Conner & Friends Episode 1 part 1

[disneyrangerblue02]

Wow, this series looks awesome!

[ThomasFan3751]

I can imagine what Fansworth is thinking after being thrown off the rails:

"AYE! THE PAIN, IN SPAIN, LIES MAINLY ON MY *****!!!!"

[kr4449]

u want 2 b in my series

[Tyler3967]

@kr4449 Maybe.

What's the series gonna be about?

[kr4449]

@Tyler3967 some engines on the california central fighting to stay out of the UP`s hands

[Tyler3967]

@kr4449 I see. On Trainz you have on?

[PunkyBear36]

Your dialogue needs a lot of work.

[Tyler3967]

@PunkyBear36 What do you mean?

[PunkyBear36]

@Tyler3967 The overall sentence structure and speech patterns in the script are completley unnatural. The things the characters say sound very strange and unorganized.

[Tyler3967]

@PunkyBear36 That was a long time ago.

This time, I'm getting better with a new mic, typing down the scripts and adding better animations for the series.

I'm not trying to be mean to you, but if this is not what you want to watch then don't watch it at all.

[PunkyBear36]

@Tyler3967 I would most certainly like to watch it, it's about trains in Saskatoon! Being from Saskatoon and interested in trains and all, I can't help myself.

[trainmaster844]

I see you used TMRC Episode 1 as a base :) Good start so far... Can't wait to see this series progress :)

[SuperDooperVideoBoy]

Can't wait for episode 2!

[AEM7andthomasfan]

I got a P42 just like you, but it is painted for Amtrak

[Tyler3967]

You don't say, huh. :)

[up27a]

YAY!!

FIRST VIEWER!!

this is some really good stuff!! :)

keep up the good work :)