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  • joe<3 mann im so in love with him. soo in love

  • :'( thats a sad story so id he rape her or was he really telling the truth?

  • ): the same thing happened to me ): but idk if i got a heart transplant or anything like that.. i was only 3 or 4 so i dont remember anything.. and my parents dont like to talk about it ]': but when they do it always makes me feel sad.. now i have a big scar from the surgery they did

  • oh my word!!!! thats sooo sad!! poor joe!

  • Well you got more than 115!XD

  • I have a hole in my heart :(

  • WOW.

    That was a very touching story. I am VERY sorry that this all happened to you. The comments below are absolutely heartwrenching. I don't see how someone could post so many comments. You will always be in my prayers.

    ALWAYS.

  • ohh my god! november 18thsmy b-day =D

  • this reminds me of seven pounds d movie so sad....

  • aaah

  • wait wasn't joe supposed to drug catelyn and then rape her?

  • im crying... :(

  • Omg! November 18 is my moms b-day! and when their burnin' up book came out! haha

  • LOL!

  • i'm not sure if i exactly believe himm. idkkk.

  • hahaha but the good boy is good sometimes aww now for the bad stuff ;)

  • i love it heat warming =]

  • you should be posting right now!!!!

  • actualkky, just posted it!

  • where?!?!?!

  • my favorite part of edward is when his eyes turn topaz...

  • awesome story !!!!! pleeeaaaaase post!!

  • omg..extremely awesome!!

  • Good Story, You really need to post the next one i cant wait lol

  • Time to post, dude! :D

  • well, not really girlfriend.

  • whats wrong with you Joe? you dont trick your girlfriend!? X( p.s. awsome series, and i love Twilight!!!!!!!!!

  • Twilight rocks!!!! i love the series too but the twilight series is perfect i sudgest you buy the first one(twilight) then (New Moon) then (Eclipse) and then (breaking dawn)and the 5th one is not out yet and i don't know the title... READ!!

  • the 5th one is called Midnight Suun and it is basically Twilight form Edward's point of view!

    read the books!!!! love them!! get cought up in the madness!!!! haha

  • OMG!! i read that partial draft thingy of midnight sun thats on her wevsite and its ammmaaazzzzzinngggg!!!!!

  • yesyesyes we want badboy

  • omg quick next chapter

  • next

  • haha i tried to go see the twilight move but my mom said that she saw people who camped out to go see it and she said that tickets wold b sold or sumthin like that. i wantted to sneak out at 12 on friday to go see it. but i couldnt. cuz we live like way in the country and it would take me two hours to go and actulally go see it@ BLEAH!

  • i saw it in hawaii, it wasnt packed that much... it was soooo gooooood

  • k can u post now coz u have way over 115 comments

    plzzzzzzzz

    i luv the story btw

  • i love this story!

    prob. my favorite :]

  • omg u are so good at writing!

    please post more!!

  • oh my gosh

    im like

    crying soooo hard!

  • im theres 140 comments? wheres the next chapter missy? lol

  • lolz, post more please!

  • way over 115 coments now get your butt up and post(joke)!!

  • We r WAY over 115 comments!! U HAVE to post today! U post today or else *grabs knife*

  • ok, first you grab a bat, and now you grab a knife??? well... i'm just gonna go...call some very nice men with a nice white jacket...and they can take you to a big white room... and help you wiht your violence problems!! HAHA JK!!

  • Oh making fun of me now, I see ho wit is *grabs rope and duck tape* u better run sucker!*stats chasing you*

  • omg ANGER ISSUES MUCH???? *starts to run away* AHHH THE VIOLENCE LOVER IS CHASING ME!! SOMEONE CAL THOSE NICE GUYS WIHT THE WHITE COATS! and where do you get all these weapons?? now a rope and duck tape??

  • *evil laugh* I have my sources to where I get my weapons, u'll never know!! MAWHHAHAHAHH!!! *keeps chasing u*

  • AHHH!!! I POSTED TYHE CHAPTER!!!! PLEASE LET ME LIVE!!

    but just so you know...i have my own weaponds distributor, her name is...Alice... and she gets me the best things out there! *get a machete, turns around and fights*

  • I agree with JOEJONAS94!!! -grabs the hunter's knife Nick left behind- Recognize this?!?! It was Kevin's, then Nick's, now mine! POST!!! NOW!!! WE GOT WAY OVER THE GOAL!!!

    ♥.j.o.n.a.s.♥

  • okay!! you have way over 115 comments! now post another! God have mercy on me! I need to read the next chapter, or Im gonna scream my f-ing head off!!!

  • you've got over 115 coments! now post!

    that was so good. poor joe....

  • we are over 115! please post!

    (ik i already commented)

  • r u crazy? I love u like crazy cuz of your stories but 115 comments? Why dont you make it like 25 comments or the most of 75. SAVE ME FROM THE SUSPENSE.

    (please add this as one of your positive comments)<3

  • Poor Joe. . .I hope he gets a transplant. Oh, and what did Joe do to Catelyn? I wanna know. Or, maybe, he's just saying all that as a trick. hmmm. Keep up the good story writing. And keep the bad boys coming.

  • that was a really good chapter  =]

  • I AGREE WITH joeJONASluv7676!!! lolz. I JUST NEED MORE BAD BOY!!!

    P.S. a correction to all. I AM THE 125!!! BAM!!! oh yeah by the way we're 10 over goal so post right now missy. lolz.

    ♥.j.o.n.a.s.♥

  • hello over 120 comments here YOU KNOW WHAT IM COMING TO YOUR HOUSE*LEAVES*

    =]

  • CORRECTION IM THE 125TH COMMENTER

  • OMG!

  • love the video TWILIGHT <3

    that wasnt pg 13

    lol

  • i'm the 125th commenter!! post more!!!!!!!!!

    *sad, pleading eyes* Pweaze? w/ 3 JB's on top?!!

  • oh..

    my...

    god..

    please post another chapterrrrrrrrrr

  • AHHHHHH MAKE IT REAL GRAPHIC!!!

  • amazin chapter anyways is anyone goin to see twilight tomorrow

  • my friend's brothers has a hole in his heart to... and hes only 17 or 18 not sure

  • poostttt you have 115!!!!

  • omj................soooooooooo­ooo sad =[ =[

    this chapter was amazing. i cant believe he went into a coma 2 times. i hope he gets his trabsplant and everythig gets better

  • ohhh that was soo sad. but maybe you should have Joe tell Catelyn what he did

  • you have 117 coments now so post !!!!:@

  • 3 MORE BABY =]

  • omg!!!4 more comments!!!

    coment!!!!

  • Comment 112! At least I think. . . Please post the next one! Please please please please please!

  • omg sooo sad i feel so bad for joe!!!

    catlyn is so nice!!

  • oh mah goodness! you need to post! like now. haha aw that was so sad but cute...BRING ON THE BAD BOYNESS! :)

  • post post post!!

    only 3 more till 115

    post peaple post!!!

  • omg !!!

    thats so sad.

  • i can't wait for the next one! and i knew on the last comment that i didn't put the heart in correctly. xD this series is freakin' AWESOME!

  • omg i feel bad for that ass but still thats sad!

  • sweet chapter as usual

  • U DESCRIBE EVERYTHING SOO WELL..XD

    thats wat I love bout ur storiessss...:)

    omg...wat if later in the story catelyn

    descides to give joe her hearttt...

    that would be sooo sadd..but nice of

    her to dooo..anywyasss...COMMENT PPLL COMMENT

    Camii♪;]

  • i cant wait for the next part

  • come on we need 48 more comments

  • Wow, deep. That was so sad! Poor Joe! I love how you desribe everything so well, it's like I'm there! POST SOOON!

  • omg...amazing change it to 100??

    XOXO

  • twilighttwilighttwilight......

    i am soo excited!!!

    posst!

  • 21 more comments!!!!!

  • OMG update soon!!!!!

  • sad ):

  • come on people 23 more comments im gettin impatient and i know you too so post!!!!

  • brilliante :]

  • OMJ sad really not happy!!! but hats so sad....even tho it isnt true lol

  • awesome

  • awesome :)

  • post!!

  • woah. =]

  • Come on about 20 more comments! Or be nice and post NOW! Yeah, where is the bad boy stuff? Post NOW!

  • POST like now!!!!!!!

  • more more more more

  • PLEASE POST MORE NOW ! <3 x

  • amazing.xD

  • awsome :)

  • POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • come on that made me start to tear up

  • Awesome chapter!

  • ummm can i just ask something? what happened 2 him having sex with her? its not tht i dnt like this ch., its just kinda a topic jump.

  • wait nvm. my dumb sub box!

  • you'll see...

  • Whoooa.

  • OMJJ sad....

  • please please post another one soon but why 115 its still 77 but great chapt tho! loved it!!!

  • i love it!

  • haha xD 75 soo ughh idk how many to go im only in grade 6 =P

  • I LOVE Twilight!! lol don't worry i'm gonna see it a good 3 times haha

    btw i love ur story =]

  • postttttt :]

  • aww, this made me cry.

  • that was very heart warming!

  • i love it!!!!!

  • omg!!!!!

  • OHHH CHALLENGE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!

  • omg, that is so sad!

    poor joe! omg i love him.

  • OMG HURRRRY

  • 48 comments soo...umm.. 67 to go:)

  • 115 comments?

    here's one :)

  • loved it !!!

  • I love love love love love your storys. oh my god I cant believe that friday is almost here. I already bought tickets to twilight and everything. I'm sooooo excited!

  • 115?! ARE YOU NUTS! YOU BETTER SETTLE FOR LIKE 50! CUZ I WILL KILL YOU IF I DON'T GET SOME BAD BOY STUFF SOON!!!

    JUST KIDDING! take a joke peeps. but yeah seriously please post soon!!!

    ♥.j.o.n.a.s.♥

  • ahhhhhhhhh 115 comments??????????????

  • blablabla LOVED IT[:

  • omg! so tocuhing! post!!!!

  • I love it. That was so sad. Oh im seing it friday at like 11 with my school. Awesomeness!

  • good job

  • Nice stories!

  • I love your writing. I love how you went from 5 to 115. Your amazing. I wanted to cry too.

  • DUDE AWSOME STUFF

    and i loveee you for posting TODAY WOOT

  • This is great, but lets get back to the bad boy stuff! I liked how you put this in though, it showed diversity to the story! Now put a new one up!!!!

  • love it but i dont understand why you posted this story thing, i mean i bet it has signifigance but im confused right now lol cant wait for your re-post.

  • loved it!

  • omg loved it

  • OK HEART WARMING AIN'T IT? OK ENOUGH OF THIS HAPPY STUFF! WHAT PART OF BAD BOY DON'T YOU PEOPLE GET? i was wondering the same thing! LOL!!! post more?

  • hayy 4 a story dis good i think 115 comments is good enogh btw luved it u need to post more

  • i'm seeing twilightat 4 on friday

  • so am i! im seeing it at 4:30 on Fridat with a huge group of peopl!

  • Oh, that is so sad! ]:

    I feel bad for him.

    But your an amazing writer! [:

  • more

  • LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I almost cried

  • oooo! this is gonna backfire on us isn't it!? lol, well great chapter as always!

    ~thewreckers12

  • love it!!

  • THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING!

  • omj! people better comment fast cause i need more

  • 115 damn!!!! ppl need to start commenting anyways awesome ch.!!! sad though =[ but awesome =D post soon

  • more!

  • ... could you lower that to like 75? haha but anyways i commented!

  • Aww Poor Joe

  • Keep Up The Good Work

  • omg didnt see that one coming! lol

  • Great chapter

  • Sad Story I Cried

  • That was really sad...BUT AWESOME!!

  • omg that is awesooommmee that made me cry kindaa that was soo cuttteee

    plz guys comment or i will hunt u downnnnnn i soo wanna know wat happenss

    this stroy is awesom it deserves more than 115 comment so plzz guys commenntt!!!!

    great job btw ur an amazing writer!

  • hahaha ok post!!

  • so sad but i bet now Catelyn will do something stupid and give joe her heart as a donor :( poor joey

  • yay twilight

  • oh my gosh!!!

    im so gonna cry now!! i was laughing with glossy eyes when i read the bottom notes lol but gosh, so sad!! PLEASE FIND HIM A DONOR!! hell, ILL give him MY heart!!!

  • 115 holy freakin crap!!!! This was an awesome chapter though so itll probably happen lol!

  • next one, prettyyyyyyyyy please! :)

  • omg omg omg JOE! nooo!

    and ppl r mean. 67 VIEWS! and only 13 comments. >:{

    115 comment!

  • amazing!!!! omg, i hope u post soon.

  • you have to post. that was great.

  • that was sad,but good series

  • i love thiss!

    u r amazing!

    cateyln better not donate anythng to him lol!

  • aww poor joe I luv this series you're an awsome writer

  • this is a really great story. but i have a question...is the twilight movie thats coming out about all the books or just the first one?

  • thw twilight mvoie is only the first book!!

    the other books will have their own movies!!! like the second movie, New Moon, is coming out in 2010!!

  • what? that is too long! 2010!? why cant it be 2010 next year!? good story btw! can you cut down the comment limit to 5 so you can put up a new one like, NOW!!! haha!

  • lets go people! COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT PEOPLE!!! Dont you want to see the other episode? Then Comment!!! hurry! I cant stand it!!!!

  • omj. awe. that is so sad. more!!!!

  • poor joe, great chapter