i am wondering " if it be written somewhere that two people are to fall in the love of honey moon, what difference does it make if they promise and take the vows?what difference does it make when we know the earth is round and still turns around, they'll love to the end?
excuse me for strange comment as i woke up at midnight and listen to your songs.
I suppose the song, as it is, is leading somewhere, but never really gets there. You've provided a great ending, though it does need to be clipped a bit here and there to fit into the melody. I'll get working on it
i am wondering " if it be written somewhere that two people are to fall in the love of honey moon, what difference does it make if they promise and take the vows?what difference does it make when we know the earth is round and still turns around, they'll love to the end?
excuse me for strange comment as i woke up at midnight and listen to your songs.
nice work! ;D
greensoulo 2 years ago
Collaborative songwriting - I'm all on for it!
I suppose the song, as it is, is leading somewhere, but never really gets there. You've provided a great ending, though it does need to be clipped a bit here and there to fit into the melody. I'll get working on it
All the best
cajonbongo2007 2 years ago
Very nice, my dear decapitated friend! Thanks!
arpadelluna 2 years ago