omgee i remember my mom told me and my sister to go to sleep cause we had to be at school and we were up anyway and watched this on hbo then we were like i bet he use this in a song and then gold digger came out lmao i freakin love kanye my idol idc what anybody says about him he is my hero when its comes to music the EINSTEIN of hip hop and i stand behind him 100%
@amiteshdiyal nah... his POEMS were VERSES he used in his songs. i think the bittersweet poem was a whole lot better in the poetry version than the actual song... feel me noggin?
I know most people will ignore this, but to anyone who loves poetry and enjoys watching spoken word poetry please check out my poem entitled "Death sentence". My name is Vincente "SubVersive" Perez. I'm an aspiring poet and i feel my passion will speak to many people as long as they give it a chance. If you decide to look me up i appreciate your time and effort. Thank you - SubVersive
Ya'll niggas who say Kanye is growing is out your rabid ass minds...in the words of J Cole.
If he so REALLLL now where GLC AT??? WHERE CONSEQUENCE AT???
Where the Talib and Mos Collabos at?? The niggas who MADEEEE KANYEEE the MC.
Artistic vision....Get the fuck out of here wit that shit. never a fan? Na ya'll some new folks who dont know about that College Dropout mixape that came out as a promo on college campuses everywhere. Jay Killed the Real KANYE and thats word to everything
@upinposting fam you sound stupid ; thats unfixable . consequence , mos , and talib is there own man . why would kanye be there dependent?? Jay molded a beter kanye look what he's evolved to . have you heard "my beautiful dark fantasy" thats ART my nigga . ART . have you seen his visualization that he directed through runaway ... ??? c'mon son really??
ridiculous! why would he come on a poetry show and wait ppls time by rapping one of his songs on his album? that's lazy and wack! i like the song and i'm on the fence about him but why not just show how talented you really are by ACTUALLY WRITING A POEM OR SOMETHING POETIC for the show?! SAD KW
@godsdaughter81 this was before he made it a song and he considered it just scrap writing and decided to use it on the show to see how many people would like it, if they loved it he would finish it and make it a song, if they didn't then he probably still would've done something with it.
why does the comment about kanye being fake has so many likes? he's just wrong, ye is real compared to all the other bullshit that is in the game now.. he have always been real
@ThumbsUpEnt1 exactly, I hate when people say he's not real anymore. Perfect example is his song power. "The systems broken, the schools closed, the prisons open" I mean think about that for a second.
I see where he gets his confidence from: his mother. But back when he was still up-and-coming, you could tell that he was totally a mama's boy. But around the time of this performance, his mom died. I hate to play the devil's advocate to you Kanye haters, but his arrogance, his personal issues, are all manifested through his poetry. You're just to blind to see his brilliant creativity.
was this before or after the gold digger came out? i always get confused with the day it was uploaded. i always think that the vid it uploaded the same day it came out.
i can't believe he took his poem word for word and turned it into a song... one of his more successful songs. i would think over the years he maybe would've changed one word a little... nope
@TheZgraduates if you listen to pac, you might notice that he recycles rhymes in songs (mostly in albums released posthumously). does that make his any less a great rapper?
Ok first off it doesn't take a brain surgeon to know that obviously he performed this as a poem before the song was either made or released. Secondly this is not the poetry I would expect to see on Def Poetry Jam but I guess because of who he is it was allowed. I personally think that he is a complete moron despite is musical ability. He represents the exact BS that every racist thinks a black person is. I think the whole hip hop industry is to blame for our kids failures. They are no type of r
@Vjgoth I don't think you can blame an industry for a kid's failure. I mean it just seems ignorant to blame a business for the success, or lack thereof, a kid achieves. No disrespect to your opinions, I mean you're entitled to those. But I'm just saying it seems a little fucked up to lump all the blame for kids ignorance on an industry that isn't meant to be a model of how to live your life anyways. At the end of the day they're a business, no one's forcing you to buy into their philosophies.
@TeamChanning And u are absolutely correct we shouldn't base our lives on music but unfortunately some kids do. Some of these children look up to these rappers as if they where big brothers so when they hear how they talk they tend to think that there way of life is the best way to live. It's sad but it has been proving to affect the way some of our youth think.
@TeamChanning At the same time there are people who live those lives forced maybe you never lived in a real poor area where moms are drug fiends meanwhile pops slangs and gangbangs so they listen to Pac or any mc b/c thats all they know might sound crazy but it DOES exist I know So you can see that person living in sin & pass judgement or you can make a diffrence in that persons life and maybe be that caringsomeone they always needed and never had youtube.com/watch?v=Pff61X0E3zc said it best -JM
@Vjgoth I agree but your opinion contradicts urself UR remarks continues the ignorance, but if you had his cash would you honestly turn it down the music takes blame but if you do not like kanye by what he represents why are you supporting him 2 make it clear there is no such thing as bad publicity called out bushes failure in Katrina headlines ading coments continues this see what im sayin; kanye actually gives back with way more donations than u or me can afford so is he still a douche? -JM
@RobyHawkins YOU'RE WACK! who are you to say if he is real or not. some punk hatin' cause he aint make it. look if you can't say something that is at the least construtive, then you are just some fake.
@RobyHawkins kanye is the most real dude on this planet!!! he tells u how it is n dnt give a shit cuz thats him...dude still raw as fuck lyrically realism everythin he was better back in the day but generations have changed n ppl dont like music like the early 2000s anymore so ppl dnt make that so hes still real and hes still KanYeezy!!
This is what poetry looks like. You may recognize it, as the whole version of this poem was widely circulated after the attacks on the World Trade Center: Defenseless under the night Our world in stupor lies; Yet, dotted everywhere, Ironic points of light Flash out wherever the Just Exchange their messages: May I, composed like them Of Eros and of dust, Beleaguered by the same Negation and despair, Show an affirming flame. excerpt from SEPTEMBER 1, 1939 by W.H. Auden
@johnthepalm no you're wrong. poetry doesn't look like any one thing. auden and west just wanted to communicate different ideas. these are both poetry.
@jellyfishsandwix I will concede a small point. It does meet the criteria of poetry. But of course it may have already occurred to you that when someone says "this" or "that is or is not poetry" they are saying that it is good or bad. I can't say I'm shocked that he has so many fans, but it saddens me none the less. You see it isn't just that I think he is bad. I think he is an offense to sensibility; to the solidarity of the human race; and he manages to be vulgar without the slightest wit.
Since there are a great deal of people who seem to admire this simpering moron, it should help to analyze the actual poem. It describes a man who has to pay child support for 18 years, eventually discovering that he is not the biological father. Without irony we hear the omniscient narrator say,
"He killed that bitch, they gave him twenty-five years". If someone needs to explain why this nasty drivel is not poetic then I don't think the person requiring the explanation could understand it.
@jesseclifton I appreciate your polite inquiry. To answer your question I will start with the vulgar introduction about his mother's advice regarding prophylactics and preventing any babies from infiltrating his fantastic empire. Suffice to say it made me sick. The "reading" doesn't appear to have been conceived with any sense of what it means to be "poetic". The word "real" does not seem to shed any light on this limp scatter of words presented here like ball bearings dropped off a pier.
@laurasauras12 hahahahahaha lets stop with the over exaggerated claims about what poetry "is" an think of it more simplistically. poetry comes in all forms. an he is on here an you are not. so i think ill take his point of view on poetry rather than youres. no offense.
@babyjenksyall Obviously he took the lyrics from gold digger and then used it as a poem. then a little after, produced the song. the song was already written when he said this poem
Now I ain't sayin she a gold digga
statement095 17 hours ago
@2:30 black man eyes. He's not the father
longthekiller1 4 days ago
Dude Ain't Nothing But Whack Ass Hack With Back Pack...
pinzotheclown666 1 week ago
@pinzotheclown666 so why'd you come watch the video? lol
6FeetDopeProductions 1 week ago
i forgot about backpack kanye
bigben0102 1 week ago
Lmao 1:07 - 1:25 then 2:20 CTFUUU 2:40 yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah
Candy007ify 2 weeks ago
this isn't slam poetry. He's rapping.
thedreamersscape 2 weeks ago
@thedreamersscape
I don't think you understand what rap is...
rap and slam poetry are like pancakes and waffles... they're pretty much the same thing... just in a different package...
thatboysayum 1 week ago
YO CHECK OUT
Eli G - Keep On Going
larsy1313 3 weeks ago
Original Air Date of this(Def Poetry Jam S4E2) — July 25, 2004
Gold Digger Release Date - >July 5, 2005
Admittedly, the song was probably recorded much much earlier - but then again so was this.
Mardnusamos 3 weeks ago 8
listening to this by chance on christmas then hearing him talking bout christmas in the vid #weird lol
Ramonerdna 1 month ago
Haha Gold Diggerrrrrr!
southsideyouarelove 1 month ago
Does anybody know if the date posted is the date he actually did this? I would really appreciate an answer.
thislifewasledastray 1 month ago
@thislifewasledastray 2005
xxrawr22xx 1 month ago
and this came out before gold digger you can tell by his clothes if you really klnow kanye lol i freakin love him
LeAndraSings 2 months ago 6
omgee i remember my mom told me and my sister to go to sleep cause we had to be at school and we were up anyway and watched this on hbo then we were like i bet he use this in a song and then gold digger came out lmao i freakin love kanye my idol idc what anybody says about him he is my hero when its comes to music the EINSTEIN of hip hop and i stand behind him 100%
LeAndraSings 2 months ago 2
my hero.
abjo17 2 months ago
to the people who are saying kanye was real back then and he isnt now
he is making the best hiphop in the world right now and taking hip hop to a new level when other rappers are making electro music.
RalphMuskinyaar 2 months ago
When kanye.was cool and not an asshole
EXS101 2 months ago
Gold digger??
Music1592 2 months ago
@Music1592 This is was before he made the song Gold Digger
MzJazzy123100 2 months ago
If I had to pay child support for 18 years just to find out it wasn't even my kid... I would kill that bitch too lol.
megamixa 2 months ago
@ilovekanyewest his verses were poems that he used in his songs
amiteshdiyal 2 months ago 24
@amiteshdiyal so......nigga
lsryyh 1 month ago
@amiteshdiyal nah... his POEMS were VERSES he used in his songs. i think the bittersweet poem was a whole lot better in the poetry version than the actual song... feel me noggin?
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I wish he wouldn't do verses from his songs!
ilovekanyewest 3 months ago
777 likes, Jesus Walks
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I know most people will ignore this, but to anyone who loves poetry and enjoys watching spoken word poetry please check out my poem entitled "Death sentence". My name is Vincente "SubVersive" Perez. I'm an aspiring poet and i feel my passion will speak to many people as long as they give it a chance. If you decide to look me up i appreciate your time and effort. Thank you - SubVersive
vincenteper01 3 months ago
hell yea lol
youngbossofdad 3 months ago
He has a backpack, what an idiot.
0780marco 3 months ago
@0780marco hater smh
cmbuvi92 3 months ago
@0780marco its gucci dumbass why would he have it....jackass
youngbossofdad 3 months ago
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maikai196 3 months ago
-__- all of his poetry slams are his songs.
TaraTrack08 4 months ago
@TaraTrack08 these were poems before songs .
xxJBLADExxXtream 3 months ago
@TaraTrack08 cause his songs are poetry.
maggieisloved 3 months ago
lmfao that was adorable
poeticcups 4 months ago
Kanye is still real. He didn't change, his reality did.
Carmen21396 4 months ago 7
Ya'll niggas who say Kanye is growing is out your rabid ass minds...in the words of J Cole.
If he so REALLLL now where GLC AT??? WHERE CONSEQUENCE AT???
Where the Talib and Mos Collabos at?? The niggas who MADEEEE KANYEEE the MC.
Artistic vision....Get the fuck out of here wit that shit. never a fan? Na ya'll some new folks who dont know about that College Dropout mixape that came out as a promo on college campuses everywhere. Jay Killed the Real KANYE and thats word to everything
upinposting 4 months ago
@upinposting fam you sound stupid ; thats unfixable . consequence , mos , and talib is there own man . why would kanye be there dependent?? Jay molded a beter kanye look what he's evolved to . have you heard "my beautiful dark fantasy" thats ART my nigga . ART . have you seen his visualization that he directed through runaway ... ??? c'mon son really??
TheAdvocateful 3 months ago
kanye changed for the worst
TheYoungshyne 4 months ago
LMAO!!! Kanye was rght...this was on hit...
aliceson9188 4 months ago
ridiculous! why would he come on a poetry show and wait ppls time by rapping one of his songs on his album? that's lazy and wack! i like the song and i'm on the fence about him but why not just show how talented you really are by ACTUALLY WRITING A POEM OR SOMETHING POETIC for the show?! SAD KW
godsdaughter81 4 months ago
@godsdaughter81 this was before it was a song, this was befor that album.
11oowarrior 4 months ago
@godsdaughter81 this was before he made it a song and he considered it just scrap writing and decided to use it on the show to see how many people would like it, if they loved it he would finish it and make it a song, if they didn't then he probably still would've done something with it.
Moviewxpert 4 months ago
wtf?!
godsdaughter81 4 months ago
check out my boy arsiny phoenix freestyle off of kanye west's power beat! sub if u diggin it! more vids to come!
cjhj1989 4 months ago
kanye was too real i miss that kanye come back please
FTFreloaded 4 months ago
Before you pay child support...how about a DNA test?
TheCatsLastWord 5 months ago
1:30 for poem
CodyJMoore 5 months ago
"Im gonna let you finish Kanye... but Common had one of the best poems of all time. Of all time." (Stupid hand gesture)... (walk of stage) LOL
fuzzyjem3 5 months ago 3
i miss this kanye west
dowdell09 5 months ago 4
#swag
iiTrUeNaSTy 5 months ago
i aint sayin shes a gold digger !! lol
jhink357 5 months ago
maaaan...He killed that bitch they gave him 25 years
mh9192 5 months ago
R.I.P to Kanye's mother, Dr. Donda West
RiRi544 5 months ago 3
Still is real ..
SevenMusicTv 6 months ago 32
mann he killed that trick
jamesmckinnon13 6 months ago
is this what kanye looked like before the car accident, or maybe he's just a lot younger. sure looks different
stevenash13beast 6 months ago
i love kanye !
theprettyyoungrebel 6 months ago
why does the comment about kanye being fake has so many likes? he's just wrong, ye is real compared to all the other bullshit that is in the game now.. he have always been real
ironjoshi 6 months ago
How old is this?
Fudgeyer 6 months ago
@Fudgeyer It's from 2005!
bigwishescometru 6 months ago
@ThumbsUpEnt1 exactly, I hate when people say he's not real anymore. Perfect example is his song power. "The systems broken, the schools closed, the prisons open" I mean think about that for a second.
SixburgSteelers 6 months ago 4
Gotta love Kanye♥
butterflii08 6 months ago
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Kanye I'm really happy for you, but Imma let you finish. Edgar Allen Poe had the best poem of all time.
kyleatl08 7 months ago
Lol . He killed that Bxtch ! Ctfu
stopsayingmileyaslut 7 months ago
I see where he gets his confidence from: his mother. But back when he was still up-and-coming, you could tell that he was totally a mama's boy. But around the time of this performance, his mom died. I hate to play the devil's advocate to you Kanye haters, but his arrogance, his personal issues, are all manifested through his poetry. You're just to blind to see his brilliant creativity.
ItsPartyLion 7 months ago 10
was this before or after the gold digger came out? i always get confused with the day it was uploaded. i always think that the vid it uploaded the same day it came out.
kittycathappy 7 months ago
SAGGY PANTS
RyanD130 7 months ago
HE wack... gold digger came out in 2005... this is 2007..... get some real/new material
lilwayneisbest 7 months ago
@lilwayneisbest that is just when the person put it on facebook dumbass
FALCONLICK 7 months ago
@lilwayneisbest this was taped/aired in 2005 dumbass...
bmurray714 7 months ago
@lilwayneisbest IDIOT. This was uploaded in 07. You're a lil wayne fan, no wonder you have no intelligence.
ahhhandres 7 months ago
@lilwayneisbest Lol I'm not gon tell you how wrong you are, but you certainly put the 'ass' in jack
Taylorcoolzy1314 7 months ago
he was a douche then and hes a douche now. hes an untalented piece of trash..
btfullerton 7 months ago
@btfullerton HATER!!! How's that jealousy taste? lololol
chrisflo5 4 months ago
he killed dat bitch
hahaha
ahmedadem10 7 months ago
I like this better than the song
jcorderandfriends 8 months ago 2
BACK WHEN HE WAS REAL??? NIGGA HE IS STILL REAL.. IF YOU DONT LIKE HIM NOW YOU WAS NEVER REALLY A FAN
FashiionMonsteR 8 months ago 80
@FashiionMonsteR You're full of shit, you don't have like everything of an artist.
Arian545 4 months ago
@Arian545 eat a dick
FashiionMonsteR 4 months ago
@FashiionMonsteR preach
Moviewxpert 4 months ago
@FashiionMonsteR now he is just a real cocky asshole.
A1rsoftAFICIONADO68 4 months ago
check this chic out she has a way with words @techytreckynerd
TechyTreckyNerd 8 months ago
I ain't sayin she a gold digger....but she ain't messin w/ no broke niggas!!! lol that's my jam!!
dionne526 8 months ago
This guy is a genuis
say no more
kdotmj 8 months ago 4
"He killed that bitch, they gave him 25 years, 25 years. Yea yea yea yea yea yea yea yea yea" -Kanye West
Rico9608248386790 9 months ago 9
I looooooove Kanye, this and the "Late Orchestration" dvd thingie are what convinced me
OswaldtheFourth 9 months ago
Of all of Kanye's styles and trends his first one,in my opinion,is the best
KanyeLupeCudiFan 9 months ago
Gold Digger
Yojerome303 9 months ago
awww he was soo cute!
Mo33zy 9 months ago
THIS HARD...
LJSTAGGERS 9 months ago
damn his watch be fuckin glimmering
JahnNeema 9 months ago
Gold Digger!
MrTheDJI 9 months ago
i can't believe he took his poem word for word and turned it into a song... one of his more successful songs. i would think over the years he maybe would've changed one word a little... nope
TheZgraduates 9 months ago 5
@TheZgraduates if you listen to pac, you might notice that he recycles rhymes in songs (mostly in albums released posthumously). does that make his any less a great rapper?
bandass 8 months ago
back when kanye carried a back pack
CBlanchProduction 10 months ago 6
@CBlanchProduction the college dropout :)
smily179 8 months ago
he came out on these things twice right? One with bittersweet & this 1 right now
did he ever do another 1?
SpaceNTime77 10 months ago
@SpaceNTime77 he did 'all falls down', but i'm havin a hard time finding the video for it on youtube.
Ravenkeyana 10 months ago
@Ravenkeyana thanks! I'll look for it as well
SpaceNTime77 10 months ago
She's A Gold Digger?
Th3youngPrinc3 10 months ago
Doing pretty hood in his pink polo.
Ishty7 10 months ago 5
lol kanye was a nerd yoo
jamesbroome151 10 months ago
You have to check out: Andrew Livsey - A Universal Concept
The kid is unbelievable, like so Talented
YodaUnited 10 months ago
L.M.A.O.
iluvorangejuice13 10 months ago
lolll you can tell this was before the song came out cuz his jaw doesnt look swollen.
bb0ypants 10 months ago
She a gold diggah
TobuscusW 10 months ago
25 years they gave him 25 years
rotfff
badGiRLdymond 10 months ago
Ok first off it doesn't take a brain surgeon to know that obviously he performed this as a poem before the song was either made or released. Secondly this is not the poetry I would expect to see on Def Poetry Jam but I guess because of who he is it was allowed. I personally think that he is a complete moron despite is musical ability. He represents the exact BS that every racist thinks a black person is. I think the whole hip hop industry is to blame for our kids failures. They are no type of r
Vjgoth 11 months ago
@Vjgoth I don't think you can blame an industry for a kid's failure. I mean it just seems ignorant to blame a business for the success, or lack thereof, a kid achieves. No disrespect to your opinions, I mean you're entitled to those. But I'm just saying it seems a little fucked up to lump all the blame for kids ignorance on an industry that isn't meant to be a model of how to live your life anyways. At the end of the day they're a business, no one's forcing you to buy into their philosophies.
TeamChanning 11 months ago
@TeamChanning And u are absolutely correct we shouldn't base our lives on music but unfortunately some kids do. Some of these children look up to these rappers as if they where big brothers so when they hear how they talk they tend to think that there way of life is the best way to live. It's sad but it has been proving to affect the way some of our youth think.
Vjgoth 11 months ago
@TeamChanning At the same time there are people who live those lives forced maybe you never lived in a real poor area where moms are drug fiends meanwhile pops slangs and gangbangs so they listen to Pac or any mc b/c thats all they know might sound crazy but it DOES exist I know So you can see that person living in sin & pass judgement or you can make a diffrence in that persons life and maybe be that caringsomeone they always needed and never had youtube.com/watch?v=Pff61X0E3zc said it best -JM
OHNOJohn8McInnis 10 months ago
@Vjgoth I agree but your opinion contradicts urself UR remarks continues the ignorance, but if you had his cash would you honestly turn it down the music takes blame but if you do not like kanye by what he represents why are you supporting him 2 make it clear there is no such thing as bad publicity called out bushes failure in Katrina headlines ading coments continues this see what im sayin; kanye actually gives back with way more donations than u or me can afford so is he still a douche? -JM
OHNOJohn8McInnis 10 months ago
.-i love him :) kanye the best.!
xXChasBaybeeXx 11 months ago
I Always wonder about the people that go on this song to complain and dislike :/
adamvania13 11 months ago 34
@crookcartel perfectly saidd
supershuey 11 months ago
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g33kstatus 11 months ago
someone white shouldve jumped on stage and started rapping and at the end say "imma let cho finish"
treefire9 11 months ago
@treefire9 hahaha
huesito111 10 months ago
Kanye is funny as fuck
nback11 11 months ago 5
Back when Kanye was real
RobyHawkins 11 months ago 120
@RobyHawkins i couldnt have said it better
miamivicepastels83 11 months ago
@RobyHawkins he still is real
elizaakababyd 10 months ago 9
@RobyHawkins he still is lil nigga
onyema11 9 months ago 7
@RobyHawkins His new album sounded pretty real as fuck lol that nigga called out himself and everyone
AboveCommonInsyt 9 months ago 4
@RobyHawkins because you know him so well....
marlinskott 8 months ago 4
@RobyHawkins WACK!
brittthomas4 7 months ago
@RobyHawkins YOU'RE WACK! who are you to say if he is real or not. some punk hatin' cause he aint make it. look if you can't say something that is at the least construtive, then you are just some fake.
brittthomas4 7 months ago
@RobyHawkins Kanye STILL REAL.
jaytiff2011 7 months ago
@RobyHawkins word brother, word.
wowspare 7 months ago
@RobyHawkins ye! cuz he's UNREAL NOW! ;D
Mainstandard 7 months ago
@RobyHawkins he still is.
316Horus 6 months ago 9
@RobyHawkins
He's never been fake.
OfficialDeejayW 6 months ago 4
@RobyHawkins Still Is, always will be.
Raebae1120 5 months ago 5
@Raebae1120 I AGREE SHIIIIIIT
Chikidd75 5 months ago
@RobyHawkins STILL IS LOL
Chikidd75 5 months ago
@RobyHawkins Kanye only gets realer.
marvincolle 5 months ago
@marvincolle real talk
broklynd 5 months ago
@RobyHawkins Kayne is real
superrrboyy 5 months ago
@RobyHawkins kanye is the most real dude on this planet!!! he tells u how it is n dnt give a shit cuz thats him...dude still raw as fuck lyrically realism everythin he was better back in the day but generations have changed n ppl dont like music like the early 2000s anymore so ppl dnt make that so hes still real and hes still KanYeezy!!
ADunn3423 5 months ago
@ADunn3423 Goes to show how stupidity has evolved in our society. ...
FloSick808 2 months ago
Legend
youngbeholy 11 months ago
this sucks hard,
WordsApartpoetry 11 months ago
this was when he was sane
myluckynumberis14 1 year ago 4
was tjis before or afte his debut?
sunaxtemari93 1 year ago
the backpack was a mistake
jnielso 1 year ago 5
Hardly talented...a shame people feed into his shit...
MestreRion 1 year ago
The All falls down one he does is the best deepest shit
GrisGrisOnUrDoorStep 1 year ago
Damn...Kanye is stealing his own stuff now too?
cantetinza99 1 year ago
@cantetinza99 ur obviously retarded. he wrote the poem and then made a song out of it.
jfoote11 1 year ago
@jfoote11 It was a joke you herb. He's single now...he may let you suck his dick
cantetinza99 1 year ago
Def. liked Bittersweet better lol. Wasn't too bad until the ending. Wasn't a big fan of the 'yeah yeah yeah' part.
DaleAndJessika 1 year ago 3
kanye west SUCKS.
megamunchers 1 year ago
@megamunchers LMAOOOOO
SPVB2010 1 year ago
As slam goes, that was pretty mediocre.
bobolith 1 year ago
check out Dmx poetry and this shit
glawnas 1 year ago
This is before Golddigger, if you watch the Def Poetry of Kanye you'll notice that it's Bittersweet. It's just how he does it.
TheNowan 1 year ago
Wtf this is just Gold Digger?
BIGBOYDesignz 1 year ago
johnthepalm 1 year ago
@johnthepalm no you're wrong. poetry doesn't look like any one thing. auden and west just wanted to communicate different ideas. these are both poetry.
jellyfishsandwix 1 year ago
@jellyfishsandwix I will concede a small point. It does meet the criteria of poetry. But of course it may have already occurred to you that when someone says "this" or "that is or is not poetry" they are saying that it is good or bad. I can't say I'm shocked that he has so many fans, but it saddens me none the less. You see it isn't just that I think he is bad. I think he is an offense to sensibility; to the solidarity of the human race; and he manages to be vulgar without the slightest wit.
johnthepalm 1 year ago
Since there are a great deal of people who seem to admire this simpering moron, it should help to analyze the actual poem. It describes a man who has to pay child support for 18 years, eventually discovering that he is not the biological father. Without irony we hear the omniscient narrator say,
"He killed that bitch, they gave him twenty-five years". If someone needs to explain why this nasty drivel is not poetic then I don't think the person requiring the explanation could understand it.
johnthepalm 1 year ago
I ain't sayin' she a gold digger...
InnocenceExperience 1 year ago
This might be the worst poem ever written. I'm assuming it was written, but there is no evidence of that. How did HBO select these "poets"?
johnthepalm 1 year ago
@johnthepalm this is dope, how do you hate it, its simplistic but so true in every aspect
jesseclifton 1 year ago
@jesseclifton I appreciate your polite inquiry. To answer your question I will start with the vulgar introduction about his mother's advice regarding prophylactics and preventing any babies from infiltrating his fantastic empire. Suffice to say it made me sick. The "reading" doesn't appear to have been conceived with any sense of what it means to be "poetic". The word "real" does not seem to shed any light on this limp scatter of words presented here like ball bearings dropped off a pier.
laurasauras12 1 year ago
@laurasauras12 hahahahahaha lets stop with the over exaggerated claims about what poetry "is" an think of it more simplistically. poetry comes in all forms. an he is on here an you are not. so i think ill take his point of view on poetry rather than youres. no offense.
jesseclifton 1 year ago
Obviously before gold digger came out... He took the poem and made a song out of it! Dope
babyjenksyall 1 year ago 137
@babyjenksyall same situation with Bittersweet, it was a Poem before a song!
LDsailopal 11 months ago 4
@babyjenksyall naw he just used the song , he didnt make the song off this
imbb1 10 months ago
@babyjenksyall I would bet you he already had the beat in mind though, because this flows exactly like the song does...
Ejwoods08 9 months ago
@babyjenksyall He did it with Bittersweet on this show too!
ThaSilvaAcez 7 months ago
@babyjenksyall Obviously he took the lyrics from gold digger and then used it as a poem. then a little after, produced the song. the song was already written when he said this poem
willieXDrocks 7 months ago
damn! lol 25 years
13TheEgo 1 year ago
haha this isnt cool, ive heard this on one of his albums.
cantarooots 1 year ago
@cantarooots Rap is a form of poetry so he most likely read one of his verse as a poem.
GhostFlameGang 1 year ago