I like the poem, though... Stop emphasizing in such strained syllables. Leave the emotion out and speak with full rational conviction, that's all I have to say.
Emotion is a private feeling, to emphasize it through your words while speaking for the purpose of posting something out of your own volition is redundant.
Berton Braley is one of my favorite poets. Read it as you like.
itheliving78 4 years ago 2
I like the poem, though... Stop emphasizing in such strained syllables. Leave the emotion out and speak with full rational conviction, that's all I have to say.
VBZBII 4 years ago
Leave the emotion out?! What's wrong with emotion?
cropperb 4 years ago
Emotion is a private feeling, to emphasize it through your words while speaking for the purpose of posting something out of your own volition is redundant.
VBZBII 4 years ago
Always a thought! That's right my friend.
yazin60 5 years ago