Your review does not sound like a student review at all. It's a tour. You sound like a spokesperson for the company. You show all the features, but you don't really say if you like the platform or not, other than saying things like "This is great" or "This is so easy". It'd be more helpful if you showed some of the actual assignments/discussions/etc you've done in a class in more detail and then review the process, do you think it helped you learn, was it fun, etc.
You are 100% correct. But, this was not meant to be a 'Student Review'. Rather, it was meant to be a quick tour of the site - from a student's perspective (meaning logged-in as a student). I'm working on a video that showcases some of the ways edu20 has actually been used by teachers. This video will include both teacher and student opinions (pro and con). And BTW, I am not a spokesperson for the company at all. I'm a teacher and tech integrator who finds the site to be very useful! Thanks.
Your review does not sound like a student review at all. It's a tour. You sound like a spokesperson for the company. You show all the features, but you don't really say if you like the platform or not, other than saying things like "This is great" or "This is so easy". It'd be more helpful if you showed some of the actual assignments/discussions/etc you've done in a class in more detail and then review the process, do you think it helped you learn, was it fun, etc.
excitedneuron 1 year ago
You are 100% correct. But, this was not meant to be a 'Student Review'. Rather, it was meant to be a quick tour of the site - from a student's perspective (meaning logged-in as a student). I'm working on a video that showcases some of the ways edu20 has actually been used by teachers. This video will include both teacher and student opinions (pro and con). And BTW, I am not a spokesperson for the company at all. I'm a teacher and tech integrator who finds the site to be very useful! Thanks.
henchenm 1 year ago