing when to show pictures vs. when to show text. you seperated them nicely.
Cons: some of the titles were a bit long. some of the slides had a lot of words on them.
"Now is the time to act - for the future of our generation. The question of child abuse is crucial, and this is the way to call on the general public to join hands with us." good job iby
haha i liked the voice partin the beginning
it was rly unique and nice song but when the song got towards the end it sounded a bit weird some that monatone guy's voice singing
but otherwise nice video and good motivation
realstory37 1 year ago
nice use of song, to introduce your video, although the timing coujld be slightly improved. seemed like the intro part alos had alot of text, maybe use pictures, or cool transitions. Pictures are nice, and really reveal the harsh side of child labor. Good facts and statistics. Nice to hear that there is a viable solution is being sought after. The link seemed like it could have stayed throughout the last part, as it seemed to just fly past. Nice video bro
Terminator1191 1 year ago
Great video. You used the voice clip in the beginning very well, and the pictures were powerful. You also used the video to motivate people to help out which is impressive. The song is also powerful, it brings up good emotions and gives a feeling of helping.
brownbear1405 1 year ago
Good song choice. Good use of transitions and texts. The pictures are effective. The texts could be a little shorter. It was very informative, seeked change, but stayed positive in the end that we can acheive that. A little optimism in life is always good.
ellsworthalex 1 year ago
My only complaint is playing the "We Are the World" that starts out with JUSTIN BIEBER.
AngelRena15 1 year ago 2
@AngelRena15 HAHAHA true dat :)
Letsmakemusicnoww 1 year ago
Nice job! I really like the facts... they were really engaging...
Also love the music!
Great video overall!
TheGangzilla 1 year ago
i really like the beginning. It creates the serious mood really well. And i like how the ending is very optimistic
mjshining 1 year ago
Good job Iby!
Markin99 1 year ago 2
Pros: Great usage of transitions and effects. Pictures were good. although it was about haiti, the song was still a good choice. You also did a good job at choosing when to show pictures vs. when to show text. you seperated them nicely.
Cons: some of the titles were a bit long. some of the slides had a lot of words on them.
I7AM7A7NINJA 1 year ago
Song Choice: Edited. Took off parts about haiti. Used different sections of song & mixed it around.
Slides: Some slides with a lot of texts are made long for people who English isn't their first language.
I agree with how some slides had a lot of words, maybe i could have separated them into different slides.
Thanks for the constructive comment tho!
Ibyshalabi 1 year ago
Well done Iby. The images and the content overall provides an informative account on the issue.
Kabilanalmond 1 year ago
hola iby
good jobb :D
lol i love the haiti song
benji78900 1 year ago
good job iby
blakjat 1 year ago
Great video(:
Kisseslies 1 year ago
"Now is the time to act - for the future of our generation. The question of child abuse is crucial, and this is the way to call on the general public to join hands with us." good job iby
rihana129 1 year ago
nice work iby
328412d 1 year ago
Job well dun:) very touchin
007jennyb 1 year ago
Awesome Video IBY! Glad someones not just sitting back letting shit happen.Goodjob!
WildZimmerman 1 year ago
This is whats g bro
lilpimp096 1 year ago
Nice work Iby!!!
culpritard 1 year ago 2
very true and very sad. the world should do more than just sit around and watch
lapoozies 1 year ago 2
good one!
biraj619 1 year ago