Crush...{9}

[ily143xDD]

gosh! you should seriously make books! i would buy them! loved this!

[elizabethhxstar]

Oh my gosh! Is the sheriff really going to kill Nick! Gosh, I can't get enough of this, I have to keep reading! The new intro was really well-done by the way :)

[Fionaaxox]

Love the new intro!

[teris12]

NOOOOOO! dont kill Nick! love it!

[lovejonas90]

ahah oh shot

he cant kill jonas

selena wont let him!

[mickey141480]

love it

[fakerocker109]

HOLY SHIT!xD CURSING IS FUN!

[XdemiXselenaX1]

I love it :D

[TheMiZzJoNaS123]

i also loved the intro!!

[12345mo1]

i love the intro

[JonasBros4ever321]

Nooooo! =O Selena dooooo something

[JasmineTilman]

awesome! can't wait for the next one!

[LiLMariaQWorld]

I love all of your stories!

It's like everyone is a fan of you and your stories

If you became a well known author and wrote many books, i'd be in one of those groups of ppl that would buy your books every time the books are released (:

[selenademijonasfan23]

it cant be the end!!!!!!!

i loved it!!!!!

selena save him this time!!!!

[NiShiLuvers]

The INtro is amazing but the story is MORE AMAZING!! I loved it!

[xoMichelleLautner]

i love the intro. it so western,

ur so ccreaitve.

[BluBunnieProductions]

GO GO GO SELENA!!

[BonnieWrightFan4ever]

Selena is soooo gonna save him!!! 'cause if Nick dies, then the story would be over

[oxsabrietteox]

CRAZY OLD ASS MAN!!SELENA SAVE HIM!!!

and i finally got to readt it.

[xxxImaginePeacexxx]

Everybody please subscribe to LetsSupportJB her stories are absolutely amazing

[Deileen019]

omgggg! Selena don't just stand there; save him! Crazy old ass man.

[jojonasrox01]

omgg selena save him!!!

crazy ass old man

[SnowFlakemuffin]

Wow, I hope Nick doesn't die, then it wouldn't be a story anymore!

<3

[RandomPurplePanda]

yea so he probably wont die

[shinebright1218]

LOL in my part of Texas were no where near that Country=)

[Jonascrazy678951x]

me either :P

[gisastuff]

LOVE it!!! :D

[peaceandmusic23]

I Love, Love, Love this story and the intro is great <3

[amylauraineofficial]

be selena will save him =D

[justjoking321]

no nick don't die. who am i kidding hes not gonna die. its a nelena story for god sake. love the story

cyl (comment you later) kay bye!!! BYE!!!

[USABritt]

Nick don't die!

Selly save him!

Great Story!

[princessadelmar93]

the clips for the beginning are perfect...and the storyline is going really good so far.

[freakyyellowgirl]

aaaaahhh omg selena save him or else everybody will be really sas : (

[xxfirefliesxxx]

omg! he can't kill him!selena has to do something!

[Lizv01]

ahhh noooo!

[yeahh89]

He save her ...

She save him

[weirdofreak02]

omj!!! selena save him!!!

[robomex55555]

NO! u cant die nick! save him selena!

[zcullenhalerathbone]

aaah holy crow! nooo sheriff!

[zcullenhalerathbone]

omgsh! eeep! awesome intro! everytime i read this story i think of Muse - Knights of Cydonia!

[MizzCatii]

wow...amazing♥

[UltimateLuvStories]

Selena better save him! like now!

[cookiemuffinx3]

skeeen :)

love it<3

[Paris1143]

Selena stop ur dad before he kills Nick!! A.K.A. The Guy Who SAVED ur Life

[comonnnnnnn]

ohh nooo........now its selenaz trun to save him

:P

[joebrolover4ever1]

omg no police dude dont kill nick!!! haha i <3ed it : )

[EdwardBella4Ever100]

i love it cant wait for the next one nick is such a hero he saved selenas life

[AllTheThingsAlexSaid]

Amazing can't wait for the next part :]

[cutiepie9608]

no....!!!! save him! this is amazing!

[Natalia91592]

ahhhh-mazing!!!!!

[Brie651]

NOO!! SEL SAVE HIM!!! LOL amazing job! and I love the video did you make it yourself?

[Isa9615]

NO NO NO sherrif dont killl him! he save your daughters life!

[xLilyyyyxx]

Selena you totally owe him he saved your life , now it's time you save his life like...... NOW! Omg!

I loved it can't wait till next one :))))

[swirlygirly411]

omg i love it! Selena is going to go and save him!

[JonasBrothersClubb]

SELENA SAVE HIM!!!! DONT LET NICK DIE!

[swim4pilot]

eeeeepppppp!!!!!!!!!

[CaliConverseChick]

Selena, save him, don't let Nick die!

He save your life, woman!

[orellovesyou]

NO!

wtf dont let him die!!

i know u wont :)

u have smarticles x)

SEL SAY SOMETHING... QUICK!

[Icecrystal95]

O I meant 10 ha ha :)

[Icecrystal95]

Love it.cant wait for ep 9

[SoccerPlayer2601]

Oh my gosh SAY SOMETHING SELENA!!!! Love it lol.

[JBSEL236]

please post soon!

[amythisrs]

Selena SAY SOMETHING HE JUST SAVED YOUR LIFE!!

great ep!!

[7jackass77]

i love it so much!

[Boltlover1234]

WTF??Say something Sel HE SAVED YOU IT'S YOUR TURN!:)

[xxstrawberycakexx]

Nooo nick dont diee lol

[lovelife859]

this is soo effing good!

wooww!!

so descriptivee :D

[nickjaybaby]

uhmazing ill buy your book nishi!

[fanfordisney]

WHAT?!

NO WAYYY!

STOP HIM SELENA!

[nicakajonas]

Making this abook would be amazing XD Even though the Sheriff is like three times my size, I bet I can take him dowm if a bullet or anything that harms Nick comes to him. Weh it comes Nick, there are NO second thoughts! I LUV THIS GREAT JOB! Plz Dont Let Nick Die.....Sel! Do something! Jump on ur dad's back or somthing!

[nishitaa1]

haha lol x]

Take him down.

[OfficialKaylaHiggins]

WAT?!?! SELENA DO SOMETHING!!!!!!

[lzzy303]

nooo poor nick... he saved her and she doesn't say anything???? wtf??????? great episodeee <3

[martinez32092]

ahhhhhhh dont kill nick nooooooo

[liljenny1178]

absoulutely AH-Mazing!! luved it! =)

[elvisjecca]

i love it

[jonasdemimusic]

NOOO!! Selena save him or I kill you!!

haha awsoome!! loved the video too :D

[loisfan22]

LOVE IT!!! Can you make this story into a book? :) I would love that!!! I wouldn't stop reading it!!!

[nishitaa1]

haha x]

Hopefully when I'm older, I'll become an author & turn it into a book :)

[loisfan22]

Yay! :) Ill read it for sure! :) Can u check out my channle? XD

[twilightjonasfan101]

Save him, he saved you, it's your turn now Selena.

[JonasBrothersLove8]

Love this story!

[nelenajemilluvva]

selenas going to save him i bet

[babyruthkeily]

ausum!!!!

[GuitarGeek211]

i'd totally act the same way as selena if my dad was like that lol anyway...SAVE NICK SELENA SAVE NICK

[XxSelenaDemiFan1xX]

noo!! Selena save him!! He's your father so stop him!!!

[Diamyla]

I love it.

[xDISNEYxSTARSx]

i bet selena would same him now cause she owe him

[icharmed]

:O amazing..selena's ganna save him..thats wat i think

[MagicMiffy]

dont kill him selena save him

[JBEragon178]

noooo!!!!! Save him Selena, save Nick!!!

[conversegirl360]

No!! they cant kill him!! he just saved her, selena has to save him in return!!! cant wait for the next one

[RickyAmy01]

no he isnt going to die selena willl stick up for him

[meandalexaarebest]

omg. if i were selena id be like "daddy he save me from certain death. u cant just kill him" well anyways. awesome story i love this sereies

[jbfan4ever16]

1. i love the new intro

2. this story is amazing

and

3. i can't wait for the next one

[urdrkitty]

NO HES TOO CUTE TO DIE xD

LOL MORE PLZ

[selenagomazmymodel]

I seroiusly cant wait! lol soon.

[StarzzColiideeexD]

nooo

dont kill him

waaaaa

nooo

[lindamas1]

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! Selena has to save his life.

[nesreencutie]

loved it can't wait for the next one :)

[micbobo666]

awesome dude I totally can't wait for the next one!!!

[Troysah18]

i think selena should save him cause she ows him life

[myworldpeace]

gosh this was TRUELY amazing!

[MrsJonas621]

Loved it!

[itsrubylove]

No.

[Brittneydalton5]

AHH! I pray that Selena jumps in front of the gun shot, Just for Love purposes. haha :)

[disney7Fan]

Don't kill him!! he's to cute xD

lol i loved it

[jonasandjonas]

Loved it!

[sunakit]

amazing intro

[miasofie87]

Oh hell no!! He cant shoot him o.O

[xxkncgurrlxx]

omg i heart the intro!

the sheriff is really short-tempered. Um, Japanese Massage please!

[Katelyn7887]

LOVE IT! MAKE MORE!! of course after you get 90 comments.

[cookiemuffinx3]

love it!<3

[JonasBrothersXOLover]

Loveed it :)

[wendYRoxx25]

intense....I love it! :]

[danideangulo]

omg!!!

Awesome!!!

Love how you describe everything :D

[kitkatkirsty]

oh dear Nick!! loved it <3

[LilPinkEmo58]

Lovely :)

[jbluvrr98]

Selena has to tell her dad he saved her ;O

[kayyxbabie7]

ahxD i love the music in the intro xD haha

amazing episode (:

[StarStruckStories]

"Any last words JONAS?"

"Dont kill me?"

LOL

[hahaiamloka]

amazing Nishi:)

I love your new intro:D

[HeyDudeex]

Oh shit, Nick? Run!

Loved it (:

[MyCrookedSmile]

really good.